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Thu Aug 27, 2015 4:37 pm
[adm]Is this character done? The reason I'm asking is because the tags otherwise indicate it is. Please remember to tag your app as "[WIP]" if you are working on it. Or "FINISHED" if it is ready for review.[/adm]


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Wed Sep 09, 2015 9:46 pm
Altering the title to state its a wip until told otherwise. Thanks Kade.



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Fri Sep 25, 2015 6:38 am
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✧MOVING THIS TO UNCHECKED✦


I'll be moving this into Unchecked Character applications. For future reference, the reason this application was so heavily over viewed is because you did not place "FINISHED" in your characters title. Staff may go through WIPs from time to time, but you leave yourself in risk of high delays if you do not tag your threads correctly.




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Sun Sep 27, 2015 9:10 pm
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- Human Skills: Enhanced Strength: He possesses a great remarkable high amount of strength for a pure quincy. This power actually develop throughout the years, He's able use strength with his ginto abilities combined with his well trained combat skills to have a deadly combo effect. Jason was capable of lifting a steel beam that had fallen on him with little effort. Jason can effortlessly throw another person a half a block away with only one arm. Also with his physical enhanced strength, Jason's muscles increasing his punches, uppercuts and kicks when in combat. With his strength, Jason can deliver major damage to enemy or enemies when putting her determination in it. He able to break medium and perhaps strong Kidō abilities with a swing of his punches or kicks. Jason still can be hurt by other stronger Zanpakutō attacks and other stronger attacks depending on the enemy's power.

I'd probably cross this out with a strike until you receive your strength level. As this sounds more like a strength related skill than a power.

Shadows: Using "Shadows", A Quincy can disappear and use a form of teleportation that allows them to quickly leave a place, reappearing almost instantly in another. However, this skill was thought to be limited to those of the old style Quincy. However Modern age Quincy are known to be able to perform this. Jason can only this power only four times in battle because to hard reishi power that it drains from his body so she rarely uses it.

Can you describe this process a bit further? What is the range? How do they teleport? Is there a limit? How much energy does it take?

Also, as far as the stolen Bankai goes, that's going to be locked down until you get some RP's in. So I have also not reviewed or approved the VOLLSTANDIG.

Having said that, come back with these fixes and I'll continue with the app review process.



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Shadows: Using "Shadows", A Quincy can disappear and use a form of teleportation that allows them to quickly leave a place, reappearing almost instantly in another. However, this skill was thought to be limited to those of the old style Quincy. However Modern age Quincy are known to be able to perform this. The former well-trained quincy was actually trained by the forbidden iramasha into using the shadows but the quincy has an adept power of the shadows. He can also teleport with this power combining both shadows and pure rishi creating his body into a black mist and leave from one place to another of his choosing when using the power. Because his trainings; Jason can travel 6-18 miles because of Joshua Iramasha's trainings with the quincy. Jason can only this power only four times and that his limit because the when the quincy used it a fifth time one of his quincy powers became unresponsive. When using the shadows it takes reishi energy about 13% perecent of when using the shadows technique.

The whole forbidden Iramasha thing doesn't make sense. Are you talking about your character training Jason in this art? Or are you talking "Forbidden Iramasha" as a group teaching Quincy? If the latter, remove it.

Additionally, you say he can =only use this four times. Do you mean forever or per thread? If it's per thread, then that's fine, but I'd lower it to 5-10 miles and it should be used as an escape type of move.



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