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Mon Apr 25, 2016 1:01 am
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» Universal Tool Name: Kuro Komo (Black Cloud)

» Universal Tool Type: Offensive

» Universal Tool Usage: Restricted to Vanyel Xioyang, as it is made from Dark Chi, something unique to him.

» Universal Tool Effects: Kuro Komo is used as a normal sword, but the sword is made from Dark Chi, something unique to Vanyel. The sword was originally just a normal katana, but when he used Chengtan (New Universal Tools, Chi Update bby.), it enhanced the blade with some special abilities.

Immense Cutting Ability: Kuro Komo is a sword made by the legendary Kunitome, a swordsmith who created evil swords, with some saying that every time he made a sword, part of his own evil heart went into it. His swords were known as "Demon Swords", and Kuro Komo was no less. The first sword Kunitome made was able to effortlessly cut through many things, some say it was able to slice the air and water in half. Kuro Komo is able to cut through many things, including solid brick, although this does take a toll on the user's strength and stamina if they cut through multiple powerful objects like brick or cement.

Bloodbound: Bloodbound? What the hell is that? Well, Bloodbound is basically the reality of the legend of Kunitome's swords. People said that once you unsheath a Kunitome blade, you can never sheath it until it has drawn blood, whether is be the blood of an animal, another human, anyone or anything's blood will suffice. Some even say if the blade hasn't drawn blood, it will force the user to injure themselves with the blade so that the evil sword may be satisfied.

» Notes: N/A



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Mon Apr 25, 2016 1:38 pm
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Looks sufficient to me. I'll approve it and you can add it in your application. Moving this to accepted universal tools.




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Sat May 07, 2016 11:25 pm
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» Universal Tool Name: Summon: Blade of Deceit
» Universal Tool Type: Offensive

» Universal Tool Usage: Anyone who Vanyel teaches the ritual to.

» Universal Tool Effects:

A very...odd Chi ritual. This Ritual requires a small amount of blood to perform, an incantation, and a decent amount of Chi to use to create this. This is a summoning ritual, which, when performed, creates of strange circle in front of Vanyel. This circle is where the Chi will be stored and fused together to form this weapon. A sword will arise from the circle, with the blade facing the sky. The blade is very jagged, with bumps everywhere. The blade looks of poor craftsmanship, but this is the intentional design of the blade. As it continues to rise from the ground, the tsuba and hilt is then revealed. The tsuba is very spiked, almost impossible to simply even touch this. The hilt is normal, with black and red wrappings around the hilt. Vanyel does not take this blade into his hands when he summons this. Instead, it floats just above his katana, Kuro Komo, and moves whenever Vanyel's sword arm does, but by mere seconds later. The sword is mainly used for a very offensive fighting style, with a highly fast barrage of hits from not only the sword in Vanyel's hand, but also the phantom-like sword above it. However, this blade is not able stay in the physical plane forever. While this blade is summoned, it will constantly drain Vanyel's Chi capacity, until his body forces the weapon to vanish, in about 2-3 posts of the weapon being activated. The blade is also able to be destroyed, since it has the strength of a normal katana. If someone 1 or 2 entire tiers above him were to attack him for a long period of time, the blade would shatter, and the ritual would end. If the ritual ends so abruptly, Vanyel would be hit with a wave of nausea and dizziness, since the destruction of his ritual will take a minor toll on his body.

Incantation: Form all of the lies and deceit ever told into a blade, allowing me to sweep the land clean of all honesty and truth.

» Notes: I wanted to get these pre-approved before saying they're an official part of the app, before it gets approved. Sooooo....here they are!



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» Universal Tool Name: Ao Kuang's Hatred for Ne Zha, The Strike of Thunder and Lightning
» Universal Tool Type: Offensive
» Universal Tool Usage: Whoever Vanyel teaches the Ritual to.

» Universal Tool Effects: By fusing his Chi with the moisture in the air, as well as the moisture of the clouds, Vanyel can create a thunderstorm. However, he cannot do this at of nowhere. There must be clouds in sight ABOVE him. Directly above him. If there are none, he cannot use this, as it would not work. However, to make up for the need of clouds in the area, the Ritual has a mildly large range. About a half mile of width, this spell not only creates a thunder storm, but also creates a powerful bolt of lightning from his Chi, which is insanely wide, and would cover the radius of the entire Ritual, which is a half mile. One he completes the incantation, he would place his hand on the ground, and a large circle would appear. The circle would have a single kanji letter in the center. That kanji would be the symbol for lightning. As the symbol begins to glow, the clouds in the radius of the circle would stop, and begin to converge into a circle, then begin to grow dark. The beginnings of stratus clouds. These clouds signify that a storm is coming in the area. As the clouds begin to crackle and flash with thunder, a bolt of blue lightning would come crashing down, striking the very center of the ritual's incantation, then spewing lighting in the remaining radius of the circle. If the lightning managed to reach the end of the radius, the lightning would automatically curve back and converge to the center. Although this spell is very, very powerful, it is very dangerous. This ritual causes such a heavy toll on not only Vanyel's Chi capacity, but also his physical strength, he can only use this once per entire thread. He is commonly know to use this as a last resort, or a finishing blow.

Incantation: Dragon King of the Eastern Seas! Fuel me with your hatred for the Third Lotus Prince! Allow me control over the water to strike down with LIGHTNING AND THUNDER!

» Notes: N/A



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» Universal Tool Name: Fenrir's Rage: Unbound Runes of Ragnarok
» Universal Tool Type: Offensive

» Universal Tool Usage: Whoever Vanyel teaches the ritual to.

» Universal Tool Effects: This is a physical boost to Vanyel that increases his strength immensely. By covering his arms with his Chi, he fuses it to his arms for a short period of time. Once he completes the incantation, he would crouch down on all fours, taking the appearance of a wolf priming to strike. He would then howl towards the sky, with the sound echoing throughout the entire area. A red transmutation circle would form around him, glowing with a sickly crimson color as his eyes begin to change to that very same color. This is the power of the bringer of Ragnarock, Fenrir. Absolute destruction. That is what this ritual brings. As Vanyel continues this ritual, the tips of his hands will sharpen, forming claws. His breathing will turn into deep, demonic growling. This ritual grants him an increase in strength which boosts his General Strength by one levels, and his durability is increased to, but only but one level. However, there is a major weakness. During this transformation, five runes are circling Vanyel during this time. They are incredibly weak and able to be smashed easily, but the person who is trying to smash them might have a hard time, being that they must be on guard from Vanyel's furious attack. This transformation is immensely powerful, but doesn't last long. Only about 2 posts and the ritual's effects will fade away.

Incantation: Fenrir! Give me the power to shatter your bonds and use your power to destroy everything that stands in my way!

» Notes: N/A



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Mon May 09, 2016 7:54 pm
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This ritual grants him an increase in strength, and increase in durability.

Everything is fine besides for this one last bit in the spell. What measurements are you using to determine this increase in strength? Does his muscles get denser? Does he get a x2 increase in stats? Does his skill sheet go up or something? Explain.


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Mon May 09, 2016 8:22 pm


This ritual grants him an increase in strength which boosts his General Strength by two levels, and his durability is increased to, but only but one level

For his level, I would say this is too much. I would only allow for one level boost for his strength and durability.


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