The student surpasses the master??? [Closed]

He'd sensed her presence behind him as she'd re-appeared near his back. ducking down and rolling forwards before turning again to catch the sight of her as she called out to her sword.
"Shikai this early huh? She certianly dosn't waste any time.."

Red pink power seeped into the air-- at this point Redd had only been about 6 feet away from the girl. and it'd been currently crawling its way towards him. Red shunpoed upwards to a distance of 30 feet above the ground. Landing softly onto a plate of reiatsu as he began to fall He then leaned over forwards-- beginning to fall as he outstretched his palm once again.
"Hadō 58, Tenran"

A spiraling of translucent energy originated itself fr the from his palm, spreading out in a tornado looking cone of air. This Kidō extended downwards. As a result of gust of wind hitting the ground the pink pollen was forced down-- having then been dispersed in all directions. A purple ring having been the result, the colored cloud then went on to disapate-- no longer distinguishable from the air it had been so diluted and spread out below.

Redd had been previously levitated by the Kidō that brought about such a windy effected but was no flying towards the floor. Curling his upper body into a ball he began to spin forwards, doing a front flip before landing in the very spot he'd been before. Content that this area in particular would be cloud free he looked up to Kaminari. Squinting at the girl. He'd had previous encounters with "poofy cloud" abilities, and it always meant something bad-- best to decrease its effectiveness by dispersing said cloud. The last powder user he'd fought had used it to singe a persons throat at respiratory organs, and Redd definitely wasn't prepared to go through something like that again.

" That all you got? Well this is going to be quite a bit easier than I thought"
He said with a canine- looking toothy grin.

He face quickly assumed one of despair and he wailed out on a woe-is-me like tone.
" Oh Kaminari! I can't take all of this lying anymore ! You refuse to return my love ! I must end my life.... Kumokuripingu

His voice was extra theatrical as he placed the pointy end of his zanpaktou onto his chest-- perfectly in the middle. The last word that had been spoken would have made absolutely no sense to anyone except for Redd.
He went on to shove his zanpaktou into his chest- the blade creating such a great hole in his sternum that the hilt hilt went in as well being swallowed up by his chest disappearing in a swirling red hole in his chest, which at the distance she was away from him could have easily been mistaken for blood. Redd hung his head-- groaning loudly as if he was in crippling pain. His finger having been laced over the spot where his zanpaktou had previously resided.

He raised his head to look at her once again-- the same sharp-toothed grin returning.
[color=red"Just kidding"[/color]

Four sword-like apendaged exploded from the boy's back. This was similar to the looks of his zanpaktou in shikai mode, though these were alot longer. Stretching to 15 feet-- if extended straight outwards. each of these seemed to originate from His own spine-- two on the left side and two on the right, the top two starting at the space just below his shoulder blades-- the bottom two starting at the space just below the bottom of his rib cage.

Both sets of metal appendages angled from Redd's body angled sharply upwards before bending down to bring their pointed tips to a rest on the ground behind him.
"This is my bankai, Kumokuripingu...The creeping spider...Now lets dance"
His last phrase had come out as a badly executed whisper. His voice shining through in spite of the fact that he'd wanted to keep this last part quiet. Redd's face was once again the very embodiment of calm as he'd finished talking. It was one of Redd's key traits-- having a wishy-washy personality switching from one thing to the next in seconds.

" So ? Am I gunna have to come up there? I mean after all-- white does move first"
He spoke glancing down at his own body that had been slowly growing in height and muscle mass as he spoke. His boyish features being replaced with that of someone older-- though not to much different looking. Of course this hadn't been said in reference to his changing body-- but rather at the color of his skin.

Redd dis-appeared again, shunpoing a small distance back-- that still kept her within the range of the gigantic metal arms behind him.He'd Avoided her first Kidō-based attack but the second came soon afterwards. His lower left metal arm came up to smack the red ball of fiery energy to his upper left. This was a true testament to his new-found speed and strength. Although she'd cast a mid- level Hadō it was still a feat for someone to completely alter its course with physical force alone.

Again this pink mass accumulated before Redd's eyes. He'd only just barley had time shun jump backwards -- his backwards leap having carried him about 5 feet out of range of her "pollen" again showed just how much his power had increase. At the same time Redd maintained a distance-- still complete un-aware that he'd already been inflicted with this poison He dashed forward, taking a deep breath as he was then plunged into the cloud. He'd only just taken a few steps into the swirling mass of color before his metal appendages struck the floor beneath him-- hyper extending, this caused him to fly forward at an incredible speed-- rivaling that his own flash step.

These appendages then brought themselves to the sides of Redd, bending so that their pointed tips faced the female. They were then thrusted forwards-- all aiming for a point in the middle of the females chest .
And then it happened -- Redd had been waiting to reveal his own shikai ability. but in the current circumstances he felt it was time-- especially since he was running out of air--fast.
The bottom left of the four Blades began to spin-- an acute whistling resulting as it created three circles before suddenly stopping back in its original point and poised position.

Though the rotating of Redd's blade had stopped, the ringing in the young girls ears failed to subside. This was Jizen Ni (The advance), One of two parts to kumokuripingu. The ringing would soon overpower all sound -- leaving her hearing abilities virtually non-existent. Her vision would become blurry- now roughly at half it would be normally. Had she taken a step or was to use shunpo, she would have found it exceptionally hard to keep her balance-- now only maintaining around fifty percent of her balance and since of direction. as if she'd been walking on a sheet of ice or her shoe laces were tied together. Her smell would be dulled about the same amount as her sight-- essentially she would begin to feel like half of a human being... as far as senses go anyway.

Redd flew past the girl, having made the mistake of not clearing the area before entering the pink- cloud infested space. His appendages struck nothing but solid earth as he flew forwards.
-----He hit floor but had only just barley ceased motion. His momentum had carried him forward, and he used this to further his stance away from her, the zanpaktou appendages re-extending themselves-- again sling-shotting him forward at an amazing speed back into the air. Redd began to raise his arms to revel at the feeling-- like flying. He'd done this only to come to the realization that he couldn't. In fact his body had been completely dis-abled.

He flew towards the ground shushing loudly as they were implanted into the ground.. Using his metal legs to stand he turned himself to glare back at her. The sound had caused him some mild discomfort but that was dwarfed in comparison to the discomfort he fell and not being able to move his own body. His leap had brough him to a distance of roughly 30 feet-- down-playing her screaming effectiveness. Redd knew it wouldn't be long before Jizen Ni would wear off-- and although he could keep it up as long as need be it would be a waste. He again shot forward-- the blades spinning yet not producing the same sound as before as hehadn't yet decided to activate Jizen Ni.

He'd been just outside of the pink cloud of dust when her words finally reaches his own ears.
He'd only just had enough time to bond to the right-- hyper extending his left legs which caused tom to do a cart-wheel of sorts. This action looked more like a barrel roll due to the fact that it was on it's side.

------He poised all four appendages near his side. His newly found amount of swords had given him an idea. The two top blades began to spin-- he'd been using the bottom two to stand on. The rotating appendages became a blur-- spinning but not activating Jizen Ni. The blades stopped abruptly as he shouted out. Clear-opaque spirals of energy forming as he spoke the name of the Kidō. He had then used his appendages to launch him about twenty feet into the air, the fact that his limbs were limp would have caused his hands to float upwards. In doing this he lowered the blades downwards-- though only slightly so that they could make contact with his fingers. This brought fourth a small amount of blood, but was necessary all the same for him to transfer the Kidō energy to his zanpaktou appendages.
"Hadō 58, Tenran, Tenran"

As gravity began pulling him down the translucent white energy began forming two gigantic tornadoes that went on to disperse the pollen -- as the wind strength had been doubled it wouldn't disperse the pink pollen around the entire field but instead be casted behind her-- into the distance. Kaminari herself would have already been struggling to stand so provided that she hadn't moved this blast would have effectively knocked her on her ass......

He then spun the upper left blade this time, Where the ringing of his zanpaktou would have subsided by this time it rushed back into existence with new found- vigor. And it was all for her. Her Kidō ear mufflers didin't do her much good-- the ringing that Jizen Ni created was much more than just ringing. It was vibrations, sound waves, thus when they his her they would resonate up through her bones-- passing through her blood which would have caused it to vibrate as well. Of course all of this was unbeknownst to Kaminari. The covering of her ears would help-- but it would only negate his ability by a max of 10 percent, and that was nowhere near enough.

Redd was screaming at his arms and legs --within his own head to work, yet they refused. There was no way he'd venture into an attack like that again without a game-plan. He shunpo'ed forwards -- now only 10 feet away from her. He then shot the threads from his zanpaktou at her -- the speed at which this was flying at her reached upwards of fifty miles per hour.

One after the other-- he calculated a decent timing to shoot each one had she gained the know-how to doge. Of course that would be near impossible-- with the effects of his Earlier mentioned ability-- Jizen Ni. The threads would seem invisible-- and even if she could doge a few it was only a matter of time until she was hit by one of them. Redd released 6 threads in total before he shunpo'ed-- in doing this he'd activated his sealed ability-- his spiritual pressure soon fell out of place... Now behind the female, he kept at a distance of 8 feet away shooting out the remaining 6 tendrils in her direction.

Redd spoke at a normal voice-- completely aware that the girl wasn't the least bit capable of hearing him though he still felt compelled to answer. He took a deep break before speaking to the girl, rolling his shoulders back a few times, shaking his limbs. It seemed that the paralysis had begun to wear off -- luckily.
"That, is Okotta Sureddo... and this... Is Chiwosuu."

He said-- as the female would feel a spark of pain shoot up through her arms-- though not because of his ability. The fact that she'd touched at Okotta Sureddo would have cut open her hands. These threads were as sharp-- if not sharper than his zanpaktou.

The threads that had been connected to the female bean to pulsate a lighter beet red color that matched their own yet just a bit brighter. The change would be immediate. Kaminari would feel a sudden fatigue-- not a physical but a spiritual one, not yet anyway. This wouldn't come too severely but she would feel it none the less. Redd jumped a great deal away from the girl-- now making use of his working legs. He elongated each of the thread to accommodate the distance of one-hundred feet he'd made between him an the girl.

"Hadō Number Eleven, Tsuzuri Raiden."
Redd immediately detached two of the threads that the girl had been holding. The Redd threads of energy went into a dull grey color as the fell to the floor and disentergrated. oddly enough there was no yellow tendril of electric energy being surged through the threads. This was because Okotta Sureddo didn't conduct electricity. Ofcourse Redd had no way of knowing this and was right to be startled by the offensive Kidō which had been casted in his direction.

The fact that the threads hadn't erupted into a lightning induced fit before turning into dust had completely escaped his field of vision-- He was already in action. Redd used the spider appendages as well as his own legs to run around the girl in a gigantic circle. The strings handing losely about her body as he did so. He began to reel them in as he closed in. If she was to move to much her skin would be cut -- essentially she'd been surrounded with circular blades that could tighten and possibly kill her if given the right amount of force. Ofcourse He hadn't yet even remotely pulled these strings taut so she had yet to be hurt.

"You give ? "

Redd furrowed his brow in confusion at the sudden appearance of the hundred of flower petals. The small pink tear-drop like pieces of plant seemed to fill the air about them. These petals were cascaded into the air, though obviously through no fault of Kaminari's-- they moved by themselves. Inching their way along the length of his blades, having been placed at half-foot intervals after the distance that had been created between Kaminari and them.

Redd had been shaking his threads the entire time. He suspected another poison like ability, making getting them off of any connection to him a first priority. Yet the pieces of the hot-pink plant clung to his reiatsu sucking extensions. Redd had been just about to detach these threads from him when he noticed the withering of the petals that lined Okotta Sureddo. Chiwosuu siphoned off reiatsu energy-- which was all this new shikai really was-- reiatsu. This ability didn't just apply to the adhesive tip of the threads but ALL of the threads. It was for this reason that Kaminari's flower petals began breaking themselves down into a glowing pink dust.

The fact of the matter was that Instead of stealing energy from the girl they were attached to the threads were stealing the reiatsu from the petals that were attached to them. Due to the fact that his threads took away the same amount of reiatsu evenly each and every one of the petals began to "decompose". He'd only been given a small amount of time before each and every one of the threads exploded- though this was enough to dilute the explosion so that the threads weren't destroyed, at least not all of them.

Only three of the threads had been completely destroyed-- the three that were closest to her hands height wise. The rest of the petals had been reduce to half their power. Rattling the strings at best. Due to the impact of the explosions the two would be yanked a few feet closer together.

It was at this time that Redd hoho'ed two times-- which brought him about 20 feet away from the girl-- using his metal appendages to slingshot himself up in the air bringing himself soaring over top of her. As he left the floor the appendages turned slightly, causing him to spiral as he went upwards. He was again attempting to tangle her in the threads as he rotated above her. They streaked down in a wistful spiral below him, bringing the words gentle death to mind. He would have landed behind her shortly afterwards. Running away from her directions. The exploding petals were just begging to re-form, but Redd was long gone-- no less than 50 feet away form her position.