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Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3
Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:44 pm
SHINIGAMI
死の神
死の神
BASIC INFORMATION
Upfront Details about this character
Name: Luóbù Hēi (罗布黑)
Gender: Male
Age: Real Age = 175 , appears to be in his late 20's to mid 30's
Appearance:
A/N: I take ZERO credit for all these pics.
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PERSONALITY
Who are they on the inside?
Personality:
Too most Luobu would seem to have an odd personality because he tends to be a loner, spending his time alone, wandering, yet at the same time he can be very compassionate, understanding. Yet despite being a loner he has a strong loyalty to those he grows to trust. When it comes to battle or a mission Luobu begins to focus purely on the goal, forgetting that he may be with others, sometimes putting himself in unnecessary danger.
He enjoy's spending his time training, reading, or just relaxing on his own near chery blossoms, he also enjoys the unique taste of his cherry blossom sake. His dislikes are few, but they do exist, he dislikes those who are dis-loyal and dishonest, he has a deep hate for hollows rarely fighting them without his full power. Always striving to grow stronger, Luobu is constantly refining his fighting style trying to find the holes in it.
Having lost his closest friend before he entered the Academy, Luobu has a hard time letting people close to him, for fear of losing yet another soul close to his heart. This tends to result in some people believing that Luobu is cold hearted, when in fact he is just too cautious.
Possibly the biggest danger of Luobu's personality is the fact that he rarely shows his anger or other negative emotions, due to bottling them up. This can cause a drastic change in Luobu's personality in a fight, if his anger were to peak he would become a ruthless fighter once again, caring not for allies in the area. He would become a threat to himself and everyone around him.
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BACKGROUND
What is there past like?
History/Background: Back on earth before his death Luobo's time was split between his job at a sword shop, and his martial arts training. He had actually been quiet close to finally achieving his black belt before his untimely death in a training accident, when himself and his sensei were training with their wooden swords. After a vicious strike from his master Luobu had lost his balance, falling backwards and striking his head hard on the solid floor, cracking his skull.
One day Luobu woke up in a desolate area of a place he'd come to know as Rukongai, the first thing he noticed was his hunger so he had begun looking for food when he encountered an elderly man who had offered him shelter and food. This man had informed him that the reason he was hungry was because of his high reiatsu, and that soon he may encounter shinigami that would end up looking for him to take him to their Academy.
In the next many years life was slow and Luobu worked to earn his keep with the elderly man, who after all this time refused to tell his name. Those days were the quiet ones, but sadly they would only last for another few short years before many things would change in Luobu's afterlife.
The day everything changed Luobu was returning home after running errands for the elderly man, first he had been robbed for the first time in years, then secondly he arrived home to a burning shack, falling to his knee's Luobu yelled out in distress, his reiatsu dangerously flarring destroying everything in a 1m radius around him. Unfortunately this attracted the attention of a group of bandits that decided to see what the commotion was. As the group circled him Luobu had no idea of what too do, but he only knew anger and hatred at the time, he began to lunge out attacking the men with his fists, knocking two out before being slashed by the first blade of many. Falling to the ground bleeding Luobu reached for the nearest free weapon, a blade from one of the men he had knocked out.
Struggling to his feet Luobu lunged at the closest man, impaling him on his blade before taking a strike from another bandit, in his growing anger Luobu's reiatsu become dangerously out of control, which did two fortunate things, first of which was alert shinigami to his presence, the second of which was causing his Zanpakutō to form from the blade in his hand. Brandishing the new, lighter, better feeling weapon Luobu released his anger, cutting through every bandit that was still standing, the others nearly crushed into the ground from the pressure of Luobu's rietsu.
That day was the beginning of Luobu's future, a pair of shinigami had shown up too take him to the academy.
This now leads us to current events in Luobu's life.
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ZANPUKTO
What is this characters power?
Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Piāobó de gūdú(漂泊的孤独)(Wandering Solitude)
Appearance:
A/n:no credit goes to me for pics.
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Inner World:
Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :
A/N: I take no credit for the picture or sword design.
Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: N/A
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A/N: Shikai info added for when I achieve it
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Release: Disperse, Piāobó de gūdú(漂泊的孤独)(Wandering Solitude)
Shikai Description: Piaobo de gudu now bathes in a translucent silvery glow, smokey wisps curling off of the blade. The only other change in the blades appearance is that it has gone from a silvery steel color to being tinted with a soft white color.
Luobu himself also goes through a slight change, his facial hair, hair, and eyes are now white, the iris's of his eyes have gone from black to a deep silver color.
Shikai Abilities:
#1 : The first ability of Piaobo's shikai is the ability to manipluate the moisture in the air and condense it into a thick fog, essentially cutting the enemy off from their forces.(e.g a hollow comes with a few others, Luobu would be able to 'isolate' one from the others by interfering with their vision and sense's(the fog throws them off slightly)) Otherwise the fog just acts as a smokescreen of sorts. (effects an area of approx 3,375 cubic meter area [15m wide, 15m long, 15m high| so 15x15x15=3,375])
#2 : Piaobo's second ability infuses small clouds with Luobu's reiatsu, turning them into something like a proximity mine. Anything with reiatsu that moves within a 3m radius of a cloud would set it off, sending out a compressed wave of Luobu's reiatsu. This ability also allows Luobu slight control over the clouds infused with his reiatsu. (The compressed wave of reiatsu would explode upon contact with a foreign reiatsu/being[for example, the explosion would fail to affect those Luobu considers friends, but would effect anyone else] this explosion would cause damage varying from lacerations, to burns, and possibly broken bones.)
(The control Luobu would have over the 'clouds' would allow him to move them a few feet from where he forms them.)
#3 : The final ability Piaobo's shikai possesses is much like the formation of storm clouds, Luobu slowly leaks his reiatsu into the cloud-like smoke flowing from his blade, this smoke then gathers over head into a dark cloud. This cloud is a completely offensive ability that can also harm Luobu, as once the cloud is fully formed it begins discharging silvery 'bolts' of the reiatsu collected within the cloud. These bolts act similar to lightning but instead of physical outer damage, these bolts cause internal damage to the body, and can overload the sense's(i.e sensing reiatsu, sight, sound) temporarily (1 or 2 posts after the attack)
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RP SAMPLE
Show us your skills!
Roleplay Sample:
A/N: This rp sample is from my character on Bleach Story named Minoru Nao. If needed I can link to his character page, and my profile on the site._________________________________
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Not too far outside of the city there was a somewhat large battle going on between two entities, one with a dark spiritual pressure.... a hollow non-the-less, the other entity gave off a larger almost comforting pressure. Those that could see the two pressure would describe a clash of black-ish crimson and jade green mixed in with gold strands.
Approaching the scene, two figures could now be made out, one appearing to be a man looking to be around 19 years of age wearing black shinigami robes missing the sleaves, a black blade... his Zanpakutō in hand. The other figure was a feral looking hollow, looking like a cross between lion and tiger, its mask had 2 large fangs hanging from it, its yellow eyes starring down its prey before lunging forth....
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As the hollow lunged forth, clawing for my throat I swung Yawe up blocking the blow I put on a burst of speed bringing Yawe down across the hollow's body. Appearing behind the hollow I slide Yawe into her black sheath which was strapped just under my left arm. Minoru that was too quick, you knew that wasn't a strong one but you wouldn't play. Stated Yawe, my Zanpakutō, the partner of my heart and soul.
"Well then Yawe I promise I'll 'play' with the next one we find." I could feel Yawe's excitement grow when I suddenly felt a dark almost ominous spiritual pressure not to far inside the city, as such I put on a burst of shunpo as I began moving swiftly to the location, not taking notice of the Gargantua ripping open in the sky above me....
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Once within the city I came upon a isolated park that seemed to out of way, I knew I was close to the spirit pressure I sensed earlier but now I could no longer make out the exact area it was in. While sitting there contemplating what to do my thoughts were interupted by Yawe. Oi! Minoru, if you HAVEN'T noticed we have a hollow inbound, a strong one! I could feel the joy radiating off of her, yet somehow I couldn't help but have a bad feeling about this, but I ignored it and began to shunpo towards the new hollow.
When I came upon the hollow I found before me a horrid sight, a schoolyard soaked in blood, not a soul in sight.... My vision went red at the sight, my rietsu flaring, turning from the subtle jade it was to a dark omni-precent jade color. Stepping forth I drew my Zanpakutō, brimming with anger.
"PROTECT THE WORLDS BONDS,YAWE! My rietsu flared even more, the ground cracking beneath my feet, small stones lifting off the ground. Stepping out of the plum of rietsu I brandished my blades, looking them over, noting how bright the dragon teeth glowed eminating in my anger filled rietsu.
"Hollow! For this you go to hell!" I roared as I closed the space between the hollow and myself, crashing both blades down aiming for its head, only for it to block my blades with a large claw. Shaking myself out of my surprised daze I began to build my rietsu in one of my blades, while I struck with the other, slashing the hollows chest before being pushed back.
With some distance now between myself and the hollow I knew it was game over for it. Your really pissed at this one eh Minoru?1?.
Ignoring Yawe for the moment I finally brought forth my other blade, the teeth of which now were glowing a brilliant jade color, focusing as I swung down I called out, Windscar!!! 3 immense blades of wind ripped towards the hollow, which attempted to block the attack in vain, resulting in its complete destruction and purification.
Walking back towards the park I focused on Yawe. 'Guess I went overboard this time eh, completely vaporized the fool.'Yawe sensing how un-easy I had become the past few minutes left me to my thoughts as I began once again pondering about this dark rietsu I could feel, seemingly close-by.
SKILL SHEET
This characters strengths
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General Skills
- Durability: Beginner
- General Speed: Beginner
- Strength: Adept
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
Racial Skills
- Hoho: Beginner
- Kidō: Beginner
- Zanjutsu: Adept
- Hakuda: Beginner
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Advanced
- Focus: Advanced
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Re: Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3
Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:51 pm
I'll be moving this to WIP due to the fact it clearly is no finished. If you want to continue working on this character, look under the WIP board in the application forum to continue working on him.
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Re: Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3
Sat Jan 28, 2012 6:56 pm
App is Finished
Luobu Hei, Shinigami. 4-3
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Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:06 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [x]
- Appropriate Age [x]
- Gender [x]
- Appearance Present [x]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
- 10 sentences for personality [x]
- History is of appropriate length [x]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]
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Tier: 4-3
Re: Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3
Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:07 pm
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Advanced
- Focus: Advanced
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Re: Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3
Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:20 pm
thanks, so now I do my skills correct???
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Re: Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3
Sun Jan 29, 2012 12:45 am
ACTUALLY.
I'm going to have to deny this...
There are NOT ten sentences in this personality.
There are a total of eight, including the compound sentences.
Please add two more.
ALSO~
You can go ahead and fill in your sheets after this.
I'd also set up a face claim for that character.
I'm going to have to deny this...
There are NOT ten sentences in this personality.
There are a total of eight, including the compound sentences.
Please add two more.
ALSO~
You can go ahead and fill in your sheets after this.
I'd also set up a face claim for that character.
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Re: Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3
Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:21 am
*sigh* alright, I'll add some more too it... not that I have a problem with it :p
edit: alright so I added 3 sentences and spaced everything out so it looked better.
edit: alright so I added 3 sentences and spaced everything out so it looked better.
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