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Luóbù Hēi
Luóbù Hēi
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Joined : 2012-01-28
Posts : 24

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Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:44 pm
SHINIGAMI
死の神

BASIC INFORMATION
Upfront Details about this character

Name: Luóbù Hēi (罗布黑)
Gender: Male
Age: Real Age = 175 , appears to be in his late 20's to mid 30's
Appearance:

A/N: I take ZERO credit for all these pics.

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PERSONALITY
Who are they on the inside?

Personality:

Too most Luobu would seem to have an odd personality because he tends to be a loner, spending his time alone, wandering, yet at the same time he can be very compassionate, understanding. Yet despite being a loner he has a strong loyalty to those he grows to trust. When it comes to battle or a mission Luobu begins to focus purely on the goal, forgetting that he may be with others, sometimes putting himself in unnecessary danger.

He enjoy's spending his time training, reading, or just relaxing on his own near chery blossoms, he also enjoys the unique taste of his cherry blossom sake. His dislikes are few, but they do exist, he dislikes those who are dis-loyal and dishonest, he has a deep hate for hollows rarely fighting them without his full power. Always striving to grow stronger, Luobu is constantly refining his fighting style trying to find the holes in it.

Having lost his closest friend before he entered the Academy, Luobu has a hard time letting people close to him, for fear of losing yet another soul close to his heart. This tends to result in some people believing that Luobu is cold hearted, when in fact he is just too cautious.

Possibly the biggest danger of Luobu's personality is the fact that he rarely shows his anger or other negative emotions, due to bottling them up. This can cause a drastic change in Luobu's personality in a fight, if his anger were to peak he would become a ruthless fighter once again, caring not for allies in the area. He would become a threat to himself and everyone around him.

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BACKGROUND
What is there past like?

History/Background: Back on earth before his death Luobo's time was split between his job at a sword shop, and his martial arts training. He had actually been quiet close to finally achieving his black belt before his untimely death in a training accident, when himself and his sensei were training with their wooden swords. After a vicious strike from his master Luobu had lost his balance, falling backwards and striking his head hard on the solid floor, cracking his skull.

One day Luobu woke up in a desolate area of a place he'd come to know as Rukongai, the first thing he noticed was his hunger so he had begun looking for food when he encountered an elderly man who had offered him shelter and food. This man had informed him that the reason he was hungry was because of his high reiatsu, and that soon he may encounter shinigami that would end up looking for him to take him to their Academy.

In the next many years life was slow and Luobu worked to earn his keep with the elderly man, who after all this time refused to tell his name. Those days were the quiet ones, but sadly they would only last for another few short years before many things would change in Luobu's afterlife.

The day everything changed Luobu was returning home after running errands for the elderly man, first he had been robbed for the first time in years, then secondly he arrived home to a burning shack, falling to his knee's Luobu yelled out in distress, his reiatsu dangerously flarring destroying everything in a 1m radius around him. Unfortunately this attracted the attention of a group of bandits that decided to see what the commotion was. As the group circled him Luobu had no idea of what too do, but he only knew anger and hatred at the time, he began to lunge out attacking the men with his fists, knocking two out before being slashed by the first blade of many. Falling to the ground bleeding Luobu reached for the nearest free weapon, a blade from one of the men he had knocked out.

Struggling to his feet Luobu lunged at the closest man, impaling him on his blade before taking a strike from another bandit, in his growing anger Luobu's reiatsu become dangerously out of control, which did two fortunate things, first of which was alert shinigami to his presence, the second of which was causing his Zanpakutō to form from the blade in his hand. Brandishing the new, lighter, better feeling weapon Luobu released his anger, cutting through every bandit that was still standing, the others nearly crushed into the ground from the pressure of Luobu's rietsu.

That day was the beginning of Luobu's future, a pair of shinigami had shown up too take him to the academy.
This now leads us to current events in Luobu's life.

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ZANPUKTO
What is this characters power?

Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Piāobó de gūdú(漂泊的孤独)(Wandering Solitude)
Appearance:
A/n:no credit goes to me for pics.

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Inner World:

Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3 56758-bigthumbnail

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :

A/N: I take no credit for the picture or sword design.
Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3 Samurai-7-samurai-seven-kambei-shimada-s-sword-blade-cosplay-props

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: N/A

PhatomTech: N/A
A/N: Shikai info added for when I achieve it
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Bankai Description: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

Bankai Abilities: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

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RP SAMPLE
Show us your skills!

Roleplay Sample:

A/N: This rp sample is from my character on Bleach Story named Minoru Nao. If needed I can link to his character page, and my profile on the site.

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SKILL SHEET
This characters strengths

{Please do not fill out the following until your character has a tier}

General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Beginner
  • Kidō: Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Adept
  • Hakuda: Beginner


Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced


Last edited by Luóbù Hēi on Wed Feb 01, 2012 5:16 pm; edited 13 times in total (Reason for editing : Added info for FUTURE shikai and pic of it)
Teitoku
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Sat Jan 28, 2012 5:51 pm
Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3 73303

I'll be moving this to WIP due to the fact it clearly is no finished. If you want to continue working on this character, look under the WIP board in the application forum to continue working on him.




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Luóbù Hēi
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Sat Jan 28, 2012 6:56 pm
App is Finished


Luobu Hei, Shinigami. 4-3
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Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Comments/Notes: N/A
Tier: 4-3


Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3 WVMWLOu
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Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:07 pm
Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced


Luóbù Hēi, the lone warrior|Shinigami|Approved @ 4-3 WVMWLOu
Luóbù Hēi
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Sat Jan 28, 2012 8:20 pm
thanks, so now I do my skills correct???


Luobu Hei, Shinigami. 4-3
Tsubine
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Sun Jan 29, 2012 12:45 am
ACTUALLY.

I'm going to have to deny this...

There are NOT ten sentences in this personality.

There are a total of eight, including the compound sentences.

Please add two more.

ALSO~

You can go ahead and fill in your sheets after this.

I'd also set up a face claim for that character.


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Luóbù Hēi
Luóbù Hēi
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Posts : 24

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Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:21 am
*sigh* alright, I'll add some more too it... not that I have a problem with it :p

edit: alright so I added 3 sentences and spaced everything out so it looked better.
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Sun Jan 29, 2012 11:20 am
Now that's fixed, this is moved to approved!


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Sat Apr 07, 2012 11:33 pm
Archived because of inactivity.


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