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Mon Jun 28, 2010 1:20 am
name:nuito keoto

age:21

gender: male

Personality:Nuito is a kind warm hearted man who everyone loves to be around.Though he has a very slaughter like personality when it comes to fighting.Intending on attempting to an opponent even if it means destroying himself.

Appearence: https://2img.net/h/i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn35/akatsukilord555/0828.jpg (minus the crown)

Null weapon/tool: He carries around a reiatsu powered magnum That has a long barrel a foot long and it is purley black.It looks somthing like an old western revolver only quite a bit larger.The glow off the magnum seems to be silver. It is powered with reiatsu blasts when fired. It is his signature weapon in battle. It is esspecially hand crafted by him using his own skils as a former weapon smith.

purity level of reiatsu: moderate-pure

quincy/Null tools:

Alchemy:Zitteraal-Schicht: This coating of Reiatsu gives the weapon or object a shocking surprise. Giving of a constant current of electricity, this can be quite nasty, since it can cause numbness or even nerval damage in living things. This technique requires more control and is very difficult to be used to enchant something permanently.

Blitz wave:This technique allows The user to transmute wind into a large wave of lightning. The user swings his arms after clapping his hands together folding the hand towards the direction the attack should go.After doing this a large wave of lighting forms in the wind as it flys towards the opponent causing burns or parylsis if the opponent is weaker then him.

explodirien anfassen :By using alchemy He can make any object he touches explosive.All objects except living beings such as trees animals and humans.

Blitz kugel:By combining the zitteraal schicht technique and lightning alchemy.Using a gun type weapon into a lighting fast hit that numbs the wound so the opponent dosent feel pain.

Explosivstoff Kugel:This technique is also combined with the zitteraal schicht technique using the same exact gun type weapon as a medium with alchemy. only this time apon impact the bullet explodes instead of penetrating .The explosion is the size of a a regular grenade blast though equally as deadly as a grenade.

geist kanone:This attack is a reiatsu powered shot shot used with a magnum.This if the trigger is pulled on the back of the gun can shoot a cero sized shot at the opponent. Only unlike a cero it actually gose threw them.

geist maschine kanone:This Technique shoots several geist kanones at once with rapid firing added to it.like the geist kanone when the dtrigger gose back it rapid fire several large blasts of cero sized shots at the opponent.

Nuklear ausburch: Unlike its name its not the exsact size of a nuclear bomb.If a transmutation circle is drawn on the ground it explodes to that size and a shockwave blast for 1 mile wider. It has the abbility to destroy karakura town if a transmutation circle is drawn around the hole town. Also it releases a toxin that slowly desinegrates an opponents skin for a 10 mile radius. The opponent secretly enhales the gas apon explosion so it dosent really need to hit. unless the opponent gets within 10 miles away from the explosion.

Aufblenden geben: the technique forms lightning around the users hand for meele.It also increases the speed of the punch and can cut threw other lightning bolts.Tis technique can also can cut threw hierro with relative ease.However it can only be used twice before the users arms get parylyzed.Mainly because it can drain your reiatsu with relative ease

schrecklich anfassen:Using the opponents body as a transmutation circle.The user can shock the opponents entire body and damage internal organs. It can also parylyze an opponent if it touches The spine of someones body.Almost permanatly damaging there spine to the point where they cant move a muscle Thus leaving them helpless.It can also damage muscles on the opponents body giving them excruciating pain.

Destruction technique:This technique apon touching an object or person can entirely destroy the object shattering it. If this is use on a human it can remove an entire limb by grabbing it.Also if you touch an opponents torso area The same internal wounding occurs light the schrecklich anfassen.

Bomb shelter technique:As a defensive attack he is able to make the ground underneath him turn into a defensive wall.This technique can protect against the most powerful of techniques.It can also survive a nuclear blast without even getting scratched.

blitz Klang: This technique fuses the area into a lighting wolf that is used for range. This technique can be used two ways.The first way is fusing it with air and blows with a lighting based attack.The other way is using it with the Zitteraal-Schicht technique. Apon impact this techique explodes damaging the opponent severally.

Ausburch Beleidigungen : This technique sends a chain of explosions Towards a large range of areas. The user places his hand on the ground and an explosion occurs causing several explosions to occur as well.

Aburch stanzen: The opponent adds the same force as an explosion to his attacks.Thus pushing the opponent away much farther then a regular punch would.

Blitz speed:The users speed increases to that equivalent to lightning.the users feet also spark lightning able to use quick and deadly lightning based attacks on an opponent if needed



Bakground/History:Nuito is from the keoto family the same family as musashi-keoto was from. He is cousin of musashi-keoto the family was known for humans with special abbilities.As a child he was abadoned from his mother and father who were quincy.When they realize he was a null they tried to kill him.But like his cousin musashi he didn't take this very likely.HE lives orphaned on the streets all of his life.But a few years later he got into guns and joined the local militaries ammunition plant. Later in his life he owned a gun store for a short time.Thus the creation of his null weapon the magnum.over the years he has been wandering and decided to rest himself in karakura town.

RP sample:
The male named nuito walked around swirling around his magnum.As he stared off into the distance he woundered quietly about his past.All of the things he did to get to were he was today.He was just a street wanderer,Having no place to go.He saw a garganta open in the sky. The male pulled out his gun aiming it at the hollow about to cum out. He pulled back the trigger leaving it charging.The hollow bursted out the hole towards nuito.The male sighed firing it at the creature a large white cero size blast went towards the being.It seemed to cause an explosion the hollow fell from the sky.Its limbs were blown off.The male walked over to the creature sighing gently aiming his gun at it.''....so long..''the male sighed as he let out 3 shots of reiatsu bullets at the creature.The null sighed lookin at the moon His hair blowing in the wind. ''There is always pain and destruction in this world.....''The male said with a sigh as his hair glowed in the night. The male tapped both of his boots as electricity flowed from them. He started to run leaving nothing but a flash.He aimed his gun while running at his insane speed.''EXPLOSIVOFF KUGEL!!!''The male boomed as he shot at a building.An explosion occured chipping off the tip of the building.The male smirked widly as he ran quickly.......


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Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:07 am
Hey, It's Urufu. Most of the application looks good, except for the Alchemy. First off, this is not Full Metal Alchemist. We don't need transmutation circles. Secondly, you can't transmute wind into lightning. That would be nigh impossible, seeing as wind is a combination of Oxygen, Nitrogen, and Hydrogen, as well as a few other less common elements. It takes a lot of skill for a Null to transmute more than one Element at the same time.

Blitz wave:This technique allows The user to transmute wind into a large wave of lightning. The user swings his arms after clapping his hands together folding the hand towards the direction the attack should go.After doing this a large wave of lighting forms in the wind as it flys towards the opponent causing burns or parylsis if the opponent is weaker then him.

explodirien anfassen :By using alchemy He can make any object he touches explosive.All objects except living beings such as trees animals and humans. How does he do this? What specifically does he enchant these items with? What are his limits?

Blitz kugel:By combining the zitteraal schicht technique and lightning alchemy.Using a gun type weapon into a lighting fast hit that numbs the wound so the opponent dosent feel pain. What is Lightning Alchemy?

Explosivstoff Kugel:This technique is also combined with the zitteraal schicht technique using the same exact gun type weapon as a medium with alchemy. only this time apon impact the bullet explodes instead of penetrating .The explosion is the size of a a regular grenade blast though equally as deadly as a grenade.

geist kanone:This attack is a reiatsu powered shot shot used with a magnum.This if the trigger is pulled on the back of the gun can shoot a cero sized shot at the opponent. Only unlike a cero it actually gose threw them.

geist maschine kanone:This Technique shoots several geist kanones at once with rapid firing added to it.like the geist kanone when the dtrigger gose back it rapid fire several large blasts of cero sized shots at the opponent.

Nuklear ausburch: Unlike its name its not the exsact size of a nuclear bomb.If a transmutation circle is drawn on the ground it explodes to that size and a shockwave blast for 1 mile wider. It has the abbility to destroy karakura town if a transmutation circle is drawn around the hole town. Also it releases a toxin that slowly desinegrates an opponents skin for a 10 mile radius. The opponent secretly enhales the gas apon explosion so it dosent really need to hit. unless the opponent gets within 10 miles away from the explosion. No. Just no. We don't use Transmutation circles, nor do we use Nuclear Or Radioactive elements. Also, this isn't even Alchemy. This move is way too overpowered for an app of this quality.

Aufblenden geben: the technique forms lightning around the users hand for meele.It also increases the speed of the punch and can cut threw other lightning bolts.Tis technique can also can cut threw hierro with relative ease.However it can only be used twice before the users arms get parylyzed.Mainly because it can drain your reiatsu with relative ease
So, this enchants the users hand? Also, how does it increase the users speed? It isn't affecting the muscle.

schrecklich anfassen:Using the opponents body as a transmutation circle.The user can shock the opponents entire body and damage internal organs. It can also parylyze an opponent if it touches The spine of someones body.Almost permanatly damaging there spine to the point where they cant move a muscle Thus leaving them helpless.It can also damage muscles on the opponents body giving them excruciating pain.
Like was said with the Nuclear Transmutation, no transmutation circles. Also, is this an enchantment or Transmutation? There is no tranmutation on living things if it is used Offensively.

Destruction technique:This technique apon touching an object or person can entirely destroy the object shattering it. If this is use on a human it can remove an entire limb by grabbing it.Also if you touch an opponents torso area The same internal wounding occurs light the schrecklich anfassen.
No.

Bomb shelter technique:As a defensive attack he is able to make the ground underneath him turn into a defensive wall.This technique can protect against the most powerful of techniques.It can also survive a nuclear blast without even getting scratched.
How does that even work? This isn't alchemy


blitz Klang: This technique fuses the area into a lighting wolf that is used for range. This technique can be used two ways.The first way is fusing it with air and blows with a lighting based attack.The other way is using it with the Zitteraal-Schicht technique. Apon impact this techique explodes damaging the opponent severally.
What Area? Also, how does it fuse lightning into a wolf?


Ausburch Beleidigungen : This technique sends a chain of explosions Towards a large range of areas. The user places his hand on the ground and an explosion occurs causing several explosions to occur as well.
Is this an enchantment? How does placing his hand on the ground cause explosions?


Aburch stanzen: The opponent adds the same force as an explosion to his attacks.Thus pushing the opponent away much farther then a regular punch would.
How?

Blitz speed:The users speed increases to that equivalent to lightning.the users feet also spark lightning able to use quick and deadly lightning based attacks on an opponent if needed
How?
What I need is for you to go give me the list of things you can transmute, like is written in my app. Also, No Nuclear or Radioactive transmutations. I need things like "Oxygen (The german word for Become is Werde) Nitrogen" in German, and then explain how Nuito transforms oxygen into Nitrogen, perhaps in his canteen that every null should have or in his hand.

Please make sure to explain what is an enchantment and what isn't

So to recap, merely work on your alchemy. If you can, I would like the history to be a bit longer as well.
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I'm moving this to the Archive because the Original Poster said he is canceling this character out. I'm also locking the thread. If Musashi still wants this character, contact me and I'll bring it out of the archive.


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