ryu's char

Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:27 pm

Name:: Ryusei kenzaki
:Gender::male

:Race:: soul reaper
:Appearance Age wise: 17
Actual Age:24 (ssssshhh no one is suppose to know)
Physical Description::Looks: Has black hair baby blue eye's with a small birth mark of a heart on his right eye from when he has born and he has a custom appearance clothes everything has a blue rope around his waist a dark red shihakkousho(not sure if wrote right if not sry) and has a slight mess up in his leg from a experience with a bad store owner and has glasses like aizen's but dark tinted glasses like shade's.

Personality A very calm sometime's manipulative man when he need's to be has a very large heart and love's meeting and helping new people does not like ppl who are mean or battle crazy.Sometime's a little cold and icy but is better when he is around people he trust's and very shifty when it come's to his line of work.

:Background Information::When he was 16 he was killed by a trio of gang member's the triad's to be exact(no he is not japanese or chinese he is white he was visiting)he was killed for his cash he saw the pain and felt it so vowed never to let anyone feel that pain he joined the soul reaper academy and applied for a captain seat has never showed his shikai he does not like to hurt or cause pain but it is his duty as a soul reaper he has just graduated shinigami academy is now member of squad 4.
----Profession Info----

:Current Ranking:: Member of Squad 4

:Kido Knowledge List[-hadou 88 hiryugekizoshintaiho, bakudo 99 kin, hadou 63 soren sokatsui, bakudo 61 rikujokoro, bakudo 62 hyapporankan,bakudo 39 enkon, bakudo 37 tsurboshi, bakudo 75 gochutekkan,bakudo 73 tozansho.
(Can't use yet can only do from 1-10 i believe)

:Zanpakuto Info:

Shikai Appearance:a mixture of wabisuke and kazeshini with the chain but it is only 1 handle and chain and has a open area in the bottom of the zanpaktou for different atk's with the wabisuke

Shikai Name:Kage gurando -shadow ground (has not obtained yet)

Bankai Appearance:my zanpaktou shift's it's size and the wabisuke is enlarged with a crest of a shadow on it and a wakizashi is put on the end of the chain i can break my zanpaktou in to 2 separate wabisuke's with a small chain and wakizashi on it.

Bankai Name:Nakazora Kage gurando -hollow shadow ground (has not obtained yet)

Zanpakuto Shikai Abilities and Powers:if it hit's a body part more than twice the wabisuke glow's and the body part's start's to flash then it age's and disintegrate's after a certain amount of time or post's only way to fix it is to stab the body part with ur own zanpaktou and if it hit's the ground the ground shift's and a dark aura is made and i can use it to hide or sense a presence no matter how much u hide it

Bankai Abilities and Powers:When bankai is used a large wabisuke mixture is made and when i want i can engulf it in my hand and transform my body into that material and if i want i can make glove's on my hand's and make weapon's out of itthe larger the weaker the smaller the stronger and my armor is full body and i have blue armor with red stripe's down on each shoulder the moire the red expand's the stronger when it is all the way aroudn my reiatsu glow's red and my armor is transformed into a blade my zanpaktou open's in half and the armor blade is put in

Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:46 pm

Application Checklist

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [O] It is impossible to be 24 and HAVE BOTH SHIKAI AND BANKAI
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O] Needs to be at lest 2 paragraphs
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [O] You need more personality, those two lines don’t give me enough imperrsion of him
History is of appropriate length [O] You need 2 paragraphs of history
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O] NEEDS more INFORMATION, and no bankais
Powers are described reasonably enough [O] NEEDS MORE INFORMATION,
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [O] NO RP SAMPLE, we need one to tell how you role play.
Skills are not filled in [X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [O] we need this
RP Sample is 10 sentences [O] like I said we need this

Comments/Notes: FRIST
Use are template which is found here http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t2-shinigami-template

Second- You have to be at lest 200 years old to know shikai. And at lest 700 to know BANKAI, and at this moment in time we are not allowing any more bankais

Thirdly POWERS- We need powers for your stuff other wise this APP IS

dined

Want an example of how others do it, look at other shinigami.

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