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[Spirit Class 1] Retsu Unohana
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BASIC INFORMATION
» Name: Retsu Unohana [卯ノ花 烈]
» Alias: Yachiru Unohana [卯ノ花 八千流]; Kenpachi [剣八]
» Age: ~1,800
» Appearance Age: Mid-thirties
» Gender: Female
» Association: General Director of the Shino-Seyakuin [真央施薬院]; Former Captain of the 11th and 4th Divisions
» Height: 5'2.5 (159cm)
» Weight: 120 lbs (54.4kg)
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PERSONALITY OVERVIEW
Retsu once had joy beyond bounds. To some, it might have seen like bloodlust. To others, it was proving she was the strongest. While they are both correct, both are symptoms of the disease named "pleasure." Retsu's joy came from battle itself. It came from the chaos of conflict—the primality of seeking the defeat of another. She could see who someone truly was when they spill blood, no matter if it is their own or another's. Lies were meaningless except as a tool for victory.
That explains the symptom of bloodlust, but what of strength? Being strong wasn't a guarantee of victory—especially in the days before the Gotei. Retsu isn't one to believe that victory is ever guaranteed. And yet, being stronger than others meant she could dictate the combat. She could determine what could and could not bring satisfaction. She could determine how long those battles lasted. Retsu did not necessarily enjoy being "the strongest." That was a pustule of pride that was lanced and drained when peace and order became the priority.
Well, that's what Retsu would like to believe. The truth is that it still exists. She still has all of the bloodlust, all of the desire for victory—Retsu just locked it away. By knowing who she was, we can get to who she is now. Retsu is someone who had everything, lost it, gained a new purpose, and now has lost that too. She is bitter and her words burn like strong alcohol.
Although Retsu still shows a care that more modern members of the Gotei might remember or know, Retsu had abandoned all forms of tenderness. She will warn the child not to run around the pool. She would even still bring the drowning child out. But no longer is there a trace of comfort—her words are not "are you okay" but "learn to swim" before leaving the pool.
Retsu still maintains her keen eye for one's character—although her supression of expressing her distaste of others' character is gone. She makes it quite clear when she doesn't like someone and why. Almost hypocritically, she doesn't expand on why she does like certain people. Perhaps it's nostalgia, perhaps it's that they make her feel better about her choices. This makes it difficult for people who she does like or is neutral towards to see that. The best way to describe it is that her words of encouragement sound like harsh criticism, but at least she's speaking to you.
Retsu's bitterness has driven away many that were once close to her. Some of it was her purposely driving others away that might get caught up in her mental storm. Others simply had a newfound distaste for the new Retsu. Aside from one, those have all been inconsequential to her. Most of the peopple she's "snubbed" were not people whose opinion didn't ultimately matter.
Retsu feels that her decisions were correct at the time, and she stands by them outwardly. Inwardly, she wishes she had just drawn her sword and struck down as many of the Espada and Ender's army as she could. Life would have been so much easier if she had done so. But she knew that drawing her sword would be returning to the Old Ways. If she returned to how she was, it would signal that the world wasn't accepting of what Yamamoto had formed. It wouldn't be accepting of the sacrifices everyone had made.
Retsu is, truthfully, silently anticipating a reason to return to the Old Ways. Every time a calamity happens, she can't help but feel the comforting warmth of anticipation. And yet, even the Demon Incursion wasn't enough to bring that out. There were others that could handle those problems. In some ways, she resents the product of the peace she helped forge. There are people that are strong enoguh to do what she truly feels like doing, so why should she? It may seem like laziness, but in actuality it is more akin to foolheartedly sticking to one's principles.
Retsu, despite her bitterness towards the past, has kept with some habits. When performing most medical tasks or in more formal settings (which is rare), her hair remains braided to the front. At other times, she lets her long hair flow loose "like the old days." She is no longer concerned with others seeing the scar on her chest, nor does she have others to complain about it. It has lost its meaning except as a reminder of "someone she thought was stronger." Although she no longer wears a Captain's haori, Retsu is commonly seen wearing a similar doctor's haori from the Shino-Seyakuin.
HISTORY
- Pre-Gotei:
- Retsu's birth was, truly, nothing spectacular for that time. She wasn't born under an auspicious stellar sign, nor was she heralded by strife. The only thing "abnormal" was her mother dying giving birth, and even that was common for the time period. She doesn't remember what district she was born in, as to her it doesn't matter. The only thing that does matter to her was her birth name, which she has returned to using. It was a time of great strife throughout the Soul Society. The Seireitei was more of a noble court and "district 0" rather than the castle-town it is today. And outside of that place, survival of the fittest ruled over any semblance of law.
Retsu was raised less by her absent father and more by nomadic warriors. Her father would go on long journeys deep into and even past the Rukongai. What he was searching for, she never found out. He simply did not return one day. And so, Retsu's upbringing became teachers raising pupils. She did not learn what it meant to "care" or "love" like a parent would teach a child. Retsu had learned early and frequently that few people stayed around.
Thus, Retsu did not form many attachments to people. She did what she had to to survive. Her strength grew with every clash for survival—because for her, it wasn't a sport yet. If she did not win, she did not live. And as time went on and she continued to survive, she began to enjoy living on that precipice. She enjoyed flirting with death—her dance with the end was bringing her a joy she had not experienced.
Retsu took upon the name "Yachiru" in what would amount to her "teenage rebellion" years. She, at that time, had grown bitter towards her father and his abandonment. If he had returned, it meant he was strong. Therefore, he was weak. And the weak meant nothing to her. Pride from countless victories had overtaken her. Thus, she renamed herself to something strong.
Yachiru had many weapons over her years of fighting. She had a bow that was split in two—its two halves were then impaled into her opponent. She had a spear that was lost in a river. But the sword that would become hers came from an unlikely source. During all the years of her growing up, Yachiru had become someone to be feared. At her peak, she was perhaps the Soul Society's most notorious criminal. She would rob, extort, murder, and even enslave. She did not have a "gang" like others of the time did, but instead "servants" to handle small matters. And even they were as expendable as chopsticks to her. Her spree of crime had gained the attention of others...
Two in particular were among the most influential on who Yachiru was and who she would become. The first was what basically amounted to a "kill squad" created by one of the Five Great Noble Families hidden behind multiple intermediaries. The goal of the group was to protect the interests of the family without mercy. Some of these interests were property, some were people. Some were pointless, abstract things like "honor." At the time, ti wasn't the only group like it. The difference was this particular kill squad was given a tool not many had: the Zanpakutō.
The Noble intermediary taught her the basics of how to imprint on it—to share a bit of herself into something greater. She found the idea almost farcical. It would just be another tool to her. That was until she tried Yamamoto's technique and the sword spoke to her. Over the next few years, Yachiru learned more and more about her sword—and eventually learned of its name and what it could do. Although initially very confused at how such a thing was useful in combat, she'd later learn just how important it would be.
But overall, the job was too reactionary for Yachiru. There was death and fighting, yes. There were even challenging foes along the way. But rarely did the group actively seek out the threats. Every time she did proactively hunt a threat down, she'd get chided by the Nobles for "causing disruptions." After getting truly bored with killing the messengers sent to deliver her admonishments, Yachiru had enough. Taking her Zanpakutō, she left that group. She needed something more active and without the politicking.
The second of these groups was far more important to her. It started with a student of the Genji School. It was something Yachiru had heard of, but she showed no interest in bowing to another. That student was someone ahead of his time. He believed in the wretched falsehoods of "justice" and "peacefulness." He believed that what Yachiru was doing and had done were unforgivable sins. So, she struck the student a nearly-mortal blow. She could have killed him. Perhaps she should have. Instead, she had to teach him a lesson. It wasn't this "master" he served, nor "justice" that would save him. She made that choice for him. She let him live so that he would learn what being strong meant.
The head of the school, Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto, was not pleased when he heard the news. He was already picky on what students he took in, and hearing that one would never use a sword again because of one of the criminals in the Rukongai? He had to take retribution. And yet, the teacher in him saw something when he approached Yachiru Unohana. And she recognized something in him as well. He saw someone whose path was "survival," and she saw someone whose path was "living." He had a purpose beyond just existence.
They did not clash blades on their first meeting, only words. Thought it was a hard-won battle, Yamamoto was victorious. His prize was giving her the chance to find a reason to live. Yachiru did not join the Genji school, but she did watch. She learned from the various combatants of the time there without clashing blades. She would then leave for months or years on end, continue her survival and seek the promised "reason." She fought many during this time—quite a few of whom would later become comrades, including Kanae Nagoshi and Danjirō Obana. And after each major fight, she'd return to watching the Genji School to see if she could glimpse at how to gain that "reason."
- Founding of the Gotei:
- Yachiru respected Yamamoto because he had found a "reason" himself, and that was why she was the first approached by him with his grand "plan." More than one of his students had been wrangled into some criminal scheme. Others were going out and proclaiming themselves to be conquering warlords. He was growing weary of such trivialities such as "controlled territory." There needed to be unification, and his desire was to lead this unified front. This front would cleanse the Soul Society of unneeded pride and then protect it. For that, he needed the strongest. Yachiru was an obvious choice.
Thinking perhaps this might lead to her having a "reason," Yachiru accepted. Further recruitment was difficult. At the time, she wasn't too keen on others. She had the thought that it could easily just be the two of them wrangling control. Yamamoto proved her wrong. Join or die was the motto, and although her preference was clear in each interaction with the various personages they approached she'd fall back on Yamamoto's advice and decisions. The two of them culled the weak and uncivilized until their band had its players. Once thirteen of the worst criminals had been gathered under one banner, Yamamoto sent the thirteen guards of his court out to recruit others. They would act semi-independently to enforce order throughout the Soul Society as Captains of what was now the Gotei Thirteen.
The only thing that truly changed, however, was who was in control. Instead of various gangs, it was the Gotei Thirteen. The Nobles were too busy stabbing each other in the back and scheming in order to enforce what needed to be done—and they all seemed to feel that the Gotei's existence was clearing up their schedule for more scheming. And so the Gotei proceeded to cleanse the Rukongai of "criminals" that refused to submit. Their methods were the same—brutal and bloody. The only sense of unity came from the horrifying march of black-clad warriors led by calamities in white.
This was the worst time in the Soul Society's history. The Thirteen Captains were capable of exterminating any threat that glanced with an uncouth look. And what they were capable of, they did. The only pushback came from the Nobles who didn't like it when these "ruffians" would wrinkle carefully-laid plans. Most conflicts that pushed the Gotei in a significant manner was not against other gangs or Hollows, but the ever-present strength of the Nobility.
In order to decisively crush what was the Gotei's biggest threat, Yachiru had been speaking to her Zanpakutō more. She had learned of the terrifying power of Bankai, and she was curious of what hers would be like. Would it be useless like her Shikai? Would it just be a bigger version of it? She pushed her Zanpakutō to reveal its secrets—and so it opened up, literally. The battle with Minazuki to unlock her Bankai sent a rush through her like she had not felt in years. It was similar to that same bliss she felt when fighting on the edge. And she was ready to march against the Nobility whenever they pushed back just a little too much. That was until the first Quincy invasion.
Although the Seireitei burned, the Captains initially held back. It wasn't out of boredom or fear. Many wanted to see what their subordinates were capable of. As it turned out, not as much as they would have liked. Yachiru was already growing tired of dull combat. The ones who might have been enjoyable to clash blades with were comrades-in-arms. Although she would not weep if any of them died, she still sought her "reason" alongside them. That was the only reason she did not turn on the other Captains—aside from her respect for Yamamoto and what he had formed.
But during the invasion, Yachiru's opinion further soured. Her subordinates were fighting, yes, but they were losing. Losing meant the chance of her never finding that "reason." All thirteen Captains arrived in unison with Yamamoto's command to march. It was a slaughter. A handful of Captains were injured, and so she used her Shikai to heal their disgusting wounds caused by the truly unworthy. Seeing the attack of the Quincy as a threat to peace and as a slap to the face, the Gotei Thirteen decided to do what they do best: murder.
Yachiru and the other twelve Captains proceeded to hunt down and eliminate any and all Quincy they could find. When they swept through, they did not leave survivors. There were no "prisoners of war," as this wasn't a "war." It was "protection." Any and all Quincy were valid targets for extermination. It wasn't until that time spent hunting down stragglers outweighed time spent actually fighting by an almost 10:1 ratio that the Gotei decided to no longer continue. Yachiru had grown battle-weary hunting. No one was challenging enough. There were more women, children, and elderly than there were actual fighters. She was glad to return, as this was not her "reason."
The Nobles had tolerated the Gotei's existence mostly because no two of the Great Noble Houses would be able to agree on what should be done with them. One wanted them eradicated, one wanted them to exist independently as-is, etc. It wasn't until after the first Quincy blood war that they came to some sort of agreement. The Nobles requested the Gotei's help in rebuilding and acting "impartially" to enforce order, and so what would become Central 46 was established in order to act as oversight. In truth, it was more of an official way of communicating between the "ruling class" and the dangerous criminals without the Nobles getting their hands publicly dirty. With both the Nobles and Rukongai citizens thankful of their saviors, there was a time of peace during the rebuilding of the scorched Seireitei.
This peacetime further worsened Yachiru's own feeling of weariness. She had spent decades upon decades trying to find a "reason." She had spent so long searching with a blood-soaked blade to find someone who might spark that for her. And yet, none did. She did not enjoy the peacetime, but what did she enjoy anymore? Even the war against the Quincy wasn't enough...
During this peacetime, her original comrades-in-arms disappeared. Some died. others retired, and one in particular was arrested for murdering another Captain. There was an official explanation—but Yachiru felt she might have understood a different motive behind the incident. She was admittedly unsure of the new peace the Gotei had forged. Her suspicion was that Kanae had felt the same way, but that it ended up affecting Kanae with greater intensity. So much so that this peace had driven her to a psychotic break. Yachiru never got a chance to confirm her suspicions before Kanae was imprisoned. It became a thought that lingered with her for many years to come—the worry that if she let the peace become a burden and not a goal, she too might break.
It was this same peacetime that sent Yachiru into a hunt for someone stronger. In some ways, she wanted to die. She had lost joy in the one thing that had been an endless spring of jubilation. She faced other challenges, but it wasn't quite enough. The battles ended too quickly. A Captain at the time was experimenting on how to heal more effectively—he was, in some ways, an embodiment of what was supposed to come out of the ashes of war. She learned from him in order to prolong her fights. She would heal herself if a fight got too boring, but would also heal the opponent if the fight was enjoyable. But eventually, all fights ceased to fill the aching void.
Then, she met that child. It was the Zaraki District, the worst of the worst. Even with the strengthened patrols, crime ran rampant. Yachiru ordered her men to clear out whatever ruffians they could find. Her Lieutenant at the time understood what this really meant—find someone capable of being an interesting fight. She was so distracted with her own emptiness that she did not notice a mountain of corpses during her part of this "cleanup operation." Atop the mountain was a child. It wasn't the first child to raise a weapon against her, but that child was the first to wound her.
But as the two fought, something shifted within Yachiru. She felt it with the growing number of strikes. The two clashed and spread apart. They both bled, but she realized something before he did. Yachiru was about to kill a child. She was ready to kill a child. She wanted to kill a child. She had been uneasy about the peace and the changing Gotei. She had been craving something beyond a good opponent. And now, one of the lives that the Gotei was now trying to protect was about to be snuffed out because she was feeling bored and filled with bloodlust?
Yachiru stared in disgust and horror at that child As the pride and bloodlust faded, Yachiru felt she might have found that "reason." She cast multiple Bakudō on that child to keep him down. When her Lieutenant asked what to do with him, she said that he was to be left alone. He was not worth being killed yet. He had led her to her "reason." Even though he was in the roughest part of the Rukongai, that child might one day be a great man—one without the shackles of corpses born of boredom. Another generation was to be the one to get the Gotei into the vision Yamamoto had, not theirs.
- The Cancerous Peace:
- Yachiru did not approach that child again. Instead, she redoubled her efforts on learning how to heal. She would foster growth. Yachiru passed on the title of "Kenpachi" to her Lieutenant shortly after her encounter with that child. After doing so, she transferred out of the Eleventh Division and into the Fourth Division. It had recently been made vacant by the departure of her Kaidō teacher.
For many decades, Yachiru continued using the same name. However, it drew a bad reputation for a division specializing in the saving of lives rather than the taking of them. Upon not-so-subtle pressure from Central 46, she returned to using her birth name of Retsu. Retsu Unohana soon became more well-known than Yachiru Unohana as the Gotei Thirteen further weeded out the ruffians that knew who she was. She made genuine connections with other Captains over the following centuries. From learning proper ikebana thanks to Ginrei Kuchiki or learning how to properly interact with subordinates from Jūshirō Ukitake, Retsu seemed to find peace enjoyable. Fun fact, it was the latter's idea for her to start braiding her hair in front—her scar and general demeanor made people (himself included) feel uneasy.
Retsu served as dutiful Captain under Yamamoto during the long eras of peace. There were only a few times where she considered returning to any semblance of her old ways. The first was when Shinji Hirako and others Hollowfied and became Vizards. There was a brief time she was ready to fight against the other former Captains if they tried to do the same thing that the Quincy had done centuries before. That thankfully never came to fruition. The second came when Kenpachi Kiganjō was killed by that child. Yamamoto was ready to have her teach him and prepare him fully, but Central 46's interjection put a stop to that.
It was during the period between the second and third temptation that Retsu made the first deep connection with another. After her Lieutenant Seinōsuke Yamada was poached from the Gotei, she was tasked with finding a replacement. She had kept Yamada close because his personality made her uneasy. She was concerned with what he may do with a looser leash. This time, there was no one that needed that kind of guidance.
After the second temptation, Retsu knew she'd one day have to return to being "Yachiru". And when she did, someone would need to be able to take her place as "Retsu." There was only one choice in her mind. She had a well-mannered, tall young woman who had been steadily rising through the ranks of the Fourth Division. What caught Retsu's eye about her was that to most, she'd seem like a pushover—someone too kind to say no. Not only would she say no, she'd give them the nicest "talking to" someone other than Retsu could give. This was Isane Kotetsu.
Retsu selected Isane even though there were others that may have been stronger or more diligent simply because Isane was someone she could shape into the ideal replacement for when "Retsu" had to disappear. Their relationship through the next century was mentor and student, mother and daughter, and at times sisters. Retsu gently coerced Isane to keep up with her in speed. This was not just speed in getting from patient to patient, but also speed in treating them. In some ways, she trained Isane to fill gaps that she herself had formed over the years. Isane had the potential to be just as skilled as she was while also being faster. It would just take time to foster that talent.
Aside from training Isane to inherit her position in the event of catastrophe, Retsu was able to relax around her. Isane was soon one of the only people aside from older Captains and Shinigami to see the scar on her chest. To this day, Isane is the only living Shinigami aside from that child who knows the full story behind the scar. It was one night after Isane had a nightmare and the two were sitting and relaxing that she told the story.
Retsu told Isane the truth of the foundation of the Gotei and the title of "Kenpachi." And once she was done, she explained why she had chosen Isane. That eventually both titles would be passed on. There was a tense moment as Retsu gently said "I truly hope you do not hate me for that." It wasn't a threat—she genuinely did not want Isane to hate her. Although Yamamoto was someone she respected, she had grown to respect the opinion of her Lieutenant. Isane responded that she did not hate her, but that she hated that Retsu was carrying the burden alone. That it wasn't fair for someone who had grown to be so kind to burdened with such great sadness. After that day, Retsu no longer carried her own sword. She decided that if she needed to return to the Old Ways, she'd first seek Isane's approval.
The third temptation to return was not during the incident with Sōsuke Aizen in what would later become known as the Winter War. She knew that she could possibly be the worst weapon on their side during that conflict. She might have been able to break free of his Zanpakutō's effect, but how much damage might she cause? She long-since cared for her Division and those that served under Yamamoto's reason. She could not forgive herself if she killed an ally—and Yamamoto agreed with that sentiment. He said that in the end, there was little to worry about other than the Gotei's bruised pride in the end. They would succeed in the end, but it would lead to further catastrophe...
Following the Winter War, Retsu focused on treating the severely wounded. This continued as what would later become World War Three broke out. Retsu felt it to be a repeat of the Aizen situation and as such did not treat it with the respect it deserved. She was caught off-guard when Yamamoto took to the frontlines himself and perished. Even though he took the foe known as Ender down, it was at a great cost. Retsu had lost the only person she could speak of "the old days" to—the only other who knew of her "reason" aside from Isane.
- Until Now:
- It was a time of great sorrow following World War Three. Tsubaki Koezuka was Yamamoto's successor—and Retsu had no strong opinions on the woman. That was until Tsubaki approached her. Tsubaki had felt something building up, and requested the two speak. It was a conversation that Tsubaki didn't know the backstory of. The only thing she got out of it was that it almost seemed like Retsu wanted to follow Yamamoto. "He's gone. Don't let what he left behind go too." It was a cheesy, almost-nothing line from the new Captain-Commander that resonated with Retsu. Yamamoto had left the Gotei—and thus, he had left her.
Retsu continued to practice as she had been, and although there was a new threat in the form of Demons it took time before another true threat reared its ugly head. In that lull, she wasn't the only one who found herself feeling like she was just biding her time. Other Captains left and disappeared. One of them was that child. Their relationship had been professional (as it could) during their time as "comrades-in-arms." However, Retsu had been one of the opponents of his becoming Captain. She had voiced many a strong opinion to Yamamoto, but he said his hands were effectively tied. The tradition set forth by her successor was still to be followed. She viewed (and still views) that child[/i] as a reminder of past mistakes and a symbol of a Gotei that should not be in the modern day.
When [b]that child left the Gotei, Retsu felt both relief and apprehension. No longer was he shackled by oversight, but his absence should help the Gotei's image. And while his absence did, others did not. That child would not be the last of the battle-hungry, blood-seeking Captains, Lieutenants, and other officers. Some were being lauded, but none were being truly villified. Seeing such actions being praised had her faith in the Gotei waver. Should she continue to try to foster growth here? Should she set out and repeat what Yamamoto did and clean up the acts of others herself? Was it even her place to realign the Gotei?
Retsu was stuck on those questions for years without meaningful answers. She saw the Gotei weaken and strengthen—flexing to critical points at both ends, and yet, she didn't have the same spark she felt. Perhaps she had lost it as she focused on raising her successor. This embittered her as years continued to pass by with no meaningful change. She became depressed as her reason seemed to vanish. When she realized that she had begun thinking of dying, Retsu knew it was time for a change. She wasn't ready to die just yet though she didn't understand why.
Retsu left the Gotei years before the start of World War IV. If asked today if she regrets it, she'll simply state "If I knew the future, I believe I would have made the world a better place." She initially opened a clinic in the District 1 North, and it was highly successful. She still found satisfaction in providing medical care and desired to continue. During World War IV, her clinical duties expanded as owners of other clinics weren't capable of treating the wounded in a satsifactory manner and as time went on, she became the owner of many of these clinics. Although she may only visit one once a month personally, many took solace in knowing it was one of her clinics. This would lead her to her current situation.
Near the end of the war, Retsu was allowed to travel to the World of the Living as a "specialized contractor" to provide immediate medical aid to Shinigami. One of these Shinigami happened to be a nobleman. Upon his recovery, he presented Retsu with an offer. She could become the general director of the Shino-Seyakuin. This hospital was mostly used by nobles, but other affluent members of society attended. They needed a true genius of a doctor, and she had worked with the soon-to-be-assistant director before. She accepted the position on the grounds that she would continue her clinic work, as blue bloods weren't the only ones who needed help. In truth, Retsu was one of those she spoke of. She just didn't know she needed it...
NATURAL AND RACIAL ABILITIES
» Former Captain: Including below, it can not be understated that Retsu was a founding Captain of the Gotei Thirteen—and one of the strongest remaining to this day. She was around for the four styles of Shinigami combat (the zankensoki) to be formalized into what they are today. She even provided guidance on what should and should not be formalized when the Genji School turned into the Shin'ō Academy. Because of her years upon years of combat against all manner of beings, Retsu is an overall skilled combatant and teacher, which has resulted in her being one of the most respected Captains in the history of the Gotei Thirteen.
» Immense Reiryoku: Retsu has tremendous amounts of Reiryoku. As a founding member of the Gotei Thirteen, she was already capable of holding her own against Genryūsai Yamamoto, Kanae Nagoshi, and other formidable foes. And since then, she has only refined her Reiryoku. From efficiency to expanding the "tanks," Retsu enhanced how she uses Reiryoku to prolong fights. Adding an efficiency boost to an already-strong being allows her to fight for prolonged periods without running out of Reiryoku. Retsu's Reiatsu is also refined. She has no need of large, wide pulses usually. Instead, she has similar control to that of the former head-captain's—as she can easily put the fear of God into others with a focused glare.
» Warrior's Physique: Retsu, despite finding herself more in an office or operating room than on the battlefield, has not let her body wane. Despite being a woman of slight stature, she has fought men and Hollows of much larger stature. She utilizes her Reiryoku to make up for her smaller body, but there is still a physicality her lifestyle demands. She can lift and carry multiple patients if need be (although, again, her stature might not allow for it). More importantly, she can still wield her sword with the same strength and finesse that earned her the title "Yachiru."
» Kidō Expert: Retsu did not raise the Eleventh Division to hate Kidō. When she found out about the shift in philosophy, she actually felt pity. Kidō is just another tool in the battlebox. As such, she is capable of utilizing high-level Kidō (both Bakudō and Hadō) with ease and without incantation. But, in truth, her skill with Kidō truly comes from Kaidō and not combat utilizations.
»» Kaidō Master: There are few individuals that rival Retsu's skill in healing (let alone surpass her), and even fewer can compare to her skill with Kaidō—healing kidō. Having learned both standard healing techniques and Kaidō from future Zero Division member Tenjirō Kirinji, it's no surprise that she is skilled beyond most others. However, she has a flaw in her Kaidō—something no others aside from the Tenjirō know. She sought to learn Kaidō in order to prolong fights. She sought it to heal herself, not others. Thus, although she can perform Kaidō to the point of healing fatal wounds on others, she is almost twice as skilled at healing herself. Although it is clearly Kaidō, when Retsu heals herself it is almost as if she is regenerating.
» Lifesaver: To say that Retsu Unohana is "just" a healer is just like saying she's "just" a swordswoman. She's an expert in anatomy to the point that she saw something amiss with Sōsuke Aizen's decoy "body" and was able to deduce that whatever the "body" was. it wasn't Aizen. She can apply her knowledge of healing to other races as well—from humans to Arrancar, and likely even Danava (although she has yet to practice on them). She has an encyclopedic knowledge of diseases and toxins that allows her to treat almost any medical condition. And although she is skilled with Kaidō, she understands that it isn't always the best path to recovery and will combine Kaidō with traditional herbal remedies as well as modern medicine.
YACHIRU 八千流
That which earned her the title of "Kenpachi."
Retsu Unohana named herself "Yachiru" to represent the countless styles of combat she had mastered—few of which did not involve the sword. In the days of the original Gotei and even before, it could be said that she had mastered "all" of the styles. She had a knack for understanding combat styles and replicating them. This allowed her to practice with styles that others might even have considered personal. But once they fought Retsu, it became hers too. She would practice the various styles on new opponents, allowing her to see the limitations in real combat while also giving her opponent a slight handicap. Only when things were serious did she resort to the "tried and true."
It would be impossible to list every style she knows or at least understands, but it should suffice to say that she knows the style so long as it was written down or passed down when she was either a criminal or the first Captain of the Eleventh Division. But it wasn't just mastery of styles that earned her moniker. Her overall skill in combat is another big part of it—her mastery of the sword. Retsu has a natural instinct for combat. She can kill just as easily as pupils dilate.
Retsu knows an opponent's reach at a glance (barring strange weapons such as Zabimaru's Shikai), and she can pretty readily gauge an opponent's strength and speed. She can time projectiles to dodge in between them. Most opponents are already at a disadvantage as soon as she engages because she knows them and their combat capabilities almost as well as she knows her own. That is part of why she does not shy away from "crude" tricks.
Retsu fights with any weapon given to her. She knows the spear, the bow, the sword, the dagger, the club—the list goes on. And if it is a tool that will help her achieve victory, she will use it. She will throw hidden daggers, kick sand, and strike with bare fists if need be. Although she is far better with a sword than any other weapon, she doesn't dare hamper herself by only sticking with one. Those that do not adapt to combat and utilize whatever tool they have are not taking it seriously enough and are not worth true battle.
To sum it up, Retsu earned her title of Yachiru. She earned her title of Kenpachi. She has fought numerous opponents, many at her strength (and a few stronger), and she only has the one scar. She will weave whatever attacks she can in between mixing and matching styles in order to win.
ZANPAKUTŌ
» Zanpakutō Name: Minazuki (肉雫唼)
» Zanpakutō Spirit: Minazuki appears to be a a tall, slender humanoid draped in a green cloak. The cloak hides all identifying features except a row of bone-like bandages across what would be its entire torso. Minazuki remains entirely silent most of the time. If threatened, Minazuki's bandages turn into sword-like ribbons that unravel and strike.
» Inner World: Retsu's inner world is an endless, dark lake. Although figures and shadows are seen within the lake, anyone within her inner world walks gently on the surface as if it were only a thin puddle. A weeping red star illuminates from straight above as red droplets rain down. This causes the lake to ripple red regularly, giving the entire world even more of an eerie feeling.
» Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Minazuki takes the form of a katana (although it is longer and almost resembles a nodachi) with a strong curve along the end half of the blade. It has a golden, oval tsuba with a small yellow gem that seems to change position. She normally carries it slung across her shoulder now, although she used to have others carry her blade at times.
SHIKAI
» Shikai Release Phrase: "Drain." (Shortened from "Drain the Heavens of stars and fill the impurities of Man.")
» Shikai Release Action: To release Minazuki, Retsu draws her sword and calls upon the name. The blade turns fleshy and green before forming into its full appearance. Upon sealing, Minazuki becomes almost liquid-like as it is sucked back into the scabbard.
» Shikai Appearance: Minazuki is perhaps one of the strangest-looking Shikai to exist even to this day. Its appearance is that of a pistachio-green and champagne-yellow, one-eyed manta ray-shaped creature. It can be as small as a puppy or be as large as some private jets. The creature has a wide mouth lined with baleen (whale "teeth"). It can scuttle almost like a crab with its two taloned legs.
» Shikai Abilities: To make Minazuki stranger, this thing flies. It uses Reiryoku to both hover and propel itself not unlike a helicopter. It moves at the speed of a med-evac helicopter at most, but it usually remains much slower. Aside from the unique ability to fly, Minazuki has the ability to provide healing in its stomach. Yes, if you let this thing eat you, you get healed. Up to twelve people can be carried within its stomach at its maximum size—and as it decreases in size, so does its carrying capacity. Within its stomach is a variety of healing liquids. From ground herbal medicines to ointments, the strong medicines within can treat most maladies.
For mechanics' sake, this is split into three "tiers" of medical issues. Tier Three includes light wounds (such as shallow cuts, abrasions, and bruises) and common diseases (such as the flu and allergic reactions). Tier Three are cured within Minazuki's stomach. Minazuki is also capable of providing first aid for Tier Three wounds by licking the affected area with its elongated tongue.
Tier Two includes serious wounds (trauma to non-vital areas, broken or fractured bones, wounds requiring suturing) and severe medical episodes (high blood pressure, vomiting blood, and head injuries). Tier Two are treated within Minazuki's stomach, but treatment is still required outside in a proper medical setting for full recovery.
Tier One includes immediately life-threatening conditions (such as heart attack, stroke, or sepsis), and extreme wounds (such as trauma to vital areas such as the heart or head, mangled or missing limbs, and 2nd degree or higher burns). Tier Three is not cured nor truly "treated" within Minazuki's stomach. Instead, Tier Three are stabilized the best that can be done. Being within Minazuki's stomach does not prevent death due to how it stabilizes patients. The medicines within Minazuki's stomach slow the body's processes down in order to attempt to relocate the wounded to a proper treatment facility.
In terms of poisons and venoms, these can be cleansed within Minazuki's stomach. Non-supernatural (read: naturally-occurring) toxins are treated as a Tier Three. These are easily purged from the body. Toxins created supernaturally (read: by someone's power or some similar method) are treated against Retsu's Spirit Class instead of the patient's when being treated by Minazuki.
BANKAI
» Bankai Name: Minazuki (皆尽)
» Bankai Release Action: Retsu releases Minazuki by first drawing her hand across the blade. As her hand passes over the blade, it becomes coated in thick blood. She continues this motion until she makes a half-circle with the blade. This motion is eased by the harsh curve of Minazuki's sword. After completing that motion, blood pours from Minazuki's blade and from different areas around her as if a sanguine waterfall is forming. As excess blood drips from the blade, it takes the form of a normal-length katana made of the same material.
» Bankai Details: Minazuki is the large pool of blood filled by the initial release. It is also refilled by a thick mist that forms around the user's feet and spreads around her. This mist forms more thickly as it gets further away from the user. As it is constantly being "refilled," it is also constantly expanding. It can spread to a maximum of half of her Spirit Class's effective range, but that takes time. Thankfully, it is always shallow—only a few inches thick at best.
The blood pool can be manipulated with the katana. By dipping the blade in, she can take in and manipulate more of the blood to enhance her combat capabilities. For example, she could take in a large amount to make attacks at range as she either sends blood projectiles or swings a whip-like blade at her opponent. So long as she holds the handle, she can swing the "blade" as she wants to seemingly-freely manipulate the blood into various attacks. However, these attacks are following her sword swings in one way or another—the trick is how much blood she releases and when. This allows her great variety in when her attacks should and would hit. When utilized in attacks, the blood has no "dull" side. Every part of the attack is just as sharp as her blade.
In addition, the blood is infused with the same healing medicines that exist within the Shikai's stomach. This allows for any healing done by Retsu to be doubly effective when utilizing her Bankai—however, it does not take away from the dangers of the blood being utilized as an attack. She can send an arc of blood at an opponent and have it cut them, and as it passes through, the same attack will heal them. This is a Bankai of everlasting battle—for as long as she can keep using it, she could, in theory, keep herself and her opponent alive.
» Bankai Weaknesses:
Release Order: Due to the unique release required for Minazuki, it can not be released from Shikai. Thus, Retsu would have to seal her Shikai and then release her Bankai. This costs valuable time.
Blood Pool: Due to the nature of liquids, the pool works best in enclosed areas. Otherwise, it takes time to form while the mist follows her as she moves around the area. It is also useless in midair unless someone else forms a solid Reiryoku platform over a large enough area. She can leave the pool of course. However, this leaves her with a limited amount of blood before she has to return to replenish her reserves.
Blood*: This blood is said to be the accumulation of all the blood splattered across her blade, but, well, that's just a scare tactic. It's not actually blood, but a liquid with similar consistency and viscosity. It is referred to as blood for clarity.
Taxing: Minazuki is Bankai that is more taxing than just about all others. Although Retsu has large Reiryoku reserves and is good at efficiently expending her energy, it does not change the fact that Minazuki is constantly replenishing itself and expanding. The time she can use her Bankai shortens at a higher rate as it expands.
SKILLS
General Skills
» Durability: B
» Speed: B
» Strength: A
» Soul: S
Will Skills
» Willpower: Advanced
» Deduction: Elite
» Focus: Advanced
Shinigami Skills
» Hoho: Adept
» Kidō: Master
» Zanjutsu: Elite
» Hakuda: Adept
SAMPLE
There was a time when Retsu would have held the old man's hand and told him that it was fine. She would have stood by his side with a warm smile. She would have ensured that the last thing he saw was something comforting. She watched with distant eyes as a bright-eyed intern did it instead. Others might say he did it for her. That was wrong. She saw yet another soon-to-be corpse that had lived a filling life. She simply didn't see the need to lie to him. Things would not be okay. He was leaving his family in a conflict over inheritance. He wouldn't see any of the consequences as he would be reborn through the cycle and into a world that was starting to grow increasingly restless once again.
As always, history was repeating. Retsu almost let out a small sigh as this ceremony was taking too long. He was disconnected from life support. He should have died already. Yet somehow, he still carried on. How? She could likely think of some medical explanation. Something with long words that would mean nothing to anyone aside from a doctor. But she knew why. It was the same reason she kept going. He just didn't want to die yet.
The old man had requested Retsu to be there. He had once served with her in the Fourth Division, but that was long ago. She could remember him—and even things such as his birthday and what he was allergic to. And yet, Retsu didn't understand why she had been requested. She had hoped he would say something, but he didn't. He just smiled as his glazy eyes attempted to focus on her face.
Why? He had seen her since she had left the Gotei. He knew just what kind of person she had become. She wasn't comforting. She didn't have the bedside manners she once did. She was polite still, yes, but she was harsh and cold. There was only one thing that was coming to her mind. One thing still hadn't changed. She still felt a desire to protect her patients. She knew what he was hoping for now.
"Former Thirteenth Seat Eichirō Gotō. You served the Soul Society well during your service in the Gotei Thirteen." Retsu decided to speak the truth. He had mangled his relationship with his family, but as for his service as a Shinigami? He was fine. She could let him have that praise. "But your time now is up. There is nothing more that I can do for you. End your suffering and rest. You deserve it." A small smile formed on his wrinkled lips. He seemed to try to mouth "yes ma'am," but even that was too much. He had been given an order, and he was going to follow it.
Retsu left after his time was called. She didn't need to be in the room with the corpse as it faded away. She didn't feel a need to mourn him. As she was returning to her office, the intern called out. "Madame Director, may I have a word?" She glanced back at the young whelp. "So long as it can happen while we walk."
"Please forgive my bluntness, but why did you say he 'deserved it?' It sounded accusatory..."
"Simply put, he did 'deserve' it. For ill and good, he did deserve to finally rest. He has hurt his family by leaving a poorly written and executed will. Therefore, would it not be right to say that his continued existence would only bring about accusations and further strife? In his condition, he could not have clarified his decisions. Instead, the family would have lingered over an empty shell. They would have only cast blame and ask an unresponsive man questions. How foolish."
"Instead, now they will mourn. They will still be angry, but they have no one to direct their blame towards. They will settle the matter of inheritance without seriously damaging their relationships with one another. If the children are anything like their father, I would argue that the family may come out stronger after this. And that is not to mention his service to the Soul Society through many crises." Retsu turned and looked up at her intern. "Now do you see why such a man 'deserved' his rest and not that he 'earned' it? Earning means that you have done no evils, no wrongs. Such a person does not exist. Thus, we all deserve the rest when our time comes. That man. You. Myself. Everyone."
The intern blinked. He looked somewhat confused, then shook his head. "Ma'am, I mean no disrespect, but I think you're wrong. I believe that he had earned it because he had been a good father—you saw all the flowers he had in his room. Each bouquet was bigger than the last. He may have made his mistakes, but can't we move past them? Your line of thinking is fairly negative. It says that the goods we do don't matter as much as the wrongs."
Retsu's look flattened further. She had once felt some of the same things he said. In fact, her view of Yamamoto was similar to that. Retsu firmly believed that what they did to secure peace in the Soul Society was worth the cost. She couldn't say this intern was entirely wrong. But she also couldn't agree. She had made a mistake years ago, and it was the cause of who she was today. This was especially true once she realized it was a mistake. "Then you are young and naive. You will learn that life is ruled by the mistakes one makes, or you will die ignorant." The intern did not follow as she turned to continue back to her office. She once again was about to save a life that wasn't her own.
PATCH NOTES
6/26: Personality and history adjustments per feedback.
7/2: Changed Minazuki's speed and challenge condition for poisons/toxins per feedback.
7/6: Added skills per approval from Gamma
8/14: Skill System Update
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Re: [Spirit Class 1] Retsu Unohana
Sat Jun 22, 2024 8:49 am
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— Zero mention of Isane at all ???. This is particularly strange to me because even though TYBW Unohana is the primary form of Unohana you've adopted to take. It was Isane who Unohana left her final words in a letter prior to her death match in canon and Isane is implied to be her closest confidant due to understanding what that letter from Unohana meant. Even opting to dismiss Isane in the small details such as Isane carrying her zanpakuto by saying "have others carry it" is strange to me.
— As an aside, the only compulsory part of TYBW to include is that she was Yachiru Unohana and the First Kenpachi.
— There is a lot here that rides on someone making a Kenpachi Zaraki that abides by your application - something they are not required to do - since everything about Kenpachi in TYBW is optional. No one is required to make Kenpachi have been "holding back" or even utilise Yachiru as his zanpakuto spirit.
PERSONALITY
— I do like specifically the take on control and Kenpachi being something that undermined that.
— Refer to the Kenpachi statement from the overall comments.
HISTORY
[PRE-GOTEI]
— Yamamoto giving her asauchi is kind of peculiar. We have no information as to how individuals would've acquired zanpakuto prior to the Gotei Thirteen. However, with Soul Society having a long history I imagine there must be something more reasonable here. Even if that is the nobility acquiring them via connection to the SK and Royal Guard. In the same way it would not make sense for there to not have been previous military organisations operating prior to the Gotei - even if limited to the Seireitei.
— Check with Para, Re: Kanae.
[FOUNDING OF THE GOTEI]
— Yamamoto is painted in an interesting light here. I cannot really see him as a "saviour" especially as TYBW is canon for the forming with all members being ruthless criminals and killers - including himself, and he informs a young Shunsui that he was a "demon" in his younger days. The man comes off more of an eager conqueror that regrets that period of his life in future years rather than a spirited well-meaning man, otherwise why have regrets.
— As a note, I do think you're underselling the nobility. While Chika Shihoin is not canon as he was not established in Kanae's wish to support the argument that the nobility were capable individuals. The established arguments Byakuya presents in the Soul Society arc and further supported by the TYBW arc (as only relevant due to the TYBW elements of this); nobles tend to be stronger with noble houses having higher instances of Bankai and in general more powerful than other souls with most of the shinigami being stated to come from noble houses per Renji and Rukia being discriminated against due to their Rukongai background in the series.
— The First Quincy Blood War was a slaughter.
— It seems peculiar that she would only acquire bankai after the war with the Lichtreich as the one hailed as the most infamous among them and the "Kenpachi" when she's been a captain for hundreds of years at this stage.
[TURN BACK THE PENDULUM]
— For Unohana to have surrendered the Kenpachi title by Turn Back the Pendulum is too late, even if it was a bit before the events of that time period. The Captain of the Eleventh at the time of Turn Back the Pendulum was Kiganjō who was the Tenth Kenpachi.
— Additionally, it is not uncommon for shinigami characters to have been made during this time since it was 100 years before Bleach took place meaning it would be inconsistent for the tradition of "killing the previous Kenpachi" to take root when she discarded her title so late if they are aware of who she is and the fact that she passed it down without dying.
[PH CONTINUITY]
— We sit in an awkward spot since the captain positions had to be mapped out a while back when people were wanting to make former captains. All canon captains needed to justify not continuing their service into the Gotei United due to no one playing them at the time and so original characters filled those spots.
— This is compounded by Unohana historically having been MIA after the events of the Demon Incursion War, and while that can be retroactively dismissed as it was pre-setting adjustment. Unohana would still needed to have stepped down at the end of Iriko's Captain Commander tenure before Ibiki Kenpachi made the Gotei United from what was left of Soul Society's military. Though Iriko's failures and the situation gave enough IC justification that many canons could explain doing so.
[POWERS]
Frankly, this part has very few issues.
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- Minor power stuff
"It moves at Adept speed at most".
Can just be compared to the helicopter analogy, which would technically make it faster than adept with locomotion but lose super fast combat applications, which I feel that is mostly what she uses it for? I don't think we ever see Minazuki actually do anything in combat.
"These are easily purged from the body. Toxins created supernaturally (read: by someone's power or some similar method) are treated against Retsu's Zanjutsu or Spirit Class (whichever is used to counteract the toxin) instead of the patient's when being treated by Minazuki."
Just spirit class.
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Spirit Class: 1
General Skills
» Durability: Adept
» Speed: Adept
» Strength: Advanced
» Martial Skill: Master
Will Skills
» Willpower: Advanced
» Deduction: Elite
» Focus: Advanced
Shinigami Skills
» Hoho: Adept
» Kidō: Master
» Zanjutsu: Elite
» Hakuda: Adept
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Re: [Spirit Class 1] Retsu Unohana
Wed Jun 26, 2024 5:08 pm
Personality: Rewrote most sections to no longer mention Zaraki and instead expanding on why she feels the overall way. The part about Kenpachi being a catalyst that undermined her control has been moved to the history section.
Pre-Gotei:
Changed it from Yamamoto giving her an Asauchi to her being part of a "kill squad" ran by one of the Noble Houses.
Kanae mentions were clarified and rewritten with Paradigm's approval.
Founding of the Gotei
Rewrote first sections to paint Yamamoto less in a passive light and to be more aggressive.
As for the nobles, see above section about her joining a kill squad and the founding of the Gotei. In addition, rewrote the section establishing Central 46.
I wasn't sure on how to rewrite the section on the initial invasion, but the intent was that it was similar to the Battle of Fake Karakura in terms of how long it was.
Changed Bankai learning to being pre-First Blood War. Initial thought was that she didn't need Bankai at that point, but I see now that's a bit silly.
Rewrote section involving the fight with Zaraki. It's now less about him having potential (a la TYBW) and more about her realizing that killing a child because she's bored/full of bloodlust might not be in line with the new Gotei.
Turn Back the Pendulum
Renamed section to "The Cancerous Peace." I had used that title to establish it was in the past, but I realize now that it was going to cause confusion in regards to the timeline. Overall changes include replacement of "years" in various areas to "decades" and "centuries" to establish a longer timeline.
Reworded the first paragraph to be more in line with the rewritten section about Zaraki.
Added section explaining her relationship with Isane.
Until Now
Rewrote middle section to be less Zaraki-centric while also focusing on why she started to lose faith in the Gotei (ironically which started with Zaraki), which led to her leaving pre-WWIV.
Minor rewording of next-to-last paragraph to better show that she left the Gotei pre-WWIV.
Pre-Gotei:
Changed it from Yamamoto giving her an Asauchi to her being part of a "kill squad" ran by one of the Noble Houses.
- Spoiler:
- Two in particular were among the most influential on who Yachiru was and who she would become. The first was what basically amounted to a "kill squad" created by one of the Five Great Noble Families hidden behind multiple intermediaries. The goal of the group was to protect the interests of the family without mercy. Some of these interests were property, some were people. Some were pointless, abstract things like "honor." At the time, ti wasn't the only group like it. The difference was this particular kill squad was given a tool not many had: the Zanpakutō.
The Noble intermediary taught her the basics of how to imprint on it—to share a bit of herself into something greater. She found the idea almost farcical. It would just be another tool to her. That was until she tried Yamamoto's technique and the sword spoke to her. Over the next few years, Yachiru learned more and more about her sword—and eventually learned of its name and what it could do. Although initially very confused at how such a thing was useful in combat, she'd later learn just how important it would be.
But overall, the job was too reactionary for Yachiru. There was death and fighting, yes. There were even challenging foes along the way. But rarely did the group actively seek out the threats. Every time she did proactively hunt a threat down, she'd get chided by the Nobles for "causing disruptions." After getting truly bored with killing the messengers sent to deliver her admonishments, Yachiru had enough. Taking her Zanpakutō, she left that group. She needed something more active and without the politicking.
Kanae mentions were clarified and rewritten with Paradigm's approval.
Founding of the Gotei
Rewrote first sections to paint Yamamoto less in a passive light and to be more aggressive.
- Spoiler:
- Yachiru respected Yamamoto because he had found a "reason" himself, and that was why she was the first approached by him with his grand "plan." More than one of his students had been wrangled into some criminal scheme. Others were going out and proclaiming themselves to be conquering warlords. He was growing weary of such trivialities such as "controlled territory." There needed to be unification, and his desire was to lead this unified front. This front would cleanse the Soul Society of unneeded pride and then protect it. For that, he needed the strongest. Yachiru was an obvious choice.
Thinking perhaps this might lead to her having a "reason," Yachiru accepted. Further recruitment was difficult. At the time, she wasn't too keen on others. She had the thought that it could easily just be the two of them wrangling control. Yamamoto proved her wrong. Join or die was the motto, and although her preference was clear in each interaction with the various personages they approached she'd fall back on Yamamoto's advice and decisions. The two of them culled the weak and uncivilized until their band had its players. Once thirteen of the worst criminals had been gathered under one banner, Yamamoto sent the thirteen guards of his court out to recruit others. They would act semi-independently to enforce order throughout the Soul Society as Captains of what was now the Gotei Thirteen.
The only thing that truly changed, however, was who was in control. Instead of various gangs, it was the Gotei Thirteen. The Nobles were too busy stabbing each other in the back and scheming in order to enforce what needed to be done—and they all seemed to feel that the Gotei's existence was clearing up their schedule for more scheming. And so the Gotei proceeded to cleanse the Rukongai of "criminals" that refused to submit. Their methods were the same—brutal and bloody. The only sense of unity came from the horrifying march of black-clad warriors led by calamities in white.
This was the worst time in the Soul Society's history. The Thirteen Captains were capable of exterminating any threat that glanced with an uncouth look. And what they were capable of, they did. The only pushback came from the Nobles who didn't like it when these "ruffians" would wrinkle carefully-laid plans. Most conflicts that pushed the Gotei in a significant manner was not against other gangs or Hollows, but the ever-present strength of the Nobility.
As for the nobles, see above section about her joining a kill squad and the founding of the Gotei. In addition, rewrote the section establishing Central 46.
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- The Nobles had tolerated the Gotei's existence mostly because no two of the Great Noble Houses would be able to agree on what should be done with them. One wanted them eradicated, one wanted them to exist independently as-is, etc. It wasn't until after the first Quincy blood war that they came to some sort of agreement. The Nobles requested the Gotei's help in rebuilding and acting "impartially" to enforce order, and so what would become Central 46 was established in order to act as oversight. In truth, it was more of an official way of communicating between the "ruling class" and the dangerous criminals without the Nobles getting their hands publicly dirty. With both the Nobles and Rukongai citizens thankful of their saviors, there was a time of peace during the rebuilding of the scorched Seireitei.
I wasn't sure on how to rewrite the section on the initial invasion, but the intent was that it was similar to the Battle of Fake Karakura in terms of how long it was.
Changed Bankai learning to being pre-First Blood War. Initial thought was that she didn't need Bankai at that point, but I see now that's a bit silly.
Rewrote section involving the fight with Zaraki. It's now less about him having potential (a la TYBW) and more about her realizing that killing a child because she's bored/full of bloodlust might not be in line with the new Gotei.
- Spoiler:
Then, she met that child. It was the Zaraki District, the worst of the worst. Even with the strengthened patrols, crime ran rampant. Yachiru ordered her men to clear out whatever ruffians they could find. Her Lieutenant at the time understood what this really meant—find someone capable of being an interesting fight. She was so distracted with her own emptiness that she did not notice a mountain of corpses during her part of this "cleanup operation." Atop the mountain was a child. It wasn't the first child to raise a weapon against her, but that child was the first to wound her.
But as the two fought, something shifted within Yachiru. She felt it with the growing number of strikes. The two clashed and spread apart. They both bled, but she realized something before he did. Yachiru was about to kill a child. She was ready to kill a child. She wanted to kill a child. She had been uneasy about the peace and the changing Gotei. She had been craving something beyond a good opponent. And now, one of the lives that the Gotei was now trying to protect was about to be snuffed out because she was feeling bored and filled with bloodlust?
Yachiru stared in disgust and horror at that child As the pride and bloodlust faded, Yachiru felt she might have found that "reason." She cast multiple Bakudō on that child to keep him down. When her Lieutenant asked what to do with him, she said that he was to be left alone. He was not worth being killed yet. He had led her to her "reason." Even though he was in the roughest part of the Rukongai, that child might one day be a great man—one without the shackles of corpses born of boredom. Another generation was to be the one to get the Gotei into the vision Yamamoto had, not theirs.
Turn Back the Pendulum
Renamed section to "The Cancerous Peace." I had used that title to establish it was in the past, but I realize now that it was going to cause confusion in regards to the timeline. Overall changes include replacement of "years" in various areas to "decades" and "centuries" to establish a longer timeline.
Reworded the first paragraph to be more in line with the rewritten section about Zaraki.
Added section explaining her relationship with Isane.
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It was during the period between the second and third temptation that Retsu made the first deep connection with another. After her Lieutenant Seinōsuke Yamada was poached from the Gotei, she was tasked with finding a replacement. She had kept Yamada close because his personality made her uneasy. She was concerned with what he may do with a looser leash. This time, there was no one that needed that kind of guidance.
After the second temptation, Retsu knew she'd one day have to return to being "Yachiru". And when she did, someone would need to be able to take her place as "Retsu." There was only one choice in her mind. She had a well-mannered, tall young woman who had been steadily rising through the ranks of the Fourth Division. What caught Retsu's eye about her was that to most, she'd seem like a pushover—someone too kind to say no. Not only would she say no, she'd give them the nicest "talking to" someone other than Retsu could give. This was Isane Kotetsu.
Retsu selected Isane even though there were others that may have been stronger or more diligent simply because Isane was someone she could shape into the ideal replacement for when "Retsu" had to disappear. Their relationship through the next century was mentor and student, mother and daughter, and at times sisters. Retsu gently coerced Isane to keep up with her in speed. This was not just speed in getting from patient to patient, but also speed in treating them. In some ways, she trained Isane to fill gaps that she herself had formed over the years. Isane had the potential to be just as skilled as she was while also being faster. It would just take time to foster that talent.
Aside from training Isane to inherit her position in the event of catastrophe, Retsu was able to relax around her. Isane was soon one of the only people aside from older Captains and Shinigami to see the scar on her chest. To this day, Isane is the only living Shinigami aside from that child who knows the full story behind the scar. It was one night after Isane had a nightmare and the two were sitting and relaxing that she told the story.
Retsu told Isane the truth of the foundation of the Gotei and the title of "Kenpachi." And once she was done, she explained why she had chosen Isane. That eventually both titles would be passed on. There was a tense moment as Retsu gently said "I truly hope you do not hate me for that." It wasn't a threat—she genuinely did not want Isane to hate her. Although Yamamoto was someone she respected, she had grown to respect the opinion of her Lieutenant. Isane responded that she did not hate her, but that she hated that Retsu was carrying the burden alone. That it wasn't fair for someone who had grown to be so kind to burdened with such great sadness. After that day, Retsu no longer carried her own sword. She decided that if she needed to return to the Old Ways, she'd first seek Isane's approval.
Until Now
Rewrote middle section to be less Zaraki-centric while also focusing on why she started to lose faith in the Gotei (ironically which started with Zaraki), which led to her leaving pre-WWIV.
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- Retsu continued to practice as she had been, and although there was a new threat in the form of Demons it took time before another true threat reared its ugly head. In that lull, she wasn't the only one who found herself feeling like she was just biding her time. Other Captains left and disappeared. One of them was that child. Their relationship had been professional (as it could) during their time as "comrades-in-arms." However, Retsu had been one of the opponents of his becoming Captain. She had voiced many a strong opinion to Yamamoto, but he said his hands were effectively tied. The tradition set forth by her successor was still to be followed. She viewed (and still views) that child[/i] as a reminder of past mistakes and a symbol of a Gotei that should not be in the modern day.
When [b]that child left the Gotei, Retsu felt both relief and apprehension. No longer was he shackled by oversight, but his absence should help the Gotei's image. And while his absence did, others did not. That child would not be the last of the battle-hungry, blood-seeking Captains, Lieutenants, and other officers. Some were being lauded, but none were being truly vilified. Seeing such actions being praised had her faith in the Gotei waver. Should she continue to try to foster growth here? Should she set out and repeat what Yamamoto did and clean up the acts of others herself? Was it even her place to realign the Gotei?
Retsu was stuck on those questions for years without meaningful answers. She saw the Gotei weaken and strengthen—flexing to critical points at both ends, and yet, she didn't have the same spark she felt. Perhaps she had lost it as she focused on raising her successor. This embittered her as years continued to pass by with no meaningful change. She became depressed as her reason seemed to vanish. When she realized that she had begun thinking of dying, Retsu knew it was time for a change. She wasn't ready to die just yet though she didn't understand why.
Minor rewording of next-to-last paragraph to better show that she left the Gotei pre-WWIV.
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- Retsu left the Gotei years before the start of World War IV. If asked today if she regrets it, she'll simply state "If I knew the future, I believe I would have made the world a better place." She initially opened a clinic in the District 1 North, and it was highly successful. She still found satisfaction in providing medical care and desired to continue. During World War IV, her clinical duties expanded as owners of other clinics weren't capable of treating the wounded in a satsifactory manner and as time went on, she became the owner of many of these clinics. Although she may only visit one once a month personally, many took solace in knowing it was one of her clinics. This would lead her to her current situation.
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Re: [Spirit Class 1] Retsu Unohana
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