Elendril the Vizard

Vizard Template

Name:Elendril Aka Venom
Appearance Age:15
True Age:250
Gender:Male

Apperance:
Personality:Elendril does not care abut Any one but him self. He alway's look's out for him self before he does for anyone else. Elendril alway's say why love when every thing you love will just end up leaving you in the end. So Elendril keep's him self closed up from every one in the world. But truly Elendril is very outgoing and love's to be around other people as much as he can. thinking that family is the most important thing in the world and he also love's to play joke's on people.

But all that changed when Elendril became a Vizard and his brother's and sister's wanted nothing to do with him. And that hurt Elendril very bad since he was super close to his sibling's. Like his oldest brother Ry and Youngest sister Yuki. But even tho they where close they still wanted nothing to do with him. So Elendril started to close him self out from everybody. So that he would never have to feel the pain he felt when he lost his brother's and sister's.
Appearance:
Height:5'11
Weight:190

Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Kiyoshi Kuga
Appearance:

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Sealed Zanpakutô :
PhatomTech:Yes


Release: Slither

Shikai Description:The sword does not change but that know it has a purple glow on the Blade. This is the poison of the Blade

Shikai Abilities: The Poison on he blade will only take effect when a person is cut. The poison will start to go into the victim's blood. The first post when cut the poison will just enter the body. The second Post after the victim has been cut the poison will start to spread threw the body. 3rd post after victim has been cut they will start to lose control of they body function's. 4rth post the poison will leave your body if your tier is higher or equal to then user's. If not the poison will have taken over your leg's and arm's by now and make them feel numb. But you will still be able to move them you just might feel a slight pain. 5th post the poison will have taken over the bladder system and make you lose control of your bladder. 6th post your bladder system will explode and the poison will leave your body. The sword is also able to become a snake and can expand. 5 meter's a second. Note it does not have to turn into a snake to do this

Slithering Snake Mode: turns the lower half of his body into a snake's tail, which greatly increases his speed and agility. This can only be used for 5 post thought

Snake Stab: By stabbing the ground with the sword a crack will appear and Snake's will start to crawl out of it. The user will be able to see and feel everything the snake's does. The caster is also able to control the snake's. This can only be used once per a post and only 10 snake's can come out a post.

Snake Tongue : The caster is able to turn his tounge into a snake that can expand up to 50 Meter's at a lightning speed. The snake also has a sword hidden in it mouth that is just like the castor's. If the snake is cut it will fall and nothing will happen to the castor's tong.

Snake Arm: The caster is able to turn his arm's into snake's that have sword's soaked in poison hidden in there mouth. The snake's can movie at a very fast speed and strike fast. They will be able to move at about 5 Meter's a second If the snake is cut it will fall off and the castor's arm will come back.


Side Note: All wounds caused by Snake sword's ( the snake's that have sword's in there mouth ) or there bite cannot heal normally: cell activity in the impacted areas slows down, so the wounds remain open far longer than they should. This would increase the chances of the victims dying from blood loss. Other then that they have no real poison

Bankai Description: The sword is the same

[Bankai Abilities: The sword has all of the same ability's but not is apart of the user's body.The user has the able to manipulate his bones to different parts of their body thus making them bigger, smaller, and even with no bones at all. Because the user is like a snake he is able to somewhat transform into A large snake. His body become boneless thus can stretch up to long ranges and move faster than normal in this form. In this snake form he look exactly like a snake thus he is able to have his body like a snake.
Snake Venom: His blood is different. Meaning his blood has a very large portion of poison on it (Cobra Poison). Just like a snakes he is able to pass the poison in his body throughout his teeth. Because of that he is immune to his own poison since it is stored in his body. A simple bite from him will not be Fatal.

If your Tier is lower then his it will take the Poison 3 post to exit your body but in that time that who has got hit by the Poison will not be able to use your Shikai for 2 post. Because the poison will drain your energy for those to post it is in your body.

If tier Higher then his it will take the Poison 2 post to leave your body. In the time it is in there it will slow down your speed and make your strength equal to one complete tier lower meaning if you are a 1-3 you will know be equal to a 2-1 for those 2 post in physical strength and speed.

And if tier is Equal it will take the Poison 3 post to leave your body. and it will make you a 2 complete tier's lower meaning if you are a 1-1 you will know be equal to a 1-3. But it only make's your speed and Physical strength equal to a lower tier.

Snake Manipulation: Because he is so close to snakes in every way. He is able to manipulate snakes. More often he has them connected to his bodies and use them as weapons. The reason he has some snakes around his body is because when the snake's are little their blood cells are mixed with that of the user cells. Since then he has snake characteristics as well as some snakes grown in his body He use's these snakes to attack by taking them out from his sleeve etc.

Snake Taste Technique: he is able to use his tongue to gather particles from the air to locate enemies that are around the area via heat. He is able to locate an enemy that is about 20 feet from himself.

Posionic Spray Technique: The user will expel a spray of poison at the target from his mouth. If it hits, the target will be poisoned. The poison will continuously harm the target's body until it is removed the user will be unable to use there flash step or anything like it. After 3 post the poison will the leave the body

Body Shedding: Used after sustaining massive injury, or simply to escape from a seemingly inescapable attack, this technique allows the user to regurgitate a new body from their mouth, new clothes, complete with any lost limb being regenerated and all wounds healed, much like a snake sheds its skin. This can only be used once for a Topic

Gathering of the Snakes: If user is somehow sliced in half by the opponent, snakes come from the halves and bring him back together but this can only be used once a Day in real life time

Side Note's: This Poison work's more like a virus then a poison. But it can not be transfered to other's by you having it. Only the user is able to pass the virus out with his Zanpakuto. But they also have the cure to the Poison. So Elendril can give out the cure at any time. Just the same way he gives it out. But his blood also has the Cure.


Inner Hollow Description:

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Inner Hollow Personality:Kyo is depicted as a sadistic character who loves to kill his enemies, delighting in their deaths. He also has a tendency to ridicule and crack insulting comments toward enemies and allies alike. When he is mad. Kyo is also quite perverted, groping women whenever he has the chance Despite not showing much outward care for anyone, Kyo became enraged when his friends were hurt
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Hollow Powers:
Enhanced Speed: When Elendril has his mask on his speed get's faster

Enhanced Strength: when Elendril has his mask on his strength is increased

Power Augmentation: With the acquisition of the mask through the subjugation of one's inner Hollow, Visored gain access to an additional and separate source of power - aside from the Shinigami powers they already possess - Hollow powers. The accumulation of both powers greatly augments their powers beyond what a Shinigami and/or Hollow alone would be capable of

Minor Cero
As most Vizards have been able to mimic this Arrancar ability, Itachi has grown to be able to use it too but it is not as powerful as an actual Arrancar version. When fired, this Cero has an red color with a purple effect upon collision

Minor regeneration
Most Vizards are able to demonstrate this feat but at a very slow pace. The regeneration rate is about 1.8 times faster than normal humans when not in soul society which doesn't show much of an improvement

Telekinetics
This has only been shown by Ichigo in his full hollow form, but during this state, he managed to grab his sword from the floor by willing it into his hands. Itachi hasn't got a great feel for this ability but can move his sword somewhat to his hand.

Resurreccion Appearance:
Resurreccion Abilities:
Elendril become's able to control the shadow's and shoot a shadow cero that when hit's target it start's surrounding then and trying to choke them

Shinigami Skill Level- Kidou: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Shinigami Skill Level- Swordsmanship: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level- Hand-to-Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Background/Roleplay Sample

Background: Elendril was born into the poor part of the roukon distrect. He was the youngest of seven children. And all Elendril wanted was advenchure and to be able to start the soul academy to start becoming a Soul Reaper. But Elendrel's mother did not want any of her children to join the soul society like there father. Who had went missing on a mission when Elendril was five. And she was so heart broke that she would not give any of her children her blessing to join the Soul society. But thar did not stop her oldest son Ry. Ry left with out his mothers blessing saying thar there mother was being selfesh. By not giving them her blessing to join.

And that it was not there father's fault that he got lost on a mission. He was doing his job But there mom Ino never understood why her children wanted to join the Soul Society. But she started to see that she was wrong for not giving them her blessing. And after about two years when Ry came back to the house to ask his mom for forgivness. For Leaving with out her blessing. And that was when she gave all of her children her blessing to do what ever they wanted. So five of Elendril's brother's and sister's left all going to the soul Academy. To start there life's. And that left Elendril and Yuki at home with there mothere Ino since they where to young to start the Academy

. But that did not stop Elendril he started training for the day he would be old enought to starte the academy. So Elendril spent his time training with some of the sword master's around the district. And he started to get caught up with some of the local thugs and started to become a Bounty Hunter. And started to get introuble with the soul Society. But it really did not Bother Elendril until His mon and Yuki reminded him of his dream to become a soul Reaper like his father. And that if he kep hanging with the people he was hanging with he was likely to never be able to become a Soul Reaper. So Elendril left the gang he was in and stoped doing thug work for some of the Thug Lord's.

And he Apllied for the the soul Academy and even thought Elendril had a record they let him apply because of his father and how great of a soul Reaper he was. Hoping that he had half his father's skill's. Like his brother Ry who was well on his way to becoming a captain of the the Soul Society. And so As Elendril started the Academy he was at the top of his class in all thing's but he was best at Kido and Sword fighting. But half way threw Elendril's first year of the Academy. He and his sister Yuki had to brop out because there mom went missing. And so Elendril and all 5 of his brother's and sister's started to look for there mom. But it was not susessful.

So Elendril and Yuki went back to the academy. The next year when it started back since they had missed to much time serching for there mom. And since both of thim had Allready been in the Academy allready and where both at the top of there class that graduated early. And Elendril went to the Kido corp's while his sister went to the Stealth Force since she seemded to very good at Hand to hand combat. And while Elendril and all five of his Brother's and sister's where all on diffrent Squad's they all stil found time to spend time with each other.

But Ry Elendril's oldest brother never gave up on there mom. He thought he owed it to her for leaving and join the soul society with out her blessing. So he serched every where he could and found people to help him. Until one day he found out where the thug's had hid her. So he went and got Elendril and the rest of there sibling's and they went to save there mother. And when they got to the house Elendril new where they where.It was one of the thug's he use to work for. And As Elendril and his Sibling's went to save there mother Elendril was stuck. while he and his sibling's where in the middle of battle he was forced to have to fight his old best friend's.

And Elendril could not find it in him self to kill his friend. And in his hesitation his mother was killed right infront of his Eye's. And as Elendril Watched it. It changed him. Elendril started to get the wild burst of dark gloome fealing's and he could not figure what was going on to him. And after all of Elendril's hard work in the soul society he was up for the lutinet spot. But he would have to fight the current one in a spar. None killing. But in the middle of the spar. Some thing happen to him. He changed and lost control of him self in the match.

And came close to killing his squad member. It was so close that the captain had to pull him off. Elendril was then held prisoner in the soul society. But he did not want his Brother's and Sister's to she him like this. So he escaped and ran away from the Soul society and lived on his own for a while. Until he meet some vizard's of the Vizard Corp's he told him what was going on to him and help him with it. And with that He became a member of the Vizard Corp's.

But he still felt as tho he left and abandond his sibling's. So he tried to go and make contact with them at the soul society. But he was attacked for leaving. And was suppost to be killed so he ran away with out getting contact to his sibling's. But a couple of month's later his siter Yuki managed to get contact with him and told him about how Ry was in real bad shape and was close to dying. And that he need to stay away from the familly because it was dangerous. Elendril told his sister it was fine and hid the pain that he felt inside. Because he loved his familly and know he was causing them pain. And this really changed Elendril. It made Elendril start to shut People out and stay to him self. And in the time of losing his Familly Elendril started to go by the name of Venom. Because of his Zanpakuto and his personality. Since it fit him very well.

And after some time in the Vizard Corp Elendril started to find him self a spot for himself. But he still did not fill like he belonged any where on the world since he was with out his familly witch was the most important thing to him. So Elendril decided he was going to try and contact his familly just one last time to see if they where ok. So he sent a message to his oldest brother Ry under a false name. Telling him to get all of his brother's and sister's together and that they had found out some stuff about there Father. And so when Ry, Yuki and the rest of Elendril's brother's and sitster's got to the spot to meet the man who was suppost to have info on his Father. Elendril walked out.

To meet them and when he did Ry drew out his Zanpakuto and said " you have no reason to be here no get gone" in a very cold tone. But all Elendril could say was " we are sibling's and plus i am the one who sent you the note about father". "Since i had to lie to get you all here i need to talk to you all" But right as Elendril finished Ry said " Get gone we can not be stuck with this out cast " and so all of Elendril's brother's and sister's left. And all he could do was sit there anc cry. For it would be the last time a tear of his every came out again.
Role Play Sample:Look at Tindera

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Notes: You need to faceclaim for Axel, sugah. In addition, those techniques simply will not fly. The poison is far too much, and you have a lot of ways to inject the foe. The poisons you use need a nerf bat hard, and I'd also cut down on the mobility a bit. Denied until these changes are made.

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Approved for 3-1

Locked and archived on Elendril's request

Moved back to WIP

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Approved for 5-5. Just...fed up.

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Approved for 3-1

Im altering the approved tier here because It was Falsely given. This character is rightfully a 3-1 thus he will be approved at that tier and not at 5-5. I have listened to the issues surrounding this member and do not see lowering a tier as a professional way about doing things.

so, Approved at 3-1

Any problems, Contact me directly.

Character Application is DENIED under detection of illegal contents in the application.

Illegal Content(s)
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Poisons without Administrative Permission
Poisons, despite Administrative Rejection