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Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
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Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] Empty Re: Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5]

Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:10 pm

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« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: N/A
  • Mental Deduction: N/A
  • Pain Endurance: N/A
  • Focus: N/A

  • Comments/Notes: "He's the 3th demon summoner ever created yet he started to close his eyes and reflect on his past.....Hagokumo Bale was the 4th demon created from the Necronomicon plus he was told to be the most dangerous when summoned."

    This part doesn't make much sense to me. This is because the Necronomicon on here never created demon's. The only way this would work is if there were two separate versions of the Necronomicon; as I've worked personally with the character who had the original on here and then transferred it to my character, Ketsu Iramasha. The Original owner of it being Selena Minos before Ketsu killed her and made her his familiar. So you may have to do something similar to the Hogyoku, in which, there are two separate versions of it.

    Kidō Advanced Prodigy: During his academy years, Krel started training with Kidō yet he saw no use with it but during a fight. He began starting to see it might be an advantage to him every time with the barracks with his Kidō powers until their were strong enough. During his last training session. he began mastering the powers of Hadō #90 learning how to complete the black coffin. Throughout the years, Krel has learned Hadō #1 through 63 and #Hadō 90 Even Bakudo #1 through #50.

    Since we haven't given this character tier or skill sheet for the Kidō, how is it possible he was an advanced Kidō prodigy? I'd hold off on adding this until he is given a tier. As it states here that it's done a tier bases generally:
    https://www.platinumhearts.net/t2407-Kidō-capabilities-shinigami



  • Tier: N/A


Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] WVMWLOu

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Platinum Points:
Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
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Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] Empty Re: Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5]

Sat Jun 22, 2013 7:40 pm

«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept

«The Ziamichi Spirit's Willsheet Checklist»

  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept
  • Comments/Notes: I really don't have anything else to say about this app. You'll have to probably make an equipment thread for the Ex-Nerco-Crap. However, since it doesn't concern the original, I'll allow it and I'm telling you to make a thread for it.

  • Host Tier: 1-1+

  • Spirit Tier: 1-5


Hagokumo Masada [Revamp] [APPROVED - Host: 1-1+ - Spirit: 1-5] WVMWLOu
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