fangor deathstorm [W.I.P]

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Name:Fangor deathstorm (often called fang)
Age:17
Gender:Male yeah that's right hes a guy.


Personality:

Appearance:A white kid that usualy wears black pants, black shoes,short black hair, and black collared t-shirt. He has dark red eyes. When his power is on he has black or dark red markings. His markings can only be seen by someone that can see spirits.
Height: 5 feet and 7 inches
Weight:120 pounds


Power Development Stage 1 Appearance: Markings on skin.
Power Development Stage 1 Abilities:the trick to shadows is that when you create a shadow object the shadow has a shadow.The shadows shadow allows the shadow to be in the sun.but because its in the sun it isn't completely black and is never invisible. It is gray. Fang can create Creatures and weapons.On his body he has markings that are black. he cant create anything that's bigger than the shadow it came from. at night the limit is almost endless.Nothing created can be part of his body.When he creates it builds from below.

Power Development Stage 2 Appearance: He turns into a shadow person except with faint red marks. If he covers the markings and is in a shadow he is invisible.
Power Development Stage 2 Abilities: He can create creatures or weapons as part of his body. He also has faster speed and strength. His marking can be used to store creations. He can unleash shadow blasts.

Background: Naming fang Fangor wasn't his moms idea. His dad thought it was a great idea. when he grew up his teeth were fang like. His dad could see spirits. His dad also knew fang could because he saw Fang playing with a spirit of a dog when fang was 3. His dad was the best to him.

Fang had a friend named Billy. Billy was a son to a runaway soul reaper. Billy had spirit power. because of billy fangs power got more unlocked and fang had spirit power of his own. but it was hidden away. Billy unlocked it accidentally.



Roleplay Sample:Tom or Tomas was a killer. he killed all evil. He was a true man. He shot bully's to mass murderers. anyone that didn't fit his opinion of good or normal and wasn't evil at all survived.
"give me your lunch money!" shouted the bully who was holding the 1st grader. He had a gang of about five people.
"NO NO HAW" shouted the 1st grader. Tomas was walking down the street. he saw it happen he pulled out his pistol. He took aim and fired. the 1st grader was the only one that survived.

Tomas his the bodies society shouldn't know that there was a guy killing evil. Cops get jealous was his response to his followers. Tomas had a army a clan of pure people. Tomas was walking on a roof sniper in hand. He looked for a wrong doer. It was exactly midnight.there were people wearing black about to enter a bank. Tomas sniped them off quickly. No one saw it coming. he went over to the bodies when he realized they were cops wearing black uniforms. Tomas was no longer pure. he shot himself.

Im sorry but you need at lest two paragarh of Personality a few lines isnt going to cut it
and explaing your powers a bit more

you cant be unheard

and you need more background

if anyone wants to judge or say aynthing else please go ahead

You can be unheard, as long as we can sense his reitsu. Also, you can't make anything out of shadows, make it something a bit more specific, such as animals, mecha, etc. Also, if he's a shadow, then you wouldn't be invisible unless you hide inside of a shadow~

Woah, woah, woah! Denied!

1) Personality needs to be 2 paragraphs
2) Personality needs to be one paragraph and/or a picture\
3) Background...THAT'S. NOT. A. BACKGROUND. You have to write about their childhood, how they gained their powers, etc.