Arron Deoradh [APPROVED 3-5]

Tue Jan 28, 2014 4:18 pm

• Name: Arron Deoradh
• Titles: The Shunned/ The Princess
• Gender: Male
• Appearance Age: 19
• Age: 483
• Affiliation/Rank: Rouge

• Appearance Description: Arron Deoradh is what people call a pretty boy. His delicate features and longhair do not help in the matter of how he looks. He stands close to 5’10 and weighs close to 140 pounds. Due to his fighting style Arron arms and upper body are covered in scars. Because of this he wears his Shihakusho so that most of his body is covered. A part from his Shihakushō, Arron wears glasses that are square in shape. His purple hair reaches down to his upper back and his worn in a ponytail. His eyes are a deep sapphire blue. Added with his walk that makes him almost look like gliding, he appears at time to look like a noblewoman. Arron voice is that of a baritone which gives him a mysterious feel at times.

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• Personality: Arron is a claim, and collected for the most part. At times he can lose his cool and rage. Most of the time that happens when he is mistake for a girl. He is normally a caring person but doesn’t like to show it. One of his few pleasures is watching children having fun. Watching them reminds him of his own younger sisters that died at a young age. Most of the time he is cold and distance to others. He also does not hold a high regard for other Shinigami do to personal history. He also prefers isolation from three hundred years of living along. Therefore push or bubbly people make him grit his teeth. The only thing that will make him explode though his being called a girl. He proud at times therefore being called a girl is a blow to him. He is likely to threaten the person with Kido if they call him Princess.
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• History: Arron Deoradh was born in the 1930’s to a Japanize Mother and a Irish Father. His Father was a British diplomat to Japan. His mother was from the middle child from a family that owned a temple. The family had grudging approved the marriage. There happiness did not last though because of the world war brewing. His father was recalled back to Britain and promise to send for them. His mother, who was pregnant with his twin sisters, and him stayed behind until arrangements could have been made for them. Arron was nine at the time when they heard his father’s boat had gone down during a storm. He and his family then lived in at his grandparents for the duration of the war.

After the war his family moved to Osaka and opened a small general store. Life was hard but good for his family at the time. As the years past his life was going well: He was the top in his class, he had a good collage lined up over in America, and he already knew he wanted to be a Politian like his father. His good fortune however was not meant to last. About two month before he was to leave, his sisters where mysteriously murdered. The shock devastated him and his mother. He closed up the store and companied his mother back to family. His grandfather had given him a charm to protect him when left his mother with his grandparents. About a month later he wondered back near his sisters old school wallowing in grief. It was then he was a strange creature near by and went to investigate.

He followed the creature only catching glimpses as it lead deep through the streets and finally the forest. Upon arrive in the by near forest, he found a Shinigami in combat with the strange monster. He watched the battle between the Shinigami in a straw hat and the monster with interest. Arron noticed a near by tree was about to fall on the person. He cried out to warn the Shinigami, but his cry surprised the man. That caused the hollow he was fighting to gain an advantage. The hollow smacked the Shinigami next to Arron and retreated to go gather strength. The blow harmed the Shinigami and he was not able to go after it. He pleaded to Arron take his power and save the souls the monster was after. Arron accepted and was transformed into a Substitute Shinigami. He fought the Hollow and destroyed it freeing the souls.

After the Hollow was defeated he returned to the Shinigami. Upon arriving he saw two small girls with red hair, his sister trying to help the injured man. He cried out to them with tear staining his face as he ran to embrace them. He cried and held them tight and didn’t want to let them go. They told him it was all right and that they loved him and mother to. They told him to take care of himself and mother, and to make father proud of him. Having said their good byes, the two girls past on, leaving their brother behind. Next morning Arron did not remember any of this although his grief was gone.

However fate has away of screwing people over. Few days after his fight, that he did not remember, there was a traffic accident. His body died as a car crushed it. He was nineteen at the time. Shortly after the accident the Shinigaami found him almost freaking out. He reveled to him many things about the world beyond. He also mentioned the fact that he broke a pretty big rule in turning him into a Shinigami. If anyone ever found out they both would be in serious trouble and even be killed. Although he had a plan to get them both out of trouble with there necks attached. He explained that he was on an extended mission to land of the living, and if Arron were trained the Gotei would most likely over look the fact he was not brought in properly. It was at the end the Shinigami reveled his name to be Dai and that he was going to train Arron.

During his train Arron found out Dai was a horrible teacher. Thankfully Arron was an impressive student. If he could have found a way to sneak Arron into the Soul Society he was sure he kid could have aced the academy. Although he had no idea how so he stuck with plan A. training the kid. Thankful Dai was a seated member of Squad Five. Because of that he was a Kido specialist. He taught Arron all about Kido and the Shinigami arts. Arron was learning things to fast in areas such as Hoho, Hakudo, and Kido, although his Zanjutsu was poor. As Arron advance he continued master his Kido. He poured days, weeks, and even months until he could use a Kido without the spell. Over the years he spent together with Dai, Arron found him to be a friend and mentor.

After thirty years Dai made arrangements for Arron to meet his Squad’s Captain. It seemed that things were going well for Arron. Although that when fate likes to bite a person in the glutes, and Arron was not done being a chew toy. On their way to the meeting a Hollow attacked them. The attack was so sudden Arron had no idea what happen. All he could remember was that they where attacked and now his mentor was dead. As he went to check Dai health other Shinigami appeared. They claimed they were meet with Dai, but claimed Arron had killed him. He didn’t know what to think so he ran and escaped. Since his mentors death he continued to run and hide. Killing Hollows and escaping from member of Squad Two that would catch his trail if he stayed in one area for to long. He continued to run for close to thirty years, and then he disappeared.

It wasn’t for another ten years before they found him again. Living in a cave waiting for the day that they would find and kill him again. When they finally found him again, Arron had hardened himself. Not in the manner of practicing and refining his skills, but his heart. He had turned bitter and never wished for the hope that everything would be all right. The group of Shinigami had informed him that the former charges against him had been dropped. Apparently the man who filed them had turned traitor and all case with his involvement where being reviewed. In truth the Gotei was hurting and need more member to refresh their ranks. Their hope was that with the pardon he would return with them and join their ranks. After all he was considered a black mark of Squad Two for his ability to out run them for years. Unfortunately the damage had been done and he refused to join them. After his refusal Arron went back into the world and started fighting Hollows again. If he ever ran into other Shinigami he gave them the cold shoulder for he didn’t care any more. Once the world started going down hill in 2150 he was out on the front. He saved many people, human and Shinigami alike. This gave him respect and allies within different groups of people. One them even showed him how to unlock his Zanpakutô sealed abilities. After that point he changed his tactic of a pure Kido and Hakudo to include Zenjustu.

Arron has had a hard life and harden his heart because of it. He has now moved on and started to interact with people again; although he has not join any Organizations as of yet. It may change soon if he continues to interact with people. It is only a matter of time before he is thrust back into the world. It is still to be seen if he will become a chew toy of fate yet again, or if he will finally have a good life.
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• Reiatsu Color: Blue.

• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Adalwolfa Schutze

• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearances: Adalwolfa is a giant white wolf. Adalwolfa’s fur is a white speckled with gray spots. It paws are marked with gray like boots, ands its ears are also gray. Adalwolfa’s coat is not like a shine found in most dogs but is that of a dull and without shine. The coat is also fluffy puffing out like a newborn puppy. Adalwolfa is slightly bigger then Arron and stands about six feet. Adalwolfa is also quite, kind and patient with Arron when they have communicated before. Aldalwolfa voice is that of a deep rumble that is friendly and wise.

Schutze is a man dressed in a white cloak trimmed in blue. His height is about the same with his weight but it is unsure because of the baggy cloak. The hood of the cloak shrouds his face and the sleeves of the cloak will always cover his hands. A blue square pattern trims the edge of his robes hood. The pattern is also repeated around the edge of his sleeves and a line that moves down to another pattern around the trim of his robe. His voice his similar to that of Arron but has a slightly deeper tone. No shoes can be seen when the spirit walks, but Reishi sparks from it as he moves. Unlike Arron who moves with refined grace Schutze marches onwards push anything out of his path. He also gives off the air of mystery from his hooded face. This is increased when every now and then shadows will leak from the robe.

• Zanpakutô History: During the first few years Arron spent living in the cave his mind had cracked from all the misfortune in his life. He went mad from it and was slowly losing himself. Then that was when Adalwolfa had dragged him into his inner world so that he could repair Arron’s mind. It took Adalwolfa about a year, but he was able to help Arron regain his sense. Shortly after this Schutze appeared and claimed he was his Zanpakutô manifestation of his Quincy side while Adalwolfa was his Shinigami side. Schutze reveled that Arron was from a Quincy bloodline that had lost their powers. He told Arron that his grandfather had secretly trained him to regain his spiritual powers. All in the hopes he would regain his heritage, but that Arron forgot it and written it off as childhood stories. He told Arron the reason why he could see the Hollow that day he turned into a Shinigami was because he of his grandfather’s charm. In a last effort he gave him a Quincy cross in the hopes of it awakening his powers.

Both Adalwolfa and Schutze never had high opinions of each other. If both chose to appear at the same time, then they would be at each other’s throats. It wasn’t till many years had past that Adalwolfa and Schutze had comes to terms with one another. Although Schutze disregard had rubbed off on Arron before they came to terms. Arron Zanpakutô has two abilities instead of one. The first is the gathering of Reishi in the air much like a Quincy. This ability seems to be represented by Adalwolfa as the pure side and the side that creates. This ability can be used to empower Arron, although it is unknown what else it can do in Shikai. The second side is that of Schutze, which is hatred and the feeling to destroy. This ability is to destroy Reishi constructions and absolve them into Reishi particles. Again what else this ability can do remains a mystery until Arron gains Shikai.

• Inner World: Arron inner world is a forest made up of white sakura trees. The leaves of the trees are a vibrant blue that will also be floating around in the air. The forest stretches indefinitely with trees and crisp green grass. In the center of the forest lays a single lake with crystal waters that acts as mirror. Through out the forest are white crosses strung about. The wind blows through the world causing the leaves to dance in the wind. In the sky it is bright blue with black cirrostratus clouds floating through the sky.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Appearance : Arron’s Zanpakutô looks like a standard Katanna. The handle is different though with black cloth warped around blue. The Tsuba of the blade is shaped like a black, five point, cross used by Quincies. The blade is highly shined steel, but has one unique thing about it. The center of the blade is stained with a white stripe. The sheath of the blade is a polished black wood with blue cord for its Sageo.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: Arron’s Zanpakutô ability is classified as a Kido type. Although until Shikai is reached it is limited what it can be used for. By calling on the name of one his Zanpakutôs' name he can use one of there abilities. Adalwolfa ability is to gather up Reishi in the air and store it into the blade. Once stored Arron can create a Kido strike by using the energy in the blade. The strike can lunch the Kido from the blade in a wave, but can also it imbed the blade with that Kido spell for a single attack. The ability to gather Reishi is also passive by can take at least one to two posts to charge depending on the Kido to be used. If Schutze is called upon the blade is charged with a Reishi current that will disrupts any Reishi based attack. Thus the blade will create more Reishi in the air to be absorbed later by Adalwolfa’s ability. If Schutze is used the before Adalwolfa, the Reishi in the air would be thicker and less time would be need for the charge.

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• Combat Style: Arron combat style is something of his own invention. It is an early version of Shunko. Unlike other Shunko created by Yoruichi Shinoin, and Soi Fong, which combines their Kido directly into their Hakuda. Arron’s is a step below that he uses his Hakudo as a focuser for his Kido. Using the open hand strike Tessho he could break a Hollow mask, but combine it with Hadō Sho he can do more. An example of this would be Tessho-Sho. A once the strike lands it would release the Hadō on impact shattering the Hollow mask. Although this is his impact strike, he has more strikes that can do different things. Another is the release strike, which release the Kido by the command of “Kai.” This strike requires him to hit his opponent that in turns leaves the Kido on the place of impact. The spell can stay active for a total of five posts before it loses it energy and dissipates. The third combination is the launching strike. This form does not require him to hit his target for it to be release. Instead this attack lunches the Kido when the used. It is a good for near misses and blocks against his Hakuda. An example of this is of Arron making a near miss but he uses Byakurai to send out a lighting bolt that can still hit his opponent. The same for a block of his Hakuda would still cause damage for the close range of his Kido being fired. During this combat style Arron loosens the top half of his Shihakushō so that his arms and chest are free. This keeps his Shihakushō from being damage by the blast of Kido he lunches.
His newest style uses on his Zanpakutô sealed abilities and Hoho. Using Hoho to get into an opponents blind spot Arron will then use a Kido wave from his Zanpakutô. This style is still fairly new to him as such he avoids using it. Mainly due to that fact Zenjutsu has all ways been his weakest subject, and Hoho he has not practice as much as Kido or Hakudo. Because of his he is not sure of his abilities with his Zanpakutô. Although he has been experimenting with the style he is not sure of the possibilities, but he can see the advantage. This still would save him energy for casting Kido and leaving him more energy for his Hoho.

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General Skills

Durability: Adept
General Speed: Adept
Strength: Adept
Weapon Skill: Adept

Racial Skills

Hoho: Adept
Kidō: Adept
Zanjutsu: Adept
Hakuda: Adept

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Beginner
Pain Endurance: Adept
Focus: Adept

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Tue Jan 28, 2014 4:59 pm

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Willpower/Determination: N/A
Mental Deduction: N/A
Pain Endurance: N/A
Focus: N/A

Comments/Notes: Alright, one of the first few problems I have is that this character's personality is too brief. Therefore, I'll need you to have two more sentences into it to make it qualified to be accepted for that category.

Along with that, I see you mentioned Ziamichi a few times in the application and if you are aiming for that, then I'm going to have to ask you to fill this character out with the Ziamichi Template here:
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t9454-v2-ziamichi-template-advanced-rp-skill-recommended

So until those changes are made, I cannot give this app a grade yet. Make a post after this review to tell me when the corrections are finished.
Tier: N/A

Wed Jan 29, 2014 12:16 pm

Alright Fixed, Removed connections to Zaimichi and increased personality.

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Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Beginner
Pain Endurance: Adept
Focus: Adept

Comments/Notes: Good. The corrections have been made.
Tier: 4-4

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