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Raiza
Raiza
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Joined : 2010-06-25
Posts : 2
Location : Stalker o.o

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Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:33 am
SHINIGAMI

Name: Raiza Cara

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Personality: Always looks deep in thought, kinda slow to react to someone saying something, hesitant.

Appearance: 5"8', brown hair(3 in.), lean muscles, dark blue eyes.

Zanpakutô Spirit: Zazacara, very talkitive, likes to act tougher then he is, always understanding whats going on and knows the fastest way out of situations. 5"7', blue hair(1 in.), blue robe with purple trim, purple eyes.

Sealed Zanpakutô : Long thin blade made for quick, fast, muanuverable movements.

Shikai Description: Several curves in it along with holes down the middle making quicker, faster, and more muanuverable.

Shikai Abilities: Able to pull and push things away
Rotation- able to deflect thrown objects and a spinning motion producing a force
360 degree rotation- Higher level of rotation able to deflect faster moving projectiles and is able to deal damage to enemy within close range.
361 degree rotation- Movement of hand jabs into pressure points on the enemy leaving them weak, ending with a blast of energy to the chest.

Release: Cara open

Skill Level: Kidou:
Skill Level: Swordsmanship:
Skill Level: Shunpo:
Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand:

Bankai Description: Long blade curving blade over the shoulder standing 5"7 1/2' tall.

Bankai Abilities: Almighty push- A force that can be used to push or pull things that can flatten a small town leaving it just a crater.
Almighty 362 degree rotation- Higher level of 361 degree rotation, dealing more damage to pressure points momentarily disrupting spiritual energy flow ending with a more powerful energy blast.

History/Background: Born to a Christian family. At age 8 had its first encounter with a hollow, but passed out and never remembered it. At age 12 had another encounter, but figured it was just an abnormal experience and dismissed it. Age 15 had another encounter, but this time figured something else was going on by the fact that he actually saw the hollow this time and tried to study what was going on.
By age 17 had seen several hollows and had watched hollows battled by these people with powers and destroyed. One day when he was walking home from school lost in thought, a hollow ran past him being chased by two Soul Reapers he was interested and turned to follow and watch. He watched as the two Soul Reapers cornered the hollow and destroyed it. Raiza had a special book that he had been recording in and had written down several of the battles with the Soul Repaers and the hollows.
While Raiza was recording what he saw into his book, the Soul Reapers had noticed he had saw them and took interestin him. They had seen Raiza several times not far away from where they were battling a hollow and thought that it was just a concidense. Now they realized it was not just a concidence, but that Raiza could see them and was recording their battles.
That is where his life being a Soul Reaper took off.


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Chao
Chao
Queen Of The Sands
Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 3408
Age : 30

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Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:50 am

Before i get too far in this, ALL of your descriptions are incredibly short. We recommend you write at least 2 paragraphs for descriptions, try to put more thought into your character when explaining their powers and looks.

Try checking some already approved Shinigami to get an idea of what is expected of you
Raiza
Raiza
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 7:05 pm
Ok can do.
Hayuko
Hayuko
Bearer Of Hell
Joined : 2010-06-19
Posts : 714
Age : 28
Location : United States

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Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:08 am
The app is not worthy for a bankai, no harsh feelings but to start with a bankai you have to be outstanding.

Remove the Bankai and i will approve it.


You have 7 days to fix it before i deny it.
Tsubine
Tsubine
Ye Olde Guarde
Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 3940
Age : 30
Location : Gracemeria

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Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:10 am
7 Days have passed. DENIED


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Ræn
Pimp Cloak
Joined : 2010-08-29
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Location : A place

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