- MorpheusDavolSeasoned Member
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Special Abilities
Sat Sep 19, 2015 3:44 pm
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- Character Name: Desmond Hayden
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EVENT/STORY/DEATH ONLY Power
Arma Leviathan- A modified attack of Ikkotsu that Hayden has develope to work with his Hellhound fighting style or when he wishes to go hand to hand. It requires a three post charge up.
Within the first post Hayden must begin to focus on building up his muscle usage within his arm forcing his body past it’s normal limits to go into the one hundred percent usage of all his muscles within his arm causing it to pulse and radiate steam from the amount of energy and friction his muscles are generating. Merely going into this causes strain on his muscles and skin from it beginning to literally burn through any fat in the arm and muscle within mere minutes causing this to have to be done quickly for maximum effect and no reduced/lost energy. Maintaining this effect for more than four posts will result in his muscles begin to snap in his forearm and in another two posts render it useless with a ten post cool down to even regain mobility of it again naturally.
The second post is where Hayden begins to condense his reiatsu into his fist causing a maroon like shield to begin to warp and expand before contracting into a single small ‘shield’ around his fist before it is absorbed into his fist which is now by this point radiating a maroon colored steam. At the same time this is happening Hayden is infusing and condensing his reiatsu across the bones in his arm and into his muscles to keep them together, at this point steam would be coming out at a ridiculous rate an indicator of the massive amount of energy he is condensing into his arm. This would add an effect of maroon and black lightning sparking off the arm seeing as his natural reiatsu and death matter is merging, the lighting a physical manifestation of the plasma that it is creating and energy.
In the final and third post his body would be condensing the death matter in the air and in his body that his body naturally produces and puts into the air. The black substance would pool from his shoulder beginning to spread down his arm seeping into his skin while making a harden coat over his arm, before completely covering his hand. This would complete the preparation for the attack at which point Hayden would cock his arm back sweat pulling from his body from the extreme exertion. He would take off at his fastest speed towards the enemy and milliseconds before the point of contact focus all that energy he had built up into his fist to condense that energy into a single point. Once the attack makes contact it creates a supersonic boom as it strikes the person, using an gross amount of energy to strike this person.
The After Effect of this attack can vary depending on his tier, but at his current tier of 2-2 the amount of power and strength being infused into this single punch and the energy can create a tremor from the point of contact and a crater that expands for one hundred yards. At the point of contact despite condensing the energy due to the high amount of energy it creates a supersonic explosion of sound. This attack literally takes most of Hayden remaining energy and at the cost of this is devastating to his body. Not only is his army broken in three different spots but his 60% of the muscles of his arm in torn from the exertion. This would render this arm immobile and broken for the remainder of the thread along with exhausting Hayden only allowing him energy energy to barely fight on or escape; this would be his last resort.
As Hayden increases in Tier so would this ability as it uses his direct energy and control over it to perform this. As it increases in power it becomes even more devastating to use but with the same cost to himself perhaps even more. At his current power it can punch a decent size hole through a person even if they have Master durability, but when it comes to zero tiers it's more than likely to break a few bones and daze them if he arms for their chest and perhaps a concussion for their head.
At Hayden later tiers even when his regeneration comes up on the higher levels, due to infusing so much energy and death matter his regen will be knocked down causing his regen to back stumped for two posts after the ability.
Mobility wise he can keep moving while charging this attack but as each post passes his speed will become much slower due to his focus on his arm. For the first post his speed and offense will have a twenty percent reduced factor, the second post forty, and the third post will have all his offense/speed back since he has to release the attack.
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Dark Ikkotsu (Dark Single-Bone)- A power one Handed punch able to cause devastating amounts of damage as seen in use by Yamamoto against Wonderweiss. Hayden has Adopted the pretty simple Technique infusing his own Death Matter into the ability to generate a more powerful punch hence the Dark name.
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Re: Special Abilities
Sun Sep 20, 2015 3:07 am
Aight so I'm pretty happy with the ideal you've put down with it and i'm presuming each of these posts to charge things will result in a big lack of offence there so it seems fairly fair to me
I do have 2 issues however
When you state he creates a crater what would happen if facing a person would he obliterate a hole in them, would he be able to break through defenses of a master tier durability person? against most i could see this smashing a hole through them sure but when it comes to 0 tiers or that id suggest a bit more detail be put into how damaging it could be against a physical body.
at higher tiers what would happen with your regenerative capability and this considering once done he could in theory just rip off and grow a new arm? id suggest putting in a stipulation of since his Death matter was infused within this attack the regeneration rate of his arm or that requires a recharge rate or that of something like 2 or 3 posts before it begins healing once more. with his regeneration broken bones in my ideals if he gets to levels like big regeners would mean this move has no drawbacks.
Fix these little things up and ill approve this one up for ya
I do have 2 issues however
When you state he creates a crater what would happen if facing a person would he obliterate a hole in them, would he be able to break through defenses of a master tier durability person? against most i could see this smashing a hole through them sure but when it comes to 0 tiers or that id suggest a bit more detail be put into how damaging it could be against a physical body.
at higher tiers what would happen with your regenerative capability and this considering once done he could in theory just rip off and grow a new arm? id suggest putting in a stipulation of since his Death matter was infused within this attack the regeneration rate of his arm or that requires a recharge rate or that of something like 2 or 3 posts before it begins healing once more. with his regeneration broken bones in my ideals if he gets to levels like big regeners would mean this move has no drawbacks.
Fix these little things up and ill approve this one up for ya
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Re: Special Abilities
Sun Sep 20, 2015 1:41 pm
edits made!
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Re: Special Abilities
Mon Sep 21, 2015 6:59 am
Approval incoming
So with this all fixed up ill approve it for ya since i have no problems with it now. good job morph it looks good. Ill be getting an admin to make this transaction as well when i can.
Re: Special Abilities
Mon Oct 26, 2015 2:04 am
«TAKING CARE OF STUFFS IN HERE»
Since I see no official written documentation of an AWP deduction from an admin, I'll go ahead and remove the AWP now. If there is a problem, let me know. Apologies for the long ass delay.
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