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Suzu revamp
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||SUZU || ZUMIZIMU ||
{Character Name}: Suzu Zumizimu = Little Bell, Drying Water
{Character True Age}: 812 Years Old
{Character Appearance Age}: Six, however, she can change her appearance age at will.
{Character Gender}: Female
{Orientation}: Freelancer
{Race }: transcended arrancar.
Personality
•Favorite Color: Crimson red, this is because it brings back happy memories of her consuming people.
•Favorite food: Adjuchas and Shinigami... She may be an Arrancar now, but she still likes to feed on them.
•Favorite flower: Pink and red camellia blossom though the scent is light she still loves them and their beauty.
• Habits: Experimenting on people she thinks of this as fun. In her own words, "Nothing is better than when I have a living thing cut open, and its heart in my hands still beating."
•Likes: She enjoys walking in the dead of night while most other life makes itself scarce. She also has a fondness for water and enjoys swimming.
•Dislikes: She dislikes sunlight with a passion. In her Familiar days it caused her a lot of pain.
•Fears: Suzu speaks for herself, "People fear what they don't understand. As someone who seeks out knowledge, fear is only a hindrance.”
•Loyalty: She is Loyal to her research... not so much to people
•Flaws: She is reckless at times and puts her own life or those of others in danger for what she believes to be the greater good.
•Friendly: She can act friendly and likes talking to people.
•Flirt: She is a flirt, if she is drinking. Both with blood or alcohol both from a man or woman, it doesn't really matter.
•Sexuality: Bi-curious: She has not met the right person in her life and though she is a flirt she has not done *that* with anyone.
• Ethnicity: She doesn't talk about this, but it is clear she is not Japanese, no matter how mush she wishes she were.
• Occupation: Some will call her a mad scientist, but she does not see what she does the same way as them.
•Elegance: She can act elegant if there is a need for it. After all, people like to get a good feeling off someone... who may be cutting in to them later. By acting elegant she can give a good first impression
•Hates: She really hates being called a hollow. She is alright with arroncar.
•Snapping Point: It takes some button pushing.. but when she snaps ... run, just RUN.
•Confident: She has a lot of self-confidence. If something looks hopeless to her, she will try her best not to show it and overcome the hopelessness.
•Zodiac: Traditional cancer Traits .Emotional and loving. Intuitive and imaginative. Shrewd and cautious. Protective and sympathetic /On the dark side....Changeable and moody. Overemotional and touchy. Clinging and unable to let go.
• General Personality: She is outgoing and hyperactive. She loves to joke and act like a kid. She thinks there is no point stressing over small things, so she is a pretty laid back kind of girl, but can be serious if it's needed. She likes to live a care-free lifestyle. She walks the world looking to see all she can. Her curiosity gets the best of her a lot. She loves to play with people as well.
History
Life
Her mother gave her the name of Iolya-Báthory. She was born into a Hungarian noble family. Her mother was Elizabeth Báthory. Father unknown. She was not fathered by Elizabeth's husband Ferencz Nádasdy. This is sure due to the fact that he was dead at the time of conception. So the pregnancy and birth was kept secret from most. If Elizabeth had another baby so soon it would have looked bad on her. Iolya's dad was a married man that cheated on his wife with Elizabeth as well. Iolya's father was another noble but she doesn't know who. Elizabeth divested herself of her children born from Ferencz , who were sent to relatives. They don’t even know of Iolya's
berth.
Iolya was razed differently than her half-blood siblings. She was properly educated like a noble. But she was to act like a servant when people where around. She had to learn things a servant would do like cleaning and household chores. as well she had more freedom such as she could play all she wanted to and going to the village as much as she liked. as long as she did not tell people her last name.
Iolya's mother did love her a lot. She was kind and a good protective mother. But to the young servant girls she was more like a monster. Elizabeth would torture the other servant girls and even let Iolya watch and take part in some. Iolya did enjoy it but unlike her mother it was not a sexual thing for Iolya. Iolya was fascinated by the human body and she loved it when her mother let her "play" whit one of the girls. Iolya would try and see how much pain and how long she can keep a girl alive before she dies. Testing the human bodies’ resiliency. As well she had a taste for blood and was known to drink it.
The truth of the matter was both Elizabeth and Iolya were Sueki. Elizabeth was turned into a sueki by a man that was comforting her after her husband's passing. He gave her an offer of immortality in return for a night in her bed and her blood. Being fear full of death after Ferencz Nádasdy’s death she accepted the man's offer. Without knowing how to control her Sueki body yet she got pregnant with Iolya shortly after. Elizabeth told Iolya of this man once. She told Iolya." when I looked into his eye’s it was as if I lost control and could not turn him away." The history books say that Elizabeth had sex and killed these girls to bathe in their blood because she thought it would keep her young. The books don’t tell it all. This act of blood and sex did in fact keep her young. Iolya not being of age had not awaken to her Sueki lust for sex. It is uncertain if her lust for blood was from being a sueki or not.
Death.
On December 30, 1612 Count György raided the castle. He was horrified by what he found in it. One dead girl in the main room drained of blood and another alive whose body had been pierced with holes. In the dungeon they discovered several living girls, some of whose bodies had been pierced several times. Below the castle, they exhumed the bodies of some 50 girls. Most of the girls were tortured for weeks or even months. They were cut with scissors, pricked with pins, even prodded with burning irons onto short spikes in a cage hung from the ceiling to provide Bathory with a "blood shower" Iolya who was not recognize as nobility was found to have taken part in the killings. As such she was sentence to death by beheading and cremated after. She was only 12 when she died.
hollowfication:
Even as a ghost she kept torturing other souls she would come across. These dark thoughts and feelings made her turn into a hollow. Unlike most her body did not break apart and reform. But the mask started to form on her.
Lesser Familiar: she lost her mind becoming like a beast. She killed indiscriminately. souls, living people, hollows. Any things she found she would try and devour it. She would jump from Hueco Mundo to the living world a lot and never staying in the same town for more than 2 days. So not many soul reapers found her. The ones that did fell prey to her.
Even as a ghost she kept torturing other souls she would come across. These dark thoughts and feelings made her turn into a hollow. Unlike most her body did not break apart and reform. But the mask started to form on her.
Lesser Familiar: she lost her mind becoming like a beast. She killed indiscriminately. souls, living people, hollows. Any things she found she would try and devour it. She would jump from Hueco Mundo to the living world a lot and never staying in the same town for more than 2 days. So not many soul reapers found her. The ones that did fell prey to her.
Gillian:
As a Gillian she spent most her time in the forest of menos eating others. Day in and day out she was different from all the other Gillian she was bigger and looks a lot more monstrous than they did.
As a Gillian she spent most her time in the forest of menos eating others. Day in and day out she was different from all the other Gillian she was bigger and looks a lot more monstrous than they did.
Adjuchas:
By the 1800s she was an Adjuchas. She was a humanoid. She also gained a sense of right and wrong. She thinks she absorbed it from someone she had eaten. This is when she got into science as well. No longer acting like an animal. Instead she would study her pray and learning how it moves and what powers it had. She would try and learn how their power worked as well dissecting if needed. With hollow you must keep them alive as you dissect them but no one really cares in Hueco Mundo if someone is screaming.
By the 1800s she was an Adjuchas. She was a humanoid. She also gained a sense of right and wrong. She thinks she absorbed it from someone she had eaten. This is when she got into science as well. No longer acting like an animal. Instead she would study her pray and learning how it moves and what powers it had. She would try and learn how their power worked as well dissecting if needed. With hollow you must keep them alive as you dissect them but no one really cares in Hueco Mundo if someone is screaming.
ARRANCAR:
She encased herself in a cocoon like shell deep in a small cave in the forest of menos. After months of meditation and undergoing metamorphosis. the shell breaks away. She became an arrancar. She had regained her human appearance for the most part.
It was thru her experiments she was able to minimize her hollow hole and move it to her rights hand and as well make her mask tack the form of a fullfinger ring on the right hands model finger
IN year 2405 suzu murders two humans in the forest near karakura city. These humans had a small baby that not even a year old. Suzu decide to spare the child's life and raze it as her own naming the little girl Ivy.
Aug 15, 2412. Suzu was honored to meet the hollow queen Ashlei Clixx for the first time. seeing a only a small sample of her power was completely astonishing to Suzu. How easy she could put someone in a hopeless trap along with her overwhelming power.
four days later Suzu would go to the Forest of Menos and seal murmurs menos inside a steel sword infusing them with the blade itself. tacking this blade back to her lab she forced all the menos to become one effectively making the soul in side it an Adjuchas. But Suzu was not done there by utilizing her hasten chamber and using her own Reiryoku suzu forced the Adjuchas be some a arrancar. But this was no Pseudo-Arrancar O no Suzu had successfully created a full Arrancar even with out the Hogyoku being a 1-5 at birth. This is how the Hollow sword witch she named Eien akumu come to be.
On Sep 03,2412 Suzu wile in school meats a very interesting boy by the name of Zero. Interrupting gym class for the older boys she won’t as far as to try and provoke them. In the end she was able to get this boy zero to agree to show her the town.
Transcending past the Arrancar: Suzu life work has finally come to be a reality. Through her hard work and dedication she has completely removed her hole and mask. Restoring herself to a fully humanoid form. By the use of the Accursed salvation she now walks in virgin territory. A new kind of hollow if you can even call her a hollow any more. Only time will show what this being is really capable of as suzu her self does not even know.
She encased herself in a cocoon like shell deep in a small cave in the forest of menos. After months of meditation and undergoing metamorphosis. the shell breaks away. She became an arrancar. She had regained her human appearance for the most part.
It was thru her experiments she was able to minimize her hollow hole and move it to her rights hand and as well make her mask tack the form of a fullfinger ring on the right hands model finger
IN year 2405 suzu murders two humans in the forest near karakura city. These humans had a small baby that not even a year old. Suzu decide to spare the child's life and raze it as her own naming the little girl Ivy.
Aug 15, 2412. Suzu was honored to meet the hollow queen Ashlei Clixx for the first time. seeing a only a small sample of her power was completely astonishing to Suzu. How easy she could put someone in a hopeless trap along with her overwhelming power.
four days later Suzu would go to the Forest of Menos and seal murmurs menos inside a steel sword infusing them with the blade itself. tacking this blade back to her lab she forced all the menos to become one effectively making the soul in side it an Adjuchas. But Suzu was not done there by utilizing her hasten chamber and using her own Reiryoku suzu forced the Adjuchas be some a arrancar. But this was no Pseudo-Arrancar O no Suzu had successfully created a full Arrancar even with out the Hogyoku being a 1-5 at birth. This is how the Hollow sword witch she named Eien akumu come to be.
On Sep 03,2412 Suzu wile in school meats a very interesting boy by the name of Zero. Interrupting gym class for the older boys she won’t as far as to try and provoke them. In the end she was able to get this boy zero to agree to show her the town.
Transcending past the Arrancar: Suzu life work has finally come to be a reality. Through her hard work and dedication she has completely removed her hole and mask. Restoring herself to a fully humanoid form. By the use of the Accursed salvation she now walks in virgin territory. A new kind of hollow if you can even call her a hollow any more. Only time will show what this being is really capable of as suzu her self does not even know.
APPEARANCE
Reiatsu Colour: A mix of purpal and black. or some time blue
Reiatsu details: its feel is more like a vizard than anything yet apparently different from them as well.
SEALED STATE
Sealed Zanpakutô:
( a sword with a double edged blade. the hand guard is a forked like emblem. the hand guard and hilt are one solid piece. her spiritual pressure determines the strength of the blade same as any other Arrancar/ Shinigami.
Zanpakutô.
Altered Zanpakutô
(Suzu has developed a way to make her Zanpakutô change not unlike shikai. the blade is like a chain sword. its does not get stronger. and at full extent is only 6 meter's long . she can control if the chain links are lose stiff the links as to make them unmoving . how ever she can only do 2 or 3 chain whip attacks before it must return to gather. but attacks done will the blade is stiff don't count. )
{Race Abilities}
[*]Flight: is capable of flying supernaturally
[*]Enhanced Cero: As a energy blast, it consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target. Suzu's being able to easily remove a city block from the face of the planet if she puts enough energy in to it.
[*]Enhanced Bala: As all Arrancar already have the ability to fire consecutive Bala blasts at the enemy Suzu also possesses this ability. But Suzu’s is the full strength of a normal cero from a 3-1. This is because all Bala are normally weaker than the user’s cero and Suzu being so strong putting this must energy out is child’s play.
[*] Broadcasted: Sight: ability to broadcast information of whatever she is currently seeing or experiencing to other Arrancar,
[*]Descorrer: a technique used by Espada-level Arrancar and sometimes others, to open a Garganta between the living world and Hueco Mundo
[*] Enhanced Flesh Hierro: Suzu's Hierro is extremely durable though it appears and feels just as soft as normal skin. Suzu has developed this form of Hierro to keep its strength but unlike some other Hierro that are harden like armor hers allows for maximum mobility. The way of explaining how this Hierro works is it reacts based off of elasticity.If anything comes in contact with her body rather it physical or energy it puts a force on the Hierro. Such as the explosive force of a cero or the force of something hitting against it. The Hierro than hardens to keep its form from changing or braking. The actual strength of the Hierro is determined by her tier class and Hierro skill level.
{ key guide for Enhanced Flesh Hierro} Seeing how she is already in the Elite Class that will be the lowers baice for tire level i will also take in to a count her old skill level. Likewise I am going to use normal earthly materials as the overall strength.
Elite Class+Advanced=steel
Elite Class+Master= stainless steel
Elite Class+GM=Titanium
Master Class+Advanced=Titanium
Master Class+Master=Inconel 625
Master Class+GM=Graphene
[*]Pesquisa : An Arrancar ability to measure and locate spiritual pressure Pesquisa functions similarly to sonar, through a radiating pulse sent outwards from the user which reacts to sources of reiatsu within a certain proximity, allowing them to determine the location of any sensed individuals and granting them an indication of how powerful they actually are.
[*]Sonído : The Arrancar equivalent to a Shinigami's Shunpo. While somewhat similar to Hohō in regards to function and speed, Sonído appears to be more instinctual, seemingly requiring no previous knowledge to perform. Suzu has learned away of performing a silent Sonído. she has done this by studying the Shinigami's Shunpo and using what she learned to perfect and tweaked her own Sonído.
[*]Soul-Body Separation: This technique allows Suzu to forcibly extract a living spirit from his/her body. The soul is still attached by the Chain of Fate and can be saved but if it is broken then the soul can prevent the Encroachment so long as he/she is placed inside a soulless body or animal.
[*]Grand ray cero: Is a Cero that only Espada are capable of using. It is performed by mixing an Espada's own blood with the Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power and speed as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space, it also seems to spin like a razor upon release as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. It is stated by Ulquiorra that using a Gran Rey Cero is one of two things that are forbidden while inside Las Noches, as it is so overwhelming that it could destroy the fortress.
{Unique Abilities}
[*] Vampirism: this is her favorite ability. This ability works on ether living thing or nonliving. This is when she bites in to someone and drinks their blood/Reitsu" from some one’s body. This ability heals her. She is immune to all natural blood diseases and natural pathogens. If the other person skills however is blood related it steal does affect her. If blood is their weapon she can’t drink the blood there using.
{Side note} Healing limits: can only heal/regenerate 1 limb or ¼ of her Energy per fight by using this skill. This is limited to onetime use skill per fight.
[*]Kidō caster: With the knowledge of Kidō and how it was utilized she has opened up the world of Kidō to herself. The best way to say how she does this is Suzu has learned to manipulate her own Reiryoku in the same way of the shinigami. This is greatly made possible by her time in the shino academy and soul society.
[*] Form sword: Suzu no longer needing a sword to hold her powers does not have one set sword any more, but she can from reiatsu in to a sword to use in a fight. Suzu can make this swords fire cero’s from it or slashes of energy. The sword mainly takes on the appearance of her old sword or its altered form but it is not limited to that. She can just as easily make the sword take on any number of physical forms with her imagination being its limit. But she can only have one sword at a time. Also the swords physical form does not really change its strength or power at all. The only exception to this is if she makes a chain sword and then it gets the added ability of her altered swords form listed above. In the event that she no longer wants the sword she has made it will dematerialize.
Hysterical strength: to put it simply there are three kinds of muscles. Red muscles, pink muscles, and white muscles each have their use. But through genetic modification Suzu has made it so her body only has altered pink muscles. What was the point in her doing this? Strength. By building her muscles to have a lot of small capillaries and mitochondria she has made a muscle that not only can last a long time in continual use but can put out a great amount of force. This all results in her being able to break a 3 inch seki seki stone with her physical Strength. Note is is only a explanation on how she can be so strong and yet have a small body. Her strength will and is still determined by the general skill.
[*]Highly Perceptive : Suzu has demonstrated an ability to be very detail oriented when it comes to fighting. She notices her opponent's mannerisms and discerns with ease the reasons behind those actions and the weaknesses and strengths of her opponents. She is also able to look at unfamiliar attacks and figure out the way they work just by viewing at least once.
[*]Rapid mind: This is an Ability made possible by her Highly Perceptive ability and her well skills. By speeding up her brains rate of thinking time looks to be moving slower allowing her to see incoming attacks easily and react to them without mercy. This Ability combined with her General Speed and Sonido can allow her body to move at the same speed that she thinks and by doing this she can avoid attacks easily and find openings to attack her opponent
[*]Expert Swordsmanship. Suzu does not like to use a sword. But that being said she knows how really well. This has come from a life time on training with one,
•Vast Spiritual Power: Her power is so much that even some one at a captain's level ( a 1-4) would have trouble moving in her presence if they did not focus their energy. Her reiryoku is so great it can disrupt energy attacks from enemies and make them so week that it’s not even worth trying to avoid.
•Vast Spiritual Power Energy Disruption and Movement limitations details .
3 tire classics or lower 100%
2 tire classics lower 70%
1 tire classics lower 40%
with in same tire class 20%
higher class Tier 0%
Hysterical strength: to put it simply there are three kinds of muscles. Red muscles, pink muscles, and white muscles each have their use. But through genetic modification Suzu has made it so her body only has altered pink muscles. What was the point in her doing this? Strength. By building her muscles to have a lot of small capillaries and mitochondria she has made a muscle that not only can last a long time in continual use but can put out a great amount of force. This all results in her being able to break a 3 inch seki seki stone with her physical Strength.
{Scientific Abilities}
[*]Hasten chamber. The ability to make time move faster with in the area she cast it in. this ability is not used in battle much but for her research. To speed thing along. The more energy she puts in it controls how fast time go’s for the one in side it.
Time Gauge:
1 week to a 1 month: with little effort. 1 of her own post it rest ( By rest it means she can’t use the skill again for that number of her own post)
2 months to 4: this is abit more taxing on her 3 of her post it rest.
1 to 3 years: this is really hard on her: 7 of her post it rest.
[*] Genetic enhancement: This ability is tweaking what they are for better or worse. She will only do this for others if they are willing and they MUST accept the outcome no matter what it is. This has a side effect in the next thread they are in they will be recovering and only at 75% to25% overall strength and speed depending on how the operation go's. Side note: they will be told of the risk before the operation and full well know what may happen and may not go as they like.
Genetic enhancement and infusion experiment outcomes are determined this way. I did want a fair and unbiased way of doing this but doing so is impossible with a human medium the best thing I could come up with to determine an outcome that is not completely under my control is to ask a staff member to pick a number 1-10 both I and the other person well make 1 guess at the number. If my guess is closer I win the same goes for them. I think this will only be necessary if the experiment required a death waiver as a life would be on the line I think its best no one has full-control over it. Without a death waver nothing it really is at risk so I will pick the outcome at my own whim to not bug the staff too much with the matter.
But death... death is a possible outcome but only for extremely dangerous experiments with a death waiver signed beforehand. This counts as an experiment. The death waiver allows her to try extremely dangerous experiments mixing the ways she experiments on people. Example like the infusion experiment and genetic enhancement: disregarding the tire limitation she normally would use with infusion experiments as well as pushing the body to its absolute limits and sometime past the point of braking.
~death waiver code:
- Code:
Death Waiver
By posting this I full well know my character may die as an outcome of this experiment and Suzu is in no way at fault if this happens
Your name [b]
[b] Your character name[b]
[b] Your character app [b]
[*] soul forging: this is the act of what she would call playing god. The placing or removing a soul from something or someone, she uses this in her experiment. When doing research she comes across a file on Muramasa who she sees as the father of the Ziamichi's. She has found a way to forge souls in to things as well as other people, but if they can control the spirit or not is up to them. She prefers to use this on other hollow to make them stronger. Seeing how all hollow from Gillian up are a cluster of souls it’s easier on them than other races, usable on soul reapers too. She can put a hollow inside them to make a stronger Vizard if they win the inflight after this happens. But this is not suggested because the hollow will become your inner hollow have its Unique Abilities and skill's and gain all yours too. This makes it harder to beat in a fight in the inner world. but if you win its Unique Abilities are yours as well as the normal Abilities of a Vizard, but there is a safer way she can do this. she will put a weak hollow that lives off the Reiatsu in Hueco Mundo with no skills of it own into you. this makes it be come your iner hollow just like a normal one only having the same powers as you. if you win the Vizard ability you get to make like normal.
(Vizard ability must be approved by a site official and proper things added to your app after its all said, ok'ed and done.)
She can forge souls in to things to make them in to weapons and such so they can be use in a fight. its best to only have one soul in one thing or the souls may fight.
She can give any race a Ziamichi's using this. The spirit may fight the host or not. if not it will submit to you. or than it will fight to take over the host aka "you" all of them are experiments
Soul forge: the outcome is determined in a thread in a fight in most cases with the exception of putting a soul in an empty item this is 100% success rate. but the ability that carries over in to it is not however. Empty item must be ordered from a shop. all threads with this being used must be 10 post long at lest or 10K letter count. If using to get a Ziamichi after the thread you must make a proper Ziamichi app. and use the info from the thread as how you got your Ziamichi. App must be approved by a site official as normal.
Important note !!
( the is less of a skill and more of a service. giving people a way to polymerize your characters in a way. I will make some things like hollow etc. to use as material for other people though this will cost yen)body or animal.
[*] Analyze: based off of Pesquisa and must have the implant of the Reitsu Scanner before the skill can be used. She has modified her own Reitsu Scanner working with her Pesquisa ability to make a new ability to analyze things further. By Analyzing someone physical movements as well as flow and utilization of Reitsu and even biological makeup. To learn how it works and copies it.
{Conditions of use}
If in battle to copy a skill its owner must use it first. It takes 8 post to learn the skill and she can only work on learning 1 skill at a time. and after the 8 post are done there is a 4 post cool down before she can try to learn another. As well she can only recall 3 skill's in a fight. Meaning she can only use 3 skills she got from other people in one fight.
if not fighting or the person is willing only #4 post are needed to copy and #2 for cool down.
(This skill is also used in her experiments to tell what flaws someone has and to try to fix it in the pursuit of perfection.)
~sub-skill~ infusion experiment : As well she can try to sew skills she knows in to others however this is hard to do cause their body and mind don't understand the skill. This makes the body reject the skill some times. She cannot give someone a skill she copied from someone more than 3 tire steps above them. As well she can only preform a skill fusion experiment on an individual person #2 times a month "real days" and both times must be at least 1 week apart.) This counts as an experiment.
Internal stability: Suzu having full control of her body all the way down to the genetic level mixed with her will skills allows her to be immune to various things as listed.
1. Control: Suzu cannot be taken control over or have her body manipulated against her will. She can let someone think they are controlling her but in the end she can brake there hold at any time with her will power.
2. Psychic abilities: This only means psychic abilities that involve her own mind or body and has no effect on the outside world. Having a child with psychic abilities and coming across more than 2 others with this mental powers Suzu has made some thing she calls the mind mirror. If someone tries to read her mind all they will read is their own thoughts. As well if anyone tries to harm her mind by using these kinds of powers the mind mirror will reflect it back. This will not harm the user of the ability but will give them a headache
Resereccion
Resereccion Name:
(Shi no yoroi) Armor of death
Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions: {N/A} by placing her powers back in to her own body she does not need to use any release phrase/release actions she can do it by will alone. To on lookers her release looks as if blue light has covered her body. This flash of blue light will than fade away showing her release form.
Resereccion Appearance:
Resereccion Abilities:
[*]Wormholes: she can create wormholes to redirect ranged attacks, both physical and energy based, after using this skill she can’t use again for 2 of her own post.
The best way i can think to explain it is its two portals to another spot near them a max of 20 meters away from her body. The ranged attack inters the one she makes in front of herself and comes out somewhere else this skill can only be used 3 times in a fight at max. Only useable on ranged attacks. Living things cannot inter the Wormhole.
Bilocation: Suzu can break herself apart. Her energy is then divided up between the bodies. This allows her to be in multiple places at the same time. Or more so to fight multiple at the same time if needed.
{Guide for Bilocation} For each time she splits all the bodies’ power will be dropped by 2 tier steps. As well all will receive a - unless her normal tire has a +. The max number of bodies is 4.
Example: let’s say she was a 1-2 tier. If she splits in too two beings she will drop 2 tier steps and receive a - for that tier.( but if her normal tire is a + it will negate the -) the drop by 2 would make her a 1-4- making her weaker than a normal 1-4 seeing how there was no +.
Form control: Advanced off her age control Suzu has the choice to take the natural release appearance or keep the form she was in prior. This does not work with unnatural release like the Dues Ex. This ability does not add any power to her nor does it weaken her. It merely lets her look like her normal self or the release appearance and uses her powers. (Side note she will still have the blue light cover her body and break away as stated in “Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions”. Just her form will not change while doing this action.)
synesthesia: this is a curse mark that Suzu has developed witch can be considered strong or weak and can have negative or positive effects depending on its use and who it's used on. This mark can switch any two skill levels with any other two skill levels the person has on their app. the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it. If she does not dispel it the mark last throughout the thread. But it’s also limited to being casted one time per thread. Suzu also must have physical contact in order to cast it.
{Example} if someone had a master in strength and an advanced in another skill. She can make the other skill a master and the strength go down to advanced. Why would she do this? It can completely make her opponent rethink their strategy and throw off their normal way of fighting. Seeing how they would not have that strength they normally do. Or she could use it too switch some ones pain endurance level with a lower skills level. Making the person less able to take the pain of battle.
How can it help someone? If one of her allies was completely strength based and had no speed she could switch their lesser speed skill with another one of their skills that is of a higher level. This is always risky as it will make someone stronger in one area and weaker in another. Another example is if she could switch someone’s Durability with a higher skills level. So to better defend them self.
Form control: Advanced off her age control Suzu has the choice to take the natural release appearance or keep the form she was in prior. This does not work with unnatural release like the Dues Ex. This ability does not add any power to her nor does it weaken her. It merely lets her look like her normal self or the release appearance and uses her powers. (Side note she will still have the blue light cover her body and break away as stated in “Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions”. Just her form will not change while doing this action.)
synesthesia: this is a curse mark that Suzu has developed witch can be considered strong or weak and can have negative or positive effects depending on its use and who it's used on. This mark can switch any two skill levels with any other two skill levels the person has on their app. the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it. If she does not dispel it the mark last throughout the thread. But it’s also limited to being casted one time per thread. Suzu also must have physical contact in order to cast it.
{Example} If someone had a master in strength and an advanced in another skill. She can make the other skill a master and the strength go down to advanced. Why would she do this? It can completely make her opponent rethink their strategy and throw off their normal way of fighting. Seeing how they would not have that strength they normally do. Or she could use it too switch some ones pain endurance level with a lower skills level. Making the person less able to take the pain of battle.
How can it help someone? If one of her allies was completely strength based and had no speed she could switch their lesser speed skill with another one of their skills that is of a higher level. This is always risky as it will make someone stronger in one area and weaker in another. Another example is if she could switch someone’s Durability with a higher skills level. So to better defend them self.
(Shi no yoroi) Armor of death
Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions: {N/A} by placing her powers back in to her own body she does not need to use any release phrase/release actions she can do it by will alone. To on lookers her release looks as if blue light has covered her body. This flash of blue light will than fade away showing her release form.
Resereccion Appearance:
Resereccion Abilities:
[*]Wormholes: she can create wormholes to redirect ranged attacks, both physical and energy based, after using this skill she can’t use again for 2 of her own post.
The best way i can think to explain it is its two portals to another spot near them a max of 20 meters away from her body. The ranged attack inters the one she makes in front of herself and comes out somewhere else this skill can only be used 3 times in a fight at max. Only useable on ranged attacks. Living things cannot inter the Wormhole.
Bilocation: Suzu can break herself apart. Her energy is then divided up between the bodies. This allows her to be in multiple places at the same time. Or more so to fight multiple at the same time if needed.
{Guide for Bilocation} For each time she splits all the bodies’ power will be dropped by 2 tier steps. As well all will receive a - unless her normal tire has a +. The max number of bodies is 4.
Example: let’s say she was a 1-2 tier. If she splits in too two beings she will drop 2 tier steps and receive a - for that tier.( but if her normal tire is a + it will negate the -) the drop by 2 would make her a 1-4- making her weaker than a normal 1-4 seeing how there was no +.
Form control: Advanced off her age control Suzu has the choice to take the natural release appearance or keep the form she was in prior. This does not work with unnatural release like the Dues Ex. This ability does not add any power to her nor does it weaken her. It merely lets her look like her normal self or the release appearance and uses her powers. (Side note she will still have the blue light cover her body and break away as stated in “Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions”. Just her form will not change while doing this action.)
synesthesia: this is a curse mark that Suzu has developed witch can be considered strong or weak and can have negative or positive effects depending on its use and who it's used on. This mark can switch any two skill levels with any other two skill levels the person has on their app. the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it. If she does not dispel it the mark last throughout the thread. But it’s also limited to being casted one time per thread. Suzu also must have physical contact in order to cast it.
{Example} if someone had a master in strength and an advanced in another skill. She can make the other skill a master and the strength go down to advanced. Why would she do this? It can completely make her opponent rethink their strategy and throw off their normal way of fighting. Seeing how they would not have that strength they normally do. Or she could use it too switch some ones pain endurance level with a lower skills level. Making the person less able to take the pain of battle.
How can it help someone? If one of her allies was completely strength based and had no speed she could switch their lesser speed skill with another one of their skills that is of a higher level. This is always risky as it will make someone stronger in one area and weaker in another. Another example is if she could switch someone’s Durability with a higher skills level. So to better defend them self.
Form control: Advanced off her age control Suzu has the choice to take the natural release appearance or keep the form she was in prior. This does not work with unnatural release like the Dues Ex. This ability does not add any power to her nor does it weaken her. It merely lets her look like her normal self or the release appearance and uses her powers. (Side note she will still have the blue light cover her body and break away as stated in “Resereccion Release Phrase/Release Actions”. Just her form will not change while doing this action.)
synesthesia: this is a curse mark that Suzu has developed witch can be considered strong or weak and can have negative or positive effects depending on its use and who it's used on. This mark can switch any two skill levels with any other two skill levels the person has on their app. the mark will only go away if suzu dispels it. If she does not dispel it the mark last throughout the thread. But it’s also limited to being casted one time per thread. Suzu also must have physical contact in order to cast it.
{Example} If someone had a master in strength and an advanced in another skill. She can make the other skill a master and the strength go down to advanced. Why would she do this? It can completely make her opponent rethink their strategy and throw off their normal way of fighting. Seeing how they would not have that strength they normally do. Or she could use it too switch some ones pain endurance level with a lower skills level. Making the person less able to take the pain of battle.
How can it help someone? If one of her allies was completely strength based and had no speed she could switch their lesser speed skill with another one of their skills that is of a higher level. This is always risky as it will make someone stronger in one area and weaker in another. Another example is if she could switch someone’s Durability with a higher skills level. So to better defend them self.
Dues Ex
• Dues Ex Name: Luna Senka
• Dues Ex Release Phrase: Dark desires will manufest you..!
• Dues Ex Release Actions: her reiatsu will spiral up her body like a tornado
• Dues Ex Appearance:
• Dues Ex Abilities:
•Razor disk: Suzu can make her reiryoku form a saw blade like metal ring. she can control only 2 at a time using her hands or fingers to guide it. She can make 5 of the blades. A Razor disk is a max of 2foot long and a minimum of 1foot. Max spin speed of 550,000 rpms. That means it spins around more than 10,000 times each second!
•High Speed: While in this state, her speed also increases greatly.
•Enhanced Bala machine gun: her ability to fire Rapid consecutive Bala blasts at the enemy with high energy concentration.
•Rapid Cero: she can fire a normal cero without warning.
•Absorption: by placing her hands on some thing she can break it down to a Particle state and absorb it in to her body. by absorbing she makes a complete copy of its ability's and full atomic structure. This applies to NONE living things only. As well the ability's she gets in this method can only be used for reproduction in weapons not living beings. with the exception of Xeno Hollows as they are weapons. This ability well helps her in her position in the Third circle.
•Cero-body: she can fire cero's from many of her body parts.the body parts are as listed. feet, hands/fingers, elbow, knees,
Matter Manipulation: this is an advanced form of her "Form sword" Suzu can now control matter and subsequently manipulating any form of matter at will. Controlling both the shape and density of it making her able to use any number of weapons. This may include her own body. suzu can easley form matter seemingly out of nothing. But this is not true its quite sinpley the formula e=mc2. by the use of nonliving matter around her she can break it down to the potential energy that it holds and make said potential energy reform in to new matter. This new matter being a forged item of some kind. the item can be made to disappear after she is done using it.
Limitations: this cannot be used for energy or a bomb of any kind as the matter is converted to energy and back into matter instantly. So she cannot use the potential energy of the matter in any other way than reforming it to another form of matter. More complex items it will take planning for and time. So she can't just make a deeply intricate gun right off the top of her head. Basic weapons can be made at a whim such as plane swords and things. A list of the complex items she has thought up will be made. As well it takes a lot of mental ability to make a weapon right so if she is ever under any form of mental stress the item could have flaws in its forging making it easily breakable or not function right. Complex items will also have their own limitations and need staff approval before use,
High speed flight and movements: suzu has made it so her body where it can move at the top speed of 400mph a little over half the speed of sound. Moving this fast takes a lot of energy and stress on her body. This is in part due to utilizing the modern day technology like that in the Xeon Hover Car propulsion system and reengineering it for her Dues Ex. Seeing how she cannot go the full 100,000mph it can be assumed that she was not able to fully engineer it properly in to her body. But that would be wrong. Suzu has it set up to only go a max of 400mph because anything more would be far to stressful on her body and could lead to death quickly.
SKILLs
Racial Skills
Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Cero/Bala:Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Skills
• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Will Skills
• Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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»Role Play Sample:
In the dark cold damp lab of los noches suzu was all alone with nothing but her own mine to keep her occupied. But for suzu being lost in thought was a normality. She was always thinking, all ways planning, always looking for something more. But the time for planning had past. Now there was only the experiment at hand. One that she hopes down to the very quintessence of her being would work. It was time to try and use the Accursed salvation. She had gotten all the information she currently needed from the soul society in her short time as captain. All the records on Vizard and Arrancar exparaments including the detals she could get of sosuke aizen's and past captains of 12 along with all other reports regarding hollowfication of a Shinigami and arrancarfication of a hollow.
Suzu was not one to fear her own creations but this one was far from normal. This one could change her being completely. In truth she was scared that who she was would disappear granted something else would take her place, but would it really be her? Or would it be someone else entirely? Either way she had done too much and gone too far to turn back now. She had used Gotei 13, Shadow Fall, and even the city of Karakura and its school all in order to gather data on hollows, soul reapers, humans, and especially vizards. Taking the time to learn the factors of their beings. Now it was time to apply that knowledge.
Suzu placed the small almost rune like item on the desk. Her eyes glaring at it intently. Putting her right hand over it as a small stream of her reiatsu started to flow in to the Accursed salvation. Suddenly black tentacles almost like a rose vine forming from it as the item lunged forward inserting it’s self in to her hollow hole. These black tentacles would star piercing her body throughout her arms. If someone was to see her arm they could clearly see them moving just under her skin, wriggling squirming, moving closer to the core of her being. Suzu was in an enormous amount of pain to the point that she fell to her knees in tears unable to even scream out from the paralyzing feeling.
The ring on her finger would start to lose its form becoming like liquid bone showing what it really was, the remnants of her mask.. The liquid would grow in size as it started to poor out of her eyes as well. If one did not know batter they would thing she was undergoing hollowfication. The pure white liquid would then turn black. The liquid from her eyes would flow onto her face as the rest of it covered her body. Suzu felt like she was being ripped apart from the inside. The black liquid fully covering suzu's body cutting her off from the world there by taking away most of her basic senses and intensifying the pain. The black liquid over suzu would start to harden and compress as it turned in to what seemed to be nothing more than a black stone on the lab floor.
Each moment felt like an eternity with her mind barely able to pull its attention away from the pain as it started to fade away. The stone that had been kicked around aimlessly had somehow managed to find its way in to the halls of los noches near the rooms of the Espada. Over a month had passed in the time she spent in the stone but with a loud bang it exploded releasing a purple and black vortex that would send a shock wave through the walls and crack them. After the dust and black/purple jots of energy dissipated Suzu would be lying on the floor unconscious in her child state. With no hole in her hand or ring on her finger. The experiment had worked and she has now fully removed her mask and hole at long last.
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This is added as a extra post so that i may move her things over from her old app like her analyzed ability's as well ill be making placeing a item lest for her here so that people can see all that she has tight her.
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Sun Jun 02, 2013 4:10 pm
Please hold on while major checks are going on.~
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Re: Suzu revamp
Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:30 am
take your time. ^.^.
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Re: Suzu revamp
Mon Jun 03, 2013 1:27 pm
Well I'm not pulling up a list because this is a huge Clusterfuck. I don't even know where to begin on this app to be frank.
I mean you have already an insanely complex character that's doing something already nearly illegal. Continuing on. Some of the Scientific Skills needs to be changed because of what she's doing is pretty much near a god level of control, and no one on site has remotely even close to that. -Even Shadin's Imaginary computation can't go that far or even my Kakeru's Power of Order etc. The main issue right now is that you can basically place concepts so to speak into weapons or people and basically make yourself or someone else into a different race or something akin to a Ziamichi. Add on to the fact you're making a Ziamichi makes huge red flags, for instance, A half Sueki/Demon wouldn't exist. Either the Demon would take over or the Sueki would take over. That's a huge issue.
After I took the time to correct your grammar on your soul abilities this is how it looks
*] genetic enhancement: this ability is tweaking what they are for better or worse. She will only do this for others if they are willing and they MUST accept the outcome no matter what it is. This has a side effect in the next thread they are in they will be recovering and only at 75% to25% overall strength and speed depending on how the operation go's. Side note: they will be told of the risk before the operation and full well know what may happen and may not go as they like.
Genetic enhancement and infusion experiment outcomes are determined this way. I did want a fair and unbiased way of doing this but doing so is impossible with a human medium the best thing I could come up with to determine an outcome that is not completely under my control is to ask a staff member to pick a number 1-10 both I and the other person well make 1 guess at the number. If my guess is closer I win the same goes for them. I think this will only be necessary if the experiment required a death waiver as a life would be on the line I think its best no one has full-control over it. Without a death waver nothing it really is at risk so I will pick the outcome at my own whim to not bug the staff too much with the matter.
But death... death is a possible outcome but only for extremely dangerous experiments with a death waiver signed beforehand. This counts as an experiment. The death waiver allows her to try extremely dangerous experiments mixing the ways she experiments on people. Example like the infusion experiment and genetic enhancement: disregarding the tire limitation she normally would use with infusion experiments as well as pushing the body to its absolute limits and sometime past the point of braking.
~death waiver code:
Code:
Death Waiver
By posting this I full well know my character may die as an outcome of this experiment and Suzu is in no way at fault if this happens
Your name [b]
[b] Your character name[b]
[b] Your character app [b]
[*] soul forging: this is the act of what she would call playing god. The placing or removing a soul from something or someone, she uses this in her experiment. When doing research she comes across a file on Muramasa who she sees as the father of the Ziamichi's. She has found a way to forge souls in to things as well as other people, but if they can control the spirit or not is up to them. She prefers to use this on other hollow to make them stronger. Seeing how all hollow from Gillian up are a cluster of souls it’s easier on them than other races, usable on soul reapers too. She can put a hollow inside them to make a stronger Vizard if they win the inflight after this happens. But this is not suggested because the hollow will become your inner hollow have its Unique Abilities and skill's and gain all yours too. This makes it harder to beat in a fight in the inner world. but if you win its Unique Abilities are yours as well as the normal Abilities of a Vizard, but there is a safer way she can do this. she will put a weak hollow that lives off the Reiatsu in Hueco Mundo with no skills of it own into you. this makes it be come your iner hollow just like a normal one only having the same powers as you. if you win the Vizard ability you get to make like normal.
(Vizard ability must be approved by a site official and proper things added to your app after its all said, ok'ed and done.)
She can forge souls in to things to make them in to weapons and such so they can be use in a fight. its best to only have one soul in one thing or the souls may fight.
She can give any race a Ziamichi's using this. The spirit may fight the host or not. if not it will submit to you. or than it will fight to take over the host aka "you" all of them are experiments
Soul forge: the outcome is determined in a thread in a fight in most cases with the exception of putting a soul in an empty item this is 100% success rate. but the ability that carries over in to it is not however. Empty item must be ordered from a shop. all threads with this being used must be 10 post long at lest or 10K letter count. If using to get a Ziamichi after the thread you must make a proper Ziamichi app. and use the info from the thread as how you got your Ziamichi. App must be approved by a site official as normal.
Important note !!
( the is less of a skill and more of a service. giving people a way to polymerize your characters in a way. I will make some things like hollow etc. to use as material for other people though this will cost yen)
Most of these skills are nearly breaking some of the rules, especially the soul forging and the genetic experimenting, while I'd like to see these exist, I would want you to make this a lot more difficult on Suzu to just do. Sure you can nearly kill a patient, but at the same time she has no repercussions if she fails on her end, besides well failure, and that's a huge Red flag, furthermore, I'd like you to throw this into Word and correct the issues, because this is hard to read and understand your abilities. Once you do that I'll re-read the app, but for now I'd like to see these changes...
I mean you have already an insanely complex character that's doing something already nearly illegal. Continuing on. Some of the Scientific Skills needs to be changed because of what she's doing is pretty much near a god level of control, and no one on site has remotely even close to that. -Even Shadin's Imaginary computation can't go that far or even my Kakeru's Power of Order etc. The main issue right now is that you can basically place concepts so to speak into weapons or people and basically make yourself or someone else into a different race or something akin to a Ziamichi. Add on to the fact you're making a Ziamichi makes huge red flags, for instance, A half Sueki/Demon wouldn't exist. Either the Demon would take over or the Sueki would take over. That's a huge issue.
After I took the time to correct your grammar on your soul abilities this is how it looks
*] genetic enhancement: this ability is tweaking what they are for better or worse. She will only do this for others if they are willing and they MUST accept the outcome no matter what it is. This has a side effect in the next thread they are in they will be recovering and only at 75% to25% overall strength and speed depending on how the operation go's. Side note: they will be told of the risk before the operation and full well know what may happen and may not go as they like.
Genetic enhancement and infusion experiment outcomes are determined this way. I did want a fair and unbiased way of doing this but doing so is impossible with a human medium the best thing I could come up with to determine an outcome that is not completely under my control is to ask a staff member to pick a number 1-10 both I and the other person well make 1 guess at the number. If my guess is closer I win the same goes for them. I think this will only be necessary if the experiment required a death waiver as a life would be on the line I think its best no one has full-control over it. Without a death waver nothing it really is at risk so I will pick the outcome at my own whim to not bug the staff too much with the matter.
But death... death is a possible outcome but only for extremely dangerous experiments with a death waiver signed beforehand. This counts as an experiment. The death waiver allows her to try extremely dangerous experiments mixing the ways she experiments on people. Example like the infusion experiment and genetic enhancement: disregarding the tire limitation she normally would use with infusion experiments as well as pushing the body to its absolute limits and sometime past the point of braking.
~death waiver code:
Code:
Death Waiver
By posting this I full well know my character may die as an outcome of this experiment and Suzu is in no way at fault if this happens
Your name [b]
[b] Your character name[b]
[b] Your character app [b]
[*] soul forging: this is the act of what she would call playing god. The placing or removing a soul from something or someone, she uses this in her experiment. When doing research she comes across a file on Muramasa who she sees as the father of the Ziamichi's. She has found a way to forge souls in to things as well as other people, but if they can control the spirit or not is up to them. She prefers to use this on other hollow to make them stronger. Seeing how all hollow from Gillian up are a cluster of souls it’s easier on them than other races, usable on soul reapers too. She can put a hollow inside them to make a stronger Vizard if they win the inflight after this happens. But this is not suggested because the hollow will become your inner hollow have its Unique Abilities and skill's and gain all yours too. This makes it harder to beat in a fight in the inner world. but if you win its Unique Abilities are yours as well as the normal Abilities of a Vizard, but there is a safer way she can do this. she will put a weak hollow that lives off the Reiatsu in Hueco Mundo with no skills of it own into you. this makes it be come your iner hollow just like a normal one only having the same powers as you. if you win the Vizard ability you get to make like normal.
(Vizard ability must be approved by a site official and proper things added to your app after its all said, ok'ed and done.)
She can forge souls in to things to make them in to weapons and such so they can be use in a fight. its best to only have one soul in one thing or the souls may fight.
She can give any race a Ziamichi's using this. The spirit may fight the host or not. if not it will submit to you. or than it will fight to take over the host aka "you" all of them are experiments
Soul forge: the outcome is determined in a thread in a fight in most cases with the exception of putting a soul in an empty item this is 100% success rate. but the ability that carries over in to it is not however. Empty item must be ordered from a shop. all threads with this being used must be 10 post long at lest or 10K letter count. If using to get a Ziamichi after the thread you must make a proper Ziamichi app. and use the info from the thread as how you got your Ziamichi. App must be approved by a site official as normal.
Important note !!
( the is less of a skill and more of a service. giving people a way to polymerize your characters in a way. I will make some things like hollow etc. to use as material for other people though this will cost yen)
Most of these skills are nearly breaking some of the rules, especially the soul forging and the genetic experimenting, while I'd like to see these exist, I would want you to make this a lot more difficult on Suzu to just do. Sure you can nearly kill a patient, but at the same time she has no repercussions if she fails on her end, besides well failure, and that's a huge Red flag, furthermore, I'd like you to throw this into Word and correct the issues, because this is hard to read and understand your abilities. Once you do that I'll re-read the app, but for now I'd like to see these changes...
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Re: Suzu revamp
Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:04 pm
I can try to fix the grammar but those abilities are already accepted abilities and straight from her old app.
also You should think of it like a doctor and a patient. if the patient was to have an operation they take all the risk. Doing the operation don't really effect the doctor only miens she lost some time. not only that but I ask you not to compare her skills to Imaginary Computation or Power of Order as they are nothing alike really. Those two can Easley be considers GMing if they was in the wrong “Persons" hands. as my skills not only come from her being a scientist who would have the knowledge to do such things, but each time one of them is use the end result has to get staff approval. CAN you tell me you ask another staff member every time you use your skill if the ending result is ok?... I doubt it highly. So please don’t compare them i went thru a lot to make sure I don’t have final say in what skills or powers thay get if any. By leaving room to say the body rejected the power etc. so that if staff did not approved of something it can Easley be struck out.
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Re: Suzu revamp
Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:00 pm
But this is not as simple Zetsurin, This was definitely passed but with how it's written, after I have corrected through this shouldn't of flown in the first place, the fact that it did is a tome to your skills. The main issue is that with a doctor and patient there's no real "power" issue, it's a human to human thing. When powers exist it changes that dynamic, making an element for danger because you're dealing with now elements, abilities that normally go against tampering and other things like that. That is a huge issue that you're failing to see, and when you are adding powers to something or someone, you risk damage from that said element or ability backfiring. It's like when you shoot a gun, if it's not properly working or loaded right, it'll hurt you more than help you. I know you aren't LOL abusing this ability set, but at the same time. To just say it's a simple doctor and patient thing doesn't fly. If it was just purely I"m operating on someone to heal them of a disease that I happen to have the cure for but it may not work, then Yeah I would totally agree. As this stands... it's not that this is very far from it, and I want this to work so please work with me here. I want some element of danger to Suzu, because this is so not dangerous for her, it doesn't leave any repercussions for her being even mentally scarred from the experience of killing someone. In fact it just looks like she can just push abilities into things as long as she's at her lab willing or not. I like the character Idea but please... please... I want this to have some drawback to her, because this ability is almost on the bounds of unfair to severely being abused, and I can see millions of ways to abuse this. So I'm not going to really budge on that until you come up with something that can be used as a drawback on Suzu.
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Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:55 pm
Experimental limitation and drawbacks:
{The addition of any element power/ability’s: }When working with elemental powers there is always a chance of losing control of it and the element becoming unpredictable. It’s at this time if Suzu is unable to take back control that the element will discharge. How it discharges is based off the element. Fire go’s boom, Electric Shock, impaling ice spikes etc. The strength of the discharge is relative to the strength of the original power holders tier. The damage suzu takes in this experiment will last 1 to 2 threads depending on the severity. Meaning in any thread she starts after the experiments is done she will be hurt. This can be countered by Healing as all damage can, but suzu can’t start healing in the same thread as the experiments meaning she must start the other threads hurt.
{Physiology altering:} when altering what someone “is” rather it be simple as enhancing what they already have or adding something completely new to their body there is all ways risk. When altering the brain the patient can become enraged. As well suzu normally gives her patient something to block pain receptors. This can result in the now enraged person not being able to feel pain and temporarily become like a juggernaut.
{Physiology based power/ability’s.} The greatest risk with this is really rejection if it’s only altering what they normally have or the power going berserk if it’s something newly added. The power goes berserk when it's successfully placed in to the body and all is said and done. But its new holder lacked control over it. A good example of this would be like if she gave a dumb person pyrokinesis. This person would not have the mental ability to control the power witch would make a blazing wield fire break out.
{Limitations:} Suzu can only perform 5 experiments per month max. The experiments will re-set back to 0 on the first of every month. As well this number only shows how many experiments she has completed. So if she was doing one last month and did not get finished tell the current month it will count as 1 for the past month and the current month.
{The addition of any element power/ability’s: }When working with elemental powers there is always a chance of losing control of it and the element becoming unpredictable. It’s at this time if Suzu is unable to take back control that the element will discharge. How it discharges is based off the element. Fire go’s boom, Electric Shock, impaling ice spikes etc. The strength of the discharge is relative to the strength of the original power holders tier. The damage suzu takes in this experiment will last 1 to 2 threads depending on the severity. Meaning in any thread she starts after the experiments is done she will be hurt. This can be countered by Healing as all damage can, but suzu can’t start healing in the same thread as the experiments meaning she must start the other threads hurt.
{Physiology altering:} when altering what someone “is” rather it be simple as enhancing what they already have or adding something completely new to their body there is all ways risk. When altering the brain the patient can become enraged. As well suzu normally gives her patient something to block pain receptors. This can result in the now enraged person not being able to feel pain and temporarily become like a juggernaut.
{Physiology based power/ability’s.} The greatest risk with this is really rejection if it’s only altering what they normally have or the power going berserk if it’s something newly added. The power goes berserk when it's successfully placed in to the body and all is said and done. But its new holder lacked control over it. A good example of this would be like if she gave a dumb person pyrokinesis. This person would not have the mental ability to control the power witch would make a blazing wield fire break out.
{Limitations:} Suzu can only perform 5 experiments per month max. The experiments will re-set back to 0 on the first of every month. As well this number only shows how many experiments she has completed. So if she was doing one last month and did not get finished tell the current month it will count as 1 for the past month and the current month.
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Re: Suzu revamp
Thu Jun 06, 2013 7:01 pm
-Chin strokes.- I guess it's okay for the time being I'll have to see this in work. Re-reading the entire app at a different time when I can read through it thoroughly.
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Re: Suzu revamp
Tue Jun 18, 2013 10:27 am
Is your Sueki/Demon a Ziamichi spirit because I have a headache trying to figure it out.
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