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[Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Tue Feb 14, 2023 11:37 am
THE SHINIGAMI APPLICATION
I. Basic Information
» Name: Fuurinji Wakaba
» Alias: None
» Age: 354
» Gender: Female
» Association: Gotei 13, specifically 7th Squad Captain Saijin Komamura
» Appearance Written: Boasting soft, round facial features and long, blonde hair, Fuurinji’s outward features bely her true abilities. Her body, lithe as it is, is toned and well defined underneath her Shihakushō, allowing for great bursts of speed and strength that many are surprised by when first encountering her.
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I. Personality
» Personality: Since she was a child, Fuurinji was always a kind and gentle soul. She disliked violence and, along with her love of all things sweet, she loved playing, eating Ramen, and especially Sake. As with most Shinigami, she has an undying hate for hollows of any kind but most particularly the Gillian-class Hollow. Overall, a very kind individual, she spends most of her days either training or running errands for those of a higher rank than herself. The only exception to this is when she’s on patrol, for which she tries her best to act as a leader when she can and very heavily takes after Komamura Taicho in how she treats others.
Due to her kind nature, she can tend to come off as aloof or naïve at times, even if it is untrue most of the time. She tries to treat her fellow Shinigami, even those she doesn’t like, with the same level of respect that she does with a Taicho. As a result, there is never a time where she is intentionally disrespectful towards her fellow Shinigami, though the same cannot be said for those who are not. Because of this, those who are not a Shinigami, Soul or Straight Human are despised with great prejudice. While Hollows are by far her most hated thing in existence, there is one other that comes close as well… A Quincy.
Since the time of the Quincy Massacre, which happened around when she was first entering the Shinigami Academy, her hatred for Quincy’s has never diminished. While it might seem obvious given that most all Shinigami feel this way, she holds a special place for them as she attributes the death of her mother to that of a Quincy. While she takes out Hollows and Mod Souls mostly because it is her duty to help cleanse their soul, A Quincy is the only type of being she would kill because she wanted too.
I. History
» History: EARLY DAYS
- Life before the Academy:
- When Fuurinji Wakaba was first conceived, her family lived in the first district of the Rukongai, the Junrinan district. It was a quiet little shack where she lived, and in the beginning, everything seemed to be going great. In her family, it was her mother, Otawa, her Father, Junni, and her Sister, Ikiba. They lived a simple yet fun life in the Junrinan district and as the years passed and Fuurinji got older they began to notice that she was... different from the rest. She possessed what the Shinigami called 'Reiatsu' and had the ability to control it, though she didn't realize it herself at first it wasn't until she was around the age of 43 that she realized they were speaking the truth. It was a quiet day, and she was out playing with her sister, Ikiba, near the edge of the first and second districts. This was where they normally played, though when the sky began to darken, they feared a storm was about to set in and decided to return home as quickly as they could. Unfortunately, the storm began before they could even get halfway home... And that's when she heard it, a terrifying and deafening roar. When she looked back, she'd seen Ikiba had fallen so she ran back to help. By the time she got her to her feet, she looked up and saw it... A massive, towering creature right in front of them. As she looked up, her eyes got locked in with the monsters red glowing eyes and she felt herself choke up for but a moment. That's when she pushed her sister back and stood in front of her, she raised her hands up in a wide cross shape as she shouted at the monstrosity that she'd die before she let this thing harm her sister. That's when its mouth opened and she saw a large red energy being pulled towards it to create a massive red sphere. As it fired, the only thing that went through Fuurinji's mind was that no matter how strong this was... She would not back down, she wouldn't die here. This thing couldn't even touch her! As it got closer and closer, she saw it, something raced in front of it. It was much smaller than the creature, and wore some kind of black garb… It was a Shinigami. As the red sphere smashed against the sheathe of his Zanpakuto she couldn't help but see this in slow motion... Shock, Surprise, Admiration... Nothing could describe how she saw that moment.
As the mystery person spun around, their movement seemed to flow with the wind as he pulled his Zanpakuto from its sheath just as the red mass of energy vanished. She watched as he said something... Too fast for her to comprehend but she watched as their Zanpakuto was pulled and sliced straight through the head of the creature. For her, it seemed like minutes had passed but despite this, it had all happened so fast that by the time she'd realized the man had left it'd been almost 5 minutes later... And he was only there for a few seconds in reality. She hadn't even really realized what'd happened... But she knew that her feeling, that this thing wouldn't get past her... Wouldn't even touch her... Was it because she knew this man was coming to save her? No... This'd been the first time she'd ever seen him... It couldn't have been that. But then why? How did she know she wouldn't be killed? That's when she noticed the wind was blowing at a surprisingly calm pace past her despite it being storming almost everywhere else. It was from then on, that she had sworn to herself and her family, that she'd become a Shinigami, she'd find that mysterious man... And she'd pledge her very life to him. She would repay him for saving the life of herself, but most importantly her sister’s life. From that day forward, she practiced trying to manifest this 'Reiatsu' so she could attempt to join the Shinigami Academy and hopefully become a Shinigami.
It was some time before she was finally accepted into the Academy to begin her training as a Shinigami, tragedy would rear its ugly head once more, while none save for Fuurinji was in any way a Shinigami it didn't take one to find things by mistake. Otawa was the more explorative of her and Junni, and finding odds and ends of all kinds was something of a specialty of hers. One such relic that she found was a half broken cross, a cross that bore a striking resemblance to that of the Quincy's Kuinshī Kurosu. Otawa had discussed with Junni about keeping or selling it, though truth be told they knew of nobody would would want to buy such a thing. Junni insisted that she get rid of it, whether it be selling it or simply tossing it, believing that having something of the Quincies did naught but invite bad omens. However Otawa refused, wanting to keep it like she had many other random trinkets she found in her time.
Perhaps it might've been wise to listen to Junni. Otawa fell ill a few weeks after finding the relic, and though Fuurinji was training to become a Shinigami it afforded them no additional help in diagnosing the illness or determining its true cause. Otawa eventually succumbed to her illness a few weeks later, the cause still unknown. Junnin and Ikiba blamed the illness on the relic and Junnin wanted desperately to simply discard the relic far from their shack, and while he did bury it far away one couldn't truly call it being discarded.
He placed it within a silver lined box on the edge of the district as close to the the Seireitei as he could, hoping that the powers of the Shinigami would prevent whatever malignant curse remained on the object from harming others. At the very least, he managed to get word to Fuurinji about Otawa's death, blaming it entirely on the Quincies and the broken cross her Mother had found.
- Life At The Academy:
- When the news came to Fuurinji, she'd be in the Academy for but a month and... truth be told she nearly gave up, the news of her Mothers death alone shattered her to her core. That she hadn't known that she was even ill before she passed alone left a deep guilt within her, to feel that she should've known somehow. But the more she thought about what her Father said, and how he said it... Her grief quickly turned to almost pure rage. The Quincies, thought to be unable to touch them within the sanctity of Soul Society... had taken her Mother from her without her even knowing until it had already happened.
As the rage bubbled within her it nearly consumed her entirely, while Hollows were terrible monsters... Quincies were something wholly different, and no matter what... they needed to be wiped out. With her mind set, and the fire of determination rekindled, she strove forth within the Academy with renewed vigor. With this rekindled flame, She seemed to always have a calm breeze both follow her, come before her, and remain for seemingly hours at a time. Even in a raging storm, the wind around her seemed to simply refuse to change. In her studies, she learned that there were 2 things about Zanpakuto that were supposedly almost nigh impossible to witness. A Zanpakuto without a sealed form, that is to say, the Shinigami's Reiatsu was so massive for their body they simply could not seal their Zanpakuto without killing themselves, and that a Zanpakuto which is a set of two, or a Dual Zanpakuto. They came in both sealed and unsealed forms as she read up on Kyoraku and Ukitake. For Fumiri’s part, these Zanpakuto’s represented a level of power beyond what most could dream of. To say that hearing a Zanpakuto’s voice was an easy task, or even a moderately difficult one would be an understatement. While most of her time spent with her Asauchi was easy enough, just having it with her was generally enough. However, there were a few things she did different than normal, such as in combat. Rather than striking with the blade, she would more often than not use the hilt as a blunt object, and for meditation? Well, that was rare for her to do willingly, as her formative years were spent as restless as the wind itself. She knew it was needed however, to form a true bond with it required balance in more aspects than just the ones she was comfortable with. To facilitate her meditation, she began to do so wherever she could be free of surroundings. Whether that be in a park, or atop a pillar that put her above the surrounding buildings it didn’t matter to her. For her, it seemed she just needed to be somewhere that she could feel the breeze. It was then that she found herself finally calm during her meditation and no longer restless. While she’d finally found a way to meditate without restlessness, it still took her longer than she’d like to admit before she finally heard the voice of her Zanpakuto, or rather voices. For much like wind there were two sides, a gentle breeze and a tempestuous storm.
After hearing her Zanpakuto’s voices for the first time, her eagerness to get stronger only grew in its intensity, some might even say she became a bit… too eager. This manifested itself during the middle of an intense and extensive training session with a fellow Shinigami. The two of them had been sparring for hours, and Fuurinji was determined to prove herself as a skilled and powerful fighter.
As the training session wore on, Fuurinji began to tire but refused to simply yield. She felt her energy waning, and her focus slipping. Nevertheless, she refuses to back down. She wanted to show her fellow Shinigami that she's capable of pushing herself to the limit and beyond. As they continue to spar, Fuurinji decided to try using the Kido Enkosen, one that was beyond her proficiency but not excessively so, to deflect one of her opponent's attacks. While she hadn’t ever used it before, she was confident in her ability to control the Kido.
However, in her over eagerness to impress her opponent, she made a crucial mistake. She focused too much of her spiritual energy into the Kido, causing it to become more powerful than she intended. The shield shimmers into existence in front of her, but instead of deflecting the attack, it backfires. The Reiatsu that make up the shield suddenly explode outward, slicing through the air and slicing through everything nearby including herself.
At first, she didn’t realize what happened. She felt a sharp pain in her eyes, but assumed it was just a momentary discomfort. However, as the seconds tick by and the pain intensifies, she began to realize the extent of the damage. She felt a sense of panic and fear rising in her chest. Her eyes weren’t closed, yet all she could truly see at first was a black void around her. She could hear her fellow Shinigami rushing to her side, helping her to a nearby medical facility where she could receive treatment. However, despite the best efforts of the medical staff, her eyes are too damaged to be healed completely. She was left permanently blind, her dreams of becoming a powerful Shinigami forever altered by her over eagerness to impress those around her.
After this experience it took her awhile before she began to train again with any hint of fervor that she once did, while she still stayed in the academy to become a true Shinigami she learned a powerful lesson right then and there… moderation in everything and while it didn’t cause a permanent rift between the fledgling Shinigami and her Zanpakuto’s it did take awhile for either of them to be willing to actively speak to her without an enormous effort from Fuurinji.
As she struggled to restore the bond with her Zanpakuto Spirits, she turned to the ancient practice of Tai Chi for guidance. Tai Chi being a martial art that emphasizes balance, harmony, and fluidity of movement she hoped to find a way to bring balance to her soul and reconnect with her Zanpakuto Spirits.
The first step in this process was to learn the basic movements of Tai Chi. Fuurinji spent hours studying and practicing the different postures and forms, carefully observing the fluidity and grace of the movements. She took her time, focusing on each movement and breathing deeply as she goes.
As she became more comfortable with the basics, Fuurinji began to incorporate her Zanpakuto into her Tai Chi practice. She visualizes her Zanpakuto as an extension of herself, moving in harmony with her body and breath. This was the first way for her to begin reconnecting with her Spirits and to begin the process of restoring the bond between them.
Over time, her Tai Chi practice became more advanced. She begins to incorporate more complex forms and movements, pushing herself to new levels of physical and mental strength. As she does, she felt a growing sense of harmony and balance within herself, as well as a deepening connection with her Zanpakuto Spirits.
At first, the bond with her Zanpakuto Spirits is still tenuous. But as she continued to practice and to focus on bringing balance to her soul, she began to feel a renewed sense of connection with her Spirits. They speak to her more clearly, and she is able to communicate with them in a way she never could before.
In the end, through her practice, she realizes that Tai Chi was the key to restoring the bond with her Zanpakuto Spirits. Through the practice of this ancient martial art, she was able to find balance and harmony within herself, and to reconnect with the Zanpakuto Spirits that are so crucial to her role as a Shinigami.
With their connection restored, she knew her next step was that of achieving Shikai which requires her to harmonize with her Zanpakuto Spirits and communicate with them on a much deeper, spiritual level. She spent days meditating and practicing, seeking to establish a powerful bond with her Zanpakuto. Finally, after much effort, she feels a powerful resonance building between them.
As the bond deepens, your character begins to hear whispers of her Zanpakuto Spirits' true nature and desires. She listens carefully, seeking to understand them fully. She begins to communicate with them, offering words of encouragement and support, and sharing her own fears and hopes.
As she spends more time with her Zanpakuto Spirits, she began to earn their trust. They sense her sincerity and dedication, and they begin to open up to her. After she finally earned their trust, she was granted access to the Inner World of her Zanpakuto’s, a surreal landscape that reflected the essence of their being.
In the Inner World, she continued to harmonize and communicate with her Zanpakuto Spirits. She explored the world, seeking to understand its many mysteries, and to unravel the secrets of her Zanpakuto's true power. It was strange for her however, as the world at first seemed to shift and change seemingly at random. But as she learned more of her Zanpakuto Spirits, she learned that its shape was influenced by not just who her Zanpakuto Spirits were, but that of her very soul.
As she continued to communicate and harmonize with her Zanpakuto Spirits, she began to hear the faintest whispers of her Shikai. As her curiosity continued to drive her, her interactions became more… natural. While words were more readily exchanged with Soyokaze, Kamikaze took a more engaging approach in the form of battle. While Soyokaze sought to ensure she understood mentally and spiritually, Kamikaze sought to ensure she was physically ready to handle that which she and all Shinigami at the academy desired. With the rift cleared and their trust and her sincerity solidified, it was only then that they had taught her not only the motions to release her Shikai, but its release phrase as well “Whirl and Howl”.
"Heroes are made by the path they choose, not by the power they're graced with."
"When you dodge, don't let them hit you! When you protect, don't let them die! And when you attack, Kill!"
"You should learn this well. Admiration, is the emotion farthest from comprehension."
"Fight! It doesn't matter how terrifying the world is! Fight! It doesn't matter how cruel the world is! Fight! Fight! Fight!"
But the most important thing she ever taught him was; "People truly become strong when they wish to protect something they cherish."
Those words that her mother told her, those few important lessons. If she should remember her by nothing else, she asked that these be the thing she's remembered for. While Fuurinji would never forget her mother, she swore to her that she'd always remember those stories and words. As she advanced through the Shinigami Academy, she could notice the fluctuations in her own Reiatsu and learned to control it to some extent though she knew she'd never have full control over it, so she often wore a limiter for herself simply to stabilize the fluctuations in her Reiatsu. It wasn't until one of her patrols in the World of the Living that she realized the true extent of her powers. Fuurinji and her patrol were on the outskirts of one of the outlying Japanese towns when a massive Menos Gillian had appeared, they knew backup wouldn't arrive in time to stop this thing, but they sent someone off regardless. All they had to do was wait for backup and stall this thing until then. They had to keep it away from the city, so that was their plan. Their plan? Distractions!
A Menos Gillian was far beyond any of them to defeat, and so keeping its attention on them was the top priority. Speed was key in this aspect, attacking it directly was out of the question, as a result she couldn’t leave her limiter on and swiftly took it off and tossed it to the side. Could any of them actually harm it? Unlikely, even for Fuurinji who was the strongest of the lot, so to say it was a difficult task to dodge was an understatement. It began releasing Cero after Cero and one by one they were taken out. They simply weren't fast enough to dodge all of them and definitely not strong enough to block those things more than once and even Fuurinji, could tank maybe one or two before she was done in. The struggle was definitely real as it seemed like an eternity as they waited for the backup to arrive, and even for the Cero’s they did dodge the debris that was sent flying posed a danger all by itself. After only a few minutes all, but Fuurinji were laying on the ground too injured to move or dead. Fuurinji was exhausted and to try and block a Cero directly well, she was definitely dead. That is when she heard it, the dread Cero being charged once more. Time was slow for her it seemed, she was close to death and this Cero would either hit the city or kill her in the process. But she couldn't die to a hollow, she couldn't break her promise and oath to her mother. That's when Fuurinji pulled herself to her feet, raising her arms once more in a cross as she gritted her teeth.
"No! You won't have this City even if I have to die in the process! But I promise you this, I will not die to some Monster like you! Whirl and Howl, Muraki Kitakaze!"
As she spoke, she moved the left one above her head with the blade facing downwards, and the right one near to the ground with the blade facing outwards, she then swings them both in their respective directions, A storm kicked up around Fuurinji and circled her as the Cero was fired. Fuurinji, however, stayed her ground. As the Cero neared, a single taloned gauntlet emerged from the swirling storm, smashing into the Cero directly. As the two Reiatsu’s clashed a massive gust of wind was sent out as a shockwave before being sucked back inwards to the impact site between the talons and the Cero. It took but another moment before the Cero was sliced through from the inside out. Fuurinji, having spent what bit of energy she had left, fell to the ground and lost consciousness, the last thing she heard was the sound of heavy footsteps and voices. She couldn't tell who they were, but what she thought she knew for certain was that... She defended that town, with her life... She'd broken her promise.
From what she was told, she had been unconscious for several days in intensive care, but when she awoke it was with a jolt as she panicked and looked around the room, the respirator covering her face and regulating her breathing for her so that she didn't hyperventilate or injure herself any further. From how it was explained, she'd fallen unconscious just as backup had arrived. Her feat, for those around, saved at least a few of the Shinigami that had been present for the Patrol... And somehow, the wind itself ripped the Gillian’s attack to shreds and defended her. That was when she realized how much power she truly had.
- Life After The Academy:
- Once she finally graduated from the Academy Fuurinji was placed within the 7th Squad, where she spent a significant amount of her time training seeking to refine her combat skills and develop new techniques. She also participates in missions to the human world, where she assists in eliminating Hollows and protecting innocent people from harm. When the Gotei went to Hueco Mundo, she was tasked with guarding Soul Society and defending it from any potential invaders that tried to slip in while their Captain’s were otherwise preoccupied. While tedious at points, she took pride in her duties and remained ever-vigilant no matter how boring it seemed or felt.
Knowing the threats at stake, being Aizen himself and who knows how many Arrancarr, she couldn’t skimp on any training so even as the False Karakura Town was made as the next battleground afterwards her training was only redoubled and made more intensive and difficult for herself. At this point the threat to Soul Society was beyond anything she’d ever been able to comprehend before but knowing that Captain’s were on the front line she knew she couldn’t simply stay with the training she’d been doing in her prior time within the Gotei.
Peace within Soul Society seemed to only ever be in a constant state of turmoil after those events, from not only World War Three and Four, but Demonic Invasions causing the release of numerous prisoners from the Maggots Nest. During all of which, Fuurinji remained steadfast with her duties of defending Soul Society from invaders foreign and domestic.
One of the more significant events that happened however was the disbanding of the Gotei itself, during which time Fuurinji spent the entirety of her time in the World of the Living, either continuing to train or continuing to hunt down Hollows though she now did so actively in an attempt to continue doing that which she had trained for her entire life. When she heard of the Gotei United being formed as a way to give shelter to lost Shinigami she had to consider whether to return or not. While Soul Society and the Gotei had trained her and gave her much of what she now had, part of her felt that something would always be missing even if she did join the Gotei United movement. Ultimately, she decided not to return, she’d been too long on her own and to now have to worry about other Shinigami while she carried out her duties… She couldn’t risk it.
I. Natural Abilities
» Natural Abilities:
Hakuda Savant: In spite of her small frame, Fuurinji has dedicated most of her training to her Hakuda skills, honing and refining them to a point beyond the average Shinigami of her strength and with a grace and finesse seen only in the speediest of Shinigami, though not the same speed as of yet. She still has awhile to go before she can truly claim to be among the greatest, but few could say she isn’t well on her way.
Instinctual Reactions: Due to her blindness, Fuurinji does not have the pleasure of seeing attacks and has instead honed and refined her reactions to be attuned to her hearing instead, allowing her to react to almost any attack that isn’t completely silent.
I. Racial Abilities
» Racial Abilities:
T’ai Chi - T'ai Chi is the art of the four elements and 'Yin Yang' combined together to create a spiritual, religious martial art. Focusing around balance in its entirety, a user of T'ai Chi is taught to follow what he thinks is right and to disallow any imbalance what-so-ever, and that includes to overexertion of yang or good, as too much yin can bring even more yin, or evil, to try to balance the problem. Instead, they are taught that a good equal in everything (including how much) is the way of life.
T'ai Chi's fighting style is all about fluidity of motion, rather than brute force. Acting around acute kicks and punches, the use of T'ai Chi is that of a self-defense martial art and holds no bounds in sports outside of bleeding over into movies. A mindset of a master T'ai Chi user is not to initiate fights, but if one was to require him or her, they would not try to smooth it over with monk ideals. Instead, T'ai Chi's main focal point is equality in everything, and that includes fighting, attitudes, everything.
Lastly, T'ai Chi's spiritual side allows for incredible feats from somebody with spiritual power, as the use of it was to allow all the elements to flow from the user. A user with spiritual energy could literally cause this but would require training to further achieve this.
Minor Yin - Minor Yin is the black circle within the major yang and is an evil that is born within a good action, emphasizing on the fact that every action has a consequence, good or bad. Minor Yin as an ability that coats the right hand with black energy, to which it enhances all touches, increasing the damage that hand causes. Minor Yin cannot be active whilst Minor Yang or Major Yang is, and vice-versa.
Minor Yang – Minor Yang is the white circle within the major yin and is a good that is born within bad actions, emphasizing that even the worst of intensions can have positive outcomes. Unlike the Minor Yin, which seeks to destroy, the Minor Yang seeks to protect and coats the users left hand with white energy, enhancing defensive techniques used with that hand. Minor Yang cannot be active whilst Minor Yin or Major Yin is, and vice-versa.
Tesshō: Tesshō is completely reliant on the user's physical strength without any use of spiritual, and because of that is powered simply by a thrust of the arm. By thrusting forwards or downwards with the flat of their palm, the user of Tesshō has the ability to inflict devastating levels of damage to anything it hits. Though due to the nature of this attack, it is very physically demanding of its user.
I. Zanpakutō
» Zanpakutō Name: Muraki Kitakaze (Capricious North Wind)
» Zanpakutō Spirit: Muraki Kitakaze's personality is split into two halves, half of it is peaceful and kind the type who wouldn't wish harm upon anyone, while the other half is violent and vengeful who would seek to seek revenge for every slight made against her. As a result her reactions can vary widely even within the same interaction. However it isn't often that Muraki Kitakaze herself appears, instead her direct appearance is tied to the balance within Fuurinji's soul between the desire for peace and the desire to seek revenge. Only while these two aspects are in harmony and neither dominate does Muraki Kitakaze appear. For all other times, two different spirits appear, Soyokaze and Kamikaze. While each of these seem to exhibit their own personality, they are, in fact, merely the extremes of the two aspects of Muraki Kitakaze's personality.
Soyokaze represents the peaceful and kind nature, taken to the extreme this means that not only would she not wish harm upon anyone but she wouldn't even be able to bring herself to defend herself if attacked. Gentle and Sophisticated almost to a fault, she acts as a Mother-figure to Fuurinji and looks out for her own personal wellbeing, disliking any and all forms of violence and choosing instead to attempt diplomatic approaches to all situations.
Kamikaze, on the other hand, represents the violent and vengeful aspect of Muraki Kitakaze. Taken to the extreme this means that even the smallest slight is handled with violence. Highly prone to intense fits of violence and rage, Kamikaze's personality runs as a stark contrast to Soyokaze. While she too looks out for the wellbeing of Fuurinji, rather than take a diplomatic approach she seeks to force her whims upon others, seeking to protect her Shinigami Master through any and all means necessary regardless of how much blood must be shed.
» Inner World: A singular large floating island, the center of which is stands an enormous archway. On a good day, the archway is filled with a vibrant green hue, and the surrounding landscape is that of a large but vibrant meadow filled with flowers and shrubs of all kinds, this would be Soyokaze’s doing, tending to the land and ensuring all is prosperous and protected. However, when Kamikaze is throwing a tantrum, the archway is filled with a dark brown and the surrounding landscape is a barren wasteland, devoid of any signs of life or protection.
» Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Fuurinji's sealed Zanpakuto appears as a mesmerizing blade crafted with the fusion of high-carbon steel and Damascus steel, showcasing a rippling pattern reminiscent of swirling winds etched intricately along the blades surface, with the mirror-finished steel captures a striking play of light. Its hilt, a blend of blue silk and white leather, offers a balance between elegance and resilience. The guard, a unique convergence of a swirling gust of wind and stylized wings, stands as a testament to the blade's duality. Encased in a sheath of dark lacquered wood, adorned with intricate carvings that depict dynamic wind currents, the design dances in harmony with the blade's motifs. A silk cord, alternating between blue and white, completes this masterpiece, embodying the essence of wind's ever-changing nature.
» Sealed Zanpakutō Power:
Kazeyomi (Wind Reading): Whilst sealed, her Zanpakuto’s give her but a single minor power, the ability to read the wind. While simplistic in design, this ability allows Fuurinji to ‘see’ that which interacts with the air around her as if she had true sight.
I. Shikai
» Shikai Release Phrase: Whirl and Howl (渦巻く咆哮する Uzumaku Hōkō Suru)
» Shikai Release Action: Clutching the singular sword by its hilt, Fuurinji elevates it above her head, the blade pointing downwards. With a swift motion, she swings the sword outward while invoking the release phrase "Whirl and Howl, Muraki Kitakaze." As her voice resonates, the surrounding wind begins to stir, coalescing into a miniature tornado encircling her. Soon after, the tempest disperses, unveiling a pair of distinctive gauntlets.
» Shikai Appearance: These twinned gauntlets sport three talon-like blades which feature curving, razor-sharp edges that glimmers in the light. Each of the claws is adorned with intricate engravings that depict swirling winds and storm clouds, reflecting the two spirits housed within.
» Shikai Abilities:
Kaze-te mono (Wind-touched Things) - Kaze-te mono allows Fuurinji an enhanced version of her Wind reading, feeding her information directly about any and all things that disturb the wind within 60 meters of her, ensuring that very little can move around her without her knowing. This does not ensure she can react to that which moves, only that she is aware of it.
Kaze Rōgoku (風牢獄) - Wind Prison: Fuurinji slams her gauntlets together, Astral Winds, Winds infused with her Reiatsu, erupt from them causing everything that moves within 30 meters to begin losing themselves within the Winds. While one can escape from these winds, they will find it extremely hard as their sense of direction fails them. Fuurinji utilizes her Reiatsu to disrupt the targets spatial awareness and directional comprehension, causing them to be unable to process information about their surroundings to make it near impossible to understand directions. One can counteract these effects through various methods including, but not limited to, Spiritual Sensing abilities, such as something akin to Kaze-to Mono, as well as their other senses which remain unaffected. Additionally, Kido or other unique skills that act to nullify this kind of detriment would also work such as Bakudo #58, Kakushitsuijaku, which the users senses and awareness. To be clear, this does not prevent them from moving and being able to simply move out of the area of effect, but it without aid it is extremely difficult if not impossible to do so on sheer luck. This has a duration of 4 posts.
I. Bankai
» Bankai Name: [What is your zanpakutō's release phrase?]
» Bankai Release Action: [Does your shinigami do any physical action to release their bankai? Feel free to remove this if not.]
» Bankai Appearance: [What does your shinigami's bankai look like?]
» Bankai Abilities: [What abilities does your shinigami gain in bankai?]
I. Equipment
» Equipment:
Reiatsu Limiter – Due to her lack of control over her Reiatsu, she has a special limiter to suppress the fluctuations of her Reiatsu. While this ensures the fluctuations stay stable, it also means her overall power is halved. This limiter takes the shape of an armband tightly affixed to her wrist. She is unlikely to remove this without permission from her superiors.
I. Skill Sheet
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General Skills
» Durability: D
» Speed: D
» Strength: C
» Soul: D
Will Skills
» Willpower: Beginner
» Deduction: Beginner
» Focus: Adept
Shinigami Skills
» Hoho: Beginner
» Kidō: Beginner
» Zanjutsu: Adept
» Hakuda: Adept
I. Role Play Sample
» Roleplay Sample: As much as she refused to admit it... There was a reason she was forced to go to the Yonbantai after Aizen's departure. The thoughts of everything that had happened still lingered heavily in her mind, and it'd be impossible to hide the evidence of her crying from the stains that littered her face. While she wouldn't argue with those who were placed in charge of her healing, she had made several requests to fill out her room during her stay.
Within her room she had several pictures of her Squad, Komamura, and herself with him. While she couldn't see the pictures themselves, simply having them near gave her a sense of comfort. She also had some of the things from her office brought over, to help keep her mind occupied. She had a small desk that leaned over her bed, and a piece of parchment placed on top of it. She might've been injured, but she still had a job to do and she wasn't going to let her injuries stop her from doing that if she could.
She had several reports already filled out, as well as most of the paperwork she had remaining in her office done already. While she hadn't been awake for long, she also had nothing else to do other than cry, so she had all the time in the world really to get these things done.
Her ears perked up as she heard soft footsteps come to rest in front of her door, though her senses told her not to look. As his hand raised to knock, her voice would chime up to interrupt his action "Come on in." She said, not even looking up from the paperwork she was currently writing on.
However whether out of respect or something else, she quickly turned the desk away from the bed. Both removing it as a distraction and hiding its contents next to the wall. As she finished her head turned towards Nanashi as he undoubtedly entered, a soft smile on her face belying the pain she was truly in both physically and emotionally. "If I recall correctly, you were there weren't you?" Her voice was a bit softer now than when she'd invited him in, almost like she didn't want anyone except him to hear them.
While the vast majority of Shinigami would never know the truth of Komamura's death... Nearly every Captain would know, and whether they blamed her or not, she would know. Her hands clenched each other in her lap as her head tilted towards her legs, both of which were covered with a blanket but sported no less than a full brace from the knee down. While she didn't break any of her bones, the sharp turns and sudden stops she had done had taken a considerable toll on her legs.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Feb 23, 2023 10:31 am
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The Quincy Massacre that is likely being referenced happened in the 1800s, which would have been before Fuurinji joined the Academy based on the age you have given her.
The current year is 2123, and the event that inspired Fuurinji to join the Gotei happened when she was 43 - so in 1912.
Is this intended to be Toshiro Hitsugaya? If so, do note that, based on the age you have made her, when Fuurinji was 43, Toshiro would have likely been a young child - if he existed at all - and thus unlikely to have accomplished the following feat.
Immediately attuning with a Zanpakuto, and then unlocking Shikai, demonstrates a level of innate power greater than any prodigy ever displayed in canon or onsite. Whilst player characters on PH can certainly be more innately impressive than the average Shinigami, there is still a limit to the level of prodigy that can be approved on character creation.
This limiter is never mentioned again in the app, so what does it do? This would probably fall under the equipment category and should be defined as such.
Also, if her power was so uncontrollable that she could randomly destroy something against her will, why was she allowed to go on patrols as an academy student? There appears to be no mention of any extra supervision that she would surely have required. Furthermore, a Shinigami who presented such a great danger to Soul Society by their inability to control their powers would likely end up in jail for their own safety and that of the realm.
Trying to make your character this powerful puts us in a very difficult position as this should be earned on-site rather than granted at character creation, so please reduce the intended power of this character accordingly and this should alleviate some of these concerns.
Is there intended to be more to this character's history? Currently, it only encompasses the first fifty or so years of her life. That leaves over two hundred years entirely vacant in the run-up to the present day, during which time Fuurinji surely has been doing something.
Is she now with the Gotei United? Has she left the Gotei to do her own thing? Feel free to ask if you need more information on our setting, but we need something to go on to approve this character.
Fuurinji is never referenced as blind throughout her history. This feels like it would have been a significant detail to address, especially prior to her gaining the ability to perceive through her Zanpakuto.
When did this blindness happen? Was she always blind? If so, how did she pick out many details in her history such as the white hair of that Shinigami who saved her, or anything else about that exchange?
If her Zanpakutō is in a permanent state of release and always has been, how does she know what the Sealed Appearance of the blades are?
Equally, how does she know that any of the powers it displays are usable in a sealed state? And why does it have a Shikai release call or action if it is intended to always be in this state?
What is an Astral Wind? How is this different to the normal wind?
What does that mean in this context? Does it erase sight, gravity, and any internal comprehension of direction?
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Look, I've read this ability several times and cannot really envision what it does. Please clearly define how this ability works and how others might both perceive and counteract it, as it cannot be approved in its current state.
Given the focus on Zanjutsu in this application, bumping Zanjutsu skill up to Adept would be suitable. Equally, no mention is given to her Hoho so why would it be higher than other skills for an Academy graduate?
This is never referenced in your history, so is this intended to be a part of PH history that has not been mentioned or are you writing the character in a different or alternate universe?
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Personality
Since the time of the Quincy Massacre, which happened around when she was first entering the Shinigami Academy,
The Quincy Massacre that is likely being referenced happened in the 1800s, which would have been before Fuurinji joined the Academy based on the age you have given her.
The current year is 2123, and the event that inspired Fuurinji to join the Gotei happened when she was 43 - so in 1912.
History
"As the mystery person spun around, the white spiky hair seemed to flow with the wind as he pulled his Zanpakuto from its sheath just as the red mass of energy vanished."
Is this intended to be Toshiro Hitsugaya? If so, do note that, based on the age you have made her, when Fuurinji was 43, Toshiro would have likely been a young child - if he existed at all - and thus unlikely to have accomplished the following feat.
"That's when she got her Zanpakuto... Or rather, Zanpakuto's. When she finally managed to commune with her Zanpakuto, its form shifted almost immediately."
Immediately attuning with a Zanpakuto, and then unlocking Shikai, demonstrates a level of innate power greater than any prodigy ever displayed in canon or onsite. Whilst player characters on PH can certainly be more innately impressive than the average Shinigami, there is still a limit to the level of prodigy that can be approved on character creation.
"As she advanced through the Shinigami Academy, she could notice the fluctuations in her own Reiatsu and learned to control it to some extent though she knew she'd never have full control over it so she often wore a limiter for herself simply to reduce the risk of her destroying something accidentally."
This limiter is never mentioned again in the app, so what does it do? This would probably fall under the equipment category and should be defined as such.
Also, if her power was so uncontrollable that she could randomly destroy something against her will, why was she allowed to go on patrols as an academy student? There appears to be no mention of any extra supervision that she would surely have required. Furthermore, a Shinigami who presented such a great danger to Soul Society by their inability to control their powers would likely end up in jail for their own safety and that of the realm.
Trying to make your character this powerful puts us in a very difficult position as this should be earned on-site rather than granted at character creation, so please reduce the intended power of this character accordingly and this should alleviate some of these concerns.
History redux
Is there intended to be more to this character's history? Currently, it only encompasses the first fifty or so years of her life. That leaves over two hundred years entirely vacant in the run-up to the present day, during which time Fuurinji surely has been doing something.
Is she now with the Gotei United? Has she left the Gotei to do her own thing? Feel free to ask if you need more information on our setting, but we need something to go on to approve this character.
Natural Abilities
Instinctual Reactions:
Fuurinji is never referenced as blind throughout her history. This feels like it would have been a significant detail to address, especially prior to her gaining the ability to perceive through her Zanpakuto.
When did this blindness happen? Was she always blind? If so, how did she pick out many details in her history such as the white hair of that Shinigami who saved her, or anything else about that exchange?
Zanpakutō
» Sealed Zanpakutō:
If her Zanpakutō is in a permanent state of release and always has been, how does she know what the Sealed Appearance of the blades are?
Equally, how does she know that any of the powers it displays are usable in a sealed state? And why does it have a Shikai release call or action if it is intended to always be in this state?
Kaze Rōgoku (風牢獄) - Wind Prison:
What is an Astral Wind? How is this different to the normal wind?
Every direction will look the same and the concept of up, down, left, or right, simply doesn’t apply.
What does that mean in this context? Does it erase sight, gravity, and any internal comprehension of direction?
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Look, I've read this ability several times and cannot really envision what it does. Please clearly define how this ability works and how others might both perceive and counteract it, as it cannot be approved in its current state.
Skill Sheet
Given the focus on Zanjutsu in this application, bumping Zanjutsu skill up to Adept would be suitable. Equally, no mention is given to her Hoho so why would it be higher than other skills for an Academy graduate?
Role Play Sample
While the vast majority of Shinigami would never know the truth of Komamura's death...
This is never referenced in your history, so is this intended to be a part of PH history that has not been mentioned or are you writing the character in a different or alternate universe?
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Feb 23, 2023 2:14 pm
Personality: I have increased her age by 100 years to compensate for this gap.
History:
White Spiky Hair - I have replaced this, it was originally intended to be Toshiro however, from the discussions it is apparent here that wouldn't be possible and so it has been changed to "their movement seemed to flow with the wind" instead to be a more 'generic' Shinigami.
Her Zanpakuto - I have changed so it no longer implies or says that she achieved both the name and Shikai instantly and now describes the process she went through to hear the voices from her Zanpakuto. Her Shikai is described later in her history as well as having a time frame that it took for her to achieve it. I also removed references to a Constant Release, as that was primarily due to other circumstances on previous sites which are not present here.
Limiter - Added to her equipment and changed the wording of "reduce the risk of her destroying something accidentally" to "reduce the fluctuations in her Reiatsu"
History Redux - I have added sections to explain her blindness, how she achieved her shikai, as well as what she has been up too during her time after the academy. This has got to be by far the longest history I've ever written so I hope it is consistent with the sites plot!
Instinctual Reflexes & Sealed Zanpakuto - Hopefully the revised history covers the concerns raised here.
Kaze Rogoku - Updated the Astral Winds section to clarify how they're different from standard wind, as well as revised the remainder to clearly define exactly what it does and how it is countered.
Skill Sheet - Updated Zanjutsu to adept, and hopefully the prior revisions clarify the rest.
Roleplay Sample - This was taken from a previous site and Komamura's death was something that happened on the actual site not in her backstory. If desired I can write a new one that is more in line with this specific site.
History:
White Spiky Hair - I have replaced this, it was originally intended to be Toshiro however, from the discussions it is apparent here that wouldn't be possible and so it has been changed to "their movement seemed to flow with the wind" instead to be a more 'generic' Shinigami.
Her Zanpakuto - I have changed so it no longer implies or says that she achieved both the name and Shikai instantly and now describes the process she went through to hear the voices from her Zanpakuto. Her Shikai is described later in her history as well as having a time frame that it took for her to achieve it. I also removed references to a Constant Release, as that was primarily due to other circumstances on previous sites which are not present here.
Limiter - Added to her equipment and changed the wording of "reduce the risk of her destroying something accidentally" to "reduce the fluctuations in her Reiatsu"
History Redux - I have added sections to explain her blindness, how she achieved her shikai, as well as what she has been up too during her time after the academy. This has got to be by far the longest history I've ever written so I hope it is consistent with the sites plot!
Instinctual Reflexes & Sealed Zanpakuto - Hopefully the revised history covers the concerns raised here.
Kaze Rogoku - Updated the Astral Winds section to clarify how they're different from standard wind, as well as revised the remainder to clearly define exactly what it does and how it is countered.
Skill Sheet - Updated Zanjutsu to adept, and hopefully the prior revisions clarify the rest.
Roleplay Sample - This was taken from a previous site and Komamura's death was something that happened on the actual site not in her backstory. If desired I can write a new one that is more in line with this specific site.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Mar 02, 2023 11:30 am
[adm] Apologies for the delay.
The death of Fuurinji's mother is never mentioned in her backstory. It would be good to expand on this as, frankly, I would like to know the details of this.
Firstly, thank you for the further clarifications. Now, does this ability have a duration? A number of posts, for example, that it can be sustained for?
There is still no mention given of her skill at Hoho, so bump it down to Beginner.
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Personality
Since the time of the Quincy Massacre, which happened around when she was first entering the Shinigami Academy, her hatred for Quincy’s has never diminished. While it might seem obvious given that most all Shinigami feel this way, she holds a special place for them as she attributes the death of her mother to that of a Quincy.
The death of Fuurinji's mother is never mentioned in her backstory. It would be good to expand on this as, frankly, I would like to know the details of this.
Kaze Rōgoku (風牢獄)
Firstly, thank you for the further clarifications. Now, does this ability have a duration? A number of posts, for example, that it can be sustained for?
Skill Sheet
There is still no mention given of her skill at Hoho, so bump it down to Beginner.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Mar 02, 2023 1:28 pm
History - I have extended the end of her Life before the Academy to include a section that details her Mother's death (and how her Father and Sister survived), as well as a paragraph at the beginning of her Life at the Academy to detail how she personally reacted to the situation
Kaze Rōgoku (風牢獄) - Added a section at the end detailing a post duration limit. If this needs to be altered at all, please let me know. I felt given that it is a Shikai technique, but is also relatively powerful, I set it to 4 posts.
Skill Sheet: Reduced Hoho to Beginner as requested.
Kaze Rōgoku (風牢獄) - Added a section at the end detailing a post duration limit. If this needs to be altered at all, please let me know. I felt given that it is a Shikai technique, but is also relatively powerful, I set it to 4 posts.
Skill Sheet: Reduced Hoho to Beginner as requested.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Mar 02, 2023 1:39 pm
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As far as I understand it, the Quincy massacre did not involve an invasion of Soul Society. That would have been during the time of Yhwach about 800 years before the massacre.
Four posts is a fine duration, but I don't see that section on the app so ya might have lost it somewhere
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History
It was some time before she was finally accepted into the Academy to begin her training as a Shinigami, tragedy would rear its ugly head once more, the Quincies invaded Soul Society.
As far as I understand it, the Quincy massacre did not involve an invasion of Soul Society. That would have been during the time of Yhwach about 800 years before the massacre.
Kaze Rōgoku
Four posts is a fine duration, but I don't see that section on the app so ya might have lost it somewhere
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Mar 02, 2023 2:18 pm
Ah, my apologies. My memory told me that both happened at the same time, I have amended this mistake and also included the 4 post duration in the Shikai technique as well.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Mar 02, 2023 4:58 pm
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Hazard Ranks
Power: D
Influence: F
Resources: E
Comments/Notes: Good luck out there!
Tier: 4-4
Hazard Rating: E
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Hazard Ranks
Power: D
Influence: F
Resources: E
Comments/Notes: Good luck out there!
Tier: 4-4
Hazard Rating: E
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Sun May 14, 2023 2:09 pm
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Re: [Spirit Class 8] Fuurinji Wakaba
Thu Jan 04, 2024 8:59 pm
[mod]The Zanpakuto
So is going to need some tweaking as how it's currently characterized doesn't match up with how Zanpakuto function, so i'm going to ask you to tweak a few details:
1) The true number of spirits. The way you communicate it is pretty unclear; at first it sounds like it's one spirit with multiple personalities depending on it's state - which is fine, but then it pivots into sounding like these are distinct, separate spirits. If you were intending for it to sound like the acceptable former, just cut out the usage of plurals and implying of multiple spirits.
2) Multiple sealed Zanpakuto. There is only one canon example of a character who exhibits this, and it is Shunsui, who's at a completely different level compared to Fuurinji. Two sealed swords just wouldn't be possible for someone at her level.
You're free to keep it at two blades in Shikai, but do change the sealed sword's description to be a singular weapon.[/mod]
So is going to need some tweaking as how it's currently characterized doesn't match up with how Zanpakuto function, so i'm going to ask you to tweak a few details:
1) The true number of spirits. The way you communicate it is pretty unclear; at first it sounds like it's one spirit with multiple personalities depending on it's state - which is fine, but then it pivots into sounding like these are distinct, separate spirits. If you were intending for it to sound like the acceptable former, just cut out the usage of plurals and implying of multiple spirits.
2) Multiple sealed Zanpakuto. There is only one canon example of a character who exhibits this, and it is Shunsui, who's at a completely different level compared to Fuurinji. Two sealed swords just wouldn't be possible for someone at her level.
You're free to keep it at two blades in Shikai, but do change the sealed sword's description to be a singular weapon.[/mod]
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