Axel Chillick [APPROVED 4-5]

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• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

• Willpower/Determination:Beginner
  
• Mental Deduction:Beginner
  
• Pain Endurance:Beginner
  
• Focus: Beginner
  

Comments/Notes: sorry for the hassle
Tier:4-5

Thanks! And no problem. I like when people give comments to my work. Especially it's my first time making a character. Though, what are the tiers suppose to mean? And how do skills come into play?

basically your tier is what you can call a level here. the lower the tier from 6-0 to 0-1 the stronger you are. your skills basically your stats. look at these two threads for a better understanding. message me if you continue to have issues.

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t13-power-tier-important
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t148-major-updates-skill-sheet-system-put-this-in-your-application-when-your-finished-and-accepted

Hmm alright. Thanks

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