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Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
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Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:17 pm
Vizard Template
General Information
Name:Elendril Hoshi
Appearance Age:15
True Age:250
Gender:Male
Overall Appearance
Personality: Original personality Elendril's creed in life is to "take the path with the least bloodshed. Despite this, he would follow a plan which will require the deaths of thousands of innocent people. He was also willing to attack and kill members of his own family. Elendril, has been identified by many people as being afraid of death. He say's he only fear's a pointless death. His own description of himself as a "great person. He show's great pride and is very arrogance at time's as well. But this is just the Surface of Elendril
Since Elendril is a very deep person. Willing to put his life on the line for those that deserve to live. He loves to be by himself for he fill's that he is very different then most people. He will some time's run off into the wood's when he wants to be by himself. He will help almost any who deserve's help. For he does not think any one should have to die a meaningless death. Or die by them self's. He also loves to talk and hang out with those who are close to him. He will sometimes talk to his brother's and sister's for hours without knowing.
Elendril does not care abut Any one but him self. He alway's look's out for him self before he does for anyone else. Elendril alway's say why love when every thing you love will just end up leaving you in the end. So Elendril keep's him self closed up from every one in the world. But truly Elendril is very outgoing and love's to be around other people as much as he can. thinking that family is the most important thing in the world and he also love's to play joke's on people.
But all that changed when Elendril became a Vizard and his brother's and sister's wanted nothing to do with him. And that hurt Elendril very bad since he was super close to his sibling's. Like his oldest brother Ry and Youngest sister Yuki. But even tho they where close they still wanted nothing to do with him. So Elendril started to close him self out from everybody. So that he would never have to feel the pain he felt when he lost his brother's and sister's.
Appearance:
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Weight:200
Kidō master: Elendril has spent time and time practicing to become a Kidō maser.
Master of sword's: Elendril is a master of all type's of sword's. Since he has spent so much time training in the way of the sword
Zanpakutō (Sealed) Description
Zanpakutō Name:Schlifer
Zanpakutō Spirit:Maei
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- Maei is a rueful individual with a very saturnine outlook on life. She never strays away from black when it comes to selecting her threads. Her usual attire consists of the adornments depicted above. She adores the color black, deeming that black befits her person, as well as her lack of elation or remorse. She isn't a social type, nor does she worry about anyone else other than her master. Her ashen appearance, and essence smelling of burnt wood belies her lugubrious persona. When people cross her, or wish ill upon her, she fills with rancor, desiring to singe the nay sayer through a flurry of fervid embers. To her master, she does show hints of care and worry, and remains loyal and watchful over him.
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- (Yep, Laharl's Castle.)
A large, cartoon-esque castle stands atop a large foundation of stone nestled in the center of a lake of molten lava. The environment is seemingly void of all life, the same color of gray being spread throughout the land. It is always nighttime in this world, with the dark blue sky tainted with swirly clouds and large, dark, levitating boulders. The only thing that connects from the outside environment to the castle is a long, crooked bridge made of stone.
Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: The Schlifer is a strong Fire Element type Zanpauktou, whose first sealed state is representative of a large, rectangular broadsword with two handles. One being the actual hilt of the blade, the second being a metal bar located in the square of the bottom of the blade. The weapon can be wielded with one hand, or both. But Schlifer actual has two sealed appearances. In the second form it s a double edge twin sword's ( there are 2 of them ). That look's like this.
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- Form one
Form 2 
Zanpakotu (Shikai) Description
Shikai Appearance: It is the same as in the Sealed appearance.
Shikai Abilities:
First ability
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- The blade does not change appearance. What does happen, however, is that the entire blade is suddenly engulfed in a thin coating of flames, the coating being only a couple of inches, the flames making the blade appear a fervid orange. The features and colors of the blade are still visible. The second grip is also covered in flames. The blade can be held or gripped by the user as if the flames were never there, the fire having no effect on him.
Cinder Comet
By swinging the blade in an upwards arc, a fireball, with the proportions of a basketball, is launched. The flames are the equivalent of ordinary fire, making it easy to douse with water. What makes this more than just a mere fireball is the trail of fire that spills from the back of the flame, landing onto the ground. The proportionate embers span 2 meters tall, and last for one post after the fireball expires. The speed of the fireball is 10 meters per second. It has a range of 50 meters before the flame expires. The fireball itself does moderate damage at adept endurance. Low damage at Adv, and insignificant damage at master. This move can only be used once per post.
Firewall
Simple name, but it is not the firewall that deflects malicious software from accessing a computer. By sticking the tip of the blade outwards, towards the ground, a baseball sized fireball. Whence it hits, a wall of embers is erected, the wall spanning 12 meters in length, and 2 meters in height. The flames move at a rate of 5 meters per second. Same damage amounts from last ability applies here. The firewall has a range of 30 meters. This move can only be used once per post.
Searing Rain
By raising the blade behind the head, bringing the blade down in a violent swing, a basketball shaped fireball, bright yellow in color, is tossed from the blade, ascending for the first few seconds, before remaining at a constant height. The fireball travels at 6 meters per second. At any moment, the user can will for the fireball to detonate, causing the fireball to explode in mid air, creating a ring of 12, equally sized fireballs, each being orange in color. These flames span out for 15 meters in diameter before falling into the ground, immuring anything within it in a ring of flaming pyres, each one spanning 4 meters tall, 2 feet in diameter. These flames last for the next two posts before expiring. This move can only be used once per post. Damage amounts are still the same. This attack also has a 3-4 cooldown time before it can be used again.
Note: all attack's can be done in any sword form but work better in the first sword form
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When this Shikai ability is activated, Elendril becomes engulfed in heavy reiatsu, his arms become engulfed in a blue flame, his Zanpakutō melts to his skin creating the flames. His arms are enshrouded in one of the hottest flames, the blue flame. However, he is immune to this flame and can burn other people quite easily with them. However, this fire isn't invulnerable, it can be created at his own will, but if a whole lot of water is dumped on him he will have to wait 3 posts to be able to bring the fire back onto his arms. He can deactiavte the flames at will, however, even if his arms are hit with water when the flames are off; he still has to wait 3 posts before bringing the flames back online.
Spiked arms:
Elendril's arms, which are covered in flames, can produce spikes around his arms and fists made of flames to punch, swipe or hit the person anywhere. While it is flames, the spikes become compressed so much that they act as if they were impaling somebody, if they are impaled they will also feel a sensation of being burnt. This can be quite painful to anyone who doesn't have a high enough reiatsu (Usually the same or smaller than his). These spikes can also be put out with large amount of water. As normal shikai can. These spikes are often used in combination with Fire Absorption as seen below.
Fire absorption:
From any surrounding areas, he can suck up all the fire into his arms and create the flames even bigger. When this is used in combination with Spiked Arms, he can make the spikes up to 10 meters long and 15 cm thick. If one is not careful, the fire he absorbs can be drastically painful for the opponent in the long run. Also when he absorbs the fire, if the fire is located behind the enemy it will rush towards his arms and burn the opponent on the way. The range of absorption is 25 meters. Once he reaches his maximum, he can't make his spikes any bigger. ( note he can not absorb enemy flame's. )
Fire Bullet (ファイア バレット Faia Baretto):
Elendril releases a stream of fire like bullet's toward the enemy. These bullet's are about the size of a baseball. When these bullet's hit you. You will fill like you got hit by a baseball going at about 120MPH. And this fire once get's on you start's to spread fast.
Fire Dragon's Brilliant Flame (火竜の煌炎 Karyū no Kōen):
Elendril creates a fire ball in both hands, and then brings them together, creating a giant explosion that can destroys everything around him. It fill's as though you got hit by a bomb some what. But Elendril is not affected by it
Hollow Mask and Inner Hollow
Inner Hollow Description:
[b]Inner Hollow Personality:Kyo is depicted as a sadistic character who loves to kill his enemies, delighting in their deaths. He also has a tendency to ridicule and crack insulting comments toward enemies and allies alike. When he is mad. Kyo is also quite perverted, groping women whenever he has the chance Despite not showing much outward care for anyone, Kyo became enraged when his friends are hurt. Showing that he has a caring side to all his blood thirst demon attitude.
Hollow Mask Appearance:https://i.servimg.com/u/f68/14/48/29/80/sadsad10.jpg
Hollow Powers:
Enhanced Speed: Vizard gain a great boost in their speed while Hollowfied. Kensei is able to throw a rapid amount of punches against a Gillian[46]
Enhanced Strength: The Vizard have shown great strength while using their masks. Love was able to rip a Gillian class Menos in half with his bare hands after the Vizard first arrived in the Fake Karakura Town[47]
Cero: Vizard gain access to certain Hollow abilities, such as the Cero blast; However, only Shinji[48], Hiyori[49] and Mashiro[50] have been seen using it.
Power Augmentation: With the acquisition of the mask through the subjugation of one's inner Hollow, Vizard gain access to an additional and separate source of power - aside from the Shinigami powers they already possess - Hollow powers. The accumulation of both powers greatly augments their powers beyond what a Shinigami and/or Hollow alone would be capable of.[43]
Mask Protection: Body damage can seemingly be ignored while wearing their masks, as demonstrated by Ichigo's Hollow during his unwilling transformations.[51]
Reiryoku Enhancement: Vizard have dual spiritual power of both Shinigami and Hollow, which enhances their abilities. While watching Ichigo fight with Grimmjow, Tier Harribel noted that the volume and nature of Ichigo's spirtual power made it seem like she was watching a fight between two Espada.[52]
Garganta: The power that Hollow's and Arrancar use to go to and from Hueco Mundo. Kurai has the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. It was taught to him by his Arrancar equivalent.
Sonído (響転 (ソニード), Sonīdo; Spanish for "Sound" Japanese for "Transfer Effects") is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps
Telekinesis: Vizard apparently hold varying degrees of telekinesis; For example, Ichigo, in his new Hollowfied form, has employed this ability to call forth his Zanpakutō with a mere flick of the wrist.[53]
Shinigami Skill Level- Kidō: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Shinigami Skill Level- Swordsmanship: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level- Hand-to-Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Background/Roleplay Sample
Background:
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- Elendril was born into the poor part of the roukon distrect. He was the youngest of seven children. And all Elendril wanted was advenchure and to be able to start the soul academy to start becoming a Shinigami. But Elendrel's mother did not want any of her children to join the soul society like there father. Who had went missing on a mission when Elendril was five. And she was so heart broke that she would not give any of her children her blessing to join the Soul society. But thar did not stop her oldest son Ry. Ry left with out his mothers blessing saying thar there mother was being selfesh. By not giving them her blessing to join.
And that it was not there father's fault that he got lost on a mission. He was doing his job But there mom Ino never understood why her children wanted to join the Soul Society. But she started to see that she was wrong for not giving them her blessing. And after about two years when Ry came back to the house to ask his mom for forgivness. For Leaving with out her blessing. And that was when she gave all of her children her blessing to do what ever they wanted. So five of Elendril's brother's and sister's left all going to the soul Academy. To start there life's. And that left Elendril and Yuki at home with there mothere Ino since they where to young to start the Academy
. But that did not stop Elendril he started training for the day he would be old enought to starte the academy. So Elendril spent his time training with some of the sword master's around the district. And he started to get caught up with some of the local thugs and started to become a Bounty Hunter. And started to get introuble with the soul Society. But it really did not Bother Elendril until His mon and Yuki reminded him of his dream to become a Shinigami like his father. And that if he kep hanging with the people he was hanging with he was likely to never be able to become a Shinigami. So Elendril left the gang he was in and stoped doing thug work for some of the Thug Lord's.
And he Apllied for the the soul Academy and even thought Elendril had a record they let him apply because of his father and how great of a Shinigami he was. Hoping that he had half his father's skill's. Like his brother Ry who was well on his way to becoming a captain of the the Soul Society. And so As Elendril started the Academy he was at the top of his class in all thing's but he was best at Kidō and Sword fighting. But half way threw Elendril's first year of the Academy. He and his sister Yuki had to brop out because there mom went missing. And so Elendril and all 5 of his brother's and sister's started to look for there mom. But it was not susessful.
So Elendril and Yuki went back to the academy. The next year when it started back since they had missed to much time serching for there mom. And since both of thim had Allready been in the Academy allready and where both at the top of there class that graduated early. And Elendril went to the Kidō corp's while his sister went to the Stealth Force since she seemded to very good at Hand to hand combat. And while Elendril and all five of his Brother's and sister's where all on diffrent Squad's they all stil found time to spend time with each other.
But Ry Elendril's oldest brother never gave up on there mom. He thought he owed it to her for leaving and join the soul society with out her blessing. So he serched every where he could and found people to help him. Until one day he found out where the thug's had hid her. So he went and got Elendril and the rest of there sibling's and they went to save there mother. And when they got to the house Elendril new where they where.It was one of the thug's he use to work for. And As Elendril and his Sibling's went to save there mother Elendril was stuck. while he and his sibling's where in the middle of battle he was forced to have to fight his old best friend's.
And Elendril could not find it in him self to kill his friend. And in his hesitation his mother was killed right infront of his Eye's. And as Elendril Watched it. It changed him. Elendril started to get the wild burst of dark gloome fealing's and he could not figure what was going on to him. And after all of Elendril's hard work in the soul society he was up for the lutinet spot. But he would have to fight the current one in a spar. None killing. But in the middle of the spar. Some thing happen to him. He changed and lost control of him self in the match.
And came close to killing his squad member. It was so close that the captain had to pull him off. Elendril was then held prisoner in the soul society. But he did not want his Brother's and Sister's to she him like this. So he escaped and ran away from the Soul society and lived on his own for a while. Until he meet some vizard's of the Vizard Corp's he told him what was going on to him and help him with it. And with that He became a member of the Vizard Corp's.
But he still felt as tho he left and abandond his sibling's. So he tried to go and make contact with them at the soul society. But he was attacked for leaving. And was suppost to be killed so he ran away with out getting contact to his sibling's. But a couple of month's later his siter Yuki managed to get contact with him and told him about how Ry was in real bad shape and was close to dying. And that he need to stay away from the familly because it was dangerous. Elendril told his sister it was fine and hid the pain that he felt inside. Because he loved his familly and know he was causing them pain. And this really changed Elendril. It made Elendril start to shut People out and stay to him self.
Extra Info: The credit of the Zanpakutō goes to Raen and Kyle. The each made a Zanpakutō for me and i combined them together. So the credit goes to Raen and Kyle
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:38 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: He cannot have Ressurection now, especially since he does not know Bankai. Cross out that section for now. Other than that, approved at same tier as Ry.
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:51 pm
Have changed Zanpakuto and added to Hollow power's and to Resurrection off And have added to Hollow spirit and need all to be checked again
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Tue Jun 14, 2011 7:38 am
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:19 pm
moved to adoption.
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Fri Jun 22, 2012 4:01 am
I'll be adopting elendril
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Fri Jun 22, 2012 10:21 am
Still have to make an RP sample.
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Sat Jun 23, 2012 5:14 pm
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Sat Jun 23, 2012 6:34 pm
You'll have to make an RP sample before you adopt any time or when you create a character for the first time.
No exceptions.
No exceptions.
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Re: Elendril the Vizard ( Approved 2-3 )
Sat Jun 30, 2012 12:58 pm
Elendril was walking along the sidewalk.he was looking for anything unusual to fight. He hasn't fought anything for some time now. He was think to himself that everything has changed now as I have changed also h. He felt like unleashing his full power but also was patient and knew he mist wait. He was thinking about combos and what they do as well as how they affect the opponent. Ellendril was getting hungry and hadn't ate any breakfast. He would ignore that and keep looking. Finnaly he saw a big dark shape in the alley on the corner. When he looked carefully he saw it was just a few kids. Oh well he thought maybe tomorrow.
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