Soi Fong [APPROVED, 0-3 | Forsaken Crow]
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Re: Soi Fong [APPROVED, 0-3 | Forsaken Crow]
Tue Mar 04, 2014 5:10 pm
Due to prolonged inactivity and a missing activity check, this is being sent to the Available Canons Section. Similarly, the name of the owner has been removed from the title. If you're interested in this character, feel free to post and RP sample and a member of staff will respond accordingly.
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Re: Soi Fong [APPROVED, 0-3 | Forsaken Crow]
Thu Apr 24, 2014 8:22 pm
She walked slowly, keepign a reserved pass as she did so. Today she was teaching the kids about duty and how far one should go about it. A smile warmed it's way on her face as she thought about Yoruchi when she'd taught her. It was a memory worth thinking about as she arrived. The smile vanished quickly and she looked at the young kids she would be teaching. Her stern face looked over them as she began to speak now, Soifon's morals were something sternly engraved into her soul. "Do whatever it takes to complete the objective..if people die that is the price, you must follow the orders you are given." No one spoke as she waited they weren't just getting a lecutre, she was supposed to show them hand to hand combat. She waited for them to come, the first was a boy who rushed her and missed out right. Now balance or form, he had no talent at all. "Was that an attack?" She said smirking slightly, much like her own teacher she taunted to a degree. Her foot came from the ground so quickly the boy couldn't follow it, she stopped an inch from the side of his face. Making him fall over, deciding that this was enough. He'd learned the lesson about form, personal struggles will build character. Her eyes moved on to the next one as she continued this process, this time it was a female. Good form and her stance wasn't too bad for maybe a fifth seat. This time she struck the female in the ribs but held back enough not to kill or severally wound the woman. She walked over her eyes looking at the students as she spoke again. "You have to complete your mission no matter what, you seem to not understand that." The last bit was almost threatening but she walked away disappointed in them that they couldn't figure it out. She wanted them to attempt to come at her all at once, do whatever it takes to win. Honor is not the way things work, you must kill an enemy without mercy and be absolute. This was how the law here worked absolute was the only way to do things, these children needed to learn that.
She believed that firm resolve and putting all yourself into the work at hand was good. Personal struggles and good character building were key, she walked away letting them scheme now. Smirking slightly, seemed that they got the idea. To face someone of her strength they needed to be under handed, she waited now for them to attempt it. Attacking her one at a time wouldn't work, they had to do whatever it took to complete the mission. This was simply a fact as she waited for them the familiar voice of her old Lieutenant came out. He was eating a bag of food when he made a remark that he clearly shouldn't of. Picking on children isn't nice Captain." She waited till he got right next to her bringing her fist up quickly and smacking him straight in his chubby nose causing him to back up and be in pain for a moment. "Personal struggles are good character builders..don't get in my way." She made it clear that he would get more punishment, like most of the time. Anything not involve Yoruichi got her quick and very quickly delivered justice.
She watched as the kids all rushed her as she smirked and used a shunpo dodging letting the children all trip and run into the Lieutenant and send him into the fence with ten or so bodies on him. She shook her head smiling faintly as she did so and spoke again. "You get points for doing what you have to do..That's the only way to get by, do whatever it takes to succeed." She left now heading out, her day was done here. It was time to return home to her collection of Black cat related things, she would think about Yoruichi-sama and be happy for the night. It was nice to think about to those wonderful days of training and growing . She always tried to do her best of Yoruichi-sama perhaps it was getting easier as she got older. She turned her head left than right before beginning to shunpo off quickly to her home.
She believed that firm resolve and putting all yourself into the work at hand was good. Personal struggles and good character building were key, she walked away letting them scheme now. Smirking slightly, seemed that they got the idea. To face someone of her strength they needed to be under handed, she waited now for them to attempt it. Attacking her one at a time wouldn't work, they had to do whatever it took to complete the mission. This was simply a fact as she waited for them the familiar voice of her old Lieutenant came out. He was eating a bag of food when he made a remark that he clearly shouldn't of. Picking on children isn't nice Captain." She waited till he got right next to her bringing her fist up quickly and smacking him straight in his chubby nose causing him to back up and be in pain for a moment. "Personal struggles are good character builders..don't get in my way." She made it clear that he would get more punishment, like most of the time. Anything not involve Yoruichi got her quick and very quickly delivered justice.
She watched as the kids all rushed her as she smirked and used a shunpo dodging letting the children all trip and run into the Lieutenant and send him into the fence with ten or so bodies on him. She shook her head smiling faintly as she did so and spoke again. "You get points for doing what you have to do..That's the only way to get by, do whatever it takes to succeed." She left now heading out, her day was done here. It was time to return home to her collection of Black cat related things, she would think about Yoruichi-sama and be happy for the night. It was nice to think about to those wonderful days of training and growing . She always tried to do her best of Yoruichi-sama perhaps it was getting easier as she got older. She turned her head left than right before beginning to shunpo off quickly to her home.
Re: Soi Fong [APPROVED, 0-3 | Forsaken Crow]
Fri May 16, 2014 3:20 am
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Hm, I s'pose there isn't much of the problem with the way Soi-Fon is portrayed in this sample that was given. I'll like to see it in practice, however, and I will be giving you a month trial to do that. So I want to see some threads with her over the coming month to see how you do with her.
Re: Soi Fong [APPROVED, 0-3 | Forsaken Crow]
Sun May 18, 2014 6:11 am
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- Willpower/Determination: Master
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Filling out will stuff for ya and boosting tier. - Tier: 0-3
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Re: Soi Fong [APPROVED, 0-3 | Forsaken Crow]
Wed May 21, 2014 5:06 pm
Racial Skills:
Hakuda: Grand Master
Shunpo: Grand Master
Zanjutsu Master
Kido: Master
General Skills:
Durability:Master
Speed: Grand Master
Strength: Advanced
Weapon Skill: Advanced
Soi Fong's skill sheet
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11862-soi-fong-update
Hakuda: Grand Master
Shunpo: Grand Master
Zanjutsu Master
Kido: Master
General Skills:
Durability:Master
Speed: Grand Master
Strength: Advanced
Weapon Skill: Advanced
Soi Fong's skill sheet
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11862-soi-fong-update
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Re: Soi Fong [APPROVED, 0-3 | Forsaken Crow]
Thu Feb 19, 2015 10:42 am
Name of owner added in title, nothing to see here =w=
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