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Valon Craw [5-1; Hazard Rank: E] Empty Valon Craw [5-1; Hazard Rank: E]

Wed Apr 22, 2020 7:02 pm
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Enter The Hollow
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I. Basic Information


» Name: Valon Craw
» Age: He used to be 16
» Gender: Male
» Race: Hollow

» Association: None

» Appearance Written: Resembling the basic Frog hollow, only more vertically human and with jagged spikes coming out of the top of his mask. His skin is a deep purple and a Halloween orange tongue. ]

» Appearance Image:

II. Personality


» Personality: » Personality: cowardly, and hesitant. He dislikes being the first to strike or the center of attention. His preferred strategy is to sit by the side and bide his time, strike when the enemy is weak. Having a great deal of attention on him, causes him to panic and revert to his more instinctual combat.

III. History


» History: » History: At one time, he was a child. An only child that grew up with his father in a small town. Many days were spent walking to and from school, a simple every day activity. One day the child returned home to find the door to his house open. Expecting to see his father he happily rushed inside. Indeed, his father was inside cold and lifeless, a bullet wound through his back.
The poor child screamed for what felt like hours as the police arrived. Poor Valon was placed into foster care until he grew into a teenager. Skittish and traumatized by the event no family would take the ‘damaged’ child. Finally one day the poor child turned teen ran off into the night, he ran into a few older kids who took him in, gave him food and shelter under the bypass for a time, until they all fell on hard times. Cops we’re looking for them so they cut their losses, and by extension him.
Valon awoke a few minutes later to the sound of sirens, an officer sobbing over his body. Unfortunately, he was no longer the kid on the ground. Panic quickly claimed him, and before long he found himself taller, larger, and hungrier than he was in life. He wanted to feed, he need to feed. But, his feet wouldn’t move, eyes glued to the scene before him. Tears began to flow as he screamed like the hollow he now was. It had been a long time sense Valon felt the true weight of his sorrow, and for a long time he stood there, shedding the tears he’d saved up over a life time.
This…this would be the anchor to keep his mind whole. Not the joy of his childhood, or the moments spent with his father. In this moment, sense the loss of his father, he felt someone care for him. Someone mourn him. The hunger would always be there, but for now this feeling, these tears he sheds, they are what mattered most.


IV. Equipment


» Equipment: [If your hollow has any equipment? Put it here. If they don't, skip this section.]

V. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills


» Racial Abilities: [You can put any customized racial skills/abilities/techniques in here that range from your hollow's acidic skill, Garganta, cero, regeneration, Negacion and so on. If you don't want to, skip it.]

VI. Powers


» Hollow Power: [Please specify their unique power. You can have up to 2-4 power sets.]

I. Skill Sheet


(To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not fill your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. The staff member checking your app will also give you Will Skills in which you can add to your app when approved. Click the spoiler below to see what tier gets what kind of skills.)

Spoiler:

General Skills
  • Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Trained/Beginner/Untrained
  • General Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Weapon Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained


Hollow Skills
  • Acid Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Spiritual Pollution: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Cero/Bala: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Regeneration: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Mental Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained




VIII. Role Play Sample


» Roleplay Sample: It was cold as the rain fell over the town, the street lights had kicked on as night finally came to pass. “Such a quiet place,” Valon sighs, “I need to make this quick. I don’t want any more trouble today.” As he leaps off a balcony into the streets below seeking food, just a snack to tide him over. “Please, there needs to be something.” He trudges from building to building seeking a soul, strong, weak, he didn’t care, just something to help him sleep. Suddenly a powerful spiritual pressure alerts him to the arrival of several soul reapers not too far off from his position. “No, not now.” Valon, begins to panic. He begins to open a way back to Hueco Mundo when a loud crash hits the wall beside him. Their stands a woman blade drawn towards him, “where do you think you’re going, monster?”

END OF THE POST

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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner



Hazard Rankings
  • Power:E Rank
  • Influence: F Rank
  • Resources: F Rank



Comments/Notes: Alright, it looks like everything is fine with your app. I'm going to give you a 5-1 rank as it looks like this character is going to be developed more through threads. And, as you get more familiar with the site, you'll get the hang of our power/combat system. So, with that said, if you have any issues let me know.

Tier: 5-1
Hazard Rating: E Rank


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