Edwin Dolis

Sat May 07, 2011 11:16 am

Enter the Quinto Espada - Edwin Dolis

App Music: Edwin's Theme (Lust SIN from Blazblue)

[Basic Detail]

Character Name:

Edwin Dolis

Character True Age:

430

Character Appearance Age:
20

Character Gender:
Male

Orientation:
Edwin is loyal to the Espada.

Appearance:

Bone Appearance:

He has fragments of his hollow mask under his right eye and on his left.

[The Quinto's Personality]

Rule is Power -

Edwin has a very uncomplex personality, he simply believes that those with power rule and those without it die. That belief plays into his personality. If he is winning a battle, he will actively mock the enemy for being powerless, and if hes losing, he'll get more angry with himself for not having the power to win the battle. If he loses a battle, he will be angry with himself for being a weak man, and will remember the fight as a basis to make himself stronger when he fights in the future. He doesn't really have a sense of valor or justice, since he doesn't believe in things like that in a time period like this. Edwin will also grow every angry if you call him weak, something you shouldn't do..

Other Races -

With his Arrancar comrades, he is a lot more laid back and calmer with them, sometimes trying to make a crack with them for lightening the mood, when nothing is going on. He is like this with freelancers aswell, but will try to convince them to the Espadas cause, as he believes Hueco Mundo is the only real home for Arrancar. He doesn't have much spite or hate for the Shinigami, as he believes that without hollows or Shinigami, the world wouldn't be a balanced field, and thus it'd be worse without any side, but that doesn't mean he won't kill them in the Espadas name.

Loyalty and Untrusting =

Edwin is a very untrusting person to people he doesn't know. He won't talk to anyone he doesn't know much and if he has to, he adresses them like they are lower than him, and if they do anything out turn, Edwin won't hestitate to slash them down and end their lives, if its so required. Over time though, he will begin to like someone or have some trust in them if they don't do anything to annoy Edwin and the likes. He isn't so big on protecting others, as he wants to take care of himself, as he thinks he is the most important man in his own life, and he should come first. He is not egosticial much though, as he doesn't consider himself the most important being in the big picture, just in his life. He is a loyal person, and will carry out orders as wished, but if the orders conflict with his own goals, he will not carry it out, and leave it to other people, if it was to more than one person.

Reitsu Colour:

The color of his reaitsu is blue.

[Zanpakuto/Power's/Natural Ablity]

Sealed Zanpakutô:
Edwins Zanpakuto is rather long, as he keeps it in a ridiclously long sheath. (It can be seen in his appearance)

Racial Abilities:

Frozen Shield - When Edwin is going to be struck in combat, he can create a hardened icy patch on the area the attacker is aiming to hit, which will act as a toughened shield against the attack. This isn't without its flaws, as it does time to make, so if he was rapidly being hit, he wouldnt be able to defend himself from all of the attacks, just one or two, and with enough power, it can be shattered. Someone a lower tier than him would require a strong attack to break it, people equal would require some force behind it, people on a higher level than him could shatter it with more ease.

(Cooldown: None)

Deathchill - Using the power of darkness and ice, Edwin shoots a small beam at the enemy. At first, this might cause minor damage, but the catch is the more times they are hit by it, the more deadly it comes. It is a very fast move. If they were hit once, it'd feel like a very weak wound. If hit twice, it would feel weak. If hit a third time it would be enough to cause minor damage. If hit a 4th it'd be a moderate wound, and the 5th, it would be a serious wound.
It can be fired every 3 seconds if so willed. Edwin has to point at his enemy, and when he does, it takes around 1 second to fire, making it near instant.

(CD: One every post)

Shadow Trail - Edwin shoots out a trail of shadow, that is around 40CM long in a straight line. If he stands on this trail, his attacks with hand to hand and swordplay are enhanced with Shadow, making his attacks more deadly and stronger. In all, his attack power would go up by 30% with the shadow trail. This lasts two posts.
(CD: 1 Post)
Frozen Sword - Edwin can create Frozen Swords every 2 posts, and fire them at a enemy from a range. These are frozen quite solid, but with offense you could shatter them or defend yourself from them. These are created by the air around Edwin condensing into ice, and Edwin's power over ice forms in the shape of a sword.

Gran Rey Cero - Being a Espada, Edwin knows how to use Gran Rey Cero.

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Resereccion Name:
Shimo Akuma (Frost Demon)

Resereccion Release Phrase:

Become the cold void, Shimo Akuma.

Release Actions:

Edwin freezes his sword and then stabs it into his heart, releasing his true form.

Resereccion Appearance:

Resereccion Abilities:

Increased Defenses: Due to the armor he gains while in this form, his defenses are increased. The armor can be broke by a Advanced Swordsman in their 1-2 tier, if they went for a strong strike. This is generally enough to guard Edwins body while in battle.

Increased Strength: Edwins strength increased to fit his new style of fighting while in this form. He fights slowly, but his attacks are VERY deadly and strong while in this form. One sweep of his sword could easily clear limbs and such off, and even if the sword barely misses, the force of it is still felt. Buildings and such, Edwin could easily chop down. Edwin can cause a lot of destruction with his swings while in this form, easily chopping 0.2 Acres worth every swing he makes.

Shadow Trail - Edwin retains this ablity, the only change is that it is now 50CM long.

Shadow and Frost Whirlwind - By spinning around wildly in a bladestorm with his long sword, Edwin creates a whirlwind of darkness and frost, around him. Those caught in it will suffer decaying flesh and bone because of the shadow magic, and will also freeze. Depending on how strong the oppenent is, they can resist the whirlwinds force, or simply use their own force to overwhelm it.

(Cooldown: 4 Posts)

Icy Touch - Edwin touches a enemy with his icy cold hands, and causes the nerves in the brain to be slowed down, causing a decrease in speed and reaction times. It decreases it by 20%, assuming they are in the best condition and are at 100%. This lasts two posts, and the big effect it has on a enemy will vary depending on their speed and reflexes (so for example Shadin wouldn't be largely distracted by this)

(Cooldown: 3 Posts)

Sub Zero Void - This is Edwins ultimate move while hes in Resserecion. He points to where a enemy is standing at present, and calls out the name of this ablity. Afterwards, the area around the enemy begins to get colder and colder, and then a pillar of ice is formed. If the enemy is caught in this, they will be frozen. After the pillar is formed, the uncontrollable shadow magic inside this pillar causes a explosion inside of it, shattering the ice pillar and causing a rather big explosion. If the ice pillar is broken before hand, then no explosion takes place. If the enemy is weaker than Edwin, they will need a lot of effort to try and break out of this. If they are on the same level, less effort is needed by them. If they are stronger, they won't need that much effort if they still have plenty of power left in them.

(Once Per Thread)

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Dues Ex Name:

Kami Shimo Akuma
(Frost Demon God)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:

God of the cold void, become one with me.

Dues Ex Release Actions:
While in Reserccion, he causes a storm of ice to surround himself. After time has passed, it dissapates and he enteres Deus Ex.

Dues Ex Appearance:

Due to Deus Ex, his right leg is made out of metal.

Dues Ex Abilities:

Passive ablities -

Enhanced Frozen Swords - Edwin now can shoot 3 swords at once, and the solidness/deadliness of the swords are increased by 30%.

Enhanced Strength: Edwins slicing power while in Deus Ex is quite immense, as when he unsheaths his sword with this form, he could easily cut down a row of trees up to 0.3 acres long. This exceeds the cutting power of his Ress, because of the sharpness of the blade compared to the big blade he yields in Ress.

Enhanced Speed: Edwin's general speed and Sonido speed increase in general, but he wasn't that fast to begin with anyway.

Frostbite Causation - When Edwin lands a successful strike onto a weapon or limb, or anything, the thing struck by Edwin's sword, will gradually develop the condition known as Frostbite for that area, for weapons or items etc, they will simply begin to freeze. If struck once, the first degree will happen after 2 posts, if struck twice, the second degree will happen after 2, and if struck 3 times, the 3rd degree.

(What the degrees do)

First degree - This is called frostnip and this only affects the surface skin, which is frozen. On onset there is itching and pain, and then the skin develops white, red, and yellow patches and becomes numb. The area affected by frostnip usually does not become permanently damaged as only the skin's top layers are affected. Long-term sensitivity to both heat and cold can sometimes happen after suffering from frostnip.

Second degree - If freezing continues, the skin may freeze and harden, but the deep tissues are not affected and remain soft and normal. Second-degree injury usually blisters 1–2 days after becoming frozen. The blisters may become hard and blackened, but usually appear worse than they are. Most of the injuries heal in one month but the area may become permanently insensitive to both heat and cold.

Third and Fourth degrees - If the area freezes further, deep frostbite occurs. The muscles, tendons, blood vessels, and nerves all freeze. The skin is hard, feels waxy, and use of the area is lost temporarily, and in severe cases, permanently. The deep frostbite results in areas of purplish blisters which turn black and which are generally blood-filled. Nerve damage in the area can result in a loss of feeling. This extreme frostbite may result in fingers and toes being amputated if the area becomes infected with gangrene. If the frostbite has gone on untreated they may fall off. The extent of the damage done to the area by the freezing process of the frostbite may take several months to assess, and this often delays surgery to remove the dead tissue.

(Its a copypasta of Wikipedia, deal with it xD)

凍牙氷刃, Tōga Hyōjin (Frozen Fang Ice Blade)

Edwin slashes out a giant wave of ice at his enemy, and if it hits, It will apply Frostbite Causation, and on its own its enough to cause severe ice damage such as Hypothermia, etc, and enough to send them flying from the force of it. It is enough to wreck and freeze 0.6 Acres of land and buildings.

(Cooldown: 2 posts)

氷翼月鳴, Hiyoku Getsumei (Ice Winged Howling Moon)

Edwin can form arrows of ice, and he can shoot them in a straight line or any angle up to 180, which would be behind him. These arrows are quite solid, due to the ice they are made out of, meaning they are potentially stronger than a Expert's Quincy arrows, and they are also quite destructive , they would be able to easily destroy multiple buildings if they missed. These arrows also apply Frostbite Causation.

(No cooldown)

煉獄氷夜, Rengoku Hyōya (Icy Night of the Purgatory)

Using his power over ice, Edwin focuses all his power into his sword, stabbing it into the ground. Then, in a very fast speed that would require some agility and reflexes to dodge, a prison of ice forms around them, and freezes them if they cannot react in time. And then, Edwin then sheaths his sword, and if they are trapped in the ice prison, the ice prison will explode in a dark explosion, causing exactly 1 acre of destruction to the area, and to the person. The damage for this ablity is quite high, and is to be feared. The drawbacks is that against fast enemies, Edwin will need to slow down his enemies otherwise they can dodge it easily. Also, this move is reaitsu intensive, meaning Edwin can only use it 1-2 per thread, and it has a 8 post cooldown. Using it anymore would be fatal to Edwin, due to the destructive power of the ablity.

SKILLS

Skill Level: Hierro: Advanced
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Adept
Skill Level: Sonido: Advanced
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Adept

PAST

History:

Chapter I - The Coldness

As a growing up kid in school, Edwin was a very big fan of Science. If theres one subject he cared about when he was 13-14, it was science. He did so well in it that his own ego got a hold of him, and he considered himself the smartest in his own class. This was merely a phase though, eventually he felt himself doing bad, but he really wasn't, and this was the end of his ego. This happened when he was around 16. One day, he was angry after school. He went to cross the road, but did the most basic of mistakes because of his anger. Not checking, and that resulted.. in his death. He became a soul and the despair he was in now, because of it make him feel cold all the time. The thought of worrying about his parents made him feel even worse, and he couldn't leave, because he wanted to see his parents so bad, he wanted to be noticed by his parents. He went to his own funeral, and cried about how his parents grived his death. But like any other soul, staying in the human world and despairing.. only leads to one possible out come.

Chapter II - Hollowifed

With the fate of all souls that stay in the human world, eventually... Edwin became a hollow, and at that moment, screamed in torment. He didn't want to be seen anymore, he used the power as hollow to go to Hueco Mundo, a place where he could be alone and away from other people. He wondered the lonely sandy dunes. He was attacked from time to time by other hollows wanting to eat him, and he managed to take them down and win the fights. He was a strong hollow, certainly, to be able to take on many other hollows and survive. He wondered endlessly, just trying to keep to himself. Thats where, in the vast world of Hueco Mundo. He saw the giant fortress of Las Noches, and saw it as sort of a symbol of salvation for somewhere to go. He began his long, long walk there, hoping for something good to come out of his long long journey. Despite looking close, it was actally still, far far away from him. He still had to fight other hollows on his travel, resulting in wounds that he didn't heal on his journey. It was clear at this stage, he was Adjuchas-level, but he wasn't exactly a Menos. Eventually, before he even got there.. he was close, But his isolation had got the better of him. He wanted to look like himself again, after realising what he was. He tore his mask off.. and fell to the floor, unconscious.

Chapter III - Arrancar-Ifed

When he woke up, he suddenly felt like he was more human like. He waasn't aware of his surrondings at first, and he noticed he also had a sword. He didn't have a clue what happened to him, but he also felt stronger than before. He also noticed that his wounds had healed. He then began running to Las Noches, cutting down all the hollows that tried to stop him. He had finally reached Las Noches after days to weeks of running. Now, he had hopefully had found his "haven" to be... and soon after reaching it.. He swore the Nuevo Espada as his allies, and would hope to join them..

Chapter IV - Esapda Hood

Soon after becoming a Espada, originally ranked at 6, Edwin managed to obtain something only the top 4 had access to - a Second release, Deus Ex. Soon after that, Ashlei tested him on his new power. Needless to say, it was quite a curbstomp battle for Edwin, as he was easily being beaten by her immense power. Then soon after that, he became the 5th Espada and now, he was been trying to get stronger and stronger, because the one who is strongest is the king and the one that won't fall!

Sat May 07, 2011 4:11 pm

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Comments/Notes: You have done well in fixing up the powers. So I see nothing wrong with this app, anymore.
Tier: I hereby approve of this with a tier of

2-3+

Sat May 07, 2011 4:35 pm

tier bumped to 1-3 For sexta espada position...

Sun May 08, 2011 11:33 pm

Does anyone move their threads? Srsly? Moved to accepted.

Tue May 10, 2011 10:12 am

Added Deus Ex/Gran Rey Moved back to Unchecked for rejudgment.

Tue May 10, 2011 10:18 am

Dues Ex APproved

However you do realise the skin of the dues ex will be made of a metal texture as Dues ex does that. if you wish to specify a part that is amde of metal for the second form, then do that now.

Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:35 am

And the REwork for Mister 5th Espada has begun.

Wed Nov 02, 2011 3:06 pm

FINALLY DONE. WAITING FOR A CHECK!

Wed Nov 02, 2011 5:57 pm

Everything has been checked before and Iv'e run my eyes along all of the new abilities and stuff. I think these abilities can be overpowered however you have worked around this and shown obvious drawbacks with the more involving abilities. So:

Approved at 1-1+

No zero tier because I don't feel he has been involved enough for it to be granted at the moment.

Thu Nov 03, 2011 10:53 pm

Moving to Approved Arrancar section since Chaozi forgot to do that.

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