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Hayuko
Hayuko
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:33 pm
Unless you were given permission by an admin (Which i dont beleive you were) You cannot have a Dues ex Resseruccion. Cause the espada slots 4 and above have already been filled.

Sorry
Hayuko
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:07 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]


Eye of the Dragon: By making direct eye contact with his enemy, he can freeze their movements momentarily. However, if he loses eye contact the ability cancels out. This is mainly used when his opponent is stuck or can't escape at that moment. Or when they are charging a Shikai or Bankai. Can also be used to make the enemy see what he sees, confusing the opponent. Lasts for 2 posts.

Alright dude, this entire ability is a big no-no. You cannot just freeze an opponent entirely, its unfair unless the tier levels are way apart. (Ex:4 tier against a 1 tier.) Second, you cannot freeze them by looking at them. Looks are unavoidable and its a godmod. Sorry dude.

And illusions are also a big no-no, because they can easily be abused. Especially from eye techniques.


Frozen Touch: He an control his own body temperature, however he cant make it go above 100 degrees Farenheit. He can make his body temperature go down to around -20 degrees Farenheit. When his temperature is as low as it can go, he can freeze things he touches in a 1 inch layer of ice. Can be used on his weapon, making his basic attacks slightly stronger. Because this is his normal form, the ice is quite fragile compared to when he goes Ressereccion. He cant freeze anything with a large reitsu. Mainly used for torture.

As long as its only freezing one limb at a time, the ability should be fine. Of course it should be energy consuming, as every move is in on way or another. For the sake of keeping things fair, you cant freeze enemies a tier level higher than you.

Frost Regeneration: If injured, he can hold his hand above the injury, causing it to seal or reform. If he recreates major arteries, he can heal himself faster, meaning major injuries help heal smaller ones. Cant heal injuries too serious, such as entire limbs (can heal up to elbow or knee). When he leaves Resserreccion, some injuries remain.

The abillity seems fine as long as it can't heal the injuries in 2-3 posts time. It helps with regeneration, but doesn't completely regenerate. And like ive said before, it has to consume some type of energy. As all abilities do.

Resists fire, and can slice through most fire.

It cannot completely resist fire. Make sure you write that in. And no, it can't slice through fire.
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Ice Armor: Covers his entire body in harder-than-steel, 3 inch thick, Ice which lasts 2-3 posts, unless is destroyed. Protects him from weak, and mediocre Ceros and Shikais. If he gets the chance to charge this ability, he can make it even thicker and stronger. Usually only Shikais and Bankais can destroy it, however if the opponent is strong enough (multiple tiers higher, they can destroy it with a normal strike (if uncharged).

This ability really doesn't have a problem. Just that if you put armor on, it always causes a speed reduction on you. (Even if slight). Does it have a cool-down? Say if i break it, can you put it back up next post? And. Every ability costs some sort of energy. <----Yeah i sound like a broken record.


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Hayuko
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:37 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]


Comments/Notes: Im glad that you easily made the changes without complaints. I love it when that happens ^-^
Tier: 2-1+

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Thu Sep 15, 2011 6:43 pm
Boosting Tier to 1-2, due to TOTM prize, stated here.


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