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Tue Apr 19, 2016 9:51 am
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» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t10635-kiriel-asthavon-approved-0-2

» Upgrading: Doubt he's earned a tier upgrade or anything of that nature though that would be nice. Below I will put down his new things and stuff that I have been meaning to add.

War God's Roar: Ever since obtaining his final form Kiriel's powers have matured. They've become far more potent even his sister's seal has trouble restraining it. Just the slightest flex of his powers and it seems to crumble now. He learned that his power went far beyond the regular. Making people want to stir conflict. He wasn't able to just make the most loyal of blades turn on their wielders. When his Roar is heard it can make even the most peaceful folk pick up blades. But what Kiriel failed to understand was that it was so much more. His power connected him to all the Danava's of War. Past and Future. They were connected and capable of far greater power. Kiriel embraced this and gained the War's God's Roar. By releasing a battle cry Kiriel is capable of releasing a single megaton of destruction on an area using this. But this is only the beginning of the power he displays. The area is corrupted by the Taint of War and those who step on it become hostile and aggressive to all things.The NPC are effected from go by this. However stronger characters aka players aren't affected right away. It takes ten turns for it to begin affecting them. Then ten more before it begins to change them into the way NPCs are. This power is connected to the Madness of War, it allows him to produce the effect via speaking instead of just his power. This is a power that can only be used every five turns as he can't do it over and over again.

Chaos Matter: While Kiriel isn't the most educated person when it comes to these things. He can explain it to a fair point, this energy that now sleeps in him. Is a product of the First Danava of War's weapon. It's an uncontrollable type of energy. The energy is known as that because it cannot be controlled. Merely directed and after you've directed it's extremely hard to stop. Kiriel can summon blasts of it from his body and hands. But he would much rather avoid using it due to its nature. Kiriel does pride himself on a good time and this steals his fun. Chaos Matter is a type of special matter that is found within the First Danava of War himself. He fused it into his weapon and thus later it was given to Kiriel. Kiriel's body was tailor-made for the energy. The saying it fit like a glove is very much implied. Kiriel's body is able to use it freely with no dangerous drawbacks. He embraced the lack of control but does know not to use it for everything. Even War must occasionally have some tact when fighting. Kiriel may only release ten of these per thread.

War's Art A special fighting style devised by him from his years of combat. While he has experience in War going back to the beginning. This style is extremely potent in fighting enemies of all kinds. The style is made to be fluid and able to interact with any amount of foes. It has very few weak points and can be used with weapons or without. Kiriel's massive strength allows him to cause massive blows to destroy his enemies with fierce attacks. However, that is only the beginning of this potent fighting style. Kiriel has taken a bit of everything and merged it into this. While he didn't bother naming it the style is something he hopes to break in soon. What is most alarming is that the style is fluid and yet can throw monster blows from positions it shouldn't be possible. Kiriel's strength is where this comes from, however, the style itself is more based on fluid motion.

Bringer of War: A very special weapon that belonged to the First Danava of War. This weapon is a scythe and is far more dangerous than anything else Kiriel has. It feasts on the souls of victims that fell in war. The blade itself is forged of them making it a rather fierce tool for the Demon. However, he's had some trouble controlling the scythe since it is very picky. On the end of the scythe, a chain is hooked to swing the blade around. Upon summoning this weapon the skies go crimson. The base form is a scythe though it's the first form is up to Kiriel. He can change the scythe into other weapons allowing it to be anything. Kiriel generally selects a sword but he is a master of wielding scythes. Despite his reluctance to show his sister his skills. Kiriel could have lived up to his nickname from long ago. The Grim Reaper of Chaya Nation, he is known for fighting in a style with this weapon that is unpredictable. The blade is able to extend and contract completely. Kiriel also has the option to use Chaos Matter a special type of energy involving this weapon. This type of Matter is only for one purpose alone. Destruction, it cannot create or bring about life. It's a Matter who only destroys what's in its path. Like others it can be stopped by some if enough power is put forward. Kiriel has called it the bucking bronco of energy. It's something he doesn't have control over in any way. When he releases the power he no longer has say. What it does and destroys is something that will happen regardless Kiriel's choices and thoughts aren't important at this point. As it's only a matter of time before the War Bringer destroys something. Kiriel's blade has one other power that is rather repulsive. It feasts still on the souls of the fallen growing stronger for each war. Kiriel's blade hungers for the day it will be perfect. It's size expansion is within reason, not capable of going past a weapon's length. Meaning the weapon's size must exist in reality. As for soul eating a condition must be met. They must die in war and their is no difference between player or npc characters. The power up is the same regardless of soul, but player must be given permission.

[b]Phase 0-War God Mode:
Kiriel didn't figure out just how far he could go till later. When the First Danava of War told him. That he could be much stronger if he got rid of one little thing. The power to tell friend from foe and simply become a butchering monster. Kiriel liked this idea and grinned as he unlocked the final form. Saca Atma many believed his first was the last form he had. No Kiriel could go one step further and this form was it. What happened when Kiriel flipped the switch is truly frightening. A creature spawns behind him as the sounds of drums fill the air. The creature has ten thousand fists and arms and towers into the clouds. It's crimson skin drips with the blood of the fallen souls. When Kiriel moves his arms or body the being behind him follows suit. But it's far more than that, Kiriel fuses with the creature. Making every attack he does not one attack but a ten. While fused the creature cannot use its power or it would kill him. The two modes of War God Mode are Statue Mode and Fusion Mode. Kiriel's eyes turn a black as the darkest depths. A crimson light glows in them but it becomes clear that this battle has no longer become a talking matter. Kiriel's skin turns a crimson color dripping with blood and markings. The markings are of Ancient Demon Language so understanding the tongue only a few can do. Kiriel does have limitations to how long he can keep this up. His body has only ever sustained this form for ten posts at most. Then he couldn't walk for a couple weeks. It's definitely a form with downsides that major in the extreme side of things. But Kiriel didn't find his potential without this form. So it was a double edged sword that proved very useful. Kiriel didn't embrace his Danava heritage for a long time. He merely wanted to enjoy every battle to it's fullest extent. The Demon of War wanted to have as much fun as possible. But now he has another goal, something else he desires and this will help him claim it.

» Why: Kiriel has been involved in a number of things but never been upgraded for anything. Not for when he joined forms with the First Danava of War, not for anything this is his formal upgrade.I will link below what threads he was in. You will notice some graphic issues it was due to me never finding a suitable FC for War.


https://www.platinumhearts.net/t14443-blood-snow-the-kopavogur-stand-iceland-conflict-event-mission-open

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11748-the-coming-of-war-the-lord-of-war-comesrebel-rave-mission-eastern-district

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11296-war-s-return


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Wed Apr 20, 2016 9:51 am
War God's Roar:

I mean it's all fine and dandy but I need drawbacks to this or else he’ll be like the dragonborn shouting all over the place. I want negatives effects of him shouting and a way for people to reasonable resist the hostility and aggression factors.

Chaos Matter:

I need you to put a limit to how many times he can use it during a thread. Seeing as it is a uncontrollable matter I do want some drawbacks to him using or having it even if his body is custom made for it.

Bringer of War:

As we know eating to souls of other people characters is bad without their permission so specify if it eats PLayer character souls and if it does you must get permission from the owners. Also what do you mean by expand and contract completely? Do you mean like the Power Pole or Wukong weapon if so (or not) I want a limit to for far it can extend and contract.

War god mode-

I'm mostly fine but change ten minutes to a post count, and I want it to be one attack can be equal to five(in physical power only) which in terms of the power of this character is a lot. 100 hundred is ridiculous and at your tier could do serious damage to the surrounding world, perhaps if you train it up I could see that but since it's a fresh unlock no.


Once you make Those changes I will let you know of my approval or not.


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Wed Apr 20, 2016 10:10 am
All fixed up.
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Wed Apr 20, 2016 10:29 am
I'll be approving these since all edits where made. Ill be watching this character and how you use these powers and if they are absurd or misused in any capacity I will revisit this and regrade it.

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