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"The Angel's Keeper."-

Name:Kioshi Ayasegawa (キオは、市余り北東)
Nickname: Clueless Boy or Kio
Age:3100 (Appears to take appearance to about someone in there early 20's)
Gender: Male
Hair Length and Color: Short blue hair
Eye Color: Blue
Race: Shinigami
Height: 5'6
Weight: 120 lbs
Trained Under/With: Unknown
Relatives:Yumichika Ayasegawa (younger brother).
Marital Status: Single
Former Affiliation: Gotei 13
Former Rank: Captain of Squad 5 before Shinji.
Former Partner: Unknown.
Current Affliation:Royal Palace
Current Rank: Royal Guard,incharge of guarding the king himself.
Current Partner: Kaeda Hisagi.
Zanpaktou: Tenshi sakushi (Angel's Illusion)
Shikai:Achieved
Bankai:Achieved as well.
Equipment:

Zanpaktou:Kioshi,like any other captain or royal guard or any shinigami for that matter has a zanpaktou.However the unique thing about his zanpaktou is that similar to Yamamoto keeping his zanpaktou in a cane,Kioshi keep's his zanpaktou in a silver ring he wear's on his finger.It is unknown at this time however what Kioshi's zanpaktou actually looks like.The only one's that have seen it would be Zen,Hikari,Yamamoto and Unohana.

Thunder Powers:Kioshi although he rarely appears to use it can take control of thunder itself.Just like Zen can take control of winds and Kaeda taking control of Ice he has the strange and unique ability to create thunderstorms or send a controlled or sometimes uncontrolled jolt of electricity to his opponents by a mere touch from his hand.

Mask:Allthough Kioshi rarely wear's this unless he has to conceal his identiy,the mask is nothing special it's a simple basic looking mask that looks a bit like a lions.

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Personality: Kioshi's personality is rather mysterious, one day he'll be wanting to prank or spread funny or true rumours about someone the next he might just be silent and serious.Kioshi most of the time is a rather lax and calm person, when he's around those of his age he tends to act serious but most of the time he gives off the impression to most that he's clueless or just plain lazy. When most get news of Kioshi being a royal guard there curious to know when they judge him how someone like him became royal guard.

Appearance:Kioshi although extremely old,manged to somehow keep a young sort of look to him ,since he does not wear the traditional shinigami uniform. His clothing looks to be Italian styled, sometimes although rarely if he's not wearing his cap he wear's a pair of goggles on his head. His usual clothing attire is a brown coloured scarf, a simple white shirt with a black jacket, with a brown hat he seems to also wear biker gloves or black armbands and wear's simple black pants.

History: Not a lot is known about Kioshi's past. It is known that he was a captain somewhere during the time of when Yamamoto was Captain General and Unohana was Captain of Squad 4.One of his many fascinations other then getting the other captain's into trouble and pranking the head captain, he has a fascination for medicine and constantly was always trying to grow different kinds of herbs. He received his promotion a very short time after Shunsui and Ukitake became Captain's of Squad 8 and 13.Since then,Kioshi had guarded the king and is the second oldest ever to be promoted to the royal guard's that's still alive. Once his younger brother was born many many years later Kioshi took a small break and secretly watched over his younger brother once Yumichika joined the Court Guard Squad's Kioshi returned back to the royal guards and resumed his duties, his little brother, barely remembers him but on very rare occasions he still visits Yumichika although the two don't seem to be on speaking terms to much .Kioshi along with Hikari and one other former royal guard, guarded the king and queen tell Zen came along.Junsuina took leave and just recently returned many years after the traitor had fled. Of course Kioshi and Hikari shared there differences and constiently insulted each other even in there day's as captains.Kioshi earned the nickname "clueless boy" for his pranking way's and his spacey demnor.Of course most questioned how Kioshi manged to stay and keep his captain's spot or let alone even gain one. Even Yamamoto sometimes questioned it however although Kioshi has a rather lazy demnor and never shows his potential he is a strong opponent not to be underestimated.
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His zanpaktou which I decided to make at a way later date:
Tenshi sakushi is a female zanpaktou spirt,she has long blond hair, golden eyes and seems to wear a white kimono, she seems to like to cause trouble and seems to materialize constantly when he master’s not around or when her master is.Allthough,Tenshi is considered to be a very beautiful zanpaktou sprit her blade is surprisingly, bright meaning the blade itself has a special ability, when activated any attack that is used to blind or try to darken Kioshis path,Kioshi becomes immune to those attacks since the blade can glow extremely bright. Kioshi’s sheathe is gold and the hilt of the blade is black.
　　
　
Shikai- Amoni Kusuru! Tenshi Sakushi. (Bow to the Heavens! Angels illusion.)
With the command release, Bow to the heavens Kioshi raises his blade up to the sky, the sky’s crackle and his spiritual pressure crackles almost like electricity. Making the battlefield a dangerous place and his blade turns into a rapier.

Shikai Special ability: Kioshi has a special ability, he is only able to do this twice pet battle but if he stabs his sword into the ground he is able to use his zanpaktou sprit ,to create an exact likeness of himself and the two can fight together, this technique is called Tenshi Tachihakuran (Angels clone) the only way to revert his zanpaktou back to it’s orginal,materlized state is if the opponent strikes down Kioshi’s zanpaktou.
　
Tenshi Ryuu (Angel’s Dragon): When Kioshi uses this attack he can summon 4 large dragon’s of light coming in 4 different directions, when all 4 collide on impact, the attacks itself electrifies an opponent massively injuring if the blast hits.
Tenshi Tachigaosereru (Angels fear) : If Kioshi used this attack, he is able to turn tenshi his blade, into any weapon of his choosing, if he chooses to he can keep Tenshi as a rapier and summon another weapon of choosing Kioshi’s blade itself is not a dual type sword, however Kioshi is known for having been a very proficient weapons master. When using this attack, he confuses his opponents into thinking his blade is a dual type but, he explains to clear it up to this opponents. The weapon or weapons of choosing can be anything of his choosing and he seems to be capable of handling the choice of weapon(s) just like he handle’s his zanpaktou .
　
Bankai- Tenshi Tachi no Kyuukyoku no Gensou. (Angels Ultimate illusion.)
Since Kioshi’s blade has some illusions attached to it, when his bankai is activate anyone who is locked in battle with him falls under an illusion. The illusion does end, tell Kioshi cancel’s his bankai or tell the battle ends. In terms of appearance Kioshi’s blade makes no changes nor does his appearance.

Tenshi Kage (Angels Shadow): Kioshi mouth’s these words and very quickly shunpos, out of sight, what replaces Kioshi seems to be a person that is a loved one or a person that Kioshi’s opponent’s fears. It is said to be an exact illusion of the said person and the illusion is able to speak exactly like the said person. However the illusion is nothing more then Kioshis zanpaktou sprit morphing into a person worst fears or a loved one, When an opponent is distracted, Kioshi attacks them from behind or if he can’t mange to find an opening the likelihood of a loved one showing up as the illusion increases as his zanpaktou sprit will hug his opponent and most likely stab them. The switch from when Kioshi disappears to when his zanpaktou shows up is extremely quick, an opponent doesn’t realize that Kioshi is still on the field since there more distracted by his zanpaktou sprit. However, Kioshi still conceals his reiatsu before attacking.

Tenshi Tachihafuaikkusu (Angel’s Phoenix):This bankai ability has two abilties,Kioshi can use this to summon a destructive Phoenix, that is capable of mass amounts of destruction or he can use the Phoenix in a healing way and heal himself and his comrades, he’ll summon the same Phoenix however then the Phoenix will explode, light will envelop Kioshi and his comrades healing all of there wounds.
　
Tenshi Kami (God of the Angels):This is Kioshi’s ultimate technique, with this technique Kioshi will do something strange and stab his sword in his arm and bright light will envelop him and what seems to be golden armour and a golden helmet will cover him, the armour itself can not be broken, he then raises his zanpaktou up to the sky again and the sky’s will crackle again, a light circle surrounds him and then moves towards his opponents. If an opponent moves out of the circle the light circle will follow them tell it is finished glowing and then once that is done in the circle a outstretched huge hand grabs Kioshi’s opponents and drags them down to another world. When the hand goes down completely the circle dies out and his opponent is fully dragged down underneath and is gone the armour fades and Kioshi pays for this attack by passing out. It is said that the other world that drag’s opponents away for forever, or depending on the opponent a while, the world is said to be Hell itself however that is merely a rumour.

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Gomensai >_< if it sound's all overpowered and such... I can change anything that's needed....

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [O]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [O]
  
• History is of appropriate length [O]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [-]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[-]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]
  

Comments/Notes:

Alright first off, It'll be best if you use OUR templates when creating a character instead of one from a different site est.

http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t2-shinigami-template

Please follow the giudelines of this template to create your shinigami, when finished, let a staff know on the xat or contact me through PM ^^

You need MIN 10 simple sentences OR 5 DETAILED sentences for personality AND appearance.

NO BANKI YET!!!!

Add more detail into the abilities, explain any drawbacks and stuff like that.

History needs more detail.

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Mind telling me what the X's and O's and - mean?
So I have some idea what to fix..
 
and .__. would'nt a royal guard have bankai already?
 

The X's=The things you did correctly O's=The things you did wrong. Hopefully that shall help. The x's are things you've done correct and don't need any further actions to take with those things. While the O'S are things that are unsatisfactory and need to be changed.

:3 All in all, you should be able to get it right, just continue.