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Iori
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Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[O]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]


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Well you seem to be having a bit of a problem with this here app, and i shall correct you on them before it is given approval, First off you can have no vasto lorde, so take that out of your history. Second, you must write an actual rp sample, not a sample from your history as that doesn't count. you have to make or type up an rp sample, with at least ten sentences. or two paragraphs. Also i believe you may need permission to have been an espada in your history, but for now the changes that really need to be done, is excluding the info on vasto lorde, and changing the rp sample. Until then, this app is denied.

Tier: Will be given, once the changes i asked for are completed.
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Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:23 pm
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RAIKI NOTICES OVERPOWERNESS



Enhanced Cero: Kade can shoot up a dark red energy blasts from his hands or his mouth. This was first ability he learned while as a Menos Grande. In maybe stronger to block to Grand Rey Cero but not Cero Oscuras that Ulquiorra Cifer uses in his Segunda Etapa state.

Increased Hierro:A very strong hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable.

Bala: Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.

Master Swordsmen Specialist: He trained with other arrancars to increase his skills with his zanpakuto. During the years, Kade became an advanced user with the sword learning every tehcnique of the blade. Kade has learned different kinds of fencing and weapon techniques even applying martial arts with the use of his blade. With use of his zanpakuto, Kade can actually fires shadow slashes with use of the blade.

Sonido Expert: He learned the all the skills of sonido speeds from other espadas. He started teaching other arrancars of using their sonido abilities by example of his own fast speeds. Kade can used this with or without his ressurecion making a dangerous person to deal with

Caja Negacion: These are meant to simulate Negación fields, which are used to punish their subordinates if necessary. The cube, when used on a subject, traps them in an alternate dimension from which there is no escape; however, this assumes it is being used as intended. More powerful Arrancar, namely the Espada themselves, can escape given enough time.

Improved Garganta: This is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Enhanced Pesquisa: This is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions very similarly to sonar. While using his ressurecion, Kade can use his ears to sense spiritual pressure almost like a bat.


Augmented Sonido: An augmentation to his original sonido ability after many years of practice, Kade managed to train this ability within his resureccion power. Because of years of training, Kade able to move faster then a shinigami or an arrancar to appear in front or behing an opponent to fight or catch.

Enhanced Speed & Agility: Complimenting his already impressive speed and power, Kade himself faster and more agile then his original sate. Using both speed and agilty as one weapong against and enemy.

Enhanced Strength: His strikes pack enough power to destroy or break bones. Because of his long trainings, Kade managed to break boulders with one strike using focus with every strike.

Ghostly Spiritual Pesquisa: One of the special powers, he obtained by absorbing the Dark Scar powers. The blue flowing spirits with his spiritual pressure will appear help him detect enemies coming his way. A ghostly warning system all thanks to power of the Dark Scar.

Augmented Grand Rey Cero: Although he can't use it in his regular espada state. He trained with his cero powers to making them stronger then the original Grand Rey Cero. Kade can actually fired it from his hands or directly from his mouth.

Maji Shadoato: This is an technique where two of Kade's wings starts to dissapear and his shadow engulfs them which creates a large circle on the ground. Some of the angel dove feathers started appearing at the edge of the circle. Suddenly they started pointing upward with several shadoulike chains trap an enemy and the chains started glowing purple which the opponen't energy started to drain. Kade cannot attack during this time which much of his energy is used containing the enemy within the drain attack forming a black porcupine cage during the process.

Majo Hugoada: An shadow aura start appearing around his body with his sonido, cero and hierro abilities are enhanced within this state. Four shadow orbs will start flowing around him like a spinning square. Once one of the orb started to explode then for a limited time Kade's speed is enhanced [2 posts]. Once the last orb explore and then the time limit is up then Kade reverts normal with his ressurecion turning back into a regular zanpakuto. This is like Kade's trump card tehcnique whenever he's in a very deep situation or big trouble. He can used cero with greater accuracy while in this shadow state

Maju Javadou: Kade pulls out one feather from his angel wings which is engulf with his shadow spiritual pressure which then forms into an black spear. The best part about the spear is that Kade can infuse it with cero and when he throws it at an enemy it unleashes an big explosion with a strong blast radius.



Superior Fast Sonido: It almost a fast blur that the opponent doesn't know that he just appeared in just three seconds. Kade's sonido speeds are extremely fast within this form but however if a stronger opponent can match him then he's in big trouble.

Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant: He is a very proficient hand-to-hand combatant, possessing considerable masterful skill using it as his primary means of attack. Equally lethal using punches and kicks as well as being highly unpredictable. His fighting technique is incredibly destructive using his speed and reflexes to quickly take out his opponents

Immense Strength: A lot stronger then his resurrecion state the shadow orbs emit power into his body make his muscles grow stronger allowing him to harder.

Shadow Meld Hierro: Because of the Dark Scar power, Kade was able to use his hierro not only as an defensive tactic. He can also use it as an perfect cammouflage whenever he wants to his hierro powers allow him to bend light around themselves, making them semi-invisible.

Cero Zoasano: A stronger version of his cero attack which is fired from his mouth. The attack starts with his eyes turning black then his mouth opens up forming a second hollow with fires a particle ion energy cannon which is almost destructive when it hits an enemy.

Kokuujin Akumetsu: Two shadow frequency swords will sprout out from his wrist imbued with cero energy then he charge with fastlike speed. Attacking from one shadow slash from the sword at first. Then Darque will go berserk seeing enemy blood, he'll proceeds to slash his opponent numerous times with huge black cero slashes attacking the enemy causing damage. Darque finishes it with an X-like Cero Slash to the face of his enemy


Alright where to START, first off fix the damn grammar, second, YOUR CERO CANT BE THAT STRONG, thats way to over powered.

Ghostly Spiritual Pesquisa, at first seemed fine, but there are chars here THAT CAN HIDE There spirit pressure so thus this move is powerplay

Augmented Grand Rey Cero- i see nothing wrong, word it better

Maji Shadoato- they way its worded seems unavoidable or any way to counter so thus god mod, nerf it

Majo Hugoada- this move needs better wording, and nerf it down

Maju Javadou- how many can he fire at once, cool down rate? how large is the blast raduis

Shadow Meld Hierro-AGAIN WORDING, list more downsides

Cero Zoasano- wording you making this sound like a combo attack with another char

Kokuujin Akumetsu- seems to be an auto hit, wording


most of the issues seem to be wording issues, also grammar.





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