My App for SHINIGAMI

SHINIGAMI

Name: Kishiru Kuchiki

Gender: Male.

Age: about 200 looks 17

Personality: Kishiru is a bit of a snob due to his nobility, has a horrible attitude, and hates being ordered around...kinda like every teenager.

Appearance: sort of tan about 6'4 Atheletic Green eyes that seem to watch your every movement.

Zanpakutô Spirit: name: Thunder and Lightning Titan.

Sealed Zanpakutô : Basicly your normal katana.

Shikai Description: Turns into to swords. The Right-Handed one (lightning) is a bit longer then the left and has yellow dragon designs on the sides. The Left-Handed sword (thunder) is about 4 inches shorter and has red dragon designs on it.

Shikai Abilities: Right-Handed(lightning): When striking the enemy in a certain spot it will lead to paralization of the arms. Left-Handed(thunder): will deliever the finishing blow and slice enemy like butter.

Release: Crash down on our enemy and destroy the weak that stand in my way!
(You CANNOT fill the skill levels in until your tier is assigned. )
Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Shunpo: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Bankai Description: black and red mist comes from swords as the combine and turn in a Katana with 2 dragons 1 red and the other yellow crossing kinda like and x.. and my body gains wings

Bankai Abilities: Creates huge storms where that i can hide in then wait for the moment to strike this sword has poison as deadly as Rattle Snake, Black Widow, And a Manta Ray Combined.

History/Background: ( You can write about their life on earth, then their history as a shinigami.)

Roleplay Sample: (Show us your stuff!)

Even though this app is incomplete, i would like to point a few things out so you can change them quickly.

This application is really short and doesn't fit the sites minimum regulations. Most paragraphs must be at least 5 lines long. personality requires at least 2 paragraphs as well as appearance. You should try describing your character more than you have and also give him some more abilities to work with. Your zanpakutou spirit also needs to be describes as well as their inner world.

in short, your apps short and isn't describes as well as it should be, please make note of this.

im not even creatiive enough to do this lol...

This application has been sitting here for bloody ages. Enough time for me to forget about it sooo...

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