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General Information

Name: Hei Shenshun
Appearance Age: 25
True Age: 1023
Gender: Male

Overall Appearance

Personality:

Hei has two identities both very different from each other. When unmasked, he has a timid nature and tries to help out others, generally keeping to himself. When he IS masked, however, he becomes a ruthless, calculating individual who has no qualms with killing when needed.

While unmasked, Hei's personality is generally very conservative. He is rarely seen to get angry or display any genuine emotion. Although, when masked, there is a drastic change in Hei's personality. He acts much more ruthless and is quick to anger.


Appearance:
Spoiler:

Height: 6'0"
Weight: 125
Reiatsu Color: Light Blue

Zanpakuto (Sealed) Description

Zanpakuto Name: Seiteki Na Myakuhaku (Static Pulse)
Zanpakuto Spirit:

Personality:

Seiteki is an emotionless, uncaring, cold, and underhanded individual. Not at all caring what happens to Hei, despite his innerworld being her home. She lends him her power only out of a blood lust that only his inner hollow shares.

Appearance:

Spoiler:

Zanpakuto World:

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Hei's inner world is a large nighttime city, devoid of all life except for himself and his zanpakuto spirit.

Sealed Zanpakuto Appearance: Hei's sealed zanpakuto is a katana, relatively small, only 14 inches in length. This katana is always sheathed, and he always carries the sheath strapped to his right leg. The hilt of the katana is a light, almost sky blue. The crossguard takes the shape of a sideways bolt of lightning. His prefered method of fighting with it is to hold it backhand.
Release Phrase: Fry, Seiteki Na Myakuhaku.

Zanpakotu (Shikai) Description

Shikai Appearance: When shikai is activated, Hei's katana shortens even more, becoming a double-bladed knife with a black hilt, the hilt having a circle in it.

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Oddly enough, the knife seems to be wired to the inside of the Hei's cloak with a seemingly unending wire. How far he can actually throw the knife before the wire stops it has yet to be seen. The wire is also apparently strong enough to hold his body weight, as he uses his knife and wire as a grappling hook of sorts when the situation arises.

Shikai Abilities:

~Seiteki Na Kondakuta (Static Conductor)~ [Passive]

While in shikai, electrical energy constantly courses through Hei's body, whenever he touched something, if he wills it, electricity can flow through whatever he's touching, be it enemies, the wire attached to his knife, etc. He cannot, however, conduct through the air, or through concrete.

~Seiteki Na Dageki (Static Shot)~

Hei can focus large quantities of his electrical energy into his hands, then shoot them at incredible speeds towards his opponent in orbs. These orbs carry the shocking power of a high-voltage wire, and therefore would not be fun to get hit by. After launching the shot, Hei can guide it with his hands, directing it's path if he so wishes.

~Seiteki Na Bakuhatsu (Static Explosion)~

Hei can conduct a large amount of electric energy to a specific point on the ground, and then supercharge it to make an explosion, about 2 feet in radius, go off right under an enemy's feet. This explosion is about as powerful in magnitude as a gas tanker exploding, but it's very concentrated within the area it's designated under. Anywhere outside that radius is perfectly safe from it's effects.

Zanpakotu (Bankai) Description


Bankai Appearance:
Bankai Abilities:

Hollow Mask and Inner Hollow

Inner Hollow Description:
Spoiler:

Inner Hollow Personality:

Hei's inner hollow is an egotistical, blood lusting maniac with an apparent lack of control over what he says, he has no restraint over what comes out of his mouth, his main form of speech being insult at Hei's general failures.

Due to his dysfunctional personality, he holds himself in the highest regards at all times resulting in his most commonly used word being "fool", which is often employed to cut off anything that anyone else is saying while simultaneously putting them down.

Hollow Mask Appearance:

Spoiler:

Hollow Powers:

Cero

Hei's cero is light blue in coloration

-Dirigido Cero
Hei can draw a shape in the air using his finger/hand/sword, and then he can fire his cero in the shape of whatever he drew, from where he drew it.

Bala

Sonido


Resurreccion Appearance:
Resurreccion Abilities:

Shinigami Skill Level- Kidou: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Shinigami Skill Level- Swordsmanship: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level- Hand-to-Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Background/Roleplay Sample


Background:

Hei, in the human world, was born into poverty, his parents and him living in the slums of a downtown area of Tokyo. He never knew what real money looked like, nor did he care. He had his family, and that was all he needed.

He died young. His body unable to take the lack of nourishment at such a young age. At the age of three, he passed on to the soul society.

In SS, his life improved drastically, Hei had the privilege of calling the first district of north rukon home. His spiritual life was spent in a lawful and regal area, until he discovered, during a fight between some other kids, that he could form a ball of spiritual energy, even if it was a bit unstable. At this discovery, he shipped himself off to the Shinigami Academy.

After barely scraping a passable grade on his entrance exam, Hei was in the academy, a dream come true for him. His grades were top of his class, his performance extraordinary. His only lacking quality was a social life, he had very few friends at the academy, if he had any at all.

Leaving the academy wasn't hard for him, he wasn't attached to anyone there, after all. He just progressed to bigger and better things.

The years passed, and his ranking raised, him earning the skills necessary to become a captain in time. He never learned bankai, as his shikai training with his heartless zanpakuto spirit was almost overwhelming as it was, he didn't trust his zanpakuto spirit not to murder him during bankai training.

But in Hei's mind, he knew that he could be so much more. He knew he wasn't content with the little power he had.

One day, while considering this in the human world, he was approached by someone who claimed to be a follower of someone named "Kin". The person promised him power, and that was all Hei needed. He agreed to join with them, and the follower injected him with something he thought looked suspicious, but he didn't care. He was going to gain power, that's all that mattered.

It was a week later when he started hearing the voice. Every day he could hear another voice in his head, someone claiming to want his soul, and his body. Hei couldn't take it anymore, he passed out.

He woke up in a place he instantly recognized as his inner world, and he saw a figure that he didn't recognize, a small creature with a cane, the creature pulled out an exact duplicate of Hei's katana, and the figures clashed. Fighting for survival, or control, Hei didn't know. After what seemed like days, Hei finally claimed victory over the figure. Gaining his white mask with the blue streak of lightning, and a whole new set of powers that he trained himself to use over time.

With this, Hei became a Vizard, and his lust for power made him a force to be reckoned with.

Role Play Sample:

Hei didn't know where he was going, and he didn't care.

He ran as fast as he could, every muscle giving every ounce of energy they could to propel him down the street. He turned a corner, another, another.. Hei had completely lost track of where he was, or where he was going, but he knew where he had come from, and he wasn't going back. Behind him, he heard the voices of the men who were after him. A small squad, probably fifteen to thirty men, all after Hei.. and he didn't even know why.

Hei had woken up in that alley, no memory of the last five hours or so, and suddenly he's being chased by all manner of guards, police, and people who he suspected to be hitmen of some sort. He didn't know why, but he knew he didn't want to be caught by them.

Hei threw his katana into the wall of a nearby building, making sure his wire is secure before pulling himself up onto the building. Hei continues to run, now leaping from building to building, still not knowing where he'd end up...


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:48 am
Hei Shenshun [Vizard] [Finished] GILGAMESH
nnnyyyeeeeennnn...Nah! Sorry Mate.

Although I see no problem in the content itself (EXCLUDING whether or not you got permission from Frosty Flakes to use a follower of Kin), I would like for you to add more detail into the following:

Personality, fatten up those two skinny paragraphs into something decent.
Personality of Shinigami spirit, same thing applies here.
Sealed Zanpaukto appearance. It may be only the sealed form, but I'd like more detail on it, or an image to complete the description.
Hollow personality, same thing with the other two personalities, add some more detail. It shouldn't be that hard to do.
Dirigido Cero: Add the link to the custom cero thread, or add more detail here.

Now,
GET TO IT!!!


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Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:58 am
Nyeh, forget it. I put too much time into this bitch as it is.


Lock/Delete it or whatever, if you please. I'm done with this gai.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:37 pm
Not only do you give up on your character, but you ALSO quit the forum over some remedial drama.

So be it. Your app is hereby DENIED

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Now that's damn right embarrassing.


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Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:38 pm
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Damn I love using Sniper Gil


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