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Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Sat Oct 29, 2011 5:08 am
S H I N I G A M I
B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N
Name: Hiroshi Saito
Gender: Male
Age: 587 Looks like mid 20's
Appearance:Hiroshi is 6 foot 2 inches with long black hair, red eyes and a Muscular build.
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P E R S O N A L I T Y
Personality:
Introvert
Hiroshi is not a social person what so ever. He avoids people and would rather spend time reading his books than talking to a person. He doesn't despise people it is more that he doesn't understand them. Ever sense he was a teenager in the human world he became much different from those around him. Once his mother died something in him like a switch turned off and from then on he didn't welcome or start conversation. He didn't attend social gatherings, he just keeps to himself, and when it comes to times when he has to be social or is forced to speak with others in most situations he is socially awkward, or misunderstood. He seems to be slowly growing out of it or at least slowly turning into someone whom isn't a complete introvert, but he still has a long way to go.
Protector
Though Hiroshi was never social because of what happened to him when he was younger in the human world that also set him upon a path to help others. He didn't care about people as much in a social manner but a vow he took compelled him to protect other to the fullest of his abilities. He would rather feel pain than others. He would rather give his life then allow the weakest of his division members to do so. It's not that he wanted to be involved with them, but that if he could be the outside force to allow them to continue to live happily as they had before then he some how felt fulfilled.
Honorable
Hiroshi lives how he best believes someone should. He does not allow the weak to be harmed. He gives respect where it is due especially towards his superiors . Even at person expense he would not deviate from this. If he was given the option between death and living a life of riches without morales he would choose death without a moments notice. He also believes in Integrity. Which means to him doing what you will say you are going to do. His word when he did use it was his life. If he said something there was no doubt that he would do it or die trying.
Strategic Leader
As a Lieutenant he is the 2nd in his division. As he has been this he has discovered a side of himself that he did not realize before. With each step he takes he knows next 3 steps and reactions he can and would take with it. He leads those under him with the best efficiency and with the least casualty possible.
A Stiff
Hiroshi rarely tries to go out or to do anything like that, but when he does he is the wall flower. He is the least likely one to do anything extrovert like and always tries to keep control of himself. He doesn't much get or laugh at jokes and when others describe fun he usually just thinks those things as irritations or not worth it at all.
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B A C K G R O U N D
History/Background:
The Beginning
In his Human life Hiroshi was in law enforcement. Hiroshi had grown up quiet but happily. At the age of 14 though something changed his life forever. His father, mother and him went downtown and as they passed the alley right before where they were heading a man reached out and grabbed his mother. With that mans arm around her neck he also put a blade to her throat.
" Give me all of your money or she will die."
His father took out all he had and placed it on the ground, but for some reason a weird smile had appeared on the mans face.
"Too bad you didn't have more"
He then dragged the blade across Hiroshi's mothers throat and threw her at my father as he picked up the money and ran. Looking upon this horrific seen, watching his father cry and his mother fade away and die his demeanor changed from then on.. That day he vowed that he would be the one to defeat the evil in this world and protect the people within it so 6 years later he became a member of Law enforcement.
Working in Law enforcement for the next three years nothing had really stood out in his career until the day he was called to this massive bank robbery. The chaos which was caused by it left him in shock, and to make it worse the robbers had shot into the crowd around the area causing everything to grow in a major panic. The sounds of screams of fear filled his ears as him and his partner joined the force that was attempting solve the situation. The leading officer in a quick summary told them there are 3 robbers and 5 victims so far with 9 Hostages within the bank. The negotiations ended when one of the 5 victims was the negotiator.
Hiroshi and the other officers surrounded the bank awaiting the order to enter the building and take these scumbags out. They were given the order to breach and even though chaos surrounded them on all sides all Hiroshi was focused on was the breaching. Hiroshi along with 3 other officers broke through the door they were stationed at and began clearing rooms one by one. Two of the officers split off leaving Hiroshi and his partner to continue on. One by one each room was cleared until one of the last rooms. Hiroshi was to the left in the hall and his partner was to the right. His partner went to clear a room that looked like a mid sized office, but Hiroshi did not here him say clear. He did not even here words all he heard was a singular gun shot. Hiroshi went to the door of the room and found his partner dead along with one of the robbers using a hostage as a human shield. The Robber yelled
"Put your gun on the ground!"
Hiroshi complied with it and placed it on the ground the robber continued on with:
"You pigs you are all the same. Now I am going to get rid of another piece of trash that's on this earth."
Finishing this sentence the robber took aim, but right as he was about shoot Hiroshi dropped to the ground and quickly fired his gun once with a bullet barely nicking the hostages shoulder and hitting the robber straight in the head. Unfortunatley the robber had gotten off a shot too he had followed Hiroshi sudden movement and had shot Hiroshi straight in the chest. Hiroshi bled out right there.
All of a sudden like it had not been more than a few seconds he awoke to a voice. The voice wasn't fully talking but whispering to him. Trying to remember what had happened Hiroshi looked down and he saw the splatter of blood which was stained into the ground below him he then remembered he was no longer of the living. Confused of what was happening he continued to here that voice saying things like
"Protect" and "Honor"
Hiroshi began to walk around to attempt to find the place in which the voice is coming from. He leaves the room and walks through the hall which he had made his last attempt of justice while he was alive. Reaching for the door handle to exit Hiroshi's hand slipped through the door, in awe he sat there for a moment but then laughed to himself a little remembering what he was. Hiroshi continued to walk to where the voice was getting louder and louder until it stopped. Hiroshi waited in complete silence waiting for something to happen until he heard a loud scream coming from a park filled with trees and having few random paths through out the park which was across the street from where he was at the time. He did not know what it was or what was happening, but what he did know is that someone was in trouble. Hiroshi ran as fast as he could into the park from which he heard the scream from and finally came across what he was looking for. A young lady was running away from a large grotesque black creature with some kind of white mask for a face. The monster was at least fifteen feet tall and it had four arms and was running like a savage beast. It was quickly closing in on the young lady as she was running towards Hiroshi. When she got to Hiroshi he yelled
"Follow me I will protect you!"
Hiroshi grabbed the young lady's hand and took a sharp turn pulling the young lady with him. The Grotesque creature was no where to be seen but they continued to run until they came to a clearing at the end of the clearing a sword was sticking out of the ground. He looked upon the sword and as soon as he did the voice spoke clearly in his head said
"If you wish to protect those who need it and honor your powers I will give you the power to become the protector you have always wanted to be."
Just as the sentence finished the Grotesque creature thrashed through the forestry right in between him and the sword. He whispered to the girl telling her that she needed to run now. She ran away as the grotesque creature ran at Hiroshi with all 4 arms out wide attempting to grapple and eat him, but Hiroshi wasn't afraid he ran straight at the creature and slid in between it's legs quickly jumping up to his feet on the other side of the creature and running towards the sword as the savage creature went on a rampage and ran at Hiroshi
The creature was gaining on Hiroshi inch by inch he was getting closer to where he was a mere foot away from Hiroshi. Getting closer to the sword he reached as far as he possibly could and ran as fast as his body would let him then right as the creature was going to catch him Hishori grabbed his Zanpakutō releasing his power. The chain which had been on his chest was gone. Hiroshi grabbed a branch helping him turn quickly as he noticed that he something was different inside of him slowly losing the pursuit of the creature. The creature being a few feet behind Hiroshi he unsheathed his Zanpakutō then took a quick turn looking and running backwards holding the Zanpakutō with two hands he stopped as the beast continued at him. Hiroshi stepped toward the creatures right lowering his body below the monsters quick grappling range and severed the creatures left leg having the creature fall forward. Hiroshi stood up straight and looked down upon the creature he took his Zanpakutō pointed the tip towards the ground having Zanpakutō right over the creatures main body and stabbed through it into the ground. Pulling out his Zanpakutō and putting it back into it's sheathe he began to walk away and go look for the young lady who was with him.
Turning his back to the creature he began to walk away but before he got far from right behind him there was a bloody scream of the creature which was right behind him about to strike. With not enough reaction time Hiroshi prepared for the worst, but just as the creature was about to get him the creature was cut it half at the mid section. It's upper part fell to the left the lower dropped to the right quickly disappearing. Behind it was a man in black robing. The man looked over at him and said
"The young lady you protected is fine and now is on the other side. To be honest I expected you to be dead. I did not think I would find a shinigami."
Hiroshi with no idea what the man was speaking of explained what had happened to him moments before. At the end of the explanation the man looked at him and said
"Then here is what you need know. I am a Shinigami a protector of souls and a liberator of the forsaken. What that creature is called is a Hollow or a forsaken soul. Your powers have awoken and that "sword" is your Zanpakutō an extension of yourself. Come with me and we will be able to sort the rest of the out in the Soul Society."
The Shinigami opened a portal to the Soul Society where he then walked through it. Hiroshi still wasn't sure what was happening, being a protector in this life like his last to him was a fulfillment that he was looking for. Hiroshi walked through the portal and was then informed of what had happened and what his choices were. Hiroshi decided to become a shinigami and trained in and completed the Soul Academy becoming a Shinigami and living as a low ranked one up until now.
Hiroshi's First Friend
One of Hiroshi's Past times was always reading. He liked finding solitary or calm places to just kick back and relax. One day though a young Shinigami interrupted him. Not only interrupted him, but completely ruined his book. Hiroshi had no idea of what to think of this girl, but in the middle of this time of him being irritated, something surprising came to light. A fairly large hollow appeared near them, and though they were not in the same Division it was both of their duties to destroy this hollow. This girl, Meimu, was his polar opposite. She was cheerful, happy, playful and goofy, but something drew him to her. Maybe because it was a warmth he hadn't felt much, but it was something that he enjoyed. As the fought hard to defeat this Hollow in the midst of the fight they were both severely injured, but in his passion to protect he cultivated a limited shikai in order to protect her. As the fight went on and ended the bond grown in battle and speak was something that Hiroshi hadn't felt in a long time.
When they both awoke in the 4th division after defeating the hollow after talk and playfulness this was the first time sense he had died or even before then that he had someone whom he could call a friend this girl whom he would forever call that. Meimu.
Hiroshi's Master
Being unrefined and a new Lieutenant in the 12th Division he was given an opportunity that few others have ever gotten. His Captain Tsubasa Unabara was one of the strongest people in the Gotei 13. With seeming personalities that were alike Hiroshi was able to get training from the Captain, but what he got was much more than what he believed he would. Tsubasa with the strength of a Titan and the wisdom of a Master tought him the way of the sword. Not only that, but gave him a direction. His will was strengthened and his Ideals were primed. He turned into a man which he had never thought he would be and owed it all to Tsubasa Unabara
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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Soudai Ikko
Appearance:
Inner World: The inner world is a amazon jungle filled with beautiful trees as far as the eye can see then one cliff where Soudai resides where he watches the world.
Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : The Zanpakutō has a black hilt and is at a normal size with cross engraved into the bottom of the hilt.
Passive Sealed Ability:
Now with Soudai's Full Shikai realized in sealed form it radiates an intense heat upon command increasing Soudai's sealed cutting power to be able to not only melt through tough metals, but also melt through up to Bakudo 61. This abilities effectiveness is directly effected by Hiroshi's Focus.
Shikai
Release:The release command is Protect all, Soudai!Soudai is pointing down when Hiroshi is saying the release it is held by his left hand at this point.After he has said the release the engraved cross on the bottom of the hilt is lit with a white fire, Hiroshi then hits the bottom of the hilt with his palm and when he does so the white fire engulfs Soudai. Hiroshi using his right hand he takes the hilt of Soudai and slashes the sword starting in the upper left position and coming down to the bottom right once he does that the flame is extinguished and the blade is changed.
Shikai Description:Soudai in Shikai
Hilt
The hilt becomes circular and black and is the middle of the bottom of the blade and has the cross still engraved at the bottom but it is lit by a extremely small blue flame.
Blade
Originally Hiroshi's Limited Shikai was a light blue color and a bit thicker and shorter. Now from it's transformation into it's true form the blade is now longer going from Hiroshi's chest down to his foot making it around 5 feet 7 Inches tall. Instead of a foot wide the blade was now 8 inches wide. The thickness was now 1/2 inch compared to a full inch. The blades color now instead of being light blue it turned into a pure white. Also the guard is now a lions head which appears to be biting the blade. It also still keeps the four small holes which are at the back of the blade near the hilt.
(similar to the sword below.)
Shikai Abilities:
Soudai is a Fire based Zanpakutō. Originally in the Limited Shikai release it only radiated intense heat. Now it uses and generates white fire which gives a vast amount of heat. This flame also has peculiar attributes. As a flame that protects Soudai's flame not only incinerates but heals. It can be seen as a sort of holy fire, but it is more than that. Those Hiroshi deems an ally he is able to heal using the the fire his Zanpakutō produces. The same goes the other way as well if Hiroshi deems someone as an enemy he is able to use the flame destroy his opponents.
Lion's Embrace
Hiroshi slides his hand across his blade catching the fire in his hand and applies it to a person. It spreads over their body and heals 10% the target's physical injuries per post for 4 turns. If wounds are near death extremely severe the flame can heal them, but will only heal 15% of wounds all together within 4 turns. This can only be applied by hand and doesn't get automatically activated when Hiroshi's fire touches an ally as stated early only when applied by hand. This can only be done to a person once per thread
Lion's Roar
White fire engulfs the blade starting from the mouth of the lion's head all the way up to the tip of the blade. Hiroshi strikes his target with the blade causing a massive forward explosion of fire, from the point of contact, in the shape of a Lion's head with the reminiscent sound of a lion's roar. At his current strength this attack has a 50 foot radius and not only does it do fire damage to those who are caught in the blast but concussive damage as well to those who are outside of it.
Raging Charge
Hiroshi is engulfed in white fire and is propelled at a speed which a tier higher than his own, using that fire like a jet propulsion, towards his target. With his blade behind or above him prepared to strike he uses the increased speed of his charge and the flame surrounding his body to make a massive strike. Usually used to Start or Finish a fight.
White Firestorm
White Firestorm is an ability in which Soudai constantly generates white fire that comes from it's blade. This fire is meant to entrap enemies within the area using the heat and fire itself. The entrapment is fully attained within 3 posts and spreads over an area with up to a 30 meter radius and is as high as about 15 meters. As long as the battle is kept within that area after those three turns any person who wishes to escape or enter the firestorm would ether endure burns from the heat or the fire itself.
This is going to depend upon Tier I believe so sense I am currently 3-1+ and hopefully going to something in 2 tier I'll base it off of that
Tier 4-5
Trapped in until released
Tier 3
Trapped for 5 posts
Tier 2
Trapped for 3 Posts
Tier 1-5 - 1-2
Trapped for 2 Posts
Tier 1-1 through 0-5
Trapped for 1 post
Tier 0-5+ and up
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R P S A M P L E
Roleplay Sample:
Observing the human world the past years has now become interesting Hiroshi thinks to himself. Hiroshi walks down a scarcely populated street next to his favorite river. A river which at night was clear and calm at most times it was serine and now at this night it was even more beautiful as a light breeze brushed across the top of it and the sky was clear with the only thing you could see being the giant moon which showered it's light upon the river creating a beautiful site to see. Hiroshi walked with a slow and calm stride observing his surroundings as he patrolled the area. Hiroshi was sent here because of the increase of hollows within this area. Down the river Hiroshi notices someone crying as they sat riverside. Hiroshi continued to walk and did not think to much of the person until two hollows had appeared one stood tall on two legs with two arms a average hollow which approached the person from across the river the other was farther down the river on the same side which the person was. It was on all fours and was a larger hollow.
Hiroshi quickly unsheathed his Zanpakutō and sprints at the person. He then yells to the person
"Hey get away from there run towards me!"
As the hollows got closer the hollow which was across from the person arrives to the other side of the river being the first one that Hiroshi encounters the hollow does a wild haymaker with his right arm when he does Hiroshi ducks then uses his Zanpakutō and quickly turns his blade and does a uppercut slash through the arm up through the mask dispatching the hollow.
The other hollow took the opportunity of Hiroshi killing the other hollow to pounce at him. Hiroshi rolled forward and then swung his blade over his head with the blade facing the ground and decapitated the hollow the same way that an executioner's axe would.
Hiroshi sheathed his Zanpakutō and walked over to the soul and sent it on to the next world.
UPGRADES
3-1+ Tier Limited Shikai
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t4967-hiroshi-s-upgrade
Skill Upgrades
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t10560-hiroshi-saito-s-war-skill-upgrades
Full Shikai/Tier Upgrade
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t10990-hiroshi-saito-hobart-upgrade
Passing on Knowledge
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11096-post-training-thread
Store Bought Upgrades
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11140-store-bought-upgrades
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S K I L L S H E E T
Tier: 2-1
General Skills
- Durability: Beginner
- General Speed: Advanced
- Strength: Adept
- Weapon Skill:Adept
Racial Skills
- Hoho:Adept
- Kidou: Beginner
- Zanjutsu: Advanced
- Hakuda: Adept
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Advanced
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Sat Oct 29, 2011 2:09 pm
Clearly incomplete, so moved to WIP.
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Sat Oct 29, 2011 5:39 pm
I'm sorry I thought I'd have it finished today. I'm having a bit of difficulty with some of the stuff by I should have it done soon ^_^
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
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- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
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Tier: 3-3
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Thu Dec 08, 2011 8:50 pm
Re-approved; new tier of 3-1
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Sun Oct 13, 2013 9:59 pm
moving due to request tier 3-1
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Sun Oct 13, 2013 10:42 pm
due to my forgetfulness i will be adding in a willsheet
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Adept
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Sat Sep 06, 2014 2:50 am
Archived due to member inactivity. Just post here if you want it back.
I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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Re: Hiroshi Saito [Approved 2-1]
Sun May 31, 2015 5:05 pm
Unarchiving upon request.
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