Ki Drache

That means he is fan art. Now, fix the other details on your app, and post when you have done so. I'll get to re-checking it after that.

alright, i think i fixed the abilities, i wanna get those checked before i put it in the spell check.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]* Check Notes
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]
  

Comments/Notes: The fourth ability is iffy to me, because it means that if you get to tier 0, you'll be able to keep that for some 15+ post. I would make 8 or 10 posts the maximum amount of time for that power, because otherwise it is God Mod, by always being in a power increase, and having an instant cast for your skills all the time.

Also, fix that RP Sample. It's still too short

Tier: Incomplete

no, it doesnt increase after tier two.
so 8posts would be its maximum

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: Accepted, although arrancars Cannot Join the Gotei, the Gotei wants nothing to do with them

Tier: 2-3+

awww, do i have to change my bio then?

No, you'll just get denied if you try to join.

Received Permission from Kano; Moving to Archives