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Portaliya
Portaliya
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E N T E R T H E F L A M E R E A P E R




Back in action, and stronger than ever!

" G'day mate. I'm Poliro Tensol. Well known as The Flame Reaper. You'll learn why. "

[Basic Details]

Name: Poliro Tensol
Gender: Male
True Age: 570
Appearance Age: 20
Appearance:
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Nationality: British
Weight: 11 Stone
Height: 6'1'
Languages: British English/Japanese

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[Personality]

Meh/Looking for Love. These two worlds can sum up a majorty of Poliros personality. Most often, due to Ayanes death still having a impact on him, although not as much as before, He spokes a general "meh" attutide to most things, being rather Apathetic to most things because he simply doesn't care, but he is not rude enough to publicly state he doesn't. As such, Poliro will seem like a person who is uninterested in most things, but thats not exactly the case. On the other hand, he seeks out a special woman to try and fill the gap Ayane left in him. He has yet to find anyone, but he knows she, the special person exists somewhere in the world. He doesn't really tell anyone this though, so its a rather private and special thing to him.

Confident with his Power - Having now unlocked the final stretch of his power, the Ress, Poliro feels he is in his prime now and is going to use every ounce of his power to achieve his goals, and he sometimes is a bit boastful about his ablity, but he now controls his inner hollow 100%, although if at the verge of his power, and Poliro's will simply demands more power, Poliro's inner hollow comes into play at this stage, but for the most part, Poliro can fully supress the influence of Hollow Poliro, meaning he isn't a problem for his life anymore, meaning Poliro's power is now perfectly balanced between Hollow and Shinigami. However, this doesn't mean Hollow Poliro will show its colors. As Poliro is quite rash, he will be quick to act upon anything, and lose control, and this is where Hollow Poliro can show itself.

This has changed. Since then, he has discovered his powers have changed, but he remains confident, despite the trashing he got by Gilgamesh.

Polite to Superiors - Despite all thats happened to him throughout his life as a Gotei 13 member, Poliro will still have his polite attutide to superior ranked people, because he simply wants to show his respect towards them so that he doesn't get harressed about having a "Lack of respect." However, he retains his annoyance for people of a higher ranking being cocky than him thinking they could easily beat him in a fight... he'd put them to shame, as theres not a whole bunch of people in the Gotei 13 that could actally defeat Poliro that easily, bar maybe Zaraki and the Captain Commander.

Hatred for Arrancar/Cero - Poliros death was caused by Cero, and a arrancar, who he doesn't know. Even after death, this one memory had haunted him in his life in Soul Society, and he became a Shinigami for the cause of erasing the person that killed him, whoever he, she may be. Because of the tramuatic memories involved with the ablity, Poliro will often either enrage at a enemy using it, or seeing a ally use it, have a PTSD moment about it and stress out, but won't attack the enemy. Mentioning Cero around this guy is a very, very bad idea if your his enemy. Even as a Vizard, Poliro will not use Cero NO MATTER WHAT. Even if the guy was about to give out and die, even if he had to to survive or save his life, he wouldn't touch it. The effects of Poliro seeing a cero was blantly shown in his fight against Hakai, where he instantly used his mask and Shikai and unleashed a attack out of pure rage. He doesn't ever want to be reminded of the shit in his past life again, so this is why.

Joy of Fights! - In a non serious fight, or a spar or training fight, Poliro sometimes heavily gets into the joy of the fight, and goes rather batshit upon doing the more powerful attacks, as shown against his battle against Renji. "OH MAN! HELL YES! THAT KICKED ASS!" is one of his quotes when he was enjoying the battle after pulling off a 4 Kidō combo on Renji. In serious fights though, where he is intending to kill the enemy, the guy becomes blood thristy as shit and doesnt' hold back any power. Also, he is quite confident against fighting anyone, even if they are stronger than him, although he will doubt himself every now and again, he backs up his morale by reminding himself with the training he went through with Ayane and such, and he remembers all the hard work he went through to reach the point hes at.

[The Flame Reapers Story]

:;The human life of the Reaper ;:

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Poliro was born in 2035. During this time, he was in a era of peace, but he never had a clue why he saw dead people all the time, and why no one else could see him. He wondered what made him a special person. He lived a normal mans life, other than the unknown spirits he could see. But when he was 15, this "peace" that was going on around came to a sudden stop. The popluation of demons, arrancar and hollows began growing at a alarming rate. In 2050, hell had hit Earth, as he saw massive battles between the Shinigami + the rest of the races in the fights. He had no idea what he was seeing, but he saw the battles, and the death that took place. But his destiny was coming.

One stormy night, Poliro was late coming home, but this would be the last time he'd leave home, in the night, the storm had approached. He was in the middle of another huge battle between the arrancar and Shinigami this time, and he tried to take cover. He wondered in fear what was going on around him. He saw the fight unfold, until a Shinigami went up to him and told him to get away from there in fear. But then the words by an arrancar were uttered, the words that would end Poliros human life. "Cero."


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:;The Reapers Soul Life:;

Poliro was destroyed by the Arrancar Cero. He became a soul now, and he was shocked at what happened. His life had just ended, but he was reborn as a ghost. He was scared of himself, and worried about his family and such. The battle ended. One of the Shinigamis told him he was going to Soul Society, which he challenged the Shinigami as he thought about his parents being worried about him. The Shinigami reassured him and then peformed soul burial on Poliro. Poliro had just been reborn into Soul Society. He arrived in District 1 of Rukongai, the word "Cero" echoing in his mind.

As he grew up in Rukongai, every night he would see a flashing light and hear the words "Cero." He couldn't erase the memories of Cero from his mind. Every day felt like he was in some kind of haunted ghost town, he wasn't able to adjust to where he was in Soul Society. He went around everyday, wondering how he could take his revenge on his killer. He asked around Rukongai. He wanted to obtain power for his revenge and to protect others from the fate he was in now. He found out about the Shinigami, and their powers. From that day, he made it his promise to avenge himself by becoming a Shinigami.
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:;The Reapers Shinigami Path:;

He began self training, including excerising and learning about reiatsu from third party sources so he could enter the Shinigami Academy. After 2 years, he thought he was finally ready. He entered the entrance exam. After going through with it, he had recivied news. He had passed with a high grade. He thought to himself. "I'm ready for this. I will obtain the power I need.. "Cero" will be gone." He entered the Shinigami Academy at a high class because of the grade he recived in the exam. He progressed through the six year course, learning the basics of Shinigamis, including Hakuda, Hoho, Kidō and zanjustsu. He learned everything at the Academy.

This is where, his power was manifested as his Zanpakutō. Furimingu Shibo.

HE did training with his Zanpakutō again, before applying to the Gotei 13 Protection Squads. He then applied, and ended up in Squad 7. As the years passed, his personality changed but he still felt conflict in his heart about "Cero", and thus has lead to him having alot of mood swings at times, making him a unpredictable person. Now. in 2411, hes decided to furher his power more. It was at this point of time Poliro resolved to learn Bankai.



:;Ayane Arc;:

Poliro, soon after joining Squad 7 became the 4th seat of that squad. He met Ayane Redwood, at night time because he wanted to know to get her. They talked for a bit, and went to bed. The following morning, Poliro tried to talk to Ayane again, but walked away crying. He was very alone during this time, and he wanted a friend. A friend like Ayane. Ayane came to Poliro though, and they eventually made friends again. Then they went to the market in Rukongai. It was there that Poliro and Ayane delevoped more feelings, but it ended in Ayane falling to the ground because of shock. Later on that day, they started training. Poliro noticed the flaws in his fighting methods, but through training with her, improved.

After that training, in the evening, Poliro and Ayane went to Karakura Downtown for dinner. It was there that those two admitted that they loved each other. The following day, they trained again, and this was a major turn of Poliros personality. Gone was his mood swings and depression, in was the joy and happiness of being with Ayane. Soon after this last training, he began to train with another captain, and a friend of Ayanes, called Rola.

Poliro pushed himself to the edge against Rola, and ended up collpasing after releasing all his reaitsu into one attack. The day after that, he had healed. And he went to Rola again, for Bankai training. It begun, and Poliro faced off against Furemingu Shibo in his inner world. After the intense battle, Poliro won. He was then thrown into another fight against Ayane, this time using Bankai against him. In Poliro being cornerned, is when he used Bankai, and only managed to defeat Ayane cause she fell ill during their battle. Now, time has passed since then... and they still love each other dearly. Since then.. they have gone from hugs and kisses.. to intercourse!

In a sudden twist of events for Poliro, on one of his normal missions, he was sent to kill a bunch of Hollows in Karakura Forest. He was fine after doing this, it was no problem for him after all, but however, little to his knowledge he was infected by one of the hollows with a genetic mutation that would result in him becoming a Vizard. He didn't know this, and this eventually took hold of him over a period of time, but all that was needed now was the trigger. For now it seemed, it wasn't going to activate and take control of him... he resumed peaceful life, unknown this had happened to him.

:;Animal I have Become;:

But this didn't last long enough for Poliro. Because of Ayanes illness, she died in one of the most shocking events of Poliros life. The only thing he was glad about in this is that she died in a peaceful way, not struck down in combat and what not, but her death shook him to the heart. And this is where the Hollow infection took hold. In Poliros emotional distress, his anger, his desire for Ayane to return, formed Hollow Poliro. The hollowifaction took place and caused destruction to the area it was in. (Ayanes grave in the forest of Rukongai, the place where they first trained) Poliro was dragged to his inner world to fight the hollow. The winner would take home Poliros body, and Poliro managed to overcome his Hollow. From the looks of things, Poliros hollow wanted one thing and one thing alone. Ayane. Her safety, and such. But she wasn't here, so he was like a wild beast... and it was causing Poliros problems. In the new arc of Poliros story...Poliro was going to seek out someone that was like Ayane to try and quell his hollow and his own emotional distress. With no one left to take the mantle of Squad 7 Captain, Poliro wants to rise up to that mantle. And he is now training even harder for that responblity.. and to protect his next companion from death.

"What would of Ayane said...?"

Soon after becoming the Squad 7 Captain with his hard work paying off for him finally, Poliro then found himself sort of overwhelmed with the work, but he coped with it. He still hadn't found himself a proper fight for a while, and this is where Renji came back into play for him. Him and Renji had a round 2 that was even more intense than the last, taking out a bit of the Seireitei and attracting a lot of the Shinigamis attention. After this battle, Poliro had to head to Karakura City very quickly to deal with a new threat. Hakai the Destroyer, the leader of the Monsuta was there, and thus Poliro had to go to take him down, or atleast try.

This wasn't the only chain of fighting to happen with Poliro.. But the worst one was to come yet, as he found himself confronted with a deadly oppenent, the Golden King, Gilgamesh. This fight resulted in serious damage to Poliro, as his soul chain got damaged, and he barely escaped. He had lost his Zanpakutō, and most of his reaitsu. It was barely stable, Poliro risked not even being a Shinigami after that battle. But luckily, he managed to get by on the skin of his teeth. For weeks following that, he had to keep fighting and training to try and regain them, but was finding it difficult in the body state he was in. He had also met a woman who was the captain of Squad 8, Kumo Tenshi.



And now, Poliro is back packing new powers, and the Reaper is back out there to prove why you should fear the reapers shadow!



[Enter: The Reapers Powers]

Immunity to Fire - Poliro, having trained with a Fire-based Zanpakutō has a natural high burn threshold, meaning he wont easily go down if he is being burned, and the likes. This has gotten to the point where burns don't even affect him mentally, he'll still burn and such, but he actally is unfazed by any fire attacks whatsoever, making him near enough imprevious to fire. But now, it is to the point where he doesn't even notice most fire attacks.[/b]

Kidō Master - Poliro has become widely known as a master of Kidō. Being able to use most mid to high level kidos without any chant, and being able to use the very high end Kidō such as Hadō 91, however this required a chant. He has also created custom versions of some Hadō's to match the theme of his powers, and they are more powerful than the actal counterparts. He is also able to combo Kidos together for some pretty amazing combos, as shown in his fights with Renji. Poliro has took his Kidō mastery even further, creating a healing Kidō called Blaze of Renewal that can save someone from nearly any wound, making him even more awe-inspiring in the field of Kidō, and for the first time, he has created a Kidō that allows him to summon a creature known as Kael, the Flame Dragon.
(Custom Kidos in Spoiler)

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Immense Spritual Power - Poliros spritual power, at the level that he is is immense, even for a captains standards. It has known to be given a burning sensation to anyone that is not on his level. It is considered by many to be monstrous.

Expert Hand-To-Hand Combatant - Poliro's hand to hand has been noted to be strong, fighting evenly on par with the Squad 2 Captain, someone who needs to be a master in this field. His attacks in hand to hand style combat have been noted to be strong enough to shatter rocks with ease.

Expert Swordsmanship combatant - Because of Poliro's main sword fighting style being so unique due to the way Furemingu Shibo works, he has been considered to be a expert in the profession of Swordsmanship.

Hoho Master - If theres anything that people know about Poliro, its how fast he is. Hell, on his own his movements are so swift and his acrobatics are quite amazing in how he does them in battle, but this is one truly powerful thing about him. His shunpo is swift and he has covered long ranges with it. He is considered one of the fastest captains in the Gotei. Some say he may even match Shadin when hes not in any forms that enhance Shadin's own speed, but Poliro is unsure about that. Regardless, he is masterful in this area.


[The Reapers Flame and Wind control]

Due to Poliro's successful recovery, new powers have emereged. Due to his training in wind. Poliro has now gained the ablity to freely maplinuate and control wind, aswell as Fire, due it to being his primary element. There is a lot of ways he can control fire and wind. When hes using his fire powers, he can control the tempature of his flames by this ablity from 0C, meaning they give no heat off, to 8300C . Poliro can create flames from his hands with no problem. He can also create swords and shields and barriers of fire too. He can practically create any shape out of flame if he willed, or any weapon for that matter. He can move these weapons and shields and such with the power of thought, so he could simply create swords and then shoot them at a enemy without even touching them once. Also, his flames in any form or state cannot be put out, only Poliro can put them out if he wills it.

As for wind control, Poliro can do the same thing as with fire control, creating many weapons and shapes and barriers and such if he wills it. His wind speed is 650MPh unreleased. He can also push or pull things to him by blowing wind currents behind or infront of him. When he creates weapons and such, they are normally very sharp due to the compression of the wind. They could slice through buildings and limbs easily. Also, at the insane point, if Poliro wills, his wind can simply become plasma. The effects of his plasma. include blindness from the shining light of it, and if your hit by his plasma attacks, more than likely that part of your body is likely to be disintegrated or severely burned.

Poliro's Powerful Techinques -

Supernova: Poliro creates a sphere of flame quite big, around him. When hes inside it, he uses his wind powers to push the flames out in all directions, burning and turning anything in its path to dust. This technique has the power to simply turn Karakura City, a majority of it into ash and smoulder. This is arguably one of Poliro's strongest powers and is not to to be taken lightly.

(Once per Thread)

The Almighty Winds: Poliro, infront of him uses his wind control to send a mighty gale infront of him, and the pressure of the winds simply crushes everything infront of him, the ground, buildings ,and if a person is caused it in it, the damage includes nearly all the bones in their body being crushed or broke. Its a very deadly move.

(once per Thread)

Tornado Barrier: Poliro can create a tornado around him, which the effects of including throwing in a 0.8 acre radius around him back. This can include people, buildings, and even attacks. This is Poliros absolute defense in a sense, as he can keep using it, as its a rather low reaitsu cost.


The 10,000 Wind Blades : Poliro creates 10,000 very small wind blades, and then shoots them all at his opponent. Because of the compression of the winds, and the cutting power, these blades could very easily just turn a army of people into mince meat, and the same goes for the area. This has the same amount of power as Supernova. It could turn Karakura City into a wreck.

[ENTER: The Flame Reapers Zanpakutō: The Flaming Winds]

Zanpakutô Spirit Name: The Flaming Winds
Appearance:
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Inner World:
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Sealed Zanpakutô :
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Release: Winds of destruction and flames of death, come as one.

Shikai Description: The Flaming Winds don't actally change form of the blade. The katana stays as it is. However, the flames of Poliro now are around the sword itself.

Shikai Abilities:

Increased Fire temperature - While Poliro is in Shikai, his total flame temperature goes up to 13500C.

Extendable Flames: The flames from Poliro sword can whip out up to 30Yards, meaning Poliro can fight with range and melee, if he wills it. He could also keep it extended, if he willed it to be.

Super Flame Wave: Poliro charges up his reaitsu into his Zanpakutō, then swings his sword to send a more potent fire wave at the enemy. It is very dense due to the reaitsu within it, it is very powerful and destructive. A enemy hit by this would be burned on the area of impact, and moderately wounded, body wise.

(Cooldown: 3 Posts)

Quickdraw Flame: Poliro sheaths his sword then draws it in a speed that can't really be seen unless your used to seeing that kind of speed. He then fires a fire wave, a small one, at the area or enemy he is aiming for. The most powerful part of this techinque is the fact Poliro can rapidly do this over and over, and with his speed, he would create around 100 fire waves in 3 seconds.
(No Cooldown)

Soul Reap: This is Poliro's strongest flame shikai ablity. The flames around Poliro's Katana extended out into a scythe shape. If Poliro then manages to connect a blow to a enemys vital point. (Humans: Heart, Shinigami, Soul Chain, etc), with the scythe, then the struck enemys power will be reduced by approxmatiely 30%. This means they will be slower, the attacks they make will be weaker, and they'll generally feel weaker. This lasts for 2-3 posts. Also, from the attack, Poliro heals internal damage that may of been done to him, or any pains he feels. It will only heal minor wounds such as as internal scarring, it won't heal severe things like internal bleeding and broken bones. This is a very powerful move, but it can fail as many times as it can succeed, as Poliro needs to make direct contact for the effects to take place

(Once Per Thread)

Activate: Wind Mode! - This changes Poliros Shikai to its wind mode.

Wind Mode Ablities:

Wind Blade: While Poliro is in wind mode, his blade is surronded by razor sharp winds. This increases his cutting power with his blade by 3 times, meaning he can slice up people, buildings, etc much easier than he can in his flame mode.

Wind Quickdraw: A wind version of Quickdraw Flame, the wind waves are also razor sharp, meaning Poliro is practically shooting out lots of scalpel-sharp blades, making this ablity deadly in its own way.

Omniwind: Poliro charges forward, drawing his Zanpakutō and slashes in every direction possible. This combined with his passive ablity Wind Blade pretty much means anything in his path is going to become mangled up really fast if they are caught by it.

(Cooldown: 4 posts)

Activate: Flame Mode! - This returns his Shikai to flame mode.

Bankai Description: The name of his Bankai is Flaming Wind World. The Zanpakutō takes the form of metal gauntlets growing red while in flame mode, and white in wind mode.

Bankai Ablities - (Flame Mode)

Hotter Flames - His flames in this form are increasted to 17,000C.

Fire Storm - Poliros bankai release causes a fire storm to surrond him and the enemy. IT is around 20-30 yards in width. Over time, the intense heat can cause fatigue and sweatiness, but the time it takes for someone to feel the effects all varies on their endurance, their will, and how tired they were before the Bankai.

Fire Gauntlets - Furemingu Shibos new form is a pair of Fire Gauntlets for the feet and hands, these gauntlets can shoot out blasts of fire. . And are quite simple in nature, it is a straight line blast that can be stopped with enough spirtual pressure, a shield (although it may melt after) or a ice attack.

Eruption - If Poliro is airborne, he can use this attack to punch in the ground, creating a volanic upwards explosion around him. He is unharmed, but likely anyone around him will be burned pretty bad, but your mileage may vary depending on the enemy.

Fireball Barrage - Poliro created this ablity through his training and as a homage to one of Ayanes old ablities, but different. He charges two fireballs in his hands, then shoots them, then begins shooting out much smaller fireballs at the enemy, causing firey explosions. The small ones are quite fast, and the two starting ones aren't half bad either, but are slower.

Hyper-Speed Combat - Poliros speed in Bankai almost triples because of how small his bankai is. If he chooses to go very fast, afterimages will be all over the place. This has shown in Poliros fight with Ayane, as he was going too fast for Ayane to defend from his punches. He has also been seen to out run Renjis bankai in their fight. This allows him to punch and such at a very high speed. Its said that he could deliver 100 punches in 3 seconds flat.

Flame Trail: Where ever Poliro runs, a trail of blazing fire is created behind him. Theres no limit to how long the trail can go, other than Poliro's own endurance and how fast he can move. Anything left on the trail will obviously begin to burn up.

Flame Soul - Poliro condenses the fire storm caused by his bankai into his body. From there on, Every attack Poliro can cause serious burns to the enemy, and potentially, burn away bones. The downfall is that Poliro can only keep this up for 4 posts. After that, the fire releases itself back into the firestorm. This can only be used once every fight. Another risk is this move causing his own internal organs to be burned.


Supernova Eruption - Poliro flies high up into the air, and then crashes down, causing the ground to crack and become competely destroyed, and a massive eruption occurs that could level a football stadium and pitch (One acre) being hit by this ablity could cause very life threatening burns unless you were quite strong and could resist the burning effects of fire upon your body.

Wind Bankai: Activate!: This activates his wind form.

Wind Bankai:

Wind Gauntlets: Poliro's gauntlets go white as they signfy the change of power from fire to wind. These wind gauntlets give him the power to disregard air resistances, allowing his leg and fist attacks to become even faster in frequency. He is now able to do 230 punches in 3 seconds.

Wind Storm: As you'd expect, instead of a fire storm raging,, Poliros wind bankai creates giant walls of wind, with their pressure all closing in on the ring. A average person would easily be crushed by the pressure of the wind. Poliro is able to endure it however, most strong people would be able to. On the outside the ring, anyone coming close to it would get blown away if they couldn't endure it.

Eye of the Storm: Poliro can make the ring disappear, and make it reappear above him as a mini-hurricane, raging up to 260MPH. This would be enough to wreck a area of land, up to 0.8 acres approxmatiely. Anyone that isn't able to resist the winds will get lashed away by the wind speed and pressure. It lasts up to 5 posts, before the wind storm resumes wherever Poliro's current location is.

Plasma Drill: Poliro can spin whatever weapon he is holding (His wind blades for example) and it will begin to turn into plasma. After he has done that, he can send it forward as a powerful drill bullet, or straight forward as a simple bullet. Due to the heat effect, itcan pierce even some of the toughest Hierros and natural skin defenses and cause damage internally and externally. Before he can fires he can even spread out the attack and shoot a lot of mini bullets.

Hidden Tempest: Poliro creates a wind bomb within the palm of his hand. Instead of firing it at the enemy, he plants it under the ground, disappearing from his hands, and begin to gather power for 2 posts. After 2 posts are up, it explodes in a great tornado from underneath the ground, or in a slicing huge gale that covers 1200 metres.

Plasma Soul: This is like Flame Soul, enhancing Poliro with a plasma aura giving all of his psychical attacks the forceo f Plasma behind it. Meaning if he strikes you and connects, he will most likely burn that area severely if not nearly burn it off. It lasts 4 posts and carries the same risk to Poliro as Flame Soul would.

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[Enter the Reapers Hollow]
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Inner Hollow Description:
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He appears like Poliro using Hollowifaction, but with the mask partially broke and a gleaming red eye in his blue eye.

Inner Hollow Personality:

Obession with Poliros lovers - Hollow Poliro was born from the mental insanity Poliro went through losing Ayane. As Hollow Poliro came from a virus, the virus triggered on this emotions, and was born with the personality to protect whoever Poliro loves at ANY cost, anything. He'd do anything to himself, to others, to the world, just to protect them and keep them safe. Without anyone to love right now, Hollow Poliro is in a frenzy like Poliro was without Ayane.

Malicious - Hollow Poliro is suprisingly malicious and evil, despite how he may look for his "good intentions." He wants to destroy Poliro mentally so that he can gain control of him and be the Poliro everyone knows, rather than the "real" Poliro. He is like Poliro a bit, when it comes to his fighting enjoyment. He loves whoever Poliro loves, but to very.. scary degrees.

Calm and Collected - Hollow Poliro is the anti thesis to Poliro, Poliro is rash and hot headed, but hollow Poliro is calm and collected, something you wouldn't expect for a hollow, and a hollow of Poliro. This is also reflected in his b attle style. Hollow Poliro moves more calmly and for his attacking, he normally chooses to exploit the Furemingu Shibos Shikai power to extend, by using it to whip and sweep, rather than attacking the way Poliro does.

Inner Hollow Powers:

Hollow Poliro has all the ablities of Poliro, and knows them as well as he does, his Bankai, Shikai, etc. The only difference is that Hollow Poliros Shikai/Bankai flame colours are a flaming blue, than orange.

Destructive Spirtual Power - Upon Poliro first confronting his hollow a long time ago, Poliro described it as "...It feels nothing like reaitsu.. It feels like a demon made of fire ready to silt my throat..", his Reaitsu is destructive and powerful. It has caused lesser beings to simply ignite on fire simply by being around the hollow, and Poliro also described it as "Beyond any hollow i've ever fought."

Hollow Mask Appearance:
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Vizard Powers
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Vizard Powers:

Corruption - The "corruption" of Hollow Poliro in Poliro shows. When Poliro has a companion that he dearly likes/loves, if she gets hurt, Hollow Poliro will respond with anger and corrupt Poliros power to become stronger, this comes at the price of Poliros mental sanity and stablity. If Poliros companinion is overhurt, the corruption takes hold and Hollow Poliro takes over. To regain control, Poliro is taken to his inner world to fight off Hollow Poliro for a short amount of time so he can regain control of himself.

The power taking hold of Poliro is shown through his gradual more and more Hollow like reaitsu, aswell as his Shikai/Bankai flames slowly turning blue. His flames would get hotter and his reaitsu more intense. This whole Corruption effect only applies if Poliro is not in Hollowifaction. If its taking place and he uses it, he'll be back in control. But if hes caught up in it... he might be stuck in it and get worse until the threat is destroyed.

Hollow Powers

Sonido - This replaces Shunpo when Poliro is in Mask state.

Cero - IF HE ever did use this, if its extremely unlikely, it would appear to be Navy Blue in color.

Bala - It would also be Navy Blue, but Poliro seldom uses this ablity again, so you will rarely see it.

Increased Fire Tempatures - While in Hollowifaction, Poliros flame tempature is increased by up to 1500C, increasing his limit to a total of 18500C if in Bankai and masked.

Increased Wind Power - Aswell as the flame increase, Hollow Poliro's winds are more powerful than normal, being more pressured and condensed, giving them more of a cutting power.


Enhanced Spirtual Power - While Hollowifed, Poliros spirtual power becomes immense, as it is amplifyed by his hollow powers. He was already a captain level Shinigami, so his Spirtual Power is monstorous.

Mask Duration - 30 posts

Enhanced Speed - Poliros speed also increases with the use of Sonido, allowing him to reach even faster speeds, he moves like a flash now, but still no where near the levels of the fastest Shinigami in existance.

Enhanced Strength - While masked, Poliros punching power and attack power increase, he could punch someone through 3 buildings in one powerful strike. His strength makes it so that nearby objects may be destroyed slightly due to the force, depending on how strong he goes.

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Resurrección
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"Mate, your a strong guy.
I'll give you that.
But your going to soon understand the
reaper never rests until he gets the soul."

Resurrección Appearance:

Fully Armored:
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Un Armored:
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While unarmored, Poliro's clothing is simply a ripped black kimono that the Shingami where covering his legs and waste bottom, his chest is fully visible, black from his hollow.

Resurrección Abilities: -

Passive Powers -

Blue Flame Sword - In this stage, Furemingu Shibo takes a new form, as its now a huge sword covered in blue flame. So unlike his Shikai and Bankai, Poliro's sword now can actally cut, or dude to its size, simply chop off limbs with ease. It can shoot out fire waves when swinged, like Furemingu Shibo in Shikai. THe issue with this, is that Poliro cannot use Shikai/Bankai, but his other ablities more than make up for this weakness.

Extreme/Burning Spirtual Power - In this form, Poliro's reaitsu becomes so intense that people below his level would likely be instilled with senses of terror and despair, and feel like their body is being crushed from all directions, and even pass out.. or the worst case, Poliro's reaitsu being so intense, they actally cat ch fire, either on parts of their body or even their entire body would go up in flames.

Increased Fire Tempature - Poliro's fire exceeds anything it would in Bankai or Mask, as it peaks now into 30,000C.
This means only the strongest of ice attacks, such as Toshiro's or Rihiku's could possibly stop these flames.

Very Enhanced Defense/High Speed Regeneration - Due to the armor that is difficult to break in its self, due to its reslience, it would take attacks along the lines of a big attack (E.G: Zaraki Kenpachi level strength, a huge attack like a Bankai ablity from a 0-5), but even then, its still tough to break. Poliro in ress possess's high speed regeneration, meaning any limbs cut off, or cuts made to him will easily regenerate. This is nearly a full on defense, but that High Speed Regeneration cannot save him from internal damage.

Very Enhanced Strength - Poliro's strength has increased to the point where he can hold a massive two handed sword in one hand without any problems what so ever. A swing from his sword could simply rip a building in two, blow away trees and such. His punches and kicks are just as strong as ever, as he could punch a person through a entire block of buildings, and he could easily destroy buildings with just his bare hands. He could destroy 2-4 Acres of Forest with his sword, rather easily.

Reduced Speed - Due to the armor still weighing on him, Poliro returns to the regluar speed he goes at in Shikai. He isn't that agile in this form, but his Shunpo is still fast. While in this form, Shunpo or Sonido causes him to disappear into flames then reappear in flames.



Standard Ablities

(Flame)

Supernova Cannon - Poliro charges a huge fireball, and fires it. The Fireball will then split into 3, tracking the enemys Reaitsu, effectively making it a reaitsu seeking fire missle. If it hits, the explosion could be enough to deafen the enemy, cause very severe burns and damage their eyesight. IF they have open wounds, their insides could be seared in the process of this. The flames are intense enough to drain the body of water, causing fatigue and finally, it goes off in one last huge expolosion, covering a area of 3.4+ acres in a display of Poliros power. This does has it downfalls. Poliros Supernova Cannon simply attacks reaitsu signatures that isn't Poliro's own, and also tracks the biggest. So if theres a oppenent nearby stronger than the one Poliro is firing, then it'll go for the targeted not intended to hit, but in 1v1 bouts, this isn't a weakness.

(Can only be used once per thread)

The Omen of Flame -

In Poliro's hands, a massive light from a flame centered floating in his hands is emmited, however the light isn't a typical flame. The flame is covered in a blue aura which shows the immense power and stability in which Poliro can control flames. When this is activated, A blue ball of flame begins to form in his hand. Once this is complete, the blue flame disappears but then reappears above the battlefield in a massive, 1 acre wide ball of intense flame. The flames above the battlefield are of course intensly hot and could incinerate most things on contact.

This is brought down upon the battlefield, the flames can harm Poliro as much as anyone else, but because of his natural fire resistance, he wouldn't be as crippled by it if this hit a enemy. When this is brought down, everything within its range is covered in the blue,immensly hot fire. The fire is around 30000 degrees hot in celcius. Everything it touches, is basically dissolved and turned into ash unless it is ultimately fire resistant. This could completely incinerate powerless humans and severely burn people of 3tier and above.

When it touches the ground, it doesn't stay in one single heap of flames. The flames spread like water when it hits the ground, acting like waves are crashing upon the ground except in a extremely hot fashion of flames. Ultimately, the battlefield would be burned for the years to come after Poliro uses this ablity.

Also once per thread.

The Final Tribute to Ayane

Poliro gathers all the heat in the area, no matter how cold/hot it is. He gathers it all in his hands, and suddenly, a giant spinning Shruiken begins forming in his hands. And it keeps growing bigger and bigger, until the winds have blowed everything away nearby/the flames have burned it. Finally, it appears in the sky, roaring at a speed around 300 MPH, as everything nearby is burned and thrown away. This hurricane roars as it reaches its end.. (3 posts), it will explode in every direction, causing massive burn damage, and being hot enough to just competely turn any 4-5 tier into ashes if they are caught off guard.

If Poliro used this ablity in Karakura Forest, around 70% of the forest would be destroyed as the effects can be felt for many acres. Poliro's main tactic during the hurricane is to resist the winds and throw them into it, burning them very bad and sending them miles away. This does have its weaknesses. Poliro cannot fight after using this, as this uses all of his reaitsu, but its unlikely there would be a fight if he used this abloustely insane power. After the storm, the area will be burned and destroyed, and the effects on the landscape will be near enough ever-lasting marks. The ablity has the power, due to the final explosion to destroy a mountain and a local area near by it, due to the pressure of the heat and such.

Enter Wind Mode: Poliro enters his Wind Form.

Wind Mode -

Flame Mode: Poliro returns into his flame form.

Sword Changes: Poliro's sword loses its flame aura that it has in flame mode, and is instead replaced by razor sharp blades on the blade, comparable to a chain saw. This gives the blade immense cutting power, making it even more devastating.

The Omen of Wind -

In Poliros palm, he begins to form a wind sphere that grows bigger and bigger. All the wind pressure goes to Poliro as he forms the sphere and makes it bigger and bigger, anyone around him would feel the immense pressure the closer they were to him, with Poliro being able to handle it. It then suddenly appears in the air at its max size, being the same size as a mini moon. (For a comparsion, Peins planet rock thing. Cant remember the name.) It then crashes down, releasing tons of wind pressure in a mighty wind shockwave that will crush most things for 4 acres, and people. Aswell as send everything flying back if they're not destroyed. Poliro himself wouldn't be able to withstand the full power of this ablity, meaning he'd had to back away.


Superwind Cannon: In the same way in Supernova Cannon, Poliro gathers wind energy in his palm to form a ball of wind, He then fires this windball, and after firing, it will spilt up into 3 smaller balls and hone in on the reaitsu trace closest to Poliro that isn't Poliro. After making contact, it'll explode in a almighty shockwave that would most likely deafen the enemy, and depending on how close they are, the wind pressure would send them flying or crush their bones and also rip their flesh off. This means it could cause serious internal damage to the organs too, if it lands. The explosion in total covers 3-4 yards, and the most obvious weakness with the ablity is that in fights with more than one person, it won't always hit who Poliro wants it to.


Plasma Storm

This is Poliro's strongest wind ablity while in this form. It begins with Poliro creating a hurricane above everyone, high in the air. The difference between this and Tribute to Ayane is that it is plasma, not fire. It is blazing hot at around 100,000C, which is surprisingly much hotter than h is fire abilities. The plasma storm will also arc off lightning from below the storm, generally at enemies. It is the same kind of tempature and extremely deadly. The plasma is able to turn most things below it to ashes, contact would result with extreme burns, or possible loss of limbs. Due to the wind nature, it also carries with it extreme wind pressure aswell as blowing everything nearby away. If someone was threw into the eye of the storm of this, depending on their tier, they may get competely destroyed, or be able to endure through the extremitys of Poliro's ultimate wind ablity.


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[Enter: The Inner Hollows Ultimate Power: Full Hollow Form]

[center] Full Hollow Theme: Enter Hollow Poliro


(EVENT ONLY + STORYLINE ONLY + REQUIRES AUTHS FROM PEOPLE WITHIN THREAD) (Those are the 1 of the 3 requirements I need to use this form on Poliro, and its only used if its appropriate to the thread.

Sometimes. Every once in a while... Poliro will get enraged, sometimes really badly. When he is angry, he is weakest in terms of holding back his hollow, and sometimes his Hollow will COMPETELY take over Poliro, assuming the hollows form and taking it into the real world for it to fight whoever is nearby.

While in this form, Poliro is nothing more than a mindless beast. His Zanpakutō will stay in the form it was before Poliro transformed, but his powers will remain just as strong. Bankai and Shikai while Poliro is transformed in this way is not relevant. In short, while Poliro is took over by his hollow, his power near enough triples, but at the cost of the loss of his mental state and right and wrong perceptions. All this beast knows, is instinct, and will act upon its instincts no matter what. Trying to reason with him in this form is just down right impossible. He fights in the same style Hollow Poliro does.


Appearance:
Spoiler:

Powers -


Crushing Spirtual Power -

Hollow Poliro, as described by Poliro, his reaitsu is unearthly. In his own words, he has stated this. "If you feel The Flame Reapers reaitsu is too much... this guy isn't the reaper.. My inner hollow is The Flame Devil... his reaitsu is nothing like anything you'll feel.." it is extreme. Anyone not near Poliros level would simply:

- Pass Out
- Catch fire, due to the nature of the reaitsu
- Feel crushed and such

And the worst part is, if he was to come in lets say Karakura City, the ENTIRE city would feel this crushing reaitsu for sure. This is more powerful and potent than his reaitsu in Ress too. Even people on the lower end of 0 tier would feel this terrifying Reaitsus effects.

Insane Strength -

In this form, Poliro's strength would allow him to simply run through a entire forest and just destroy it entirely, because of the force. He could rip apart any metal with ease, simply swipe at buildings to destroy them, and he could easily break human bones with ease. He is a major threat when it comes to fighting with strength, as the entire area will be craters after this. You would be sent a VERY far distance if one of his kicks and punches connecting, and you'd be lucky if most of your bones were intact at that stage. You need the defense of someone like Dai, or someone who can take blows like Zaraki to be able to fight this guy in a battle of strength, or he will take you down.

Speed - Full Hollow Poliro's speed is around the same as Poliro in Phoenix Mode. He uses Sonido at all times while in this.

Defense - Full Hollow Poliro tends to be a bit of a glass cannon. Although he does have High Speed Regen, meaning he can recover from most cuts and limb loss easily, he has no real defense system, making him more prone to damage than Poliro in his ress form.

Doubled Fire Temps - While in Full Hollow Form, Poliros temps go to 60,000C, doubling the fire and power. Most things that are near Poliros flames will simply melt. Flesh, bone, metal, ground, all that stuff. You need something like a flame proof vest in order to survive the burning power. If the flames touch you, your flesh and bone would be gone in mere seconds. It is almost like a sword in turns of power, Poliro can straight up cut peoples limbs off and burn them badly, thats how hot his Zanpakutō/Flames are.



Shikai/Bankai Ablities Doubled -

Depending on what form the Zanpakutō was in depending on when Poliro transformed, he will remain in that state, but however his combat powers will be doubled in strength. Most of the time he will be in Bankai, but if he was in Shikai, the Hollow could actally release its Bankai. The ablities will all be doubled in power, scale, and destruction. However, if the hollow entered lets say, Phoenix Mode, the actal benefits it brings would negated, but Supernova Eruption would be twice as powerful. (This is to prevent Poliro going like.. Full Hollow + Phoenix Mode. Too fucking ridiculous.)


And finally, a ablity the hollow can activate, and the only one.

Hollow Hellflame -

Hollow Poliros flames get so intense to the point where they are black, the flames begin to peak at 7500C, and all round him, Hollow Poliro begins to spin the flames around around him rapidly, creating a huge flame vortex of death. The vortex is more than likely to kill or severely burn/mortally burn anyone that gets caught inside. Hollow Poliro uses himself as the epiccentre of this attack. The vortex will leave that part of the earth scarred for life near enough. The flames will remain in the area its used for many months to come. It is enough to leave a entire area of Karakura City burned down, and generally wrecked, due to the spinning compresed flames holding much burning power, it is like a spinning vortex of flaming blades. Hollow Poliro brags this ablity is stronger than Poliros Fire Hurricane. This also comes with his own set of drawbacks.

The full hollow form fades after this is used, and Poliro is left without any hollow powers for a few days real time.


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Enter the form beyond mortals - Firewind Form


Poliro had recently discovered, after isolation on his own that if he combined his two powers together in a perfect duality, he would enter a transcending form unlike any power he had obtained up to this point. This form allows him to use Fire and Wind in one form without switching, but also makes him a transcendental being.

Appearance: Not much of his appearance changes. He can't be in any other form when he uses this, only his base normal form. He gains a red and white aura that surrounds him, and these are the only real visible changes, aswell as one of his eyes becoming orange, one becoming green.

Powers -

Undetectable Reaitsu - Poliro's reaitsu in this form reaches the point where no one but the 0 tiers and high 1 tiers can sense how strong he actually is. When they do sense it, they'd feel a overwhelming sense of power from Poliro, stronger than any other form.

Speed/Strength/Endurance - Poliro is faster than ever, being able to create sonic booms and breaking the sound barrier. He is stronger than himself in Ress form, being able to destroy entire blocks of cities as if they were nothing. He can endure a lot more in this form too, so nearly all aspects of his power is enhanced in this form.

Increased Fire Temp - His fire now averages 150,000C, a massive leap in power from his other forms.

Wind Power Increased - His winds become very, very deadly. If he uses them as blades, they are nearly so sharp that a simple touch could cut you, meaning Poliro can use wind blades in this form to nearly instantly gib someone if left unguarded, making Poliro extremely deadly.

Zanpakutō Disabled: While in this form, his Zanpakutō is disabled..

Instead.. it becomes replaced by two new weapons of Poliro's in this form.

Amatertasu Blade - This is a one handed blade around the length of Poliro's Zanpakutō. Its doused in flames that reach to the same fire tempature Poliro throws out, 150,000C. It is said to hold the power of a mini sun, and it can illimuniate the darkest of places. Simple swings of it causes fire to spit out from it.

Raijin Blade - The blade of storms. It is the same length as the Amaeratsu blade. It has a chaotic wind aura around it, randomly discharging bolts of plasma (lightning), albeit really small, so they don't really do anything. It contains the deadly wind cutting properties that Poliro's wind have.

Poliro can then combine them both together, if he wills to form a even stronger weapon..

The Beginning of The End - A fitting biblical name for such a powerful weapon. It is a spear weapon. When Poliro swings it, firestorms are created from the tip, aswell as wind storms combined with it, being a extremely destructive weapon, its power alone could single handly take out nearly a entire city. The power of the storms depend on how powerful Poliro's swings and thrusts are.

Appearance:
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He can defuse them at any time to create the two one handed blades.
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Also in this form, he gains another summoning ablity, but this summoning far suprasses the power of Kael.

Summon: Phoenix of the Gods

Apperance;
Spoiler:

Tier: 0-5

Ablities:

Extreme Flame Breath: The Phoenix can shoot out a very deadly flame breath going up to 60,000C at a area, most likely vanquishing most things in ash that are caught in this powerful flame breath.

Glory of a Phoenix: after 4 posts of being summoned, the Phoenix turns into pure flames and attempts to rush the enemy with a deadly fire attack, exploding in a explosion that is nearly as strong as Poliro's Supernova Cannon, but not quite. Afterwards, the Phoenix will rise from the ashes left after 3 posts have passed, and will reemerge weaker, as a 1-1. This cycle will carry on until it hits 1-3, and the death after that truly kills it.

Scared Fire: The Phoenix has a ablity wher eit flaps its wing, and causes white/orange flames to come out at a enemy, being even moredeadly than its normal flames, reaching up to 90,000C. It can only do this ablity while in the 0-5 state.

Due to the power of the summon, Poliro is required to keep it under control, rendering him incapable of fighting while the phoenix is out. However, the Phoenix will give its lives to protect Poliro, meaning he isn't free hits while it is out. If Poliro doesnt control it, it'll go crazy and attack everyone.

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Shroud of the Wind: This is one of the other very deadly ablities Poliro has in this form. He disappears as he literally dissolves into nothing but wind particles. His reaitsu completely disappears, aswell as his presence. He then moves to a enemy, and suddenly causes the wind to slash out with his power, a deadly sneak attack. However, the presence of Poliro can be sensed through the wind movements. If its moving in your direction, hes going for you. If not, hes backing away. After this deadly sneak attack, he reforms himself.


And finally, Poliro's strongest ablity in this form.

The Reapers Finale: Poliro for a moment, powers himself up to his true limits, focusing for 1 post. If his focus is broke, he can't use this ablity. After a moment of focusing, he will sudden ly appear to a enemy and begin attacking extermely fast with his weapons, causing massive fire storms and wind storms to come out, even if Poliro isn't using The Beginning of The End, while in this focused state, Poliro feels no pain and his assault won't stop unless he feels this isn't working or the oppenent is on the floor abloustely destroyed and made into nothing. Or if Poliro is restrained by only the most powerful binding spells, no normal Kidō could work on him to restrain him, or if extreme trauma/shock is caused (Extreme limb loss), and even then, his will power would try to fight it through to the end, before he felt the injuries. At the end of his assault, Poliro creates 2 scythes, one of wind and fire and pierces the enemy in the chest/heart area, ending his assault. The dangerous drawback is that if Poliro cannot succeed with this attack, he will be powered down massively. (Once per thread)


The drawbacks of this form is that Poliro can't sustain the form for no longer than 13 posts, because of the massive power cost. AFter using this form as a last ditch effort, Poliro will have nothing to fall back on, spelling defeat if he can't win this time slot. He is nearly incapable of stealthing in this form because of his massive reaitsu unless they aren't high enough tier to feel him. The shroud of wind is his only way to get around this. His reaitsu would be able to be felt on the entirety of the area/region he was in, meaning he can also be tracked down. In short, this form is extremely draining of power and Poliro would never frequently use it.



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S K I L L S H E E T

Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Advanced
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Master
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master
  • Kidō: Master
  • Zanjutsu: Advanced
  • Hakuda: Advanced
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1. Supernova: Poliro creates a sphere of flame quite big, around him. When hes inside it, he uses his wind powers to push the flames out in all directions, burning and turning anything in its path to dust. This technique has the power to simply turn Karakura City, a majority of it into ash and smoulder. This is arguably one of Poliro's strongest powers and is not to to be taken lightly.

I'm sorry but you're going to have give this much more detail than what is currently written. What are the weaknesses, what does he lose from executing it, how can it be countered? It's sounds like it can't be countered at all. "burning and turning anything" Anything <---- fix that. Not everything can be burned and turned into ash, so i'd like for you to come up with a better description. Basically, add some weaknesses, drawbacks, how it can be countered, and everything will be peachy.


2.The Almighty Winds: Poliro, infront of him uses his wind control to send a mighty gale infront of him, and the pressure of the winds simply crushes everything infront of him, the ground, buildings ,and if a person is caused it in it, the damage includes nearly all the bones in their body being crushed or broke. Its a very deadly move.

Needs more detail. How can it be countered? The wording is very vague and leaves little for me to go off of. Yeah, i know it's deadly, but i need a little bit more detail then it can crush everything. What types of buildings? what types of people? etc.



3. Tornado Barrier: Poliro can create a tornado around him, which the effects of including throwing in a 0.8 acre radius around him back. This can include people, buildings, and even attacks. This is Poliros absolute defense in a sense, as he can keep using it, as its a rather low reaitsu cost.

I like the idea, but all defenses can be broken through. In that case, you need to write how strong the barrier is, what can counteract the barrier, and how long it lasts as no defense is truly absolute. What attacks can be thrown back? what are the weaknesses of the barrier? I need more detail, for me to consider letting this get through.



4. The 10,000 Wind Blades : Poliro creates 10,000 very small wind blades, and then shoots them all at his opponent. Because of the compression of the winds, and the cutting power, these blades could very easily just turn a army of people into mince meat, and the same goes for the area. This has the same amount of power as Supernova. It could turn Karakura City into a wreck.

WHERE are the drawbacks? For how powerful this attack seemingly is, there is no weakness whatsoever behind it and sounds as though it can automatically hit. You also need to cool it down with with the karakura city thing. Karakura city is a very LARGE area. By now, it's probably two times bigger than Tokyo. You can't simply say it can destroy such a large piece of land in one sentence. You need to detail how it could, or why it'd even be possible. Fix this whole entire thing please.



5. Quickdraw Flame: Poliro sheaths his sword then draws it in a speed that can't really be seen unless your used to seeing that kind of speed. He then fires a fire wave, a small one, at the area or enemy he is aiming for. The most powerful part of this techinque is the fact Poliro can rapidly do this over and over, and with his speed, he would create around 100 fire waves in 3 seconds.

The wording of this is really vague. You need to write the types of people who can see the blade instead of "it can't be seen, unless your used to seeing that" sort of thing. This needs to have a drawback as well. There's also the fact that you need to write how fast the slashes are in actual "MPH" form, or some other manner. Until then, unacceptable.


6.Soul Reap: This is Poliro's strongest flame shikai ablity. The flames around Poliro's Katana extended out into a scythe shape. If Poliro then manages to connect a blow to a enemys vital point. (Humans: Heart, Shinigami, Soul Chain, etc), with the scythe, then the struck enemys power will be reduced by approxmatiely 30%. This means they will be slower, the attacks they make will be weaker, and they'll generally feel weaker. This lasts for 2-3 posts. Also, from the attack, Poliro heals internal damage that may of been done to him, or any pains he feels. It will only heal minor wounds such as as internal scarring, it won't heal severe things like internal bleeding and broken bones. This is a very powerful move, but it can fail as many times as it can succeed, as Poliro needs to make direct contact for the effects to take place

Drop the power down to 10%, or write something more detailed about what they lose. Does their shikai weaken? does their bankai weaken? what sort of feelings do they experience? Fatigue, loss of breath, heavy breathing? you need to describe more than what is written for me to approve of this ability. More detail, plox.


7. Omniwind: Poliro charges forward, drawing his Zanpakutō and slashes in every direction possible. This combined with his passive ablity Wind Blade pretty much means anything in his path is going to become mangled up really fast if they are caught by it.

This is another ability that requires detail. First of all, WHAT can be damaged by his wind blades. Not everything could be mangled, cut or sliced through it. Write how it can be countered, what speed he sloashes at, and overall just fix this up so it can be acceptable, cause right now, it's not.


10. Flame Soul - Poliro condenses the fire storm caused by his bankai into his body. From there on, Every attack Poliro can cause serious burns to the enemy, and potentially, burn away bones. The downfall is that Poliro can only keep this up for 4 posts. After that, the fire releases itself back into the firestorm. This can only be used once every fight. Another risk is this move causing his own internal organs to be burned.

Again, the wording is a problem here. How can the opponent counter this ability? Who's bones wouldn't be able to be burned away? What sort of defenses can it go through? I know you might hate this, but this, too, is gonna need a bit more detail than what is currently written.

11. Supernova Eruption - Poliro flies high up into the air, and then crashes down, causing the ground to crack and become competely destroyed, and a massive eruption occurs that could level a football stadium and pitch (One acre) being hit by this ablity could cause very life threatening burns unless you were quite strong and could resist the burning effects of fire upon your body.

This needs some sort of drawback and more detail. Can it be defended against?" are there ways to prevent it? i need more than what is given here.

Plasma Drill: Poliro can spin whatever weapon he is holding (His wind blades for example) and it will begin to turn into plasma. After he has done that, he can send it forward as a powerful drill bullet, or straight forward as a simple bullet. Due to the heat effect, itcan pierce even some of the toughest Hierros and natural skin defenses and cause damage internally and externally. Before he can fires he can even spread out the attack and shoot a lot of mini bullets.

I know i gave you the idea for this, but you need to give some detail as to how powerful the internal or external damage is.


14. Very Enhanced Defense/High Speed Regeneration - Due to the armor that is difficult to break in its self, due to its reslience, it would take attacks along the lines of a big attack (E.G: Zaraki Kenpachi level strength, a huge attack like a Bankai ablity from a 0-5), but even then, its still tough to break. Poliro in ress possess's high speed regeneration, meaning any limbs cut off, or cuts made to him will easily regenerate. This is nearly a full on defense, but that High Speed Regeneration cannot save him from internal damage.

NO. I'm sorry but you can't have high level defense and high speed regeneration. You either get durability or regeneration, never both. Lower that Regen. Define what damage can cause his regeneration to be fucked up, and at least give a rate at which wounds can regenerate. Take out Zaraki kenpachi strength, too.



15. Supernova Cannon - Poliro charges a huge fireball, and fires it. The Fireball will then split into 3, tracking the enemys Reaitsu, effectively making it a reaitsu seeking fire missle. If it hits, the explosion could be enough to deafen the enemy, cause very severe burns and damage their eyesight. IF they have open wounds, their insides could be seared in the process of this. The flames are intense enough to drain the body of water, causing fatigue and finally, it goes off in one last huge expolosion, covering a area of 3.4+ acres in a display of Poliros power. This does has it downfalls. Poliros Supernova Cannon simply attacks reaitsu signatures that isn't Poliro's own, and also tracks the biggest. So if theres a oppenent nearby stronger than the one Poliro is firing, then it'll go for the targeted not intended to hit, but in 1v1 bouts, this isn't a weakness.

Take out the heat-seeking missile trait. I'm sorry but that's broken with the type of fireballs you've written here. They either have to be small and heat-seeking, or big and uncontrolled.




16. In Poliro's hands, a massive light from a flame centered floating in his hands is emmited, however the light isn't a typical flame. The flame is covered in a blue aura which shows the immense power and stability in which Poliro can control flames. When this is activated, A blue ball of flame begins to form in his hand. Once this is complete, the blue flame disappears but then reappears above the battlefield in a massive, 1 acre wide ball of intense flame. The flames above the battlefield are of course intensly hot and could incinerate most things on contact.

This is brought down upon the battlefield, the flames can harm Poliro as much as anyone else, but because of his natural fire resistance, he wouldn't be as crippled by it if this hit a enemy. When this is brought down, everything within its range is covered in the blue,immensly hot fire. The fire is around 30000 degrees hot in celcius. Everything it touches, is basically dissolved and turned into ash unless it is ultimately fire resistant. This could completely incinerate powerless humans and severely burn people of 3tier and above.

When it touches the ground, it doesn't stay in one single heap of flames. The flames spread like water when it hits the ground, acting like waves are crashing upon the ground except in a extremely hot fashion of flames. Ultimately, the battlefield would be burned for the years to come after Poliro uses this ablity.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE. You need to make some drawbacks on this too. Specifically in the fact, that while other people get damaged by this attack, he remains relatively safe. Like i said before, not everything CAN be burned into ash. What about energy attacks? what about lightning? Write out detail as to what can be burned and what can counter the ability. In fact, i'd suggest starting over with this entire ability, but that's just me.



17. The Final Tribute to Ayane

Poliro gathers all the heat in the area, no matter how cold/hot it is. He gathers it all in his hands, and suddenly, a giant spinning Shruiken begins forming in his hands. And it keeps growing bigger and bigger, until the winds have blowed everything away nearby/the flames have burned it. Finally, it appears in the sky, roaring at a speed around 300 MPH, as everything nearby is burned and thrown away. This hurricane roars as it reaches its end.. (3 posts), it will explode in every direction, causing massive burn damage, and being hot enough to just competely turn any 4-5 tier into ashes if they are caught off guard.

If Poliro used this ablity in Karakura Forest, around 70% of the forest would be destroyed as the effects can be felt for many acres. Poliro's main tactic during the hurricane is to resist the winds and throw them into it, burning them very bad and sending them miles away. This does have its weaknesses. Poliro cannot fight after using this, as this uses all of his reaitsu, but its unlikely there would be a fight if he used this abloustely insane power. After the storm, the area will be burned and destroyed, and the effects on the landscape will be near enough ever-lasting marks. The ablity has the power, due to the final explosion to destroy a mountain and a local area near by it, due to the pressure of the heat and such.

18. This is Poliro's strongest wind ablity while in this form. It begins with Poliro creating a hurricane above everyone, high in the air. The difference between this and Tribute to Ayane is that it is plasma, not fire. It is blazing hot at around 100,000C, which is surprisingly much hotter than h is fire abilities. The plasma storm will also arc off lightning from below the storm, generally at enemies. It is the same kind of tempature and extremely deadly. The plasma is able to turn most things below it to ashes, contact would result with extreme burns, or possible loss of limbs. Due to the wind nature, it also carries with it extreme wind pressure aswell as blowing everything nearby away. If someone was threw into the eye of the storm of this, depending on their tier, they may get competely destroyed, or be able to endure through the extremitys of Poliro's ultimate wind ablity.

These two seem like auto-kills with the way your describing it, so i'd suggest you fix the wording if you don't mind.


20. Amatertasu Blade - This is a one handed blade around the length of Poliro's Zanpakutō. Its doused in flames that reach to the same fire tempature Poliro throws out, 150,000C. It is said to hold the power of a mini sun, and it can illimuniate the darkest of places. Simple swings of it causes fire to spit out from it.

Take out the mini-sun part. and lower that temperature. Also, this weapon needs a drawback on how many times it can be used. Since he can't spam a mini-sun, that's just a no-no.

22. The Beginning of The End - A fitting biblical name for such a powerful weapon. It is a spear weapon. When Poliro swings it, firestorms are created from the tip, aswell as wind storms combined with it, being a extremely destructive weapon, its power alone could single handly take out nearly a entire city. The power of the storms depend on how powerful Poliro's swings and thrusts are.

This, too, needs a drawback. you need to state how it can be countered, what are its weaknesses and how long the storms are.


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So that's my judgement, for now, this is denied until you make the changes above.





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