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Name: Dokuto Tokabe
Appearance Age: 35
True Age: 3,666
Gender: Male

Overall Appearance

Personality: Dokuto has a calm and relaxed attitude, he does not believe in rash actions. Dokuto would rather sit and listen in a conversation then actually contribute to it. The only thing that
does make him very rash, and very angry, is when his friends get hurt. Dokuto does not have a problem getting in a fight, but he preffers not to. He would rather talk out his problems, or if that was not possible, simply destroying his enemy before they had a full blown fight. His commrads say that while he is calm, he is also fierce when he needs to be.
Though his personallity changes during a fight. During a fight Dokuto fights feircely, not giving in and only worrying about deffence when he truely needs to. This sometimes gets him in trouble in fights, but most of the time he is a great fighter, being so feirce that he never gives the opponent a chance to harm him.

Appearance: Dokuto's hair is black, long, and wavy. It comes down to his shoulders, and actually shines in the sun. This makes it look as if he greases it back, but he doesn't. Sometimes, when he expects a very long fight, he puts it up into a ponytail to keep it out of his eyes.

Dokuto’s eye’s are of a very deep, dark Sapphire. So dark they are almost black. He has a faint scar over his right eye, and another just under his left. These are from battles long past and never even bother him anymore. His skin is slightly bronzed from his training out in the sun.

He is six feet, four inches tall. Each of his arms are three inches in diameter, and just under three feet, two inches long. His legs, being most of his body height, are each four feet tall and six inches in diameter at the thigh.

He has broad shoulders, but not abnormally broad. From shoulder to shoulder they measure three and a quarter feet. His chest is just slightly narrower at three feet, and his torso is two and a half feet wide. He has a six-pack abs, but they are not so large that they show unless he has no shirt on.

He wears what looks to be a Tae-Kwon-Do shirt with the very bottom of it ripped off, seeing as the bottom is ragged. Yet instead of the normal white of the Tae-Kwon-Do uniform, it is blood-red. The pants he wears are snuggly fit around the waist, yet loose around the lags. This allows for easy mobility. The pants he wears are also blood-red. Lastly he wears no shoes, instead relying on the calluses that have formed on his feet over the years to keep his feet safe.

Height: 6' 4"

Weight: 167

Zanpakuto (Sealed) Description


Zanpakuto Name: Neptun
Zanpakuto Spirit:
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Poseidon is a spirit of massive proportions. Not that he is some sort of massive giant, rather, he is just a lot of man. He stands about 6 feet tall and weighs a whopping 230 lbs - all muscle. He is truly a being to strike fear into the hearts of many beings, including Dokuto himself.Of course, Dokuto has gotten use to his epic size and massive proportions, but when caught off gaurd, it can be quite frightening. However, as said, he is tall, and 90% of his body is pure muscele. His arms are roughtly 3 feet in length, and his biceps and triceps and any other "ceps" that exist on a beings arm, Poseidon's are totally ripped to the extreme. His chest, like his arms, are ripped as well, giving him two large pecks and a massively defined six pack. Of course, like his chest and arms, his legs (quads etc etc) are defined as well, though not as near as defined as his arms or abdomen, but that doesnt mean his legs aren't far from the overused word "powerful".

Poseidon also has shoulder (give or take a few inches) length dark brown hair, that is a mixture between curly and wavy. It always appears to be drenched with water, or some liquid with similar characteristics.From his ears to his chin, and around his lip form a odd set of facial hair, blight brown, unlike his hair. All over his sort of tan sort of pale body are the glowing remains of light blue tattoos that glow no matter where he is. They're in these intriquate desings that cannot be mistaken from anything other than the simple word "unique". His chest is bare, he wears no clothes on said chest, however, his lower body is covered with a creamy yellow-white mixed color of tattered cloth, which like his hair, always appears to be drenched in water, or some liquid similar.
Zanpakuto World:
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The inner world of the spirit known as Poseidon appears to be an enormous underwater palace, whose depths reach uknown numbers. Poseidon, of course, is the ruler of this realm, and not even Dokuta reigns surpreme over this realm, it is Poseidon and Poseidon only. His power and his word is final in said realm. However, this palace is nothing special from the ordinary russian-medeval castle, and isn't something to continue on about a if it's something more than it is intended to be.

Sealed Zanpakuto Appearance:
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The sealed form of this zanpakutou is truly magnificent, as it appears to be a blade that would be that of a shikai or bankai. It is truly unique, as it bares no sheath or scabbard. The hilt is covered in a rubbery material that allowed Dokuta to keep a hold of his blade in most-if-not-all situations, and on the end of the hilt appears to be a sea creature toe, or some sort of talon. It is great for striking someone or something in the diaphram, and is able to ammount to considerable pain and/or damage. Like most zanpakutou, if broken, it will take awhile to do so, but it will reform like a good-piece-of-a-soul.

Above the hilt there is a unique little design before the blade. It's hard to say what it is, other than different. On either side of it lies two cresent-shapred pieces of red blade, both facing away from eachother and out towards the left and right of the blade itself. And the blade itself, like the cresent shaped pieces, is blood red, and has a slight curve, like a pirates scimitar. It comes to a rough and pointed end, perfect for slicing through human, arrancar, hollow or even shinigami flesh.
Release Phrase: Sturm auf das meer

Zanpakotu (Shikai) Description


Shikai Appearance:
Spoiler:
When the release command is spoken, the blade is engulfed in water, which begins to swirl around the blade, elongating it, morphing it, and changing some colors around. By the end of the shikai transformation, Dokuto would be left with a large trident, which is the baasic weapon of the God of the Sea. The long handle of it is black in color, and ends with a golden... something at the end. Like most (really, all) tridents, the part that actually is used to impale and fight with, comes out in three thin robs, pointed at the end. And signifying it's seriousness and power, it is empowered with the universal symbol of respect and power: gold.

Shikai Abilities: Weather Control: Dokuto can control weather. Presipitation, wind, and lightning. In shikai he can control winds up to that of a level one hurricane, and up to that of a large lake in water. This is the most he can control however and it takes a lot of concentration. It's not very practicle in a fight. Despite being able control a level one hurricane, he can still cause serious damage if he knows what he is doing.

Water clone: Dokuto can make one clone made of water per fight. It has half the power of Dokuto, can cause damage to his opponent, and disappears after three strikes to it.

Zanpakotu (Bankai) Description

Bankai Appearance: I do want Bankai. So ill wait for admin approval. (NOTICE THIS!)
Bankai Abilities:

Hollow Mask and Inner Hollow



Inner Hollow Description:
Spoiler:
The inner hollow of Dokuto takes the form of a pack-less wolf. With four razor sharp claws on each paw, and muscles rivaling those of many shinigami and arrancar, this hollow is a force to be reckoned with. The wofl appears to be a savage beast that will stop at nothing to tear an opponent to shreads.
Inner Hollow Personality: Dokuto's inner hollow is very aggressive. He likes to attack on sight, no matter who it is.
Hollow Mask Appearance:
Spoiler:
Hollow Powers: Cero: Formed from Dokuto's mouth, it beings as a small swirling pinpoint of extremely dense reiatsu at Dokuto's mouth, and in a swirling motion, slowly gains in mass and volume until it is about the size of a softball. When fired, at its widest part, the arc reached around 25 feet. It's color is crimson like the blood is wishes to shead.

Call of the wild: When Dokuto howls his strength and speed double for one post. This is a last resort technique because it takes him out of his mask when it finishes and wont allow him to go back into mask for five posts.

Hollow form
Spoiler:
Basically, Dokuto, when he looses control, either from an emotional literal breakdown, or some sort of death like the Legendary Ichito Kurosaki, he takes the form of his inner hollow, just with two enormous demonic wings on its back.
Resurreccion Appearance:
Spoiler:
Resurreccion Abilities: Claws of ice: Dokuto can enhance the strength of his claws by forming ice around them. These add one half of his original strength to his strength, while lowering his speed by one fifth of his original speed.

Electric howl: He can howl at an enemy and launch lightning out of his jaw. The lightning is that of a normal lightning strike, so it is not a deffinate kill.

Herro: He has a Herro that is almost as strong as that of Nnoitora's.

Cero: He has the same Cero as he has in his mask in Ressurreccion.

Shinigami Skill Level- Kidou: Adept
Shinigami Skill Level- Swordsmanship: Advanced
Hollow Skill Level- Sonido: Adept
Hollow Skill Level- Cero/Bala: Beginner
Skill Level- Hand-to-Hand: Beginner
Background/Roleplay Sample


Background: Dokuto Tokabe. Or was that even his name? He couldn’t remember anymore. The oldest thing he remembered was his parents back in his life accidently dropping him off of a mountain and into the ocean at the age of four. He remembered waking up in a strange city with a man with a sword watching him. Dokuto presumed he was keeping watch. Finally Dokuto got the courage to sit up and say, "Who are you? What are you doing here?" When he
finished the man looked around, he looked worn out, from behind Dokuto would have said he was an old man judging by the white hair but from the front he saw that the man looked young. Finally after what seemed like an hour the man spoke, "I am Hakudoshi Rentai, Captain of the 6th division of the Gotei 13, chief of police for the
Soul Society." The man, Hakudoshi, Looked at Dokuto strangely, then shook his head. He said to Dokuto, "I am going to send you to the Soul Society now, when you get there you
should see more men with swords but they will have all black clothes on, tell them that I said you are to go to my office. If they do not believe you show them this." He then
gave Dokuto a necklace, which Dokuto put on his neck. Then the man was gone.

When Dokuto told the other men what Hakudoshi said to him they did not believe him, until he showed them the necklace. they then brought him to an office and told him to wait there. Dokuto waited for what seemed like a week but for some reason he did not get tired, hungry, or even thirsty. Finally Hakudoshi came in. He sat behind his desk and looked Dokuto straight in the eye. "You are young, but I sense one day you will have great power. I know a family you can stay with in the Rukongai. You shall live there for your first five hu8ndred years here, then come see me again. Then you shall be admited into the Academy." Hakudoshi said, then sent him to his new family.

For five hundred years Dokuto stayed with them. Then, finally, he came to the academy. In the academy his most prominent classes were sword-on-sword fighting, and tactics. Melee actually was his best class, the only instructors he couldn't beat in a sword fight by his graduation was the Captain of squad 11, and the Captain Commander of cource. In tactics he exceled also, reaching co-top of the class by his graduation. His only problem was kido, he believed that kido was for weaklings who didn't want to get dirty sword fighting. So he kind of disapointed his instructors there, he only was able to do up to kido #29 by his graduation. One thing his instructors were very excited about though, he reached shikai very early in his instruction. It happened very weirdly, one day while in the middle of a spar between Dokuto and the 11th division captain, Dokuto was
getting his butt handed to him like he always did against this captain, when the voice came back! After all these long years, it was back! At first it was small and insignificant, like a misquito. But it grew louder, and louder the more Dokuto ignored it, until finally Dokuto heard it scream out just as he was knocked to the ground and was about to lose. [color=dark-red]Dokuto! I am Neptun, your Zanpakto! Use my power and become stronger! Dokuto was startled, but did not ask questions other then How? [color=dark-red]Say Sturm auf das meer and you have my power at your disposal. And, as Dokuto said the words, his Zanpakto turned from a blood-red scimitar to that of a trident, and Dokuto smiled. He still lost that day, but he made the captain actually fight hard. Very hard.

The Captain set up Dokuto's graduation soon after. Dokuto was held in high regard, it was difficult choicing a division for him. Finally the Captain Commander spoke. "Dokuto, you have done very well, you have earned all of our respect. we have given you your position based on how you did in the academy. You did very well in all strength and tactics assignments, while in kido you were lacking. so we have decided to put you as the third seat in the 9th division. We all hope you serve us well." Third seat........Dokuto had gotten third seat..............and he was disapointed. He wanted a higher seat, but he guessed he couldn't complain, after all he only had shikai, and almost all captains needed bankai. So Dokuto was sort of happy.

After a few years Dokuto started feeling strange. Something happened to him soon after his death that he did not know. A hollow formed in his soul from the time it took to make him a Shinigami. The hollow manifested itself in a mask one day during a fight, and he was cast out into the human world. There he found others like him who called themselves Vizards. There he lives now, with more of his kind.
Role Play Sample: For a split second Hakudoshi was able to look at from the pod and see all of Los Noches. It looked beautiful, yet at the same time hakudoshi couldn't stand
the sight of it. Los Noches may have been beautiful, but it had an esense of pure evil that he just couldn't stand to look at. He closed his eyes and bowed his head in shame. It was
his fault that they were brought here so easily, and he knew it. As he closed his eyes the adament pod gave a great lurch and then started to plumit to the ground. When the pod hit
the ground the whole thing shook violently, but it held together.

As the sand cleared around the pod Hakudoshi saw tens to hundreds of hollows and arrancar surrounding the pod, with Karaku, the God-King, ten feet away and straight in front of
him. Hakudoshi narrowed his eyes at the sight of him, and then hatred started to build up inside of him. While he knew he didn't stand a chance against the God-King, hakudoshi
wasn't going down without a fight. He would not allow Karaku to get his hands on the Hogyoku as long as blood courced through his veins.
He looked behind him and saw that the girl looked unharmed, and more importantly, she still had the Hogyoku clenched tightly in her hand. Suddenly a briliant idea came to him,
but he imediatly shot it down. He could make his own Garganta and get them out of there, but he didn't want to waste any energy taking the dead Kalmora, and he knew that she
wouldn't leave without him and that she would never release the Hogyoku.

There was nothing he could do, they were trapped. But Hakudoshi was NOT going down without a fight. He gripped his Zanpakto so tightly that his knuckles turned bleach-white,
and started to concentrate his riatsu while at the same time trying to hide it's full strength. He whispered just loud enough for the girl behind him to hear, "I'm going to unleash a blast
of riatsu strong enough to break this pod and hopefully at least push back some of these hollows and Arrancars, if not kill a few. When I do grab him and shunpo as far away as you
can, it should be enough of a distraction that if you hide your riatsu right afterwords they shouldn't be able to find you. If i can get away i will come and find you two and take us away
in a Garganta, i would make one here but if i make it big enough here for us to take Kalmora it won't close before they can follow us. If i end up not getting away........then hide. But
keep this place in sight, Hayami will eventually come for the Hogyoku and me, she will take you out of here. Now, hurry! Grab his arm and get ready to shunpo away, I almost have
my riatsu concentrated enough to do what i want to do."


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Shikai Abilities: Weather Control: Dokuto can control weather. Presipitation, wind, and lightning. In shikai he can control winds up to that of a level four hurricane, and up to that of a large lake in water. This is the most he can control however and it takes a lot of concentration. It's not very practicle in a fight.


That is much too powerful for a shikai. Please lower it's power.

No Resereccion for beginning vizards.


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Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:35 pm
We are still waiting for you to fix that so we can approve it


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He's aware. He asked me to ask you (he lives across the street from me) if it could be moved to WIP. He'll be editing it when he comes over this weekend, but as for now, the internet at his house is out. He said he's not done with it and will continue working on it friday or saturday, depending on when he stays the night.


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  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced
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  • Hoho: Adept
  • Kidou: Advanced
  • Zanjutsu: Advanced
  • Hakuda: Beginner
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Finished. I added some description to some things. Nothng changed aside from the addition of details.


Skills:

Shinigami Skill Level- Kidou: Adept
Shinigami Skill Level- Swordsmanship: Advanced
Hollow Skill Level- Sonido: Adept
Hollow Skill Level- Cero/Bala: Beginner
Skill Level- Hand-to-Hand: Beginner


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