[WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release]

Sun Mar 29, 2015 7:57 pm

«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»

« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

Willpower/Determination: Advanced
Mental Deduction: Master
Pain Endurance: Master
Focus: Advanced

Comments/Notes: The only thing I have to say is this:

When she strikes, the reishi circulating her palms connects to that of the opponent and cancels. It deteriorates the reishi at a speed of 1/64 a portion of the users reishi every 80 seconds.

Convert that into post because we can't determine seconds too well in post format. So rewrite that to how long it would take with each post.

Outside of that, I've taken the time to review this app and it seems fairly solid to me. With the lack of Vizards, and need for people in the corps, I'll go ahead and also give this character a pretty high ranking tier. This is because I can tell a lot of work was put into the app and I like the overall theme of it.

If there is a problem with this decision, staff can also let me know and post their comments. Otherwise, I feel it works well enough and I'll expect some activity out of this character for the next month or so.

Oh, and, also, I removed the archiving post from Circa in here so you didn't have your two post split up. So enjoy that as well.

And be sure to post in this app when you made that slight correction.
Tier: 1-1+ [0-5+ in Release]

Sun Mar 29, 2015 9:02 pm

I made that slight correction. Like, unf, babe.

Mon Mar 30, 2015 4:15 am

[WIP]Kaida Axworthy [1-1+] [0-5+ In Release] Image334-1

Everything looks good to me.
I'll give ya the clear, miss.

Sat Aug 08, 2015 1:33 pm

[mod]Moving to Inactive Characters because of.. Inactivity.[/mod]

Sat Oct 31, 2015 8:20 am

MOVING

I hate to see ya go, but it's been many many months since we've last heard of Rowbutt. Therefore, I'll be moving this into archived characters. Hopefully life will allow you to come back to us as you can unarchive this character whenever you are ready.