Shuyu Yu'retsu

SHINIGAMI

Name: Shuyu Yu'retsu

Gender: Male

Age:123 and Looks 21.

Personality: Shuyu is talkative, kind, thoughtful, helps people in need and is brave. He does not like to leave comrads behind and has a bit of a short temper. He is stubborn and high strung. He loves things with beauty and is a fair artist. When he finds something or someone of unique beauty he usually draws them in his sketch book.

He Puts others needs before himself and gives to the needy, but if someone looks for trouble they get it. He cares for living things and enjoys having something to do. And he absolutely hates being bored. He also likes to sit under trees and eats apples. Hes energetic and doesn't like to stay still for long.

Appearance: My Shinigami is about medium built with black hair and Lime green eyes.



Zanpakutô Spirit: Tendotora, Is a blue tiger who is quite and wise but has one heck of a temper. It's realm within Shuyu's Mind is basically a land covered in crystal. The tiger is the manifestation of the quick and accurate energy known as lighning.



Sealed Zanpakutô : Looks like an ordinary blue Zanpakutô.



Shikai Description: The sword is basically the same but the guard is know gold and the handle know has a gold casing on it.



Shikai Abilities: Mekurumeku Sekka (Blinding Flash): Creates a great flash of blue light that temporarily blinds all who look at the sword except the one holding Tendotora.
Denko Bakuha (Lightning Blast): Shuyu just has to swing his sword and his Zanpakutô absorbs his Reitsu then launches a blast of electrical blue energy.
Denko Kanmon (Lightning Barrier): Shuyu just has to stab the ground and his Zanpakutô creates a barrier around him made of pure blue electrical energy.

Release:Strike Fast, Tendotora.
(You CANNOT fill the skill levels in until your tier is assigned. )
Skill Level: Kidou: Adept
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Adept
Skill Level: Shunpo: Adept
Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand: Adept

History/Background: Shuyu grew up in Tokyo and at a youngh age found out he was a good artist and worked hard to hone his skills to make a living with it. He also studied Karate and Kendo when he was youngh. Though his family got a normal income. When he was 9 he got a youngher brother and when he was 14 he got a sister.

By the time he was 18 he got an opportunity to join an art studio. And when he was 21 he was a successful Artist. That Christmas Eve He went to his parents house to visit his brother and sister was extatic to see him he brought many presents and put them under the tree. Late that night they went to bed. Shuyu was sleeping on the couch and all was good.

The next day he woke up and noticed he wasn't on the couch. He got up and froze in shock. He was looking at his corpse bloody on the couch, he then preceded to run a bought the house. He looked in his parents bedroom. It was not a pretty site. He ran to his brothers room. Was no better.

Then he ran to his sisters room and heard an insane giggling in her room.
He looked in and regretted looking there was a man sitting by his sisters body stabbing her again and again. Shuyu then ran out of the house. He did not get far when it became hard to breathe. He grabbed his chest and felt something cold and hard. It was a chain in his chest.

When he finally entered the Soul Society it did not take him long to start to notice he had strong reitsu so he joined the Soul Reaper Academy. He went through it well. His training in karate and Kendo proved useful, but kidou proved difficult in the end he graduated and joined the Gotei 13.

Roleplay Sample: Shuyu was walking through a bad neiborhood of the Rukongei District when he hears someone behind him. It was a man who looked scruffier then him dirty and in ragged clothes, the things that standed out the most was the huge knife in his hand and the wicked grin on his face.

"Whats so funny," says Shuyu.

"Give me your money and i wont have to bleed you," Said the Scruffy Man with his grin becoming even larger amazingly.

"Walk away and you wont get hurt old man," Said Shuyu.

The Scruffy man just snarls and charges. Shuyu easily side steps and punches the man in the gut. The man doubles over holding his stomach. Shuyu just raises his leg and brings it down hard on the back of the mans head. The man then colapses in a heap uncountious.

"Warned ya," said Shuyu picking up his bag he discarded and then walked away whistling the whole way.

Alright, I'm going to point out what you need to change.

1.) FAR too young for Bankai

2.) Please do not use underscores to separate words.

3.) Personality needs to be at least two paragraphs or 10 sentences.

4.) "Mekurumeku Sekka (Blinding Flash): Creates a great flash of blue light that temporarily blinds all around it except the one holding " Can you make it to where you have to be looking at the blade for this to work?

5.) Your bankai description "Bankai Description: I'm the same and my Sword is still in it's Shikai stage. But i will have a huge blue tiger fighting with me." Put it in third person.

6.) History needs to be at least three or four paragraphs or 15-20 sentences.

Modify those and you will be approved~

One more teeny thing...please put in your history that you entered the Shinigami academy and graduated.

Approved with a tier of 3-3.

This guy hasn't been on in a month...