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Shizuo
Shizuo
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☨ Demon Template ☨

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Basic Information
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☨ Name: Auronagari Drevaki Heki No Akuma Delori
☨ Titles: Black Lotus
☨ Age: 26
☨ Gender: Male
☨ Affiliation/Rank:

☨ Shifter Appearance Auronagari Drevaki Heki No Akuma Delori [APPROVED, 0-5] Wip Done  Auro




[True demon form is only 0-5- ] ☨ True Appearance Picture: Auronagari Drevaki Heki No Akuma Delori [APPROVED, 0-5] Wip Done  Blacklotus
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Personality
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☨ Personality: Traits carried over from his past life which still remain the same:

Spoiler:
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Background History
история
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☨ Background: Human life:

Spoiler:

last moments as a human can be found in this thread below



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Powers
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☨ Natural Abilities: Akuma Kyodo
zao ka



☨ Unique Abilities:

(былинка шкура) Blade hide: This beasts hide is thick much like a daimond. Due to its near insane hardness. It attributes to extreme weight and being insainly slow. But from this the beast itself is agile but in itself is not very good on the fact it has very little control over its energy other then its very high . This rock like shene which covers its true form is seen like simply having blade like arms and blade like legs. The body itself is around 12 foot tall and has no feet or hands. Its whole body itself looks like a bladed structure and robotic almost. The thick gleaming hide being thick and very very dense weighing in on over 20 tons. From just how heavy the shit is in itself.

This Daimond like carbonite skin, is very thick and has no chinks or cracks. The reason of this is this being needs to contain insane amounts of energy. And not to mention the energy it contains in a nutshell can be thought of as very very hard. another draw back is in this form they cannot grab objects or block in the true form. Due to the fact of the blades in its skin. But another fact is the surface which gleams in this is not only extremely hard but is Very resistant to elemental tampering due to being a gem like substance which is extremely hardy against water, ice and electricty not to mention aswell is highly reflective against lazers and light. One of the few things it can be weak to is high vibrations which can weaken the skin and the armoring within it in itself. The reason of this is is smiple. the vibrations speed up the outward armor, and causes the bonds which it shares to push apart and become easier to push through.

Another reason this is so hard is because of the bonding of the molicules and cells. which had been put to the point that the armor in itself is basically one solid peice at a time with no real items and chunks within which can be bypassed. This being aswell, can be seen to have a x like mask on its face. But other then this the being has no mouth nor does it have eyes and so fourth. It does have a pair of horns though and midnight black wings which are just as hard as the armor itself. These are only just as hard due to the extreme durability within and that the being itself has. this durable armor is as resilient as it is powerfull aswell. Another thing is all the demonic and energies in its nature are not able to be released but are simply held within the body itself. Increasing in the core of the being. making it more or less like a reactor which will keep increasing more and more.

(Лед Сопротивление) Ice resistance: The resistance to ice comes from the fact the substance is very much like daimond in its properties therefor the ice has no purchas on the object nor can it crack the damiond due to the high defense against fluxuation and more so or less. the fact that the substance in question is very hard to tamper with. Ice can knock it back and can to some extent damage it, but peircing attacks will find no weak spot from ice, and due to how hard the substance basically is, ice is very much something that is hard to use. And aswell due to the fact that the resistance in the armor can do so at high pressures makes it even harder for a substance to harm or injure it .

(Пламя сопротивление ) Flame resistance: The being has high resistance to flame aswell due to the fact that the high intense heat within the body and that is taken to form anything that is like a daimond, makes it very very hard to over heat or melt the object in question and not to mention from the fact that its hard to injure in this aspect. It can be knocked back and thrown around but other then this is very very hard to attack or injure from heat. And due to the fact of how tightly the atoms are bonded together the heat has no real affect on it.

( Молния сопротивление) Lightning Resistance: Due to the fact it is daimond, it is not a conductor and can be used basically to reflect lightning. and for another manner. Is highly immune to the affects of lightning, and due to the fact of how closely bonded again, that the atoms are it makes it very very hard for the person in question to be harmed or injured via the way of the lightning in question..

( Сопротивление к переиздание хаос энергия / Природа энергия ) Resistance to reistu / chaos energy/ Nature energy: Due to the fact of the matter being that reistu particles make up an attack or subject in question. Due to the completely 1 surfaced manner of the armor there is basically no pits and no impurities for the attack to stay on. Basically aswell due to the sharp manner of the arms and the body in general. The attacks can blow up infront or around it and can contain it. and to a degree this being can be injured by such attacks. But the attacks in a round about manner can be cut inhalf if they are launched attacks and such via the blade like legs or arms. It is resistant to these due to the one surface plane but other then this the reistu and what not can easily and for the most part can harm this being with relative ease.

(Первосортный твердый) Super solid: Due to the manner of the works within the bonds of the atoms and so fourth the outside shell of this creature is not considered just a solid but is in the mannerism of being a super solid. From the fact being that the atomic bonds and other features of it have been compacted to the point of becoming something greater then a simple solid. This is also attributed to the sheer unity of the shell as one plane. which can also classify it in general as a super solid and so fourth depending on how it is though about and exetera.

(Резание острие) Cutting edge: The edge of the blades are extremely hard and sharp. being able to cut through daimonds and such other objects. Due to the fact the blade's cutting edge is the sharpest and the most densly compacted point on the creatures body. Being much harder and denser then the body in itself.

(Реактор сердцевина) Reactor core: Instead of the usual amounts of energy which can be exuded from the body, the magical elements have been sealed within the user just as the abilities are resistant to magical properties the inside seals it within making it impossible for magic to be used. This is why instead of using energy in magical attacks and so fourth its used by quickly coliding with itself, over and over this is then harnessed via the kinetic energy which is being radiated throughout the body. Plus the energy itself is running in on itself faster and faster. Basically this is why his hide is so hard. But in inclusion to this the core itself generates the kinetic energy which in tern is broken down into raw power in swings and force and so fourth.

This is used basically as the overpowering strength of the body in general. Which is added in with the fact of its extremely hard and sharp surface makes it have extreme cutting potentional in general. This strength is increased by this fact. but due to this EXLUDING all his demonic energies it makes it so that he has extremely immense physcal phyzeke and not to mention and insainly strong swinging force and more in a nut shell an insane over all bodily make up which is not neccisary in most mannerisms.

(Первосортный способность) Super power: Due to the Reactor core. Auronagari has extreme strength to the porportions of a monster. Via from the fact of its ability being mostly pure defense and strength. This is responsible for the speed being insanely slow and not to mention his form being like a walking fortress more then anything else. This has increased strength to the point the speed of a swing can cause wind to spray outwards in a gale if needed.

Spoiler:
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Resistances:

Ice damage: -30%
can knock back

Fire: -30%

Water: -30%

Lightning: -30%

Reitsu/energy resistance. -includes ni energy chaos energy ext

-30%

Vibration weakness:

damage +20%

Vibrations temperaroly weaken his armor by 5% for every hit. max's at 25% or.. taking 1/4th the strength away. this also decreases elemental defenses.

these reset every 5th post i post

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Adjustable Demon State
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☨ Adjustable State Benefits: Beserkers Conversion: Due to the fact not only does his armor lighten and turn into a stronger substance, in return for having no powers of his own . His Akuma kyodo, And his natural abilities plus over all power level increase EXPONENTIONALLY. The restances do aswell and due to the simple affects of prism sheild his barrier iS insainly increased.

9 layer prism barrier: Instead of having just one barrier the akuma kyodo is replicated 9 times, each basically a inch behind the last. This is due to the fact beserkers conversion greatly increases it. plus the barriers are slightly stronger naturally then in his previous forms.

Hydrogen Skin: Also beserkers conversion adds something known as hydrogen skin. Which is streached on the outside of each barrier in a mist. In short disturbing or breaking a barrier releases a minor nuclear explosion which is channeled and focused into the area of 2 feet around the barrier. It can go up and down. This reforms constantly due to the make up of Hydrogen skin.


Titan strength: Due to beserkers conversion his strength is increased 3 times that of what it normally was. Making it truely monsterous. this is due to the fact he does not get any real abilities in this form.

2nd skin: Due to how his armor was previously, its still there but, its been focused into a thin layer of skin roughly only 1 cm thick. It retains all previous aspects. and due to high concentration looses this also due to how vast his energy is splits a 10th of his energy into the skin.

Penta-skin: His skin is like it was previously but its focused much lighter though just as durable and is split behind the origional skin, which has just become that skin. Into 5 layers which are a third as tough. though they are skin, and resist vibrations.


Hydrogen Immunity : Due to how the blood and body is saturated with this substance it basically makes this his base element, along with gems he can swim in the shit, and basically has a high resistance to hydrogen attacks, as he basically has strong explosions of his own doing which ram into him on a day to day basis.

^ one power

v Second power
Blade Energy: All his power is like blades, being when he moves his finger, what it basically does is summons by absorbing huge amounts of energy, which cannot be manipulated since if anyone trys to manipulate the energy itself, it basically causes it to rip them apart from the inside out. Not to mention in the form, when he brings his fingers or feet around, it causes a thin stream of high vibrating gem like materials to shoot off in a line. This is almost impossible for the naked eye to see, and it can stretch up to a quarter mile. When it does this the metal is saw backed, and is highly potent in its vibrations. As when it accelerates in slashing it goes up to 2000mph. all this speed being due to the fact, its extremely small, and is very very fucking aero dynamic. Making it not only a. dangerous but b, its very very hard to avoid. Another fact from it is, once it hits the target, it also is highly dangerous in another way, within the tiny gem like blade particles, basically it has a White hot explosive core, which is made of Hydrogen, which has a short and explosive half life . It also is the product of all his armor from his previous form and basically it condenses it into that high velocity blade. There’s another fact about it which makes it extremely dangerous.

Super Solid Trandescended state: Its outside shell is 6x as hard as auro’s blade edge, but the difference is it vibrates at fuck fast speeds. And when the blade is moving, from all this force, it basically has around a potentional force of .5million pounds with its kinetic energy. Though this energy is not forced out like blunt kicks, its focused along the stream of the long narrow blade edge; which not only is highly adaptable but it moves insainly fast in the air, allowing for it to have extreme potency. Not to mention though the super solid state, disrupts energy, because it retains the properties of the armor. Although its in a bladed edge. Condensed to a super hard point which could split through the grain of a wall and slide right through. Not to mention the blade itself reflects light and can slice through objects extremely fast. It also forms a gem-like compound in the blood stream which is as hard as the blade.


As a super solid it has another thing known as all states.
All states: Any any given point the solid can turn into a expanded liquid particle, which would be a lot like plasma. And would be extremely hot, but it can also expand the core, and be like a white hot blade for a turn and will cause the ground it touches to explode and turn molten. This is just another fact of the energy it uses.

Upgraded core reactor: Due to the reactor In its previous form, that is upgraded throughout the skin. And the inside of the body. From this though the core reactor squeezes every last drop of energy, but also will double the power out put, easily.





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Skill-Sheet
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To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not feel your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. We will also do your will sheet for you upon grading your application.

Racial Skills

Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Akuma Kyōdo: Master



General Skills

Durability: Master

General Speed: master

Strength: Master

Weapon Skill: hard to say
^... Lol you have to ask @ weapon skill


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Roleplay Sample
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☨ Role Play Sample:(Show us what you got by posting a sample of how you role play. Any previous thread or new material is accepted!)



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Kenshin
Kenshin
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Master
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: Weakness is fine, I will follow up with this approval by watching your threads that you post in to make sure the weakness is being properly used.

As Discussed

Master in Strength, Master in Durability.
Tier: 0-5


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Fri Jun 08, 2012 9:43 am
Boosted to 0-4 through tier boost




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Shizuo
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Sun Jun 17, 2012 1:42 pm
Re-approved with the upgrade~
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Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:46 pm
Seem we have an issue here Shizuo. We missed this, but, Kenny can't give out 0 tiers.

Due to this little mess up, his tier would be normally directed back to 1-1+, but due to that tier boost, he's 0-5. So, reverting tier back to 0-5 status.



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Iori
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Moving to wip per Shizuo's request.
Shizuo
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Wed Aug 01, 2012 1:16 pm
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Sat Sep 01, 2012 7:00 pm
In any world I cannot approve this, you have added FAR too many abilities into your application. I will deny this update/whatever it is to hell and back.

If you are going to have a ability they need to have different techniques for those abilities I would understand if they had different techniques and you had this much stuff. Thing is you have 4-5 different types of abilities. I cannot approve of this application.

Also Demon's cannot achieve Alter form.


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