Nickcca Mira Von Vamp [Shinigami, 1-3+]

Name: Nickcca Mira Von Vamp

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Personality:

:Nickcca real self:

Nickcca is an kind person at heart loves to helping anyone out in their time of need either in advise and happy hate he see his loved ones in pain. With that he also innocent minded in other words he is very native about sex, when some tells dirty jokes or even when women hits on him believing they just being nice. He believes in honner with he regards it highly and always tired to do the right thing, even in battle his greatest can make him powerful foe in standing his ground but also he greatest weakness in personality. He loves going out with friends to cool of after a hard day in soul reaping or even just sitting in the sun playing guitar playing tunes all day.

Even he hard working in the physical aspect the doing papers part it not the same due to he has dyslexia he always tired to get himself out of it by fakes illness or running off he never told anyone he can’t spell because he finds it embarrassing to let anyone know. Even thought even he has his flats even so to most people how know him even he stubborn as hell, when his mind on something he won’t ever stop until he see no feather point himself to curry it on or even beaten in battle. In battle he also tend to hold back but even more so when he stress, angry or afraid because he does not want to switch and goes on an uncontrollable rampage in battle. This other side of Nickcca calls himself Puppet but thank to the 4th squad and the strict training and mothering step mother he leant to control Puppet by keeping his feelings in check and take pills in case to he can’t control his feelings. He also see most soul reapers as family due to he grew up with soul reapers most of life and would do anything to protect them.

:Puppet his other side:

Puppet is mostly the native side of Nickcca he love killing and see it as an art mostly thinking of ways to kill them trying to be as sick as possible. He also loves fighting and winning but any means possible he will even pull a few low blows, but some how he does have a strange sense of honner in him since fights by himself and he always goes for strongest person. His slime and the look in eye has been to strike fear into people hearts with that he love boost how many wins he had in battles he does care even when he hurt he keep going till he kills them. As for Blood thirst rampage if an enemy was weak and the battle did not did satisfy him he goes on uncountable rampage he keeps fighting anyone near him till he happy with his kill.

Outside battle he rude and most of the time crude with his words even he hates helping people but when forced to he makes look he doing it nasty even he bad at acting it. He has a dirty sense of humour as well and people skill are not all that since he very rude and sometimes freighting even only talking. Even he fearless in every there one thing he afiead of his own step mother he won’t back talk or even fight her he run away laughing trying to make look cocky in the process since she take any of it from Puppet. He even let Nickcca wake up so she won’t hit but Nickcca feels the beating in his place he even calls Nickcca “silly ma mas boy.”


Appearance:

Nickcca is seven feet tall and wears am opened sleeveless half black half white teach coat with black and with tribal patterns and it inlays are shining purple and a ying and yang sign on his back to show he not a captain, the jacket shows his body. His body is thin but will built and a bit muscled up with a six pack showing a little bit, he wears a blue dog collar with a gold dog tag on it his with name engraved. On his head he has long messy medium tone brown hair with an eye patch on the left hand side on his face covering his left eye he lost and have bright blood red right eye. Underneath his eye patch he has a scar over his eyes lead a line going downwards with a odd crescent shape scar attach on the left of the sight line of the scar. Just blow the lost eye under the eyes patch also covers a third scar a thin pointing arrow points to right he never like to show it or talking about how he got the scars and with how he lost his eye.

On his strong but soft skinned hands he has an white glove on one hand and black on the other hand as you can see he going for the ying and yang look colour and design so people can tell that is him. That reason is to remind everyone he has a spilt personally so if he switches and goes on a crazy blood lust meaning keep away or if they are stronger than him claim him down. On his bottom half he wears normal Shinigami leg gear a with cloth around his wisest as a belt with long baggy samurai leg wear which fleers out on the bottom and on his feet he wears shocks and sandals.

Zanpakutô Spirit:

Spirit Appearance
Drakmori is demon lady with thin hips due to the black corset she wearing long black with tribal patterned skirt. Her arm are bare aspect for her hand with has a sliver wing on each finger each long and pointy. She has long black hair which reach all the way down her spine on her face she wear deep black eye massacre with black lips with has ram horns on her head. She long steel purple wing with black bone parts going into her back.

Tiger ii well a tiger with a beautiful shiny white coat with black tribes patterns all over him and very musculature for a tiger. His tail his longer and at the very end of his tail is a sliver spare head with twisty patterns on it. His paws and hug and powerful with long and very sharp diamonded nails sticking out of his paw they graceful but deadly. His eyes are red with golden tint within the red reflecting anything he see in his eyes.

Personality
Darkamori is very hyper spirit who love to play mind games just for fun on anyone even on her own twin Tiger. She love playing jokes on people as well just for gun she misbehaves but in a loveable way and very flirty to. Darkamori always love to head into battle head first and then try make Nickcca fight harder if she not amused with the fight she even try to bring puppet since she thinks he more fun to see fight most of the time. He tend to give riddles than advise to Nickcca because she think nickcca to learn thing the hard way can is immature and silly half the time.

Tiger on the other hand is not he mature and wise and goes like to beat around the bush unlike Darkamori. He tend to keeps Nickcca focus in battle he know with hard work he will when without bring puppet out he see his other as a big danger to both themselves and Nickcca. Tiger is also very laid back sometimes even lazy he won’t want to fight unless he is surely needed the most like do or die battles. Tiger wit his advise he like he blunt and harsh she Nickcca can get the point much quicker. Tiger spend most of his time in the Inner world laying under the tree and relax and watch life as it pass by day by day.


Relationship to Master
both feel very close to Nickcca and are loyal to him but also they harsh on him only due to his age and lack of experience that Shinigami don’t have. Even thought they tactics are different to improve Nickcca skills in battle they want to see become strong so live to see himself become the best. Sometimes they call into his inner world so he can train under their watch in a way the guide his and puppets every step to keep them balanced, because they can see the vital impotence that both have in Nickccas being otherwise his inner world could fall apart.


Inner World
His inner world is huge open space but in two halves one is a snowy forest, with white trees and black leafs with the out a with out a could in sight. As the sun hits the snowy ground it shine like some put sliver dust all over the pure white snow. The other half is dark place covered in black ash with black withered trees and white dried up leafs here and there on the floor. The moon is out and black could surround it in the sky and as the moon light hit the floor black ash floor shines in gold like gold dust all over the floor. At the end of the Inner world there a tall hill slap band in the middle cover in golden black ash and sliver snow swilling up the hill.


Sealed Zanpakutô :

:Darkamori:
It has a glossy black blade a little but shorter than normal Zanpakutō with a white guard with a shiny bat purple and black boned wing sticking out. The handle is warp in black leather with white diamonds in the end of the handle with a white bottom with female head with ram horns craved into the bottom. The eyes of female face are black wit ha glowing red on the pupil of the eye. This bale is perfect for defervesce battling it is short and light for fast blocks and counters.

:Tiger:
It has a glossy white blade a little but longer than normal Zanpakutō with a black guard with a tigers head with white eyes and glowing red eyes sticking out. The handle is warp in white leather with black diamonds in the end of the handle with a black bottom with male head with a loins mane craved into around the face. The eyes of male face are white with ha glowing red on the pupil of the eye. Tiger is long and little heavier than normal perfect for attacking for lathy blows and offensive combat.


Shikai Description:
the weapon itself is a 200 chains link together with number 1 to 200 in grave on each link. The one end had a ying sign guard with a white dot in the middle and a wide but sort craved blade sticking out of it with a pointy end. The other side had a yang sign guard with the black dot in the middle and has a long but thin blade with point end on it. Both have engraved tick, long and craved tribal patterns with pointy end like the blades

Shikai Abilities:

links of wind


* Description of Attack – the attack it fast and simple he spins around quickly try to hit his enemy with spinning himself making the chains spin around him making a tornado formation if miss that not the end of it he keep springs into the ground and make mini busts of black and white tornados firing at random at the attacker
* Type - fast attack
* Range - close to med range
* Limitation - he can’t hit far away targets to hard to reach places or high, tornados can be blown away with strong enough wind, it can take time to regain balance after use. Due to he make group of mini tornados they attack is weak but can cruse painful cuts.


Chain shield spear
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[*] Description of Attack – This one his using his spiritual pressure to change the formation of the chains in one hand they forum into a round shield and other and the chain go slight with the yang blade on the other make a spare like weapon. He can use one arm to block with the shield for and the other to attack with. As he attacks by he throwing the chained spare he will make he chain shield smaller to do the long range attacks and then pull back if it hits or miss.
[*] Type - throwing spare and shield
[*] Range - close to long
[*] Limitation - the feather he target the less change he gets on hitting the enemy, his run out of energy if pushes himself to far or use the attack for to long, far throw can make variable to attack, also due to some heavy weight he has trouble with flash stepping but is just able to do it. Also if want to a good chance to hitting for long shot he had waste more energy to do so.

Release: Drakmaori Tiger stangle and hung

Bankai Description:

The two two blade stab into Nickcca chat but he will not bleed due it fashion procress but it is extemley painfull to the point he bust into flames and and blade fuse uttly inyo his body then he becomes the bankai the liveing wepon the black and withe phoinix incartince

Bankai Abilities:

:Bankai Abilities:

.:Basic powers:.


Unholy Flames of Defence: He can make any defensive shields, walls staffs and etc that can be made with his unholy flames



Shield Type:

It takes a small amount of effort to make one small round shield 3 x 3 foot but to make more take 10% effort for every extra shield made. So make 10 shields at once but they will take a little amount of damage before breaking.

Requires 20% Focus



Wall Type:

But as for wall the smallest wall he can make it 9 x 5 feet which requires a lot more effort 25% effort so he biggest wall he can make is 36 x 20 foot and can a hell a lot more damage it take high level kiduos and attacks.

Requires 50% Focus



Staff Type:

As for the staff types he normal the size would but 7 x 0.1 which take 10% effort and stench about 10 times it normal length this can take a medium amount of damage.
Requires 30% Focus


Holy Flames of Attack: He can make any offense weapons like scythes, swords, spears, guns, etc.


Scythe Type (heavy Type.):

Scythe type is huge heavy weapons range form Scythe to Axes to Claymore sword (basically heavy ass sword) He produce only two at a time since they take a lot of effort to make and slow but powerful to use. These have the power it will cause huge amount to damage to even to diamond made armour but if miss to will if hits floor or walls to make an earth quake or nearly knock servile buildings down at once.

Requires 50% Focus



Spear Type (Medium Type.):

Spear Type weapons range form spears to medium sided buttons to basted sword (medium sword) He can produce four medium type weapons at once there are a well balance weapon to use in speed and damage. These have the power can knocked back ermines by a few feet when hit laving an opening for another attack.
Requires 30% Focus



Sword Type (Light Type):

Sword Type weapons range form Daggers to knuckle dusters to rapiers (light sword). He can produce up to six light type weapons at once these are fast weapons but they cause less damage. These have the power give Nickcca heightened reflex in other words the reflex of a cat.

Requires 20% Focus





Gun Type ( Projectile Type):

Gun type weapons there his range attacks depending how fast or powerful he wants the attack the his powers.

Submachine gun:

short range – 50 shoots per min – low damage – spray fire – 10% focus

Rifle:

med range – 10 shoots per min – med damage – metal armour piecing- 30% focus

Rocket Lucher:

Long Range- 1 shoot per min – high damage – expulsive- 60% focus


Flaming wings:

he can make one with flame wing and one black flame wing and use them to fly across the battle also can used for advance attacks like Light and Darkness Inferno Tower for example. The speed of Flight can go from 25 mph (with heavy type weapons) to 50mph (With Medium type weapons) to 100 mph (with light weapons).

.:On going powers:.


Stats up:

as spiritual pressure will go up as normal in bankai but as well his reflexes, is speed, is raw strength will all go up since he becomes the living weapon himself.
*= weak **= okays ***=Normal ****=abnormal

*=min boost **=med boost ***=high boost

Nickcca before Bankai

Speed: ***

Strength: ***

Indureince: ****

Relax: **



When he get into Bankai

Speed: *****

Strength: ******

Indureince: *******

Relax: ***


Undieing flames:

As the flames are made out pure light and darkness so they can’t be put out by normal means. Basically these phoenix flames so water ice or wind will put out this flames but they run on nickcca emotional state high-end feelings like anger, hate, passion, love, diaper, true happiness, hyper will make the flames strong and intense. Neutral feeling in other word clam will make normal clam flames make feel normal. But he ever get in the state where can’t feel his feelings he lose his flame make weaker than normal while in bankai.

.:Advanced Powers:.


Void blade: When Light and Darkness flame combined in his hand they the void of nothingness in a way by make a void hole into they body and if get times it make an impulsion like the big bang theory make stars fly out and disappear it may cause crater in the enemy body but it requires focus at 40% cent.

Light and Darkness Inferno Tower: He will use his fire wings to make a spiralling whirlwind of black and white flames around him make the ultimate attack and defence move. Any who goes near will be sucked in and get burnt by the Flames tearing apart they very mind and soul but it requires if mental power is weak you end like a blubbering fool that cant do anything seeing they skin burn when there is not. A med level well end up late down the line in life with dementia some who strong just end up seeing things like their worse faers I might be bale to stake if off in time. 65% of focus

Void mode:

his turn his flame body into void flames which can make stronger and faster by 70% turning his body into the ultimate weapon but he can only used for sort amount of time when finish he need to recharge that power. Will last for 60 min so that about 1 post is 5 mins but after that he will be able to use bankai until 50 posts or battle ended He needs 70% of focus.

Rebirth:

When Nickcca die in battle he bring himself back to life using the Flames it make the whole into flames no one know what happens if you to come to concat with his flames . He will turn to ash and the flame will spark up the person he feels closet to as a child when just gain his Shinigami powers. He will lose his powers for three months before turn back to normal land regaining all his powers this requires 99% of focus. It have to take A really abnormal Endurance some of tier of 1-2 or higher can some what some out it nearly unharmed and between 1-1 to 2-3 will burned a lot if some chance of death the thanks 3-1 to 4 well be brunt a lot to point of black skin and medium chance of dyeing if not lucky. Some with tier 5 or under will most likely be killed if not the a chance to be wounded or scared badly to live with.

.:Weakness:.
Nickcca had a spilt persontily for bankai to work both of need a focus on working towards one target. If they get spilt his powers would half due the spilt black and with side will was fighting each other for real until power had exhausted.

History/Background:

:The real Mother and Father:

No one know who Nickcca real mother and father are even Nickcca does since they died when he was a child and only a very blur image of what they looked like in his memory. Nickcca real is Jinko Vamp who was a Shinigami in the S.S an ex 5th seat of 10th squad until he left due he became a virzaed and disagreed with the vales of the soul reapers. With that he was banished never to be seen again by the soul reapers so he set his life on earth working with the group of virzaed and was happy for sorry amount of while. Even so later on when he hi 150 years old he found something with them that he was uneasy about their vales with and left them look for a great important in life. He was only wondering around earth in a geai body until he meet Mira a human girl working in a café who serve him every day as time until on they grew in likening each other company and later on fell in love.

Soon they got married when Mira turned 31 and on their honey moon he confused to her who he really was even then Mira did not care she felt he was not all who he is. Even then she still loved them h knew he was a good man that all what matter with her and on that night they made love and convicted Nickcca. When Nickcca was born Jinko was worried he might turned into a hollow or worse so he went to old friend of his to test him to make sure Nickcca was ok. Within that day the test Jinko’s friend stat that he had no inner hollow but he had unnatural spiritual pressure and to keep an eyes because most children how who not born with a inner hollow and end up having a spilt Personality instead. But sadly it was meant to be for the lover to see him grown up when Nikcca turned 6 his mother and father was killed and eaten by a powerful hollow, Nickcca was killed but not eaten he soul was sitting there wondering why they mom and dad was laying there not moving.

As he despaired and the hollow was about to eat him up a Shinigami save his soul life by killing it in one hit Nickcca did not notice he forever sacred by what happen to his mom, dad and himself. The women Shinigami tired to send him to S.S but it was not use it seem he refuse to go so she grab him and drag him into the doors and wipe his memory of that day. When she finally got into the S.S Nickcca was angry and upset he was not sure why the lady Shinigami tired to rehome him but no one wanted due to his troublesome nature and strange spiritual pressure. She did not want to lave him be so she choice to rise him as one of her own adopted the child with this start a challenging chapter of Nickcca life learning how to love and care again.

:A challenging child with a troubled mind:

This lady Shinigami tired as much as she in the start to teach him he can be loved and he can love in return but it was not use he used run away and get into fight with other kids since most say he a freak. As two years passed Nickcca now step mother she noticed something strange in him just looking into by his eyes and how he acts, she felt something wrong one minute he run say and keep form and the next he flips and goes into a fight with someone then stops looking confused. Sadly every time she a 4th squad to take a look they say he fine and healthy but he refused to believe that until one faithful night when the S.S was attacked by hollows killing a lot of people that Night Nickcca run away when the mother was out and with that put him great danger. When his step mother return saw he was missing and in instants she went after him looking for him worried and hoping was he alive and well.

As she looked for him only with a few of her friends suddenly after two hours in looking for him, they came to stop and hear a scream then psychotic laughter with that they felt a really strange but high spiritual pressure. As went toward the noise of it all a saw Nickcca standing there with a one Zanpakutō in his hand was the one lathing madly everyone could and stood in shock a 8 year old child lathing madly covered in hollow blood. No if he the one who killing but something more strangely happened his pressure went down he drop the sword and start screaming crying. “what happen why does my eyes hurt why he here they these things I confused ……what goi...” even before Nickcca said the next word his own step mother ran to him and hug him in her arms hold him tight and as she did Nickcca was knocked out due to the plan of losing his eye.

After all that happen the step mother and her friends rush him into 4th squad campsite and got him heals sadly it was too late for his eye it was lost. Nickcca was knocked out for three whole days and meanwhile his step sat by his side never laving him until he woke up and said to her I sorry mommy …I afraid what happened.” His step mother did not explain much only the fact he has a sword in it as he heard that he said. “…that sword it spoke to me is that normal for them to do that.” In that sentience she looked shocks and comfort him with a no but she knew that was not normal for child to be able to hear an Zanpakutō at his age. She went to the 4th squad over heard they talk look at everyone statement about what when they found him they choice to test him to see why this is happen and also why Nickcca gowning like a livening human child.

A few months have pass even they had still some trouble with Nickcca he grew to love his mother fully and behaved like a normal happy child due step got a lot more strict on him. Even better he grew to love the Shinigami as family see them everyday in the 4th squad campsite recovering very well. The real reason they kept him in was to test him and see why he is this strange in growth, spatial pressure and behaviour flips. Then came a breakthrough which explained a lot about him he had high pressure for his and contain it like normal child of his age so he has to grow in normal years so I almost find he stop growing In living human years at the age of 20. With that Nickcca is living with soul reapers so he most likely get stronger to but sadly there a downside he declared him as mentally ill say he had a spilt personality he needs help he need learn to control his other side. With that his mother stat teach a few mind Shinigami tricks to keep claim as for 4th squad made table just in case he needs them.

As now what Nickcca said about his talking sword he got to keeps it sine if does not understand then it now his Zanpakutō. Even his own step mother or any Shinigami can not deny that has a spiritual pressure just about the same of a normal Shinigami, she had to make a hard choice whatever to lest go and be a Shinigami Nickcca since he lost his always wanted to be one. In the end she choice for him to try it best because then he have more training on who to keep his feeling in check for his own good. When the day came for Nickcca try out not to mention he had training from his own mother before hand the panel thought it a joke that a eight year old child soul would become a Shinigami. Even thought Nickcca was weak in kiduo skills. But he made it up in everything else meanly it hand to hand combat and swordsmanship just about beating a student who been for 10 years they let in for his training, it was a impassive felt by itself he can fight like that but beating the student like he did was unbelievable.

:The Training:

Nickcca was treated like an outcast at first for being a odd child as he was but quite quickly he made friends of a lot of people inside the school as he grew and got stronger. When Nickcca hit 14 he was five feet tall he a fast grower faster than what the 4th practiced his growth speed, he then saw a Zanpakutō a black opposite to his white one it talking to him like his own and he picked it up. The guard saw and ask why he got two of them he explain they both talked to him asking him to use it the guard thought he was lying he took him in. As few hours went passed he managed to show them that he was telling no lie that it was true. Just to make sure him telling no lies they sit a mock battle with a veteran Shinigami as battle was about Nickcca took rather odd fighting stance for Shinigami he held his Black one back hand way and the with one towards his operant and as the bell gone the fight started. As fight went on Nickcca show he can defend a skill he lack until he got the black Zanpakutō and other one was used to attack. Even thought he lost the fight due lack of experience using twin Zanpakutos Nickcca prove that being honest all this time and the panel choice he need different kind training. Once more the 4th see now why he could he can wield duel Zanpakutos due his spiritual pressure was making two different types of high energy’s yin and yang due the spilt Personalities. The need that not just to defend but he keep the native energy in balance with his positive.

They said will become berserker fighter to can’t wait to see what squad he will end in own accord he start to learn to fight hand to hand combat in most formats in his own time. Over the time the sort of training he put himself tough was hard in both physical and mental ways, he wanted to make the S.S and his step mother proud he wanted to show he will become the best of the best. As time went on he felt this place and more and more his home to him with grew to 7 feet tall when he hit 20 years old. He now competed his training within and reached sinkai the S.S Shinigami school now he wait for meet his captain what squad did they choice for him to go in.


Roleplay Sample:

Nickcca walked in slowly walking out the halls of his Shinigami school where he been since he only eight years old he had good memories when he was there. But now he must lave that behind today he going to be a Shinigami he wonders what captain will be waiting for him. He felt excited but worried at the same time he hope he go into squad 5 or 10 or the one where his step mother is that be fun he was thinking. He slowly open the doors of the old school and walk into the open outside it a nice and sunny day without a single could in sight even the breeze were nice and cool and brush generality along his brown messy hair.

He looked around to see if the captain he might end up with had arrived with he sighs wondering where he or she could be. Thing like this always made nickcca more excited or nervous deepening on the situation this time it was both. He wondering if captain would or he or she be nice or they know things about him like his strange split personality and all. He looked around to see where this captain is still no sign for him or her at all he wonders why they later. He stakes his head and then said to himself while taping his foot on the ground.

“Where is the captain I hope it not a curl joke I just came out today or even I hope I not forgotten me. No I sure they busy at some meeting mum did say they do take a long time sometime due things always going on lately. Well as long as my captain nice I won’t have to worry just hope the captain won’t ask to do paper work man that could get messy since I can’t spell but lucky no one knows.” Before he knew it he heard foot step creeping up behind felling a high spiritual pressure but was not really shock but it make him gulp hope that person not a captain and did not hear a single word.

Skill Sheet

General Skills

• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

Racial Skills

• Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

I'm quite fine with this application, ive seen him work before as well

Approved: Tier 2-1

Bankai Abilities:
:
.:Basic powers:.
Unholy Flames of Defence: he can make any defensive shields, walls staffs and etc that can be made with his unholy flames

How much does it take to maintain these shields and walls? How large can they grow to be? How many of them can be made?

Holy Flames of Attack: He can make any offense weapons like scythes, swords, spears, guns, etc

Do any of these weapons wield special abilities? What is the firing rate for the guns? What type of guns can be made, exactly?

Flaming wings: he can make one with flame wing and one black flame wing and use them to fly across the battle also can used for advance attacks.

Explain the exact speed of flight bestowed by the wings. Explain how they can be used for "advanced attacks"

.:On going powers:.
Stats up: as spiritual pressure will go up as normal in bankai but as well his reflexes, is speed, is raw strength will all go up since he becomes the living weapon himself.

By how much, exactly? Relate this in terms of skill ranks.

Undieing flames: As the flames is made out pure light and darkness so they can’t be put out by normal means.

What means can put them out, in that case?

.:Advanced Powers:.
Void blade: When Light and Darkness flame combined in his hand they the void of nothingness stronger than his normal attack but it requires focus at 20% cent.

This sounds far too strong, specifically because it is the "void of nothingness". I presume that it can banish whatever it slashes into the void? If so, please change that. Explain how exactly the blade effects the target.

Light and Darkness Inferno Tower: He will use his fire wings to make a spiralling whirlwind of black and white flames around him make the ultimate attack and defence move. Any who goes near will be sucked in and get burnt by the Flames tearing apart they very mind and soul but it requires 55% of focus

This can tear apart minds? Explain what does it take to endure this attack, in terms of endurance rank.

Void mode: his turn his flame body into void flames which can make stronger and faster by 70% turning his body into the ultimate weapon but he can only used for sort amount of time when finish he need to recharge that power. He needs 70% of focus.

Explain the exact duration for this mode, as well as recharge.

Rebirth: When Nickcca die in battle he bring himself back to life using the Flames it make the whole into flames no one know what happens if you to come to concat with his flames . He will turn to ash and the flame will spark up the person he feels closet to as a child when just gain his soul reaper powers. He will lose his powers for three months before turn back to normal land regaining all his powers this requires 99% of focus.

So... do you mean others that touch him will be incinerated? If that's so, explain what does it take to NOT be incinerated, pertaining to endurance rank.
.:Weakness:.
Nickcca had a spilt persontily for bankai to work both of need a focus on working towards one target. If they get spilt his powers would half due the spilt black and with side will was fighting each other for real until power had exhausted.

Please fix everything I pointed out, before I judge this again.

Bankai Approved. 1-3+

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