Judas Pain

Tue Dec 06, 2011 3:28 pm

Demon Spell

Name: Judas Pain

Type: Other(Power Up)

Spoiler:

Prayer: Zoa Koa

Effects: According to dark history, the Judas Pain is a jewel made from the blood, tears and pain of Judas, Jesus’ traitor years ago. It was created out of mercy for the infinite woe of the traitor. Due to the despair of Judas’ dark soul it harbours gruesome powers. The gem is summoned by a dark prayer of Zoa Koa. The user must start a prayer like "I take in my soul let the darkness of Zoa Koa's true power come into light and absorb my dark heart" The gem is summoned and thus the user must swallow the gem thus their powers, speed, agility and strength will be greatly augmented making them into a fallen disciple. Once the gem is swallow their tier is boost up. For example if somebody was 2-3 there would automatically boost up to 2-1+. Only two skills in the set also be boosted to an advanced state. This only lasts for about five posts if this is use again. The consquences would be deadly if used a second time. Because the user will feel both phsyical pain, numbness of the legs and mental pain once the augmented power of judas pain dissapates

Notes:Looking for ways to increase in power???

Tue Dec 06, 2011 4:29 pm

Unfortunately, this is DENIED until further notice.

A. WAY TOO MUCH BOOST. I don't like it raising the tier that much and your skills. Should be down toned to something like a boost to abilities, but not THAT FREAKING MUCH

B. Lasts too long. 10 posts in a state that could potentially put a 1-tier over NPC-class power???? .... sorry, but just no.

You have 3 days to fix it up before it is put in Denied.