Ophelia's Release Form

Sun Jun 28, 2015 5:38 pm

Name Of Character: Ophelia Lestat
Link To Character Profile: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t12968-ophelia-lestat-approved-2-5
Reasons For Upgrading: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t13703p10-the-black-world-arc-rewards-sign-up-thread-claim-event-upgrades#88835
What Are You Upgrading: Giving her a sacred release

• Sacred Release Appearance: In the middle of a release of pure white reiatsu, Ophelia's hair turns snow white and her eyes an intense golden. A familiar form to the woman, as she's had many years to get used to this power.

• Sacred Release Powers:
Additional Magic Traits:

Violet Magic:
Any Extra Notes: Balldix

Thu Jul 02, 2015 7:51 am

Green Magic gives Ophelia the ability to teleport other living beings to another plane of existence in the same way that she would, except that they too have to be enclosed in an object. They don't have to teleport along with Ophelia, however, meaning she could remove someone from existence and insert them somewhere else without going with. She has to be in contact with one of the objects used in this power in order to successfully transport someone. All other properties of Green Magic apply.

Explain how many times she can use this magic before she runs out, and how far away they would have to be a bit better so it's clearer please. Then we can get to approving it and keeping life good.

Fri Jul 03, 2015 12:51 pm

Kakeru wrote: Green Magic gives Ophelia the ability to teleport other living beings to another plane of existence in the same way that she would, except that they too have to be enclosed in an object. They don't have to teleport along with Ophelia, however, meaning she could remove someone from existence and insert them somewhere else without going with. She has to be in contact with one of the objects used in this power in order to successfully transport someone. All other properties of Green Magic apply.

Explain how many times she can use this magic before she runs out, and how far away they would have to be a bit better so it's clearer please. Then we can get to approving it and keeping life good.

Also added a number.

In case you're not clear as it is on Ophelia's profile, in order to use Green magic she needs to enclose herself between two objects. This does not include the air but can include things such as water as long as it fully engulfs her body. The same would have to apply for the other person and I've stated in the magic she would need to be in touch with whatever's enclosing her target in order for her to transport them.

Just to clear it up for ya :V

Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:43 pm

Okay.. Bump that number down a deal because you're talkign removing something from existence, even temporary is still a large amount of energy to do, Kakeru can't even do it Seven times and he's a guy built on having tones of energy etc. Like to max 3. Maybe later on it can increase, but for now it must be 3, I just want to make sure others are clear on what you're doing, that's why I'm asking so it can't be abused, not saying that you would abuse it, but I want to make sure there's no chance if someone steps up and uses your skills that they can't just make it broken when the first check of it isn't

Anyway, Does the substance that the other person is engulfed in needs to be the same like...Ophelia or is it just they have to be engulfed in just a substance i.e She's in Water and the other guy is in fire, or does have to be, both are in water for it to work?

Mon Jul 06, 2015 1:58 pm

Lowered the number to three and just wanted to note that no, the person does not have to engulfed in the same substance as Ophelia, meaning if she encloses a person in anything -it can be one big substance or two separate substances, as long as they're enclosed/crushed- she can use this power to remove them instantaneously from existence and place them somewhere else. It would have to happen in the same span of a minute though and Ophelia herself would have to be within 50 meters of the place she placed them (she literally just dispenses them out of thin air into somewhere 50 meters away at max).

^also added that.

Mon Jul 06, 2015 2:27 pm

That makes much more sense, and slightly reduce the range to like. 30 Meters, because as you get stronger you can increase the range, but that makes much more sense now thank you. Just do that and you'll get an approval.

Mon Jul 06, 2015 4:12 pm

There, 'tis edited :V

And thank you for being patient with these bs powers.

Mon Jul 06, 2015 4:47 pm

These seem okay, and I'll approve the power ups now, but note if any skill is abused, and staff is called to this, I will revoke the approval and it'll be redone~ Anyway good luck and I hope your upgrades goes well.

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