Sokudo Rirīsu

Tue May 31, 2011 2:38 pm

Custom Kidou

Name: Sokudo Rirīsu (Speed Release)

Type: Enhancement

Number: N/A

Effects: After staying the incantation of this kidou, for five seconds Shadin gains the ability to unlock his true speed's potential. You see, unknown to most, Shadin is constantly suppressing and compressing his speeds due to the fact that once he hits upwards of Mach Speed he risk's the chance of injuring himself, losing sight of his foe, being impossible to keep up in battle and so on and so forth. So, instead, he crafted a kidou that would release this potential in one fowl burst.

It starts by an intense gust of wind serging around Shadin's body that is to signify a very temporary barrier being placed on every square inch of his body, protecting him from his own strength, but from not from his opponents should they attack. After that, he'll then be able to launch himself at whatever speeds are maximum in his release forms. So for instance, one of his potential speeds in Shikai is upwards of one thousand three hundred miles per second.

It's obvious in battle he won't be able to keep it up constantly, so he can unleash that speed in quick burst's in order to catch up to an opponent, gain distance if they are a long range fighter and he can locate them, unleash a fury of punches, kick's, electric attack's and etc, escape from a battle that is too intense for him or transfer the kinetic energy to launch attack's at Super Sonic speeds for these five seconds.

It has many applications it can be used in, but it can only be used one times per post before Shadin needs a three post cool down period. This is so he doesn't overuse the power too much during battle, keep his body under a stable state and keep him from wasting too much energy from moving at those type of speeds, even for a few seconds.

Incantation: : "Unlock, Sokudo Rirīsu!"

Notes: N/A

Tue May 31, 2011 2:48 pm

-The only problem I see with this is the fact that you can use it twice per post, every other post. In all honesty I could see how I could use this as a god mod with my own characters. I mean in all honesty being able to move at these accelerated speeds almost constantly throughout a fight is a little unfair. Being able to hit mach speed every other post, not only once but twice make it so that once they are able to get away from you in one post and maybe have an idea of what to do, you can close distance and at a speed they can't follow, unleash punches that would be near impossible to block.
-Writing a post that would block these attacks would make me feel like I'm god modding to stay alive.

-Fix-

My advice would be to make it so he can unlock his speed with a greater cooldown time. I doesn't seem like a bad kidou, it's just the consistency in which you can use it seems a bit much.

Tue May 31, 2011 2:56 pm

Fixed the kidou a bit. As for the accelerated speeds, I was only assuming I'd be using this with equal opponents. Preparing him for event style battles and what not since that's where he'll be using this kidou. Rarely does he ever ascend past Shikai, so using this in his unleashed state is useless to him. And if someone is strong enough to make him go past that, well, obviously they are on his level.

Anywho, go ahead and check it.

Tue May 31, 2011 3:08 pm

I know you meant with an opponent your level. Any way it seems good now

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