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Azure Kuroi
Sun Jul 29, 2012 2:47 am
Arrancar-
Character Name:
Azure Kuroi
Character True Age:
315
Character Appearance Age:
21
Character Gender:
Male
Orientation:
Freelancing.
Personality:
His overall personality is that he is too much into himself and believes what he wants. He has his own since of justice and judges with it. Will allow himself to be persuaded by others but his overall opinion is his own and has no sympathy for the victim. When he has made friends he will be loyal but will not kind, he may be a dick but he has his best wishes in them.
Appearance:
He is about 5’8 with golden brown hair that resembled Grimmjow’s. He wears a pure white sleeveless vest, with deep sea blue straight leg pants. His eyes are just dark enough shade of brown that you could notice it was different than his hair color. His muscular structure was quite significant having extremely low body fat and high muscle mass.
Bone Appearance:
His rib cage is the bone section that is being revealed. It goes from right under his chest to the last rib and it covers like a shield.
Hollow Hole:
His Hollow Hole is in the middle of his body where his rib cage bone doesn’t connect.
reiatsu Colour:
A dark haze like purple is the color of his reiatsu.
History:
Life- His life was full life but was very fast paced and only lasted 21 years before his inevitable death. His mother died when he was born and his father held it against him. His father always took care of him but showed his dislike as well. By the time Azure was 8 his father had become an alcoholic and slowly begun his transgression in life. When Azure became 15 he had stood up to his father and his father had backed down and 3 years later died. But, after his father backed down to him, he had changed. Azure now going to school, became an asshole and the class clone. Being hated by many and loved by few, he had to now fight others and show his dominance. Now at the age of 18 he is fighting for thrill and money, from low level mercenary missions to underground fighting for money. Doing it for his survival and for his money, giving purpose to something gave him the right to do it in his mind. Shortly after his father died he no longer felt any ties to the world so his had moved up in the ranks of the mercenaries. Now performing assassinations and joining militia groups all to quench his thirst for battle. Years later, now being 21, he joins a small group to take on a militia group and ends up surrounded and his whole team had been killed.
Death- Shortly after arriving in the afterlife Azure found himself a hollow craving spirits and spiritual energy. Being confused and lusting to quench his craving he began to attack souls of the departed and others like himself that gave off spiritual energy. After being stuck in this state for a decade, Azure began to notice changes in his appearance and his bone mask. Noticing these changes only furthered his lust and crave, now attacking living and non-living. His strength increasing and performing special attacks soon became his nature. Unleashing havoc in the world of dead, attacking other hollow that tried to resist and attack him, he slowly began to control himself again. Now being approximately 100 years after his death, his form began to become more human like. His speed had increased beyond humans and regular hollow, he now sought out the spirit of soul reapers. His first Shinigami had been on a mission in the world of the living, not being of very high rank he was an easy prey for Azure. Azure had slipped his way into the blind spot of the Shinigami and killed him quick to not reveal himself to others if they had been in the area. Now having his first real taste of Shinigami he began to go mad with lust, going away into the world of the hollow Hueco Mundo for almost 50 years.
Progression- Now having a strict diet of hollow and Shinigami alike, he heard of a state called Arrancar in which his powers could multiply and he could attain his human-like form again. Now striving to achieve this feat, took him almost 100 years on top of the 50 in which he secluded himself to Hueco Mundo. After achieving his mission Azure had begun his madness. Now having the power that he wanted he felt he could do anything he wanted. But, shortly after becoming an Arrancar he learned of the Numeros and how much power and control they had. He now had another focus, to become stronger.
RP Sample:
..walking into an open dessert-like area, Azure tapped one of the bone rips that had been his revealed bone from achieving arrancar. That bone rip had slightly moved away from his body to where he could grasp it with his hand, in which he pulled and from that came a zanpakto approximately 4 feet long and a couple inches wide. After revealing his zanpakto he began to run as fast as he could into the open area. His body slowly beginning to flicker and causes a certain noise that sounded as if it had been a break in sound for a moment. His movement slowly disappearing as he approached a hill that had towered over him, in a swift twist in his foot from appearing solid he slipped out and then into sight. Now being at the peak of the hill he wielded his zanpakto above his head and giving a swift movement towards the ground. His body slowly descended towards the ground and shortly after a noise had been made and the hill violently separated into two pieces and his zanpakto back where it had been before..
Sealed Zanpakutô:
It would resemble a katana, with a slightly curved blade. Its length and width would be 4’ x 4’’. With a dark purple hilt and a tiny gold guard that’s so small it seems out of place.
Racial Abilities:
His abilities would cover most of the general ones, as he wants to be versed in all but master in few. His Cero forms from his chest and it’s a dark shade of purple, and when fired it sounds like a nail on a chalk board. His bala would come from his palms and be a lighter shade of purple but have a darker outline, makes the same noise as the cero. His sonido hides most of his major movement but creates a sound that makes you believe the barrier in which wind moves is broken. His hierro is rather developed as he can take a few strong attacks consecutively and then need to intervene.
Unique Abilities:
His pesquisa is somewhat advanced as he can detect a weak soul within the distance of a normal city limits.
Resereccion Name:
Khaos
Resereccion Release Phrase:
Unleash the Khaos!
Release Actions:
Violently shove his zanpakto back into place forcing it into his body after saying the phrase.
Resereccion Appearance:
His covering bone grows to cover his main body, chest, ribs and abdomen. His hands become covered in bone with nails like knives. He grows a tail and at the end is mace-like that’s made out of bone.
Resereccion Abilities:
After achieving this state his hierro, pesquisa, and sonido become stronger and he gains the rare ability to use Grand Ray Cero but only a few times before he has to revert back into his arrancar state.
(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
General Skills
• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Will Skills
• Willpower/Determination:Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Racial Skills
• Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Character Name:
Azure Kuroi
Character True Age:
315
Character Appearance Age:
21
Character Gender:
Male
Orientation:
Freelancing.
Personality:
His overall personality is that he is too much into himself and believes what he wants. He has his own since of justice and judges with it. Will allow himself to be persuaded by others but his overall opinion is his own and has no sympathy for the victim. When he has made friends he will be loyal but will not kind, he may be a dick but he has his best wishes in them.
Appearance:
He is about 5’8 with golden brown hair that resembled Grimmjow’s. He wears a pure white sleeveless vest, with deep sea blue straight leg pants. His eyes are just dark enough shade of brown that you could notice it was different than his hair color. His muscular structure was quite significant having extremely low body fat and high muscle mass.
Bone Appearance:
His rib cage is the bone section that is being revealed. It goes from right under his chest to the last rib and it covers like a shield.
Hollow Hole:
His Hollow Hole is in the middle of his body where his rib cage bone doesn’t connect.
reiatsu Colour:
A dark haze like purple is the color of his reiatsu.
History:
Life- His life was full life but was very fast paced and only lasted 21 years before his inevitable death. His mother died when he was born and his father held it against him. His father always took care of him but showed his dislike as well. By the time Azure was 8 his father had become an alcoholic and slowly begun his transgression in life. When Azure became 15 he had stood up to his father and his father had backed down and 3 years later died. But, after his father backed down to him, he had changed. Azure now going to school, became an asshole and the class clone. Being hated by many and loved by few, he had to now fight others and show his dominance. Now at the age of 18 he is fighting for thrill and money, from low level mercenary missions to underground fighting for money. Doing it for his survival and for his money, giving purpose to something gave him the right to do it in his mind. Shortly after his father died he no longer felt any ties to the world so his had moved up in the ranks of the mercenaries. Now performing assassinations and joining militia groups all to quench his thirst for battle. Years later, now being 21, he joins a small group to take on a militia group and ends up surrounded and his whole team had been killed.
Death- Shortly after arriving in the afterlife Azure found himself a hollow craving spirits and spiritual energy. Being confused and lusting to quench his craving he began to attack souls of the departed and others like himself that gave off spiritual energy. After being stuck in this state for a decade, Azure began to notice changes in his appearance and his bone mask. Noticing these changes only furthered his lust and crave, now attacking living and non-living. His strength increasing and performing special attacks soon became his nature. Unleashing havoc in the world of dead, attacking other hollow that tried to resist and attack him, he slowly began to control himself again. Now being approximately 100 years after his death, his form began to become more human like. His speed had increased beyond humans and regular hollow, he now sought out the spirit of soul reapers. His first Shinigami had been on a mission in the world of the living, not being of very high rank he was an easy prey for Azure. Azure had slipped his way into the blind spot of the Shinigami and killed him quick to not reveal himself to others if they had been in the area. Now having his first real taste of Shinigami he began to go mad with lust, going away into the world of the hollow Hueco Mundo for almost 50 years.
Progression- Now having a strict diet of hollow and Shinigami alike, he heard of a state called Arrancar in which his powers could multiply and he could attain his human-like form again. Now striving to achieve this feat, took him almost 100 years on top of the 50 in which he secluded himself to Hueco Mundo. After achieving his mission Azure had begun his madness. Now having the power that he wanted he felt he could do anything he wanted. But, shortly after becoming an Arrancar he learned of the Numeros and how much power and control they had. He now had another focus, to become stronger.
RP Sample:
..walking into an open dessert-like area, Azure tapped one of the bone rips that had been his revealed bone from achieving arrancar. That bone rip had slightly moved away from his body to where he could grasp it with his hand, in which he pulled and from that came a zanpakto approximately 4 feet long and a couple inches wide. After revealing his zanpakto he began to run as fast as he could into the open area. His body slowly beginning to flicker and causes a certain noise that sounded as if it had been a break in sound for a moment. His movement slowly disappearing as he approached a hill that had towered over him, in a swift twist in his foot from appearing solid he slipped out and then into sight. Now being at the peak of the hill he wielded his zanpakto above his head and giving a swift movement towards the ground. His body slowly descended towards the ground and shortly after a noise had been made and the hill violently separated into two pieces and his zanpakto back where it had been before..
Sealed Zanpakutô:
It would resemble a katana, with a slightly curved blade. Its length and width would be 4’ x 4’’. With a dark purple hilt and a tiny gold guard that’s so small it seems out of place.
Racial Abilities:
His abilities would cover most of the general ones, as he wants to be versed in all but master in few. His Cero forms from his chest and it’s a dark shade of purple, and when fired it sounds like a nail on a chalk board. His bala would come from his palms and be a lighter shade of purple but have a darker outline, makes the same noise as the cero. His sonido hides most of his major movement but creates a sound that makes you believe the barrier in which wind moves is broken. His hierro is rather developed as he can take a few strong attacks consecutively and then need to intervene.
Unique Abilities:
His pesquisa is somewhat advanced as he can detect a weak soul within the distance of a normal city limits.
Resereccion Name:
Khaos
Resereccion Release Phrase:
Unleash the Khaos!
Release Actions:
Violently shove his zanpakto back into place forcing it into his body after saying the phrase.
Resereccion Appearance:
His covering bone grows to cover his main body, chest, ribs and abdomen. His hands become covered in bone with nails like knives. He grows a tail and at the end is mace-like that’s made out of bone.
Resereccion Abilities:
After achieving this state his hierro, pesquisa, and sonido become stronger and he gains the rare ability to use Grand Ray Cero but only a few times before he has to revert back into his arrancar state.
(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
General Skills
• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Will Skills
• Willpower/Determination:Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Racial Skills
• Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Re: Azure Kuroi
Tue Jul 31, 2012 12:18 am
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [O]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]
Comments/Notes: Personality is a bit short. Try to get it up to ten sentences along with the appearance as well. RP Sample is also a three sentences short, turn the notch up a bit. Can you move it so that the RP Sample is at the bottom of the app?
Also, are you sure you don't want any character-exclusive abilities for him? Something unique to call your own? It's not that it's required as it's optional, but I'm just making sure.
Tier: Undecided.
Re: Azure Kuroi
Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:59 am
Moving this thread into the Work In Progress area because it has been more then a few days since this guy has made any updates, alerted any staff that he fixed anything and it's clogging up space in the Unchecked section. So, I will be moving it elsewhere until he decides to get this application together.
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Re: Azure Kuroi
Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:41 am
If this is locked, then it's getting moved to archived apps.
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