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Xion
Xion
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Joined : 2011-02-07
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Age : 36
Location : Gainesville VA

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Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:34 am
S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Xion Menboku
Gender: Male
Age: 1252
Appearance: The shinigami known as Menboku Xion can described as " Ruggedly dashing". With his broad chin and high cheek bones many women before his wife had crushes on him for his good looks. Not a massive man by any means standing at 6' 3" he is rather tall and weighing in at a decent 217 lbs he has managed to pack on quite a bit of mass upon his rather scraggly frame.

His brown eyes give root an earthy calming feel when gazed into and his long free flowing locks give off a sense of both masculine freedom as well as feminine contempt. These locks span all the way down to the small of his back and are always kept in the best condition often being twisted at least once a week to keep their form.

He is one of the strongest shinigami not only physically but reiatically as well. From a physical outlook he is not the person anyone should wish to have to contend with and he keeps his body in top physical form like a well maintained sword inorder to keep it that way. He has very few weaknesses physically. One major weakness he does have thought lies in the fact that the stronger techinques of his zanpakutou often leave him slightly open to attacks. On top of that he is also rather tall which can sometimes cause him trouble when fighting significantly smaller opponents. He can often overcome this slight weakness by using his superior size to overpower his opponent as well as out move his opponent via his superior physical agility.


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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality: A man so hurt that he chooses to not let anyone get close to him. The captain is a man who has only one passion. The only place his heart lies is with the shinigami as well as the hope that one day this war will come to an end. When around others he can often seem cheerful or even happy however deep inside of his heart he is truly depressed. He still has not truly gotten over the loss of his son or his wife and in so can be rather sensitive at times. However, he does not let this get in the way of his duties and always stands at the ready to dispense justice where it is due. Do not let the sensitivity fool you, he is not a man anyone would wish to cross and he intends to back up the hype surrounding his abilities. Passionate, caring, and strong willed.

even thought he is a slight pushover by nature, he has a will and determination found in few. He is willing to lay down his life at any moment without hesitation. He is also a master of technique as well as a strategic genius. With this in mind he is quite the formidable opponent mentally for even the strongest of opponents. Even though he has great courage and mental determination he is also very delicate. He is capable of taking critisim to a point before he becomes upset. Also, because of the effects of the war on his emotional state he can be made depressed rather easily. He is also far to forgiving of things that others

He fights for many different reasons however, he fights mainly for the preservation of both shinigami and human life. He believes fighting is capable of teaching people lessons they could learn no other way. He also fights in the hopes that one day through his many advances to the shinigami as well as his leadership capabilities, he will be able to bring this conflict to a close allowing all sides time to heal.
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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: I was born several years ago under a large palm tree in the center of my home village. Back then we called it Yaputu but now we know it as Kingston. Back then, we were a nomadic people and I can remember as clear as day the toll nomadic life took on my parents by the many wrinkles shown upon their faces. I was born into a time long before modernization had ever reached the island. We were apparently “Savages“, according to the whities who came to the island shortly after my birth. Dressed in a garb my people had never seen before we at first thought they were our saviors but shortly after came to the harsh realization that they were merely wolves in sheep skin.

At the age of five, my parents were forced into slavery. Day in and day out my father would work in the sugar cane fields while my mother would work in the factories. My father picking the cane, which my mother would then crush into sugar to turn into rum which the whities would sell back home. I however, was at first oblivious to all of this. All the islands children were placed into schools with which we could learn how to read, write, and communicate in the language of the whities. Back then I didn’t have any friends and I was more then happy to be alone.

Around the age of eight, my parents as well as many of the other slaves decided to revolt. This however proved to be a fatal mistake. Both my mother and father were killed during the battle with me being murdered shortly after. It may not seem as if I am warm towards them however, I did not know them very well. All I can distinctly remember is the smell of my mother’s jerk sauce on her hands every time she would pick me up to hold me or anytime she would feed me. For those memories I am happy yet everything dies eventually and even at a young age I knew that to be a fact.

I awoke to the site of my own body beneath me. This strange chain hanging from the center of my chest, I pulled on it to find that end of it was being eaten slowly. At the time I didn’t understand it and crouched down weeping for several hours. This weeping was both a curse and a blessing. I wouldn’t be here right now if it wasn’t for the hollow my weeping attracted. It’s grotesque form encroaching upon my space. Just in time to avoid a quick swipe towards my pathetic skull I noticed its presence. I screamed and as I did so I ran between its legs and out the back end. The fear was so intense that I could feel it in my stomach and up in threw my throat.

I would have surly been devoured if it hadn’t been for one of our very own Shinigami who stepped in and purified it. Scared and shaken up, the Shinigami just smiled and reassuringly sent me on my way to Soul Society. Upon my arrival I was greeted by a small group of people who told me where I was and how the society worked in Rukongai. I was then assigned to Rukongai district 10 where I met my guardian named “Musashi“. Musashi was a rather strange man. All district 10 seemed to know and respect him. Out of all the houses within District 10 it seemed as though his house was the most elaborate. With luxuries such as tapestries as well as the cleanest water and tastiest food money could buy, I felt spoiled.

This spoiling went on for several years until had been in Rukongai for over 30 years. I was a bit bigger then and had learned a lot about how Soul Society ran as well as what the point behind the shinigami was. I envied the Shinigami. They had the power to not only save people but also the power to protect them. Musashi would always tell when I was ready he would do everything within his power to help me become a Shinigami. Luckily enough for me that time was then and my training was to start immediately.

Come to find out Musashi was actually apart of one of Soul Societies former noble families. Musashi was the only member from his family who chose to live among the common peoples of Rukongai. However, he would use his influence as well as families wealth to help the people of Rukongai. Using this very influence I was able to higher a former shinigami who had retired to prepare me for the exams. Those years preparing for the exams were long and hard. I was trained in reiatsu strengthening techniques for four hours a day as well as swordplay for another five. Some days I trained so hard that my hands were so blistered and painful that I could barely pick up my chopsticks to feed myself.

After fifty years of intense training I was allowed to take the academy entrance exams. The reiatsu requirement for someone to be allowed entry into the academy is a score of at least a 20 on a scale of 100 on the reiatsu index. I scored an 85 which meant I was not only admitted but guaranteed a spot in the gotei 13 after my completion of the academy. Sadly, that was also the last time I saw Musashi face to face.

I graduated from the academy head of the advanced class and was placed into the 8th squad. My first assignment upon my commissioning was within the 8th squad’s archives. My job back then was to aid in the filing as well as upkeep of the archives themselves as well as the aiding of the sixth squad in any historical needs they may have. The job was cushy and something I enjoyed. Due to the peace allotted us by the sixth squad’s excellent defense force I had many hours of free time to spend learning more about the past of Soul Society.

During one of those many hours I stumbled upon a small report on my old guardian Musashi. It turned out that Musashi was indeed a captain at one time. However, he then stepped down around the decline of his noble family. I also learned that their old compound was now abandoned. I took that information and over four years turned that compound into my secret training grounds. With my duty at the time not allowing me to see combat I knew I had to figure out a way to get stronger, and those very compounds were it.

After the completion of the compound’s transformation, I had begun to cross reference my training along side some of the materials I had acquired while doing my duties. Over the next ten years I trained daily. Spending eight hours a day on the job then transitioning into three hours of physical conditioning and two hours of mental conditioning, it was not easy however, it is what allowed me the capacity to get stronger thereby going up through the ranks quicker.

One can imagine that if someone where to begin to get stronger others would notice. That very thought came to fruition when the second squad captain at the time could feel my increase in strength every time we spoke. A request was then put in to have me moved from the archives of squad 8 into the division head ranks of squad 2. I was brought in as the squads 3rd seat. This was more because of the fact that I did not possess shikai at the time more then an inability to fight.

Around this time the fighting had begun to heat up yet again. The quincy seemed to be growing exponentially while the Shinigami were scrounging for people. The second squad captain was utilizing the demon corps more then ever. With each ensuing conflict I felt as thought I was going to die. Each battle was harder then the last and during those early years within the second squad I lost very many people who were close to me.

I knew if I wanted to be able to protect those close to me I was going to need to at least learn my blade’s name. I returned back to the same compound I rebuilt and allowed history to repeat itself once further. I trained so hard some days my hands would be so blistered I would have to visit 4th squad to have them rehabilitated. I figured no one would ask questions especially with the severity of the missions the second squad was assigned.

After 20 long years of training my blade finally blessed me with the knowledge of its name. With the command and name “Enbu, Ongakuouja“, my blade would spring to life. At first I didn’t understand the purpose behind the shikai’s ability, but after only one battle with it I was able to deduce the blade’s true capability. The squad captain was most pleased when they witnessed the blade at work and in turn promoted me to the second most prestigious position within a squad. I had finally become a vice captain and wore my arm band with pride as I fought across the battlefield.

My life back then was good. I was in a prestigious position with the second squad and had a captain who was both caring and powerful. She was graceful and beautiful and my care for her well being grew into a deep rooted love and infatuation with her. At one point I was so intoxicated by her presence that I finally admitted to her that I loved her. She too recognized the bond between us, and then began the love affair between me and my captain. We loved each other deeply yet knew into squad relationships were forbidden among a captain and their subordinates. We still chose to love one and other and refused to hide our love and when someone is in love would you expect them to?

The next three years were the most peaceful years of my life. During those years the Soutaichou at the time had found out about our love. To my surprise they decided to keep it under wraps for us instead of informing chamber 46. I was just told “A love as pure and innocent as the one you two share should not be divided by a simple code of conduct.” To this day anytime I pray I always say thank you to the spirit of that same Soutaichou. Well, during those years we had also secretly been wed.

Fearing an outcry of bias from the rest of the squad members; towards the tail end of the three years of peace, I took up a position as the professor of historical science within the Shinigami academy then being transferred into the 5th squad. Taking this position meant I would have been demoted to 3rd seat. However, I took this demotion gladly as long as it meant we could still be married. Those years are still some of the best memories of my life and they will never be replaced.

Those peaceful years suddenly came to an abrupt end as my wife the second squad captain as well as her new vice captain were slain while on a peacekeeping mission in Karakura town. The loss of my wife crushed me deeply and my outlook on the shinigami as well as this war shifted drastically. I knew then that in order for us as a people to heal we would need to end this conflict.

Taking up only my sword I took a hiatus from teaching in the academy. During my hiatus I was trained for 10 years only focusing on what skills I would need to be strong enough to become a captain. I figured that captain’s were in a position to where they could possibly bring this war to an end. The means by which I knew a captain position could become within my reach was bankai and I intended to obtain it. Therefore, day in and day out week after week and month after month I trained tirelessly. While working in the archives I read up on the historical findings and research on bankai and used that to my advantage.

Finally after over 10 years of intensive training and mental focus I was granted the knowledge of Bankai by my blade. I took this new found skill back with me to the Gotei 13 and with the 8th gotei taichou position open I took the captainship exams. After several days of deliberation I was found acceptable for the position and was immediately promoted to the rank of eighth squad captain.

With a new white robe to adorn my shoulders and a new found position I had begun work on ways to possibly reduce shinigami casualties in battle. For this task I enlisted the help of the 12th squad captain. I used my influence back in the archives to allow the 6th squad captain access to some of Soul Societies most top secret of technological information. I also used my ties to Musashi’s noble family in order to facilitate the funding required to begin live tests.

After over 100 years of combined efforts and the coming and going of the 6th squad captain I was able to deduce a style of combat now known as the “diamond offensive“. This formation and battle tactic was given its name due to the almost unstoppable nature behind its defensive capabilities. The way the formation works is that it involves a grouping of 10 shinigami standing back to back each utilizing an item which is capable of mimicking the effects of Danku on a much larger scale.

The genius of my efforts was noticed by the then current Soutaichou and I was made into their advisor. My life then was at last good again. I was a well respected and well vetted captain with over 120 years of loyal service within the eight squad. The only thing I was missing was a vice captain. In the over 100 years of my captainship I felt as thought I still was not over the loss of my wife and in turn incapable of fostering a healthy close nit relationship with anyone. The time had come where I was able to finally come to terms with my loss and pick a new vice captain.

At the recommendation of the current 6th squad captain I promoted a rookie. A lowly 10th seat within my squad to the rank of vice captain. My reasons for choosing him back then were simple. He was strong, fierce, and had a base reiatsu equivalent to that of double a normal vice captain. This in turn lead me to believe he had some outside training or influence just as I did helping to make him stronger. In the end we were close, he was like the son my wife and I had always hoped for. It’s a damn shame she wasn’t alive to see this bright young man I grew to call our son.

My son was good at it and was not afraid to subdue any shinigami convicted of trying to flee from their duties and I was proud of him for it. Like any proud parent I would tell the other captain’s about my son’s accomplishments as well as his many triumphs. This happiness would not go on for long when after another 5 years my son vanished.

I had truly been dealt another harsh blow. I lost my wife, my son, and many of the people I had grown to call friend during my time as a shinigami. I chose to not let my inner feelings hinder my duties as I continued my work on shinigami life preservation. My work was my life again and I was happy to leave it that way. No messy feelings or emotions to get in the way. That was how I thought back then and only now do I actually see how wrong I was for feeling that way.

Another 100 years came and went and all was good. I had as well as the other two captains had come up with better ways to protect shinigami. For the first time in a long time the large scale battles had all but vanished into the frame work of history. Several years have came and went and now I feel delighted to see others have taken up the task along side me in leading the Shinigami.

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Ongakuouja (Music King)

Appearance: The spirit known as Ongakuouja is both sexy and secretive. When first eyed by the wielder she can be very creative in ways to appeal to the user. She chooses to appear as that of a young golden armor clad maiden in sleek golden armored pumps. Her hair is long and blonde and her eyes shine forth with a fiery golden glow. She stands at roughly 6' 0" tall and looks to weigh less then 140LBS.

Her personality can best be described as ravenous and rewarding. Originally she will request that the user pay homage to her often requesting at least one hour of their time daily so she may get to know the wielder and vice versa. After a short while she will then challenge the wielder often not allowing herself to be wielded by a weakling. Should the user win this contest of will and determination then she will gladly bestow upon them her name.

Once the wielder is ready to bring her to their realm she will require them first to show her a measure of their " faith" in her. She often will force them to fight a powerful adversary without the aid of their shikai but rather the aid of her sealed form alone. Should the user pass this test then she will come to the wielder's world to engage in the requirements for them to obtain her ultimate honor.

Once the Bankai has been mastered she will then see the wielder as an equal. No longer will she regard them as child or one who requires teaching. She will also allow the user free range of her truest strengths not allowed during any other point in their blade and wielder dynamic.

Inner World: The inner world of Ongakuouja is that of a light based bliss. When first arriving one appears outside of the large golden walls of a massive city. Until the blade's name is learned the massive golden gates to the city are locked and one is only capable of looking yet not being able to tread any further. The massive sits aloft massive cloud like objects which seem to keep the city stable and without movement. The world does have a sun however the gold that comprises the city itself shines so bright it can appear as if a second smaller sun can be seen from the horizon. The city itself is quite large and to the the naked eye can appear as if it extends for an eternity in all directions.

The inside of the city contains massive golden fixtures and buildings. It is perpetual sunlight at all times within the city and the sweet sounds of classic style music can be heard coming from the city center. Their can be seen no other people other then Ongakuouja herself and the wielder who has been invited into her domain. The buildings are stark and large and from all directions one is incapable of seeing over the large golden walls which not only give the city protection but also give the city a feeling of seclusion from the rest of the cloudy world around the city.

Even thought the city has no other apparent denezins over the course of the wielder's life the city itself has been known to change. The city originally was dark and black placed filled with perpetual night. This was until the wielder learned to cull his inner sadness and focus enough to reach out for the means to accomplish there goals. This in turn caused the city to shift from a rusting and dank state of delapedation to a state of inviting sunlight and stucco arch deco styling and fountains and surfaces of gold, ivory, and marble. In the city center can be seen a massive infinity pool with a large golden piano along the pools right bank side.

Originally the music being played was that of a depressing blend of funeral organ ensembles and silence. However, since the wielder psychological metamorphasis the sweet sounds of harps as well as classical style music can be heard. Xion has been known to appear within the city to witness Ongakuouja gracing her fingers upon the keys of that piano as Xion sits next to her to spend time with his peacekeeper.

Sealed Zanpakutô : The sealed form of Ongakuoujka is that of a longer then normal wakizashi. The guard itself is comprised of a simple round form placed neatly above the deep red threadings which line the hilt's core. The core of the hilt is comprised of a white pearl like material which allows for the wielder to have a sense of both grip and security when grasping it's length. The blade is long and the tsuba is deep and rich along the blade edge.

The sheath of this blade is long and smooth and feels as if it were made of a thicker grade balsa wood then normally used in most Japanese style housing fixtures such as soji screens. The sheath has a glossy red finish to it and has no defining details other then the words Ongaku in traditional hiragana along the underside of the blade two inches beneath the hand guard.

In this form the blade is normally stored at the wielder's side to ensure for easy access therebye allowing for the use of batoujutsu style swordplay. The sword's long red thread tails also allow for the blade to be strapped to the back of the wielder as to keep the sword's main form out of the site of those in stance before the wielder.

This form is also the form most seen at the side of Ongakuouja when visiting the world she inhabits. She has been seen having is astrewn her left hip along the tails of the sheath to waft in the wind or get swept up should she go swimming in the pool within the city center.

PhatomTech: No


Release: Enbu! (Waltz) Ongakuoukja (Music king)

Shikai Description: Ongakuouja's release form is a site to be seen. When then blade's true name along with the proper command are said the blade springs to life. The guard of the blade extends outward into a visible circle of energy which encompasses the entire width of the guard. The blade itself become a glowing blade made of a strange red energy which is bright and will cast a colored shadow upon those near it. The inner threadings around the hilt transform to not only red as they were in the sealed from but now a black as well.

The runes comprising the light circumfrence around the sword guard are different and each one is capable of condensing sound waves. The sheath of the sword will no longer be present when the blade enters into it's shikai.

Shikai Abilities: In shikai, the blade allows the user the ability to fire off condensed sound wave pressure in the form of weapons. This pressure takes the form of many different bladed weapons such as swords, knives, daggers, and halbards. On average this ability is capable of allowing the user to fire off up to 10 weapons at a time. However, the user must dance in order for a weapon to be fired off.

This is accomplished by the blade taking the physical sound vibrations created by things around it weither it be nature itself or a physical object or entity. The sound is collected within the massive ring of light surrounding the hand guard and then condensed within the runes comprising the light circumfrence.

While only retaining one actual ability while in shikai this zanpakutou is quite useful and versatile allowing the user to generate weapons that are useable for any situation they may be in. The approximate time of sound condensing is that of 5 seconds ( half a post ) with the user being able to fire moments after collecting and condensing has been completed.


Bankai Description: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

Bankai Abilities: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample: So you wanna hear about how this little slice of heaven we call home came about huh? Well kiddo you came to the right person. Way back before you or even me where a glimmer and our daddies eyes their where ninja’s roaming around. Sort of like nomads or those damned feral cats you always seem to bring home. But anyway, eventually those nin’s decided to come together and start to form large collectives within towns. These towns as their numbers grew became what we know now as the nin villages. Originally a small village like us now was all that was needed for a country of decent size however, sure as I am your grandpapaw it was not long before those rock eating bastards decided to annex our country, you know this village as Iwagakurei today. Those rock throwing bastards were so shook and scared by the thought of another country taking us over and in turn decided to utilize their imperialistic ideals. It’s one thing to annex a people but when you attempt to assassinate the daimyo then your gonna have problems. Well daimyo karasu kenji did not die in that attempt and was actually wounded. I feel bad for those mud pie eating worm lovers for what happened next. Turns out ol kenji had a female companion who also happened to be quite the strong nin. Not to mention she was also one crazy women when it came to her man and in a short time was able to rally enough nin’s to want to revolt. We revolted from the land of rock and those mud slinging pansies they think pass as ninja. Back onto the topic at hand; after several months of fighting and even thought we were outnumbered we came out on top. I think it came from the fact that the crazy chick managed to pay those earth nin’s a visit in their newly established outpost on mount tower. We managed to carve a little slice from iwagakurei’s pride and founded this marvelous village known as “ Amegakurei “ or the village hidden among rain since it rains so damn much.
Then came a time of peace, as I said before those rock nin’s where nothing but punks they didn’t even try to suppress us again this lasted for several years until we appointed one of the greatest minds to ever rise to power in our village. The man’s name was Jyuushiro and he was a legend even among the many legends of the larger villages. We had finally had our star and just in time too. When shortly after his appointment Konohagakurei decided to try and boss us around. We didn’t like that too much either I guess they didn’t get the hint when we revolted against earth country but hey as I always tell you hard head make em soft ass. For the next 20 years we fought konohagakurei. Man that was bloody war and we lost many good nins. We also lost a good leader when 5 years before the war ended our famed star had stepped down and vanished just as quickly as he had risen to power. We still to this day don’t know what the hell happened to him but I’m sure he’s long gone by now.
With good ol Jyuushiro gone we had leaders come and go and for a while it would seem we lost our greatest legend. It was then when Minami "Chi Shujin" Ryuu was promoted to command of the Jounin forces and in turn our villages leader that we again began to believe that heros can exist among men. Those years under his reign were both prosperous yet peaceful it would seem his reputation proceeded him and many villages were intimidated by the thought of a conflict with him at the reigns. This didn’t last for too much longer until he was assassinated by those bitter konoha bastards. I guess they were still upset and licking their wounds from the last war we had with them. This was quite a blow to us yet we still managed to work through it.

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S K I L L S H E E T

{Please do not fill out the following until your character has a tier}

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Mon Feb 07, 2011 2:33 pm
Let's see what's up with this application now... ಠ_ಠ


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  • Name [O]
  • Appropriate Age [O]
  • Gender [O]
  • Appearance Present [O]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [O]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [-](not yet)
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in [O]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [O]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]


Comments/Notes: I DENY this app now. The reasons being first, and most importantly, the RP sample, AND the histoy DOESN'T WORK. I see first person in both of them. History isn't supposed to be in first person, and the RP sample is confusing as to whethre he is actually speaking, or if you're writing in first person. I do not see ANY actions made in the sample, at least not in third person. You are to Fix up BOTH the history and the RP sample so it doesn't contain "I","Me","we","my" (UNLESS the character is speaking: "Hey kid, I know all the tricks to making a good RP, how about we get together and train?"). I am not sure if you are trying to make it like he's NARRATING the history, if that's so, put in THIRD PERSON detail of him chatting to some people somewhere to signify that he's actually NARRATING his history. If that could be done, then the history could double as an RP sample.

Second: Your appearance is too bague, even with those skinny paragraphs of yours, not enough detail is added. Not to mention you put irrelevant information in the last paragraph. SAVE the strengths/weaknesses/capeabilities for the ABILITIES section. I reccomend you add a "Weakness/strengths" section in your app when explaining your skills and weak spots.

Third: You CAN'T be a captain until your position is accepted in the Gotei 13 heiarchy, which is unlikely since BANKAI is required to be a captain. As of now, due to the high quantity of shinigami made, BANKAI isn't allowed, so most likely you cannot be a captain. EVEN if your age is fitting to learn Bankai. Sorry, but the good guy spots such as the Gotei are OVERLOADED now.

And then the powers themselves. The shikai description is just too vauge. Put MORE DETAIL in your shikai abilities. Can the created weapons be seen? What do they look like? HOW can they be visible if made out of INVISIBLE forces (sound). Do the created weapons act like their physical counterpart?Do the weapons have any other effects for being composed of vibrations? How durable are they? Is dancing the ONLY means to using this ability? EXPLAIN MORE.
Tier:AFTER you fix up your profile.

Xion Menboku Uncle3
One moooooore thing!

IF you choose to make Xion an Arrancar instead, the chances of you starting at a high tier are much more likely, have Res and Segunda Etapa (if applying for Espada), AND the likeliness of being Espada is much higher compared to being a captain in the Gotei 13. This is because there are MUCH LESS Arrancar and bad guys in general. The gap needs to be filled, and to have MORE shinigami would only make it worse.

That is all, for now.


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Mon Feb 07, 2011 3:40 pm
Also, you have to have ALL Canons that you have a relationship with listed, and you have to have their owner's permission.

Also Raen, the rule is 5 detailed sentences OR 10 simple ones for Appearance.


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