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Sat May 26, 2012 5:02 pm

I am reserving to check this application upon Flame's request, authority of Frost and myself!

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Glass Bodies
This needs much more description even if they are not used for combat. WHat specifically can they do?

Wings as sharp as masamune
You need to explain how sharp that actually is. This is also mentioned in roundhouse diamond.

Force Artes
These have no actual link to glass abilities. You are a Glass NI, make them glass.

Sesshi Buki
Remember this is a link to your Nature Iramash'as element so once again, make this Glass Based.

Ranmyaku Blast
You need to properly detail how big the detonation and spikes are etc for this ability.



Everything below is what Iv'e already given you in the wordpad file.




Her most used weapons are a White Whip that cracks a hyper sonic speeds, an Elven longbow that fire arrows capable of piercing even diamond

That is a bit too fast and those arrows are much too sharp. Remember Diamonds are an incredibly durable material.


though these are obscenely sharp and will slap someone with three tons of force, possibly rendering them immobile or paralyzing them on the spot.

Three tonnes of force? lower that as that's like being smashed into by a bus.


Force Artes is where Meilin uses her powers to create force type attacks. The use Nature energy, Chaos energy and reishi all compressed into attacks that speed towards the enemy but are weak in force or slow attacks of mass destructive power. The majority able to cleave sky scrapers in half or take chucks out of them. Her whip is and example in that a Hyper Sonic crack from it that hits a building could result in a section crumbling to pieces as if and Rocket Propelled Grenade hit the surface. Other fire balls of glass that fly at the target so fast they catch afire as the move. Some are thrusts of a blade that create sonic pulses outwards in a ring from the tip that form rings that can waylay attacks be they projectile or direct by offsetting them by several feet while Meilin could be thrusting he blade at the target who was set off.

Another example is a blade or claw, even a wave of energy and possibly glass sliding across the ground at high speeds after she slashed her blade against the ground. Her attacking is so refined and versed in many ways that none have ever been able to predict her movements. There is so many possibilities. Do note she can apply Glass to any attack. She occasionally names them stupid things like "Hammer Marshmallow" or something.

Tone this down as much you can. Smashing holes into buildings, cutting them completely in half etc all sound like too much power.


Glass Bodies
Meilin is able to create Glass bodies that are the same as Gigai but do not hide one's spiritual powers. She can use these to create many of herself or give one to another person. These bodies if used to represent herself, are the same power level as her in all ways but if she was to give one to Sephiroth, it would become as strong as his old body. They can also regenerate by the persons normal means or by Meilin's. Do note, using her custom Glass Gigai results in her gaining a small portion of your power, thus recommended.

These clones do too much. They cannot be of the same power level as the user because then your pretty much making more and more powerful fighters at your level. Also they should had a time limit of some kind, maintining a clone isn't just a 'snap it's there' ability. They would only be capable of regenerating by glass and wouldn't be able to reflect light themselves to make exact replica's of herself until Mailin was a much higher tier.


Wings
Contrary to popular belief, Meilin does in fact possess angel like wings. For some reason, they seem to not be made of Glass but real.. feathers of an Iramasha.. as if they were Sephiroth's... but white~!. They have come to the conclusion that her wings are his but in her personification. These wings can release sharp feathers that are almost as strong as the Masamune itself, meaning there is very little that can harm them. They're weakness is extreme weight. This weight can crush her wings ig high enough or just injure them if she is stabbed by something as strong at the Masamune or stronger, which will not be pleasure for her... she will scream bloody murder in true pain as she is no longer used to feeling it.

These always allow her to use.. a strange variant of the Quincy's Hirenkyaku. This rides the winds around her winds and body so perfectly that there is not resistance from wind or even a speed barrier. She may use them to ride the wind, reishi or anything like the two. Even using them to glide across waters or magma. This showing just how strong and resilient her wings are. Her flight speed is usually topped at 120 miles per hours since she is afraid to go faster, lest she shattered across such a wide area.

Her wings grow out from her back at will, dripping with her white or pink blood. They seem so elegant and beautiful one would be hard pressed not to stop and admire such a thing.

Note that she can also summon mini wings to her heels to use this Hirenkyaku like ability with her feet instead or at the same time for extra evasive prowess.

I would move these down to the ziamichi section considering it is Sephiroth that is giving them to her. Also, your wings cannot be as strong as Masamune unless Masamune itself is fairly weak. Consdier removing that and allowing her to add coats of glass to make them durable?


Galdr is a type of singing that only the Nature Iramasha can perform. Through the weaving of lyrics and song, they can empower allies, heal to extensive widths, move time faster in a given area, revive someone within thirty minutes of death(keep reading) and even transfer 'energy' to another person to assist them. They transfer their Nature Energy into the target and it shifts to meet that persons needs.

If it is possible to do all of this, make sure you write out what each one does like you did with healing and Rebirth. I see no summary for slowing time. Be very careful with time manipulation as well.


Artes Multiplier
In this form, all of Meilin's based abilities double in power, range, speed, etc.

Just say 'becomes much more pwoerful' because doubling is tricky to work with xD


Ziamichi Power Absorption I
Meilin is able to absorb the powers of the Ziamichi in her completely, rending her extremely powerful should she use this. It can be used at anytime and requires no energy as it is simply linking with the Ziamichi completely for an extended duration. Meilin also may release a Ziamichi back to wherever after they have healed or they have a body cloned perfectly.. etc. All of Sephiroth's Power's, Skill's, Abilities.. everything he has, she has. It is all at her disposal.

I greatly suggest you mention she doesn't absorb it completely in the first two forms to avoid confusion becuase in all three youv'e put this paragraph.


Artes Multiplier
In this form, all of Meilin's based abilities quadruple in power, range, speed, etc.

um, no they don't. They certainly do get stronger but don't say double, quadruple or anything like that. It's a bad way to compare power.


Her powers are fully released in this state and her full power is equivalent to her strike form's power multiplied five times over, abilities speed increases by five times and her powers and skills match these variables.

Word this differently too.


It is well known how easily she defeated Captain Hinamori in just her Return form, even though it was a very cheap victory(IT WAS! IT WAS!). It is uncertain how long it would of took but most guess it would have only taken less than thirty seconds if the Captain wouldn't have already have been in Bankai.

I cannot allow you to claim she did this as Captain Hinamori would be much more powerful than Meilin is.


The explosive power it equal to five tons of Dynamite each time she fires and the rocket explodes. This also releases Nature Glass shrapnel and extreme heat amounts.

I would leave this bit out. 5 tonnes of dynamite is enough to level several buildings in a city.


Diamond Meteor
In this the sky in blanketed with something resembling the Northern Lights. Though these lights swirl around in the sky, like a vortex pulling something close. Then a meteor about three miles in diameter begins to rip through the sky, a spell circle appearing before it, turning it into complete Diamond regardless of location. Using all the forces of Glass Nature, it falls towards the enemy. Slowly.

The extent of its power is completely unknown, as the one time Meilin had originally used it, all records were lost but the legend states the reason Krakatoa was destroyed as a result of a Meteor being thrown at one of her enemies of the past, as no remains of a volcanic explosion remain. This suggests that the volcanic eruption did not happen and the tidal wave was forced by the Metoer's insane impact speed and collision force. There is also a seal upon Meilin's mind(Much like her mother's), never allowing her to access this ability again.

Leave this ability out or cross it out until she grows in tiers. It's too powerful for what it does.

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Sun Jun 03, 2012 3:21 pm
From what iv'e read, this application appears approvable for now. I will however make these notes:


- Sephiroth is unable to appear in your threads yet as he is still too powerful
- Everything you crossed out cannot be used yet
- You make sure your history matches what JJ is asking of you.
- Be careful with this character and be prepared to make future changes to the application where needed.
- If any staff member see's something I missed, they are able to kick it back to WIP.

If you do not follow the above, then this app will be put back into WIP Other than that, Approved: 2-2
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Seems to be in order, i'll reapprove this app at no tier change
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