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Pockeh
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Master


Comments/Notes:

Couple of things, here.

Bakuryūha Tengai: The silver-white flame of the Getsuga Tensho; At the instant of the slash, Kain's zanpakutō , absorbing Kain's spirital pressure, releases the highly condensed spiritual energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The Bakuryūha Tengai is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The power of the Bakuryūha Tengai is 20% stronger the Getsuga Tensho. Kain has used this technique in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omni-directional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. A single strike from it can disperse an entire rainstorm leaving just drops of hail/water once the attack is done. (However, Kain can only use the attack three times per thread because of the massive drain of power is take to create the attack itself)

If you're going to make a slash/wave attack like this, please use power comparisons that don't involve mentioning attacks signature to other characters on the site. You could say "stronger than a bullet train collision" or something of that nature, but try not to use references to things like the Getsuga Tensho.

Secondly, 20% stronger than the primary attack of Bleach's main character? In.. shikai? Please correct that, as even with a massive energy drain, I can't see such an attack being stronger than Ichigo's signature move.

Augmented Strength: When in his Bankai, Kain's muscles are stronger improving his weapon abilities. His physical strength is also augmented while using his zanpakutō in it bankai state doing many things a normal shinigami couldn't do. He been known to stop or break many strong attacks and most kidō abilities with a swing of his sword. Kain maybe able to destroy very stronger attacks but they can hurt him or explode right depending on the enemy's strength/power. An example of this is when an attack from a very powerful enemy the shinigami can counter it the first time actually with both energy and his strong strength. Slapping it away with weapon or his hand but doing it again may can cause damage to his arm or his body. Other times when countering to blocking it can hurt him depending on the enemy's power.

If you're going to further augment something, it'd be best to describe how it's increased from what it was as opposed to describing the same augmenting that shikai gives him, which is what I see here.

Enhanced Kaze no Kizu: Kain's bankai sword to start glowing as it will start to absorbed black lightning particles circling around it charging up for an attack. Kain get into a fighting stance as his energy from the Zanpakutō as then his bankai sword will start pulsating. Kain draw his Zanpakutō like he was getting ready to slash an enemy drawing it weapon pointing at the enemy. The blade will shoot out a seven grounded blade energy projectiles which is designed to hurt enemies and block certain attacks. The energy blade projectiles is shaped almost like a large triangle with bladed spikes. Kain has noticed the projectiles attack can handle the power of bankai or some higher ranked Kidō abilities

Enhanced Bakuryūha Tengai: The silver-white flame of the Getsuga Tensho; At the instant of the slash, Kain's zanpakutō , absorbing Kain's spirital pressure, releases the highly enhanced & condensed spiritual energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a wave. The Bakuryūha Tengai is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The power of the Bakuryūha Tengai is 50% stronger the Getsuga Tensho. Kain has used this technique in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omni-directional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path. A single strike from it can disperse an entire rainstorm leaving just drops of hail/water once the attack is done. (However, Kain can only use the attack five times per thread because of the massive drain of power is take to create the attack itself)

Enhanced Kekkai Yaburi: An super energy wave slash that can do small even medium based damage to an opponent which can cause brusies & small wounds. The slash is based of fire energy, the attack itself can actually person's sword hand or medium based attacks but it would be worthless against stronger attacks. However, Kekkai Yaburi can be augmented with reishi to create even stronger energy slashes that stronger damage to an enemy. However the slash itself can be defeated by the natural enemy of fire which is powerful water based attacks or powerful attacks by the enemy depending on the attack's strength.

The problem I have with this specifically is a lot of the same as above. As it seems like you simply copy-pasted the shikai abilities. Also, I don't see him having an energy blast 50% stronger than the Getsuga Tensho, regardless of the energy strain on him.

Enhanced Strength: In his vizard form, Kain's physical sterength is enhanced within hollowized energy. While wearing his Hollow mask, Kain has shown that he has greater strength, which he can use to overwhelm shinigami captains or espadas

Hierro: Which refers to the ultra tough skin of the arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Yet if a strong and powerful attack or shikai attack was used then perhaps Vizard Kain's hierro might break.

Two problems here. 1.) Overwhelming captains and espada with simply the mask on? I don't think that's really balanced.. please fix that. 2.) Can vizards have hierro with simply their mask on? I'd double-check that before adding it into the app.

Enhanced Hierro: Anna's resereccion hierro is completely pure dark red hierro. It's an super enhancement of an arrancar's hierro ability which can able to block medium and strong based attacks. If maybe able to block some powerful and deadly attacks depending on the enemy's power but if too many attacks comes his way then her hierro would break

Enhanced Bala: This is an enhanced version of the orginal technique which hardens Anna's reiatsu and releases it in a swift yet stronger blast. While similar in function to a Cero, the technique is near similiar to Cero. In addition, it possesses a higher concussive force than a typical powered Cero does. A Enhanced Bala's ultimate speed and power varies depending on Kain using it; while the power of Kain's version is equated with a particularly super right hook punch.

Enhanced Pesquisa: Her unique ability to measure and locate spiritual pressure at much faster speed then a regular pesquisa. Enhanced Pesquisa functions similarly to super sonar, through a radiating pulse sent outwards from Kain which reacts to sources of reiatsu within a certain quick proximity, allowing Kain to determine the location of any sensed individuals and granting them an indication of how powerful they actually are.

Please change the stuff you copy-pasted from Anna's app to either be original or fit Kain instead. The "her"s are disconcerting.

Caja Negacion: A special cube-shaped device which simulates the effects of Negacion, given to members of the Espada by the leader with the intention that it be used as a form of punishment against their Fracción to trap them permanently in an alternate dimension, if deemed necessary. The cube, when used on a subject, traps them in an alternate dimension from which there is no escape; however, this assumes it's being used as intended. More powerful Arrancar, namely the Espada themselves, can escape, given enough time.


Pretty sure these are espada-only.. Why does Kain have them? I don't see anything in his history to justify this.

Downloaded Quincy Powers

Blut Vene: The defensive form of Blut that grants the user inhuman durability, represented by a faint pattern tracing the veins beneath the surface of their skin, which is only visible on the afflicted area when struck. If consciously kept at full power, even attacks delivered by a Shinigami's Bankai can potentially be negated completely. However, despite the considerable defense afforded by this technique, it seemingly isn't absolute and can be torn using sufficient power. As overtime the defense shall be worn down due to the nature of Blut Vene. This massive defense also has time limits, depending on the level of skill with this, it can vary to short periods of time, to lengthy amount, but they need periods of rest which can be risky if they are fighting a foe that can attack rapidly.

Ransōtengai: This is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of spirit energy controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of countless reishi. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement. It was originally created to allow elderly Quincy to fight effectively, and is rare enough that Mayuri had never encountered a Quincy (out of the 2661 that he examined or studied) who could use it before Uryū. Mayuri stated it as "the most powerful technique for the Quincy," but he did not know of the Quincy: Letzt Stil, which means as far as Mayuri knew it was the strongest.

If he has phantomtech, did he buy it? did he have someone transplant it? Also, why is he able to download quincy abilities? All of these things need to be explained. If he made purchases from the cybermind, there should be a link to the purchase thread.

And now for the last thing, one issue with history.

Yet things were settling down within until some unseated members and captain were disappearing, Squad 9 & 10 were to investigate, Kain was the first on the scene. A hollow was attacking and then he noticed he was wearing something familiar it looked like squad 9 captain's badge. Kain attacked the hollow cutting off the freak's arm but it spit something the shinigami's face as the other squad members attacked with Kidō. Kain felt funny and his stomach was feeling bad and he started to vomit first then he started throwing some white liquid.

Did you get permission to have him be a part of that original group before the winter war?

If you got admin permission for any of the things that I listed above, just let me know and I'll fix this to accommodate. Since I don't see anything in his history justifying them, and I don't know whether or not you got approval for them, I will be approving this app without Bankai and Ressureccion

Tier: 2-1++ when fixed.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Mon Aug 25, 2014 2:51 am
Alright, with the changes to the history and powers in place I'm going to Approve this app with a tier of 1-2- with the bankai and ress. If anyone has a problem with this, feel free to recheck this.



I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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