Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
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Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
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I. Basic Information
» Name: Leviathan Shihōin
» Alias: -
» Age: 95
» Physical Age: 14
» Gender: Male
» Association: Gotei 13; Squad Three. Shihōin clan
» Appearance Written:
Leviathan is a shinigami that is over 90 years of age but doesn’t quite look his age, even for shinigami standards. The shinigami stands at the height unusual height of 4ft 8in with a weight of 110 lbs. His height causes many people to assume that he is a child at first glance and his facial features do not help him either. Leviathan was blessed and cursed with rather young looking parents, giving him a terrible case of baby face with no real definite features to mark him as older than he actually looks. His skin tone is fair in color with no known scar tissue or blemishes on any part of his body and has rather smooth skin to boot. His eyes are a rare and beautiful chartreuse green that sparkle like no other once out under direct light. Leviathan’s hair is a great contrast compared to his chartreuse green colored eyes, being a light neon blue in color and is usually kept in Leviathan’s favorite messy hair style.
From Leviathan’s appearance alone, many would think that he has a rather fragile and puny body type that would be no good for fighting but it’s actually the opposite. While he does have the height of a human kid, most of his weight actually comes from the muscle that he has built over the years of his families training regime. If you were to remove his clothing one would be able too see the finely sculpted muscles.
When it comes to the attar for Leviathan Shihōin, he wears whatever he wants for the day but he does have three go to looks and chooses depending on his mood. His first and most favorite thing to wear is a navy blue colored shirt with matching navy blue shorts. Over this he typically wears a white lab coat with a surgical mask kept tucked under his chin. His second favorite would be his shinigami Shihakuso which is specially fitted to his body, as he does have a pretty small figure.
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I. Personality
» Personality:
”Nothing has such power to broaden the mind as the ability to investigate systematically and truly all that comes under thy observation in life.
- Marcus Aurelius
- Marcus Aurelius
For the Love of Science:
Leviathan is by all means of the word, a scientist. It is the first thing that he thinks of when he wakes in the morning and the last thing that he thinks about before going to bed. While Leviathan is already a very determined person, as when he wants something he will do whatever it takes to get it and this applies to all of his work. Even if no-one else The young shinigami has a love for exploring the depths of things he has no knowledge of, often showing a child like curiosity to things towards new things and how they work. Leviathan views his studies and experiment as his life and takes them very seriously. When he is working, nothing else exist besides what he is working on and will become highly upset if he is interrupted by something or someone.
Due to his highly curious nature, Leviathan has developed a quirk of liking things that most people normally wouldn’t. This is thanks to his scientist nature as he finds excitement in anything that he could potentially study or experiment on.
The Quiet Analyzer:
Most who know Leviathan know that he is rather quiet and doesn’t speak unless he wants too or is replying to someone. This isn’t because he simply doesn’t want to bother with people, he is typically analyzing everything around him. When doing anything he first likes to analyze his setting, people, etc around him as he likes to prepare himself if anything would arise. His analytical nature even carries over into battle as he typically likes to observe and analyze his opponent so that he can scope out there strengths, weakness and more to see what the proper way to beat them are. Leviathan’s nature of analyzing before fighting keeps him from running into a battle hot headed and ill prepared like most as he knows that if he is not prepaid, it could cost him his life.
Heavy Heart:
Before Leviathan had graduated from the academy his parents where murdered by a hollow. Due the terror he felt from the hollow and was rendered useless, he carries the weight of feeling as if it was his fault for their death. He typically buried himself into his studies to get his mind off of it but it always manages to creep up on him. Leviathan feels that if he wasn’t so weak and actually prepared for the attack, he could have saved them. This often leads him not wanting to get close to others, as he feels that he may not be able to protect them when the time comes. He is also afraid to loose anyone else close to him and the best way to do that for him is to forgo interaction all together. However the young Shihōin does seem to overcome this, as he does want to get to know the others around him, even if he never shows it.
I. History
» History:
Leviathan’s story begins with a man named Ryūha Shihōin, a captain level shinigami who also happened to an important figure within the Shihōin family itself. While out one day in the Zaraki District, he ran into a female Shinigami named Mira who was three seconds from getting her head chopped off. After saving her and letting the assailant get away, Ryūha would often act as a body guard for Mira just incase the assassin came back to finish the job. The job of body guard soon became the position of lover as feeling sparked between the two. When the two got together and Ryūha moved her into the manor, many of the Shihōin members did not approve. They protested that the woman wasn’t even from a minor family she was raised in the Zaraki district. However Ryūha ignored them and eventually, after years together and marriage, Mira birthed Leviathan Shihōin.
The birth of Leviathan had not been celebrated as to many in the clan, including Ryūha’s own parents, because his mother wasn’t a noblewoman but a random dead soul who managed to become a shinigami. Despite everything, Leviathan was brought up as a rather happy child. He found most of his joy in tinkering with objects around the house or reading one of the many books from his fathers private study. The young soul’s training would begin very early and it would be advised by Ryūha himself. Ryūha would advise him in everything he knew, hoping that he could make his son into the Shihōin that the others didn’t think he was. It wasn’t odd too see Leviathan a bit battered and bruised after training from how hard his fathers regime was. If he was honest, Leviathan loathed some days as he knew that he would be working on his martial technique till his hands and arms went numb or practicing his Kido till his body crumbled from using all of his spirit energy. A testimony to how hard Leviathan trained and pushed himself was when he had managed to use the clans technique Shunko whilst still pretty young to other shinigami. Whilst the technique was not perfect and ready to be used in a fight right away, it was still something most wouldn’t have been able to achieve at his age.
One day Ryūha had drug Leviathan with him on some his shinigami duties, giving his son a slight taste of what he would be doing once he became one himself. One of his duties that day was to visit and help out the third division, as they had become short handed and would need his help. Leviathan was in pure Awh as he saw the laboratory of the research division and luckily for him, they were needed in the help of one of their major projects. Leviathan caught the attention of one of the division senior researchers named Ichiwa, as he saw the glee in his eyes and how he interacted in the lab setting going as far as to inviting Leviathan back whenever he wanted.
The young Shihōin did not hesitate to take Ichiwa up on his offer and soon, Leviathan could be seen with him quite often as Ichiwa would Behring teaching him everything that he knew from the sciences of the human world to dissecting living organisms. Leviathan has begun spending so much time in the squad three baracks with Ichiwa the members of the squad began seeing him as one of their own. When the time came for Leviathan to become a full fledged shinigami, he managed to get himself placed in the third squad and now was officially apart of the family.
One day, Ryūha asked Leviathan to be apart of a special mission given to him and his mother by the Gotei. While Leviathan was pretty hesitant at first, he eventually agreed to go. The mission was rather simple for Leviathan and his parents, as it was one of stealthy nature and he had been trained for years in stealth by his father. Everything was fine until a demon had somehow turned up and engaged his father in combat. Leviathan attempted to help his father who was being back up by his mother but the beast was too strong and managed to knock the boy out with one blow. When he awoke, he lay in the rubble of a building with a pounding headache and a battle torn surrounding. The first thing that he saw when picking himself up was the demon laying down on the ground dead. Happy that the demon was dead Leviathan searched for his parents in the rubble for but a few minutes before finding the body of both his parents. His mother Mira had lay with her head chopped off and his father had half his body ripped off. Seeing this sent him into a state of hysteria and had to be sedated when reinforcements arrived.
After the event, Leviathan changed as a person, he went from quiet to unusually quiet and began putting all of his time and effort into his work. He cut off ties with most of the friends he had made and kept to himself all together. Leviathan had barely been seen by anyone in the first year of their death, hiding himself in the manner as he grieved over losing his parents. After a few years had passed, Leviathan had come to deal with his parents death despite not fully getting over it but is still forever changed by the event.
I. Equipment
» Equipment: -
I. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills
» Racial Abilities:
Hoho: One of the skills that many of the Shihōin are known for are their skills in the art of Hohō and Leviathan is no exception to that. His father had put an extreme emphasis on this skill, causing Leviathan to dedicate a lot of his training time working on it. In general, Leviathan is very well versed in Hohō compared to most other shinigami. He can cross large distances within seconds and can remain undetected if one isn’t paying close attention to him. His use of the technique while fighting makes him a dangerous combatant, as his speed makes it hard for someone to hit him but it isn’t impossible to do so.
Kido: As the son of one of the Onmitsukido, Leviathan is very well versed in the use of Kido. He is proficient enough in the arts of Hadō and Bakudō to use low leveled spells with no incantation. Leviathan also has the ability to use spells in rapid succession without a problem. Over the years of studying kido, he has the knowledge and prowess to mix different spells together. The Shihōin typically combines his use of kido with his physical skills which can vastly increase his potency.
Hakuda: As Leviathan was trained by an high level Onmitsukido agent, one could say Leviathan has considerable prowess in the art of Hakuda. He can easily take down multiple armed opponents without a problem and can even take down someone who is many times his size. Leviathan actually prefers to use hand to hand combat when he does battle and can easily adapt his technique to his situation.
Zanjutsu: While not as skilled in Zanjutsu compared to Hakuda or Hohō, he is a capable swordsmen. He is able to use Zanjutsu enough to be able to hold out against an opponent for a while with his blade. However he would have a bit of trouble of trouble clashing with someone who is a more seasoned Zanjutsu user.
Gravity Reiatsu: Leviathan harbors a rather unique type of reiatsu within him. When releasing his reiatsu it takes the form of solidified graviton particles that is purple in color. The graviton’s emitted by his reiatsu increase the surrounding gravity, causing those who are caught within its range to slow down. The more reiatsu he releases the more he can increase the more weight is added to his surroundings.
I. Sealed Powers
» Zanpakutô Name: Yōshanai Kami
» Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: The appearance of Leviathan’s Zanpakutō spirit is a rather unique one. It takes the form of a humanoid with a body made of pure purple energy and with wisps of similar color energy acting as hair. The Zanpakutō spirit has no real features besides white holes that is considered its eyes.
» Inner World: The inner world of Yōshanai Kami is rather beautiful. When entering the inner world one would notice that the environment that it takes on is that of infinite black space. Millions of purple shining stars and large planet sized spheres of purple energy take up the vastness of the inner world, giving it the look of outer space.
» Zanpakutô Appearance:
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» Sealed Zanpakutô Power:
Gravity Aura: Currently the only power Leviathan can muster whilst using his sealed powers, he can coat his entire body in an aura of gravity. Leviathan has completely control over his aura, able to increase the gravity of certain parts of his body to deal extra damage or act as armor to protect against certain attacks and can also decrease the weight of his body so that he can fly. He also holds the ability to discharge his gravity aura in an attack but that is more taxing. He can discharge his personal gravity aura a maximum of three times before his ability goes into a 2 post cooldown.
I. Shikai
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I. Bankai
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I. Shikokai
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I. Skill Sheet
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- 6-Tier: Allowed all beginners.
5-Tier: Allowed all beginners.
4-Tier: Allowed 1 Adept, 3 Beginner
3-Tier: Allowed 3 Adept, 1 Beginner
2-Tier: Allowed 2 Advanced, 2 Adept
1-Tier: Allowed 1 Elite, 2 Advanced, 1 Adept
0-5 Tier: Allowed 1 Elite, 3 Advanced
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General Skills
- Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Trained/Beginner/Untrained
- General Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Weapon Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Shinigami Skills
- Hoho: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Kidō: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Zanjutsu: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Hakuda: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Mental Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
I. Role Play Sample
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- The moon sat high in the sky as its gentle light shone through the open window of a hotel room, where Jade was currently sound asleep. "R, i'm waiting A gentle voice whispered in Jade's ear, waking him up from his deep slumber and slightly pissing him off. "The hell was that? Jade said sleepily before shrugging and laying back down in his bed, attempting to go back to sleep. After tossing and turning for about thirty minutes Jade grunted and threw back his cover, stomping his feet on the ground, and then making his way to the bathroom to relieve himself. After using the restroom he made his way back to his bed to scoop up his clothes that he threw on the floor earlier in the day right after he had went food shopping with Juju and Nico. As he threw on his pants and dress shirt he heard the voice that woke him up run through his head again, he didn't know who the voice belonged too but it sent shivers down his spine just thinking about it.
He decided that he would go for a little walk in water 7 to clear his head of the voice and because he knew he wouldn't just be able to go back to sleep after being woken up. He put on his jacket and walked out of his hotel room, looking up and down the hall to make sure that the rest of the songbirds wouldn't notice him leaving the hotel for awhile. He really doubted that they would care about him going out by himself for a little but as a songbirds, dangerous things tended to float their way. As he made his way out of the hotel, he ran into a couple of people that he had befriended and was asked if he wanted to join them in a late night drinking session but politely declined as he wasn't up for it at the moment. Parting ways with the friendly people, Jade made his way onto the chilly streets of water 7. Usually it was full of life but at this time of night it was basically dead, as no one was really out but Jade and some of the towns drunks along with some Galley-La's workers.
"What to do this late Jade said as he rubbed his hands together to warm them up in the cold night, his mind running wild with things ideas. He eventually decided to just walk around aimlessly through the night, hoping to find something to do. He walked through the streets of water 7 for a few hours, taking in all of the beautiful structure of the place he called home for the time being. Looking around Jade started to think about his younger brother who always wanted to come to water 7 and become a shipwrite. The thoughts of his younger brother lead to thoughts of his home back in the blues , the place where a strange man had found him and raised him with seven other children. Jade smiled as he remembered the good times with his pops before the marines took him away. His thoughts traveled back to his brothers and sisters again, remembering the last few words that they had before they all departed to follow their dream.
Jade had achieved his dream of being a pirate and to make things even better, he was the vice captain of the most known crew out in the seas at the moment. The young male smiled again as he hoped that his siblings managed to achieve their dreams like did. His smiled dissipated as he heard the sounds of footsteps running behind him. "Who... Jade said as he turned around and was tackles by a stranger, both of them falling to the ground with a loud thump. "Sorry! the worried voice of a man said as he quickly gound his way off of Jade and the ground, immediately going back into running mode when he got up. "Get him!several voices yelled as a group of fifty men ran into the direction of the male who had just ran into him. "What the hell is going on tonight! Jade said as he watched them go by, chasing after the stranger he had met. For a second Jade debated weather of not he should go help the man from the bandits that just ran past him like he was invisible, or just let what happen, happen. However it was no thinking about this, Jade knew that he had to help him, as he couldn't just let people harm someone.
Jade side as he ran off into the direction of the person he was going to help, hoping to reach the crew and him before anything bad had happened to the man. Luckily enough they hadn't gotten far from the position off where Jade had been standing, having run over into a bridge into a field full of what looked to be wrecked ships. "Woah Jade said as he looked at all the torn apart ships and their scraps, he had never seen anything like it before. It was kind of breath taking in a strange way. "AHHH" The scream echoed through the yard and followed by a large thump, Jade then knew he had to hurry and find them before they killed the man. As he ran deeper into the scarp yard full of ships, he found them behind a deck that had been ripped off of the ship.
"This is what you get for messing with the boss!One of the man said as his crew began to stomp on the man, making bone breaking sounds as the hits collided. "Hey get off of him! Jade yelled it as he drew his sword from the sheath on his back and looked at the thugs that lay over the battered and bloody man. After his declaration, the group of males looked at Jade and began to laugh their asses off. "what can you do, kid? just put down the sword before you hurt yourself one of the men said as he looked at Jade with a grin. "I said get off of him Jade said again with a stern voice, letting them know that he was being serious. "So you wanna be a big boy, huh? boys show the child who we are" The old man said as his people disengaged the bloody man and ran towards Jade, closing the six meter distance between them rather quickly then expected.
Use your strength Jade thought to himself as he engaged the first of the many thugs making their way to his position. He quickly disposed of the first thug with a simple swing of his blade before ducking to avoid an attack by his ally that followed behind him. "Should have ran when you saw me" Jade said as he slashed upwards, creating a deep cut from the thugs chest to his forehead. "Kagutsuchi Jade said as his blade set ablaze and swung it, releasing his signature 15x15 flaming tornado that swept up most of the incoming thugs that ran his way, only leaving 20 thugs left after its dissipation. "B-boss, i know his face now one of the three thugs left said as he took out a piece of paper from his pocket and unfolding it, showing it to the old man who had taunted him. "Jade, The emperor? the old man eyes went wide as he looked at the piece of paper and Jade, shocked by the revelation of who he actually was.
"Reduce the earth to ash! Jade said as he stabbed his blazing sword into the ground, channeling his flames into the terrain. Trying to avoid hurting the stranger he was currently saving, Jade only released the flames in a five meter radius around him, consuming seventeen out of the twenty thugs left. "W-we don't want no trouble man! one of the three remaining thugs said as they began to back away from the man they had just stomped on.
"Are you guys really scared of him? i thought i hired the real deal An amused voice said from the darkness of the scrap yard, and it sounded just like the voice that had woken him up from his sleep. "Who is there Jade said as he looked around frantically, freaked out by he sudden appearance of another person. Before anyone could see anything, the last three thugs where shot right through the heart and dropped dead right on the ground next to the man they were going to kill. "I guess I should have hired some marines instead of local filthy thugsThe voice said said again and a tall man with red hair and half his face covered with a mask appeared from the shadow. He was as tall as Junbei was with long following red hair that could rival Charlotte's his clothing choice was, however, in pretty bad taste as he wore a flimsy blouse with baggy dress pants and dress shoes. The stranger tapped the pistol he had in his hand on his head as he laughed and looked directly at Jade. "I guess those fodder where really nothing for you, R. So I guess I'll play this little game with you instead" the red haired man said as he started laughing maniacally and drew the other pistol from its holder that was attached to his chest. He pointed both guns at Jade from his eight meters distance and began firing off rounds of what seemed to be fire, quickly returning Jade's mind to Skypeia where he fought the girl Misa.
As the bullets closed in, Jade managed to jump to the left next to a pile of ship scraps to avoid the bullets, but failed to realize that the man had fired off more as soon as he moved. "Shit Jade said as pain burned through his left pectoral and right leg with the last bullet barely grazing the thigh of his left arm. The hits confirmed to use flame dial guns just like Misa did however, this was much more fire power compared to her, just who was this man? "come on R, I know you can do way better! the red haired man said as he suddenly turned into a blur closing five out of the eight meters in a matter of just one minute. What the Jade's eyes couldn't keep up with the speed of the man as he closed in and shot more bullets at Jade, aiming for a shot directly at the heart. "Flying flame! Jade yelled as his blade set ablaze and he swung it horizontally, sending out an arc of flames that consumed the bullets that the man shot. Sadly the man easily dodged the attack by jumping up in the air and shooting three more bullets from each gun at Jade from the air, sending six bullets to rain down on Jade's body with no specific place in mind. Jade didn't have time to throw up another arc of flames so he simply raised his arm of the bullets coming for him and covered it in his Busoshoku haki, creating a dull metallic shine. Three of the bullets bounced off of his haki covered arm while the rest hit the ground or some of the ship scraps that lay behind him.
Even though Jade had managed to block the man's attack with his haki, his haki wasn't strong enough to keep him from obtaining second degree burns. As he looked up the damage of his arm a hand grasped firmly on his shoulder, throw him into the air before slamming his body onto the scrap yard floor. The young man's mouth opened wide as all the air in his lungs escaped, leaving his breathless for a few seconds. "you should really watch your enemy, R The man said as he began to laugh and put his gun to Jade's head, Bye bye, Mr.Emperor The man said as he pulled the trigger on his gun. click is all Jade heard as he thought his life was going to end but no bullet came, filling Jade with some kind of hope. "damnit, I have to reload The man said with a sad expression as he dropped his clip out of the pistols and reached into his pocket for another one. However Jade was going to take advantage of the situation at hand "Flying Flame Jade said as he quickly grabbed his sword off the ground as it quickly set on fire and sent out an arc of flame. The red head couldn't react in time as he was too close to Jade and took a direct hit to the chest, making him fly back five feet into a large pile of ship scraps.
Urgh, I thought I was a goner Jade thought as he made his way off of the ground, pain racking his body as he stumbled around. "I'm going to fucking kill youThe malicious voice of the red haired man rang aloud as he made his way out of the scrap pile, rage filling his eyes. Jade looked at him and readied to use his Kenbunshoku haki if it was needed but something happened that he never would have thought. "Stop it, William a solemn voice said from the shadows behind the red haired man whose name was actually William. It was weird but Jade knew the voice, he had known it since he was found by the old man back in the blues. It was the voice of his protector and the oldest of them all. "Why! He fucking burned me! William said as a figure stepped out of the shadows next to him, his face lit by the moon light. He was 6"3' with blonde hair that reached down too his lower back, he wore a white double breasted trench coat with white pants and boots with cold sky blue eyes and a broadsword attached to his hip as well. You can't kill him,at least not yet Said the blonde haired man who looked Jade directly in the eyes with his cold ones. Shock filled Jade's face as he looked at the man he looked up too more than Junbei and his father, his eldest brother Issho.
"Issho! What are you doing here with that man who tried to kill me? Jade said as he looked at his older brother, what could he possibly be doing here in water 7? "Well R, or should I say Jade? Issho said with a smirk before continuing "I came to test your skills after I saw you became the vice captain of the most known pirate in the seas so far Issho began to move towards Jade little by little as he talked. "I came to test your skills with staging that whole man getting beat up thing, you did well with that but not so well against my friend William there Issho's mouth turned into a frown "and that's upsetting, I thought my favorite sibling could be more powerful than the rest Issho said with disappointment as he reached into his pockets and threw several photos onto the ground in front of Jade's feet. Still watching Issho, Jade picked up the pictures and turned them around too see that they where photos of each of their siblings, all of them but Jade and the two youngest Ulrich and Griffith had an X through their face. "if you are wondering what the X's are for, that means I killed them Issho said nonchalantly as he turned back towards William. Tears and sadness filled his eyes as he took in the worlds, it felt like someone had just stabbed him. "w-why did you kill our siblings! I thought we all meant the world to each other! Jade yelled as tears fell from his eyes, not wanting to believe what his older brother just said. "Things change Issho said as he shrugged and looked at his buddy William who still looked at Jade with anger.
"I should kill you myself for being weak, but as you are my favorite I won't kill you right now He said as he turned to face Jade again, this time with a malicious grin. "I'll give you time to get stronger but if you are still at this current level when we meet again, I will murder you with my bare hands Issho's tone and eyes showed how serious he was and it scared Jade. "N-none of that answers my question, why did you kill our siblings! Jade said as the tears came harder now, and for some reason they wouldn't stop. "I can't explain it right now, but sometime soon you will know Issho said, reverting back to his cold voice as he turned to walk back into the darkness, signaling William to follow. "We will meet again and you better hope your brother is around to save you from the torture I will bring upon you The man said as he walked into the darkness with Issho, completely disappearing from Jade's sight. "get stronger, my favored sibling or you won't be alive long the next time we meet Issho's voice echoed in the darkness before finally fading. With them gone, Jade finally fell to his knees still crying, not believing what had just happened. Maybe his brother was lying? No Jade knew when Issho lied and he detected no lies in his words. Then why would he kill their family? They were all so close! It made no sense at all and it crushed him. He had to find the last of his siblings before Issho did, but he had no clue where too start, all he knew was that he had to find a way.
"Hey man, are you okay a voice said from behind Jade, which prompted him to turn his blade in that direction. It was the man he had saved from the gang, he thought he had run away when the last of the thugs were shot by William. Jade just shook his head as he looked at the stranger he saved who quickly ran off into the night afterwards. As Jade stood on the ground, he felt something feel his body and it was the feeling of self hatred. He wasn't powerful enough to stop the man who almost killed him, and he barely held up in Skypeia. What could he do now that his family was getting killed off? Nothing as he almost got himself killed but the image of himself with black eyes appeared in his head. "Become me, the devil that lies within you and become strong enough to match Junbei and become strong enough to stop Issho The dark eyes version of Jade said as it looked at Jade in his mental world. They touched hands and fused together, a strange sensation feeling Jade's physical body as he accepted the part of him. His Haki training had birthed the devil within Jade and tonight had fused them together. Jade would no longer apply to the moniker "The Emperor" as he was no emperor, he was to be something more powerful. Jade had finally become "Diablo" and he was going to kill his brother Issho along with his partner William when they met again.
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:36 am
[adm]REMEMBER YOUR TAGS! If this is still being worked on, put [WIP] in the title! If it's finished and ready for checking, put [FINISHED] or [DONE] or [READY FOR CHECKING]! I will change it this time, but remember this for future reference.[/adm]
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Wed Mar 15, 2017 5:29 pm
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Sorry, but this isn't happening. Someone who is 75 is nowhere close to being able to be the head of a clan. Not to mention that Yoruichi is alive and well, and is the current Head of the Shihoins on PH. Please remove this, and any references to him becoming Head in the app.
Alright, this is something that needs to be struck out. This character will not be able to have enough power, nor enough mastery over Hakuda and Kido in order to create a Shunko. This is usually something that 0 tiers have, since they usually have both the mastery and the energy levels to do this. So, use the HTML commands to do this.
There isn't -too- much wrong with this. However, I would like to see a note saying that higher level character will be able to get around this.
Ok, I understand that you want two Zanpakuto, and that is perfectly fine. But, this is something that is usually not able to be obtained until high tier (around 0 tier). To give you examples, I'll put two characters who have more than one Zanpakuto.
Character #1: Tsubasa Unabara [Two Zanpakutos]
Character #2: Zeda Yuudeshi [Three Zanpakutos]
Also, I will put a link to the racial specs, and a quote from there.
Race Specs
I would like you to refer to those when constructing the powers for your Zanpakutos. But, for now I would like to see the second Zanpakuto crosses out with the [strike] HTML command.
One those are fixed, this should be ready to go with a tier and will skills.
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Sorry, but this isn't happening. Someone who is 75 is nowhere close to being able to be the head of a clan. Not to mention that Yoruichi is alive and well, and is the current Head of the Shihoins on PH. Please remove this, and any references to him becoming Head in the app.
Imperfect Shunko
Alright, this is something that needs to be struck out. This character will not be able to have enough power, nor enough mastery over Hakuda and Kido in order to create a Shunko. This is usually something that 0 tiers have, since they usually have both the mastery and the energy levels to do this. So, use the HTML commands to do this.
Osiris's Gift
There isn't -too- much wrong with this. However, I would like to see a note saying that higher level character will be able to get around this.
Zanpakuto(s)
Ok, I understand that you want two Zanpakuto, and that is perfectly fine. But, this is something that is usually not able to be obtained until high tier (around 0 tier). To give you examples, I'll put two characters who have more than one Zanpakuto.
Character #1: Tsubasa Unabara [Two Zanpakutos]
Character #2: Zeda Yuudeshi [Three Zanpakutos]
Also, I will put a link to the racial specs, and a quote from there.
- Spoiler:
- • Dual-Zanpakutō: To be frank, there is no such thing as wielding two different Zanpakutō spirits for the most part. Most beings get the term "Dual-Zanpakutō" mixed up with having "Two Zanpakutō Spirits". This is not the case because a Zanpakutō, for all intents and purposes, is a reflection of the Shinigami's soul. Therefore, while the aforementioned example may not be possible, it IS probable for a Shinigami's Zanpakutō to take on many different forms; albeit a majority of Multi-Wielders will not be able to access them all at the same time. Only a slim minority are able to use more than one Zanpakutō at time, and it's only restricted to two forms being utilized in a fused state.
They will not receive an increase in spiritual energy in this, only being able to be allowed to harness the attributes of their separate blade. Furthermore, they may be required to learn the different release phrases in order to call upon these Multi-Powers as they become stronger. Which makes the task of owning a Dual-Zanpakutō or Multi-Zanpakutō that much harder. However, if one is able to get over these hurdles, then it's possible for them to obtain one. It's also worth mentioning that most Multi-wielding Shinigami users will generally have their Zanpakutō SPirit, and sometimes inner-world, split into multiples for how many Zanpukato's they claim.
Race Specs
I would like you to refer to those when constructing the powers for your Zanpakutos. But, for now I would like to see the second Zanpakuto crosses out with the [strike] HTML command.
One those are fixed, this should be ready to go with a tier and will skills.
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Wed Mar 15, 2017 6:35 pm
«- PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED -»
« Application Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
• And Comments/Fixes •
- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Beginner
- Comments/Notes: After things being changed, I currently see this able to be approved. Shikai will be available at 3-1, Bankai will be available at 2-1, and Shikokai will be available at 0-3.
- Tier: 4-3
- Related Threads:
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t148-major-updates-skill-sheet-system-put-this-in-your-application-when-your-finished-and-accepted
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t17231-gotei-united-zero-division-included-accepts-vizard-ziamichi-hybrid-shinigami
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Mon Jul 10, 2017 12:48 am
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Thu Sep 14, 2017 5:52 pm
[adm]Moved to active upon request.[/adm]
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Mon Jan 27, 2020 3:37 pm
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Wed Feb 05, 2020 10:39 pm
THROUGH THE POWER INVESTED IN ME...
« Application Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Focus: Beginner
« Final Verdict »
- Comments/Notes: It's good enough for me.
- Tier: 4-3
« Final Final Verdict, Hazard »
- Overall: E
- Power: E
- Influence: D
- Resources: E
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
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Re: Leviathan Shihōin [Revamp][Approved, 4-3]
Sun Apr 18, 2021 11:18 am
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