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killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Tue Feb 07, 2012 9:15 am
Name: killerants ishida
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Gender: male
Appearance Age: 18
Age: 252
Affiliation/Rank: gotei 13
Appearance Description: an average African-American teenager. his eyes are a dark brown color that looks almost black. his hair is black. the hair is kept short and never comes down over his head. his body is well maintained yet more skinny then most guys. dressed in all black with jeans and a t-shirt. always wears a black and white pendant. often wears high tops. hates to wear extremely baggy clothing. he prefers things that is easy to move around in. he is about 5'9 and weighs just under 165.
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Personality: killerants is a quiet and respectful person. He obeys all orders given to him by his superiors. He is kind and never mean to anyone. He is very intelligent. He reads books often. He is always studying an opponent and never charges into a battle unless provoked. His moves and sword technique are somewhat flashy despite his quiet nature. He loves to be around people even though he is quiet. He also loves walking. He is always trustworthy. All together he is a very dependable friend that does what needs to be done. He really likes to play basketball whenever he can. To him, basketball is a means of escape the harsh reality of life. He will often procrastinate because he has no work ethic. He carries himself with confidence. But on the inside he is really naive. He believes that every action has a consequence and because of this belief, he hesitates in multiple situations. He has a sense of humor though he tends to hide it. He is very focused and determined when it comes to doing a job. he hates to work in teams because he feels that with only him he can’t blame anyone else for mistakes. He does not like to fight because it makes him feel terrible afterwards. Although he never shows that side of him in battle. He is constantly in conflict with his mind because of this.
Likes: peace and quiet, walking, sports, books
Dislikes: fighting
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History: Kill was born in the year 2163. Sense he was a child he didn't fit in. It never bothered him. He just realized that he was different from other kids. He always wanted someone to explain why he was different and what was so different about him. Always thought he was alone so he never liked to be around people growing up. The only person he truly felt accepted around was his little brother. He deeply sought to out compete his brother in everything. Doing whatever it takes in order to beat him, because of this they started separating. Eventually they stopped talking to each other. He was very quiet in school despite the ongoing urges to socialize. So he had no friends. He died from a bombing when he was going to school. He wasn't missed. When he became a plus, he was tied to his home. He wondered why all the time. He never felt at home. He wanted to someplace his own that only he can be. His despair eventually attracted a hollow. The hollow was quickly taken out by a shinigami. The shinigami performed a soul burial on kill. To this day, he still doesn't know the name of the shinigami. When he first arrived in the soul society he knew no one and no one knew him. So he took this opportunity to just be on his own, but he failed because he couldn't find a home. That's when he got the idea to become a shinigami. So he travelled around the rukongai trying to figure out the location of the soul academy. Eventually he stumbled into the soul academy. He joined in the year 2206. He did average compared to everyone else. So he didn't get noticed. He learned the name of his Zanpakutō days before graduating. He finally graduated in the year 2210. He never liked the way his Zanpakutō looked, but he accepted it. Eventually he graduated and now he is just fulfilling the duties that's given to him. He is now apart squad 11 of the gotei 13.
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Reiatsu Color: white
Zanpakutô Spirit Name: aguila voladora
Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:
Inner World: aguila's world is just a vast network of white pillars. Sometimes the pillars form blocks or buildings. The network is random and you never know where there will be great gap in between pillars. the sky is always pitch black. but anyone that steps into the inner world cn see perfectly fine. in the center of the world is a large building like structure where aguilaa resides in.
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General Skills
- Durability: adept
- General Speed: beginner
- Strength: adept
- Weapon Skill: adept
Racial Skills
- Hoho: beginner
- Kidō: beginner
- Zanjutsu: adept
- Hakuda: adept
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Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:59 pm
From the template:
Let's see. I'm not even using the grading sheet yet. Need AT LEAST 10 sentences for personality, and 10 more for appearance. Your history is AT MOST 2 paragraphs. So need more there. Hmm... Also, your RP sample should AT LEAST be 10 sentences. Until you get all those up to snuff, this is denied.
I have one last little problem. DEFINE REGULAR KATANA.
Have a nice day, and once you get those up to snuff it should be fine for grading.
Appearance: (what they look like pics are welcomed)
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PERSONALITY
Who are they on the inside?
Personality: (How does your character act? What are their hobbies? What do they like and dislike? You get a picture of how personality works now. 1-2 paragraphs)
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What is there past like?
History/Background: (You will write about their life on earth, then their history as a shinigami here. 3-4 paragraph's)
Let's see. I'm not even using the grading sheet yet. Need AT LEAST 10 sentences for personality, and 10 more for appearance. Your history is AT MOST 2 paragraphs. So need more there. Hmm... Also, your RP sample should AT LEAST be 10 sentences. Until you get all those up to snuff, this is denied.
I have one last little problem. DEFINE REGULAR KATANA.
Have a nice day, and once you get those up to snuff it should be fine for grading.
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Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Wed Feb 08, 2012 10:35 am
alright its edited and i added some stuff. what do you think?
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Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Wed Feb 08, 2012 2:46 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [x]
- Appropriate Age [x]
- Gender [x]
- Appearance Present [x]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
- 10 sentences for personality [x]
- History is of appropriate length [x]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]
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... It checks out... although from the looks of your personality, he is either
A. Bipolar
B. Mentally Retarded
or C. Extremely confused.
I don't remember the last time I saw someone who follows any orders given, is trustworthy, procrastinates, AND is serious about his work and yet hates being on teams.
So yeah.
Tier:4-3-
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Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Thu Feb 09, 2012 9:26 am
lol i would rather say extremely confused
Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Fri Feb 10, 2012 10:15 pm
Moving this shit to The Approved Shinigami section since this should not be sitting inside of Unchecked Applications. Get on that, JJ.
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Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
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Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Thu Jan 30, 2014 10:01 pm
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Re: killerants[APPROVED 3-5]
Sun Dec 14, 2014 10:08 am
Archiving this character due to inactivity.
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