Harou Sa

Name: Harou Zen
Age: 18
Gender: Male

Appearance: wears no shirt , wears brown dark hair and has blue eyes , has a big blue sword and wears long white pants.

Personality: harou acts strong , touch , and hard headed at times , also is very straight forward and doesnt like shortcuts.He`s sometimes rude and rough at the same time

Powers: uses his sword for everything but on the back of the sword he has a bow and arrow
(You CANNOT fill the skill levels in until your tier is assigned. )
Skill level: Marksmanship: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Reiatsu/Reiryoku absorbtion: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill level: Quincy tools: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Bow Description: they move in zig jag and , bounce off of anything to hit its target dead on

History: was from a small village in the town of Sui (Water town), he had a brother and a sister, also an farther and mother.When he was 10 his bigger brother at the time , was 17 had set out to hunt under a group called the Un`s Harou felt the stress for his parents when his bigger brother Rin, ran away. two mouths later Rin mudered has parents, now Harou and his sister shi seek revenge and want to kill there bigger bother , Shi was 9 when this all happened.

Roleplay Sample:

*Harou runs up the stone wall in order to miss the kidou his friend Sai shot at him, the engery attack hits the wall just missing harou and , harou starts to soar through the sky*
ahhh , this is crazy
*Harou flips his body toward sai and takes his arrow and bow , in less then a second harou fires a shot toward sai , he cuts through the air and hits him right in the chest, blood pores out and sai is in shock, while falling to his knee`s , as every second passed the blood pores out faster and faster*

You application appears very small compared to our expectations. Try to make your descriptions at least two paragraphs with about 5 or more lines. Your history is also very bleak. its more a list of facts rather than a story which it should somewhat be.

Also quincy never used edged weapons so the sword wouldnt be approvable. The seele Schneider is an exception. And also your roleplay sample clearly shows you god-modded against this "sai" person. Even if its just in an app, this gives me the idea this is how your going to fight and its not acceptable.

Fix these up and notify me to check it again.

No modification? DENIED