Amos the 3rd(finished)

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+ B A S I C I N F O +

Name:Amos the 3rd
Age:10578
Gender:Male
Shifter Appearance:

True Appearance:
He looks like a slivered hair demon with horns coming from his head.His shoulders also have horns as well as his arms look of blue skin with red traces on veins.His chest has marking of his familys name and past.


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+ P E R S O N A L I T Y +

Personality:A evil nature at heart in his demon nature.He loves to fight alot with people.He tends to go overboard when fighting which could kick weaker people by mistake.He loves to drink blood of women he meets.He is very sadistic, but is kind to all people who don't get on his bad side.He is a strong leader of any group and tends to take trainee's for himself.

He is very calm,along with very fast.He likes to end the enemy life slowly sometimes, and kill without holding back.He likes to trick people into think he is a hot-head to lower there guard.He isn't scared to die and tends to let blows hit him to destroy the person he is fighting up close.He likes to read books in the human world about what they think demons are.
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+ B A C K G R O U N D +

History
Amos the 3rd was born a demon.Thanks to his parents that were both demons.His father was one of the fastest demons under the command of the Demon king.His Mother was a shifter demon his father meet on a mission.They soon mated to make him as he was called after his father Amos the 2nd.He soon started to train at a young age, and became a knight soon as he was 4000 years old.

His father taught him his speed ability that was known throughout the Demon world.As for his mother taught him how to shift forms and such.He liked his new human form that he decided to keep it.He soon got stronger as the years passed 3578 to be sure and aimed to become a archduke of a circle.After the many years of training he was one of the fastest hatchlings in Demon world.

He decided to work on his Demon powers more to become strong as well.He worked on this for another 3000 years as he became stronger.He had surpassed his own father, and lived up to the family name.He never knew but one day he may want to take over the Demon world.Of course that is a tale for the future to hold and he will live to see if it will come true or not.

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+ P O W E R S +

Natural Abilities:

Akuma Kyōdo

Za Koa Skill

Za Koa Influence

Reaitsu Drain

Jigoku Sokudo

Shifting Forms

Shadow Movement

Bōru Shi

Unique Abilities

Adjustment Reaitsu: He can adjust his Reaitsu to match a enemies after being hit by there attacks a few times, or even studying them. There Reaitsu based attacks would soon become weaker to him, and more easily to stop once he has found the right match

Tinker: He likes to create things that benefit him, or for anyone that proves there worth. He can make Reaitsu jammers, special battle gear, and powerful devices to fight or capture people

Binding seals: He has created many different seals, used to trap or capture the target. Or even cutting down there speed, power, as well as other various effects. The seals can be placed on there body, or even on the field for battle.

Controlling Seals: If he beats the enemies down to near death, or even knock them out. He can bite there necks to place a seal on there body, that messes with there mind. Causing them to follow your orders more easily, usually used on weak tiers to infiltration of the soul society, humans, and other groups.

Flame of Wrath:Dark flames- His Dark flames have more power the more enraged he is, and tends up the ante the more he battles. His flames can also eat other weak flames, to become stronger or even his own that would be scattered around the area to reuse again for another attack, without wasting much of his own energy.

Shishi Mōdo Appearance:


Shishi Mōdo Abilities:
In this form he releases his power, as he his body is englufed in black flames. Soon he walks out of the flames with a new body, that is his true demon form. His power,speed, and defense is increased by tenfold and enemies fire/explosion attacks become weaker. Psychical attacks are also weaken by his demon skin state. He also has a great regeneration rate, and can heal wounds more easily.

Demon Wave
Range:5 meters
Description:Shoots a high speed dark energy from his sword.It is a strong move, and try to break a strong defense with dark flames that would burn the opponent or object.The speed would be about as fast he can draw a blade.

Demon Shot:
Range:10 meters
Description:Shoots a high powered dark enegry ball that is fulled with evil enegry.The size of the ball would be about the size of a pellet.The speed would like a pistol being shot.They explode on contact and send dark flames onto the body it attacked.He can shoot multiple times because their is no clip.The rate would be every 1.3 seconds per shot.

Hell shooter:
Range: 10 meters
Description:Shoots multiple darkness balls in a area then move to attack the target from different angles.The darkness balls can move fast like about the same speed of a demon shot, and go different directions.The attack would burn the enemy as it hits their body.

Dark hell armor
Range:himself
Description: Creates a large Black armor made of his Dark flames that would protect his body. Reducing the effects of close range attacks, and burning the opponent if they get close.

Death Aura: He summons a evil aura around his body, that would slow the movements of the enemy. By applying a large amount of spiritual pressure.To there arms, legs, and body to slow there movements to get a hit more easier of there body.

Hellzone Field
Range: Varies
Description: He throws multiples hell shooters into the area. They stay stationary, until the user flicks his hand towards the enemy. They soon either one at a time, or all at once head towards the enemy. They all then blow up on impact, spreading there black flames onto the enemy body.

Crusher palm:
Range:1 meter
Description:Focuses alot of his dark enegry into his palm and then anything he touchs will be burned and pushed back.The push back is about 2 meters away.The attack explodes on impact of a object like when he grabs your body,weapon, or a surface.It leaves Dark flames on the body that would burn you even after the attack was done.

Dark Flames:Is a special dark flame he has that burns people even after the flame would be put out.It is also stronger then a normal flame as normal water wouldn't really put it out easily, and can be very powerful vs ice as well. Of course if there someone with a higher tier, there power would overcome his flames over time, or right away.They have twice the power of first degree burns, meaning that they would kill most things almost instantly if someone is engulfed by the whole flame.
Satsugai Tsūru:
Sword-The sword is there to just fight with as it is covered with a dark aura.That leaves dark flames on the body that would burn them the more the fight carryed on. It can also unleash a wave slash towards the target to cut them

Gun-The gun is used to shoot range target as it fires Dark energy bullets.

Sunglasses-There to make him look cool, and scans for info like for example(A scouter from dragonball Z)It would be used to find spiritual pressures as well as used in combat to judge thier power to help him understand what he got himself into,also because he won't know how to read some of the human langauges this will help him read and speak as well.

Hidden blade-Well it's a blade that he uses for close range combat to block a blade or stab a person then pump dark flames into thier body when it pierces them.


[strike]Mukō Jōtai Appearance:


Mukō Jōtai Ablities:
Like his true demon form, he is engulfed in even more black flames. As his sword is also taken into his next form. Everything of his abilities are increased by double, and his power,speed, and defense is increased by 20 times from his first form. Now he comes with his death armor, which is very deadly because it released black flames as a self-defense. It also cuts most reaitsu attacks by half there power. His sword is fully engulfed with his flames, as it can increase it's range and has enough power to cut through a building like butter.

Crusher palm-Destruction:
range: 1 meter
Like the basic version, this one increases it's power to a higher extend. And can tear a large hole into the enemy. Just by touching there body, and getting in one hit would be bad. Because the flames would stay within the wounds, and cause unbearable pain to the enemy.

Death wave:
Range: 10 meters
A much more stronger version of Demon wave, it moves at a even faster speed. The wave would move about the speed of his machine gun bullet being shot.Causing a large area effect wave, that would cut anything in it's path with the flames.

Death Armor:
Range: himself
His whole body would increase the density of the flames, making them burn darker. Making anything that touchs it to be set on flames, and scar the body to beyond the point of healing. Most of the times, as he controls his anger. Like everything else the more energy he puts into a attack, the stronger it is.

Demonic shockwave: A very strong area attack that releases from his body, if it hits the opponent body, then it would affect the tendons and disrupt the body regular flow of energy. Causing them to feel a lost of control for there body, and make it easier to kill them.

Phoenix Rain- After completing a series of prayers the
clouds above the field will turn red, bleeding from them the Dark flames that would be infused with it.
Due to them falling the flames take the shape of a large meteorite falling from the sky. Even if they were to dodge, the explosion of black flames would spread about 2 miles wide destroying everything in it's path, the user is well protected because of his own technique because of his death armor

Arena Circle: He can say a set of prayers to summon a large circle in the area, It soon forms a barrier to stop anything trying to get away, and it is used to capture, or force a enemy into close combat.

Godspeed, hundred cuts of death: This move uses his sword to battle, as it would look like he didn't pull out his blade. As he moves past the opponent with blinding speed, as he would pull the blade to attack the opponent, without even trying to look like he did something. Lower tier can not see a after image, while higher or even tiers can see his hand motions.

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+R P S A M P L E +

Role Play Sample:Neon opened up a Garganta in the middle of the park, and walked throught.He felt the nice warm of the sun as the light made shadows in the ground.He soon saw little children playing as they had fun with thier friends.Of course he couldn't be seen by them and he walked around them quickly.He hide his spiritual pressure as he walked around in plain human clothes.The area was noisy with laughter, and cars coming down the road in a rush.He didn't want to walk into another car again so he just waited for the light go red,or yellow he didn't remember.After that only walk for nothing he came across a school,he felt some strong spiritual pressure at this school.

He soon walked in but it seems that everyone was gone for some reason.He soon remembered that humans go to school, and leave at a certain time.He came up to a field that was painted with white lines, and a large net at each side.He looked around the schoolyard as he didn't know what to do as he spoted a ball in the corner.He walked up to the ball and picked it up to examine it closely.It seemed like a normal ball and soon put it into the floor.He put his feet on the ball and lightly pushed it as it moved into the grass field.

"Well this seems like a pointless thing to do"He said as he kicked the ball hard in the air.To his luck that it went into sky really high, and didn't come back for 10 minutes."That was fun mabye something more"He said as he smiled at the nets as he smashed his kick into the ball, and it moved fast at the net.He soon went throught the net,then cracked the wall hard as it soon fell back to him."Mabye If can play this at las noches to be less bored"He soon took the ball into his hands and kept training how to keep the ball up without it flying through the air.


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+ S K I L L S H E E T +

(DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills

• Za Koa Manipulation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Spells/Summonings: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Jigoku Sokudo Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

General Skills

• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

Ok I think I fixed all the things that are wrong.

Shishi Mōdo Abilities:
Demon Wave:
Range:5 meters
Description:Shoots a high speed dark enegry from his sword.It moves slow but very strong to break a defense.
You contradict yourself, here. It can't be a "High speed" energy whatever if it moves slow. state the EXACT speed of this attack, as well as what exactly the dark energy is shapes like. State the effects of the attack, as well as its weaknesses. Is they any way to defend against it? You need to describe MUCH MORE.
Demon Shot:
Range:10 meters
Description:Shoots a high powered dark enegry ball that is fulled with evil enegry.He can shoot multiple times because thier is no clip.
State the exact size of the dark energy ball. Where is it shot from? State the EXACT firing rate, as well as speed of the projectile. Please describe more.
Hell shooter:
Range: 5 meters meter
Description:Shoots multiple darkness balls in a area then move to attack the target from different angles.The darkness balls can move fast and go different directions.
State the EXACT SPEED of the balls, as well as the exact number of spheres made. Explain how the spheres are able to go in "different directions." Does it jolt from one spot to another every second? How can these sphere's move in various angles when their range it TOO SHORT? Please explain more...
Crusher palm:
Range:1 meter
Description:Focuses alot of his dark enegry into his palm and then anything he touchs will be burned and pushed back.The push back is about 2 meters away
Explain the EXACT extent of damage caused by the energy. How large is this figure of energy? what shape does it take? Does it explode on contact? What's the proportions of the explosion?

And that sword. Does the dark aura do anything to the sword, or is it just for appearances? All in all, your attacks need MORE EXPLAINING.

Again finished and I really am having trouble stating the speed but here another look

Describe how EXACTLY the shades "scans for info"
Describe whether or not the black flames are just like ordinary flames, if not, explain what EXACTLY separates these flames from the ordinary ones.
Keep at it, you're almost there.

.....There I think I got it this time,...

Not yeeeeeeet.

Specify exactly HOW strong the fire is against Water and Ice. Can it take on a 0 tier's ice? (It better not.)
Either provide an image for the "True Appearance", or describe it more thoroughly. One fat paragraph should do.

Please try again.