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Alex Hunter Character sheet
Thu Apr 04, 2013 1:25 am
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Name: Alexander Hunter Alexander Hunter
Gender: Male Appearance Age:17
Age:138 Affiliation/Rank: Gotei 13 2nd div.
Appearance Description: 6'2". Tall, broad shouldered youth with a decent amount of muscle mass. Black spiky hair with white streaks.Green eyes. White skin
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Personality:Indepent, calm and yet also aggressive. Quick thinking and a tactical/strategic mind. Alex has issues following orders that he thinks are pointless and stupid, but will happily follow orders he deems reasonable. He is stubborn and always gets the job done, no matter how long it takes. Alex is a bit of a joker when not on missions and has trouble keeping a straight face when he hears the word 'Quincy' as it reminds him of the word 'punce' (cowardly)
Likes: Women, peanut butter and dogs.
Dislikes: Hollows, Quincys and criminals.
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History: Alex's life on Earth was kinda tragic. As a child he lost both parents to a car accident and when he was 11, his closest friend committed suicide. He had a decent education but was more interested in going to war. He was killed at 16 during a shinigami's fight with a hollow and has been a shinigami ever since
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Reiatsu Color: Black with purple streaks.
Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Aizakku [/
b] [b]Zanpakutô Spirit
Appearance: Aizakku is a tall fun-loving Zanpakutô spirit with brown hair. Aizakku is male.
Inner World: Digital. Looks like a drawing of cyberspace.
Sealed Zanpakutô
Apperance : British Broadsword. (the big one)
Sealed Zanpakutô
Abilities: Mind sight. Minor ability to see future.Release:
Shikai Description:
(Your character or your
sword's new appearance.
The appearance is totally up
to you.) Shikai Abilities: (What
are the abilities your Shikai
has? Do not overpower
your shikai.)Bankai
Description: (You may fill out your Bankai
Description, but unless you
get staff permission, you
may not use your Bankai
right off the bat. There are
expectations, however.)[/ strike]
[strike]Bankai Abilities:[/
b] (You may fill out your
Bankai Powers, but unless
you get staff permission,
you may not use your Bankai right off the bat.
There are expectations,
however.)
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[b]General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed:Advanced
Master/Advanced/Adept/
Beginner- Strength: Adept Master/
Advanced/Adept/Beginner- Weapon Skill: Between Master and advanced
Master/Advanced/Adept/
Beginner
Racial Skills
- Hoho: Beginner Master/Advanced/Adept/
Beginner- Kidō: beginner Master/
Advanced/Adept/Beginner- Zanjutsu: beginner Master/
Advanced/Adept/Beginner- Hakuda: beginner Master/
Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Roleplay Sample:Alex yawned as he waited in line to
pay for his groceries. He tapped his
foot impatiently as the old lady in front
of him placed her groceries in her bag
with excruciating slowness. "Get a
move on, Grandma!" He thought. "I have to meet someone in 10 minutes" "About time" Alex muttered as the old
lady finished paying and moved on. He
paid for his groceries and all but ran
from the Mall. He sprinted home and
dumped the groceries on the counter,
glancing at his watch, he swore "F**k! I'm gonna be late"
He ran to the cafe where he was
supposed to meet his prospective
employer. The employerwas
gettinginto his car when he noticed
Alex "Get in" he called. As alex complied someone pressed a chemical-
soaked cloth over his mouth and nose
and he passed out.
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Re: Alex Hunter Character sheet
Thu Apr 04, 2013 1:51 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [x]
- Appropriate Age [x]
- Gender [x]
- Appearance Present [x]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [o]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
- 10 sentences for personality [o]
- History is of appropriate length [o]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[o]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [o]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Comments/Notes:
OKAY NEAR GUY, HERE WE GO.
First thing is first, your appearence description is know where near large enough because it is basic traits to be honest. A Picture would help greatly, but otherwise you need to enhance its description length. Two, your character cannot be in a division before actually being approved as a character unless it has been spoken to staff about and that it has been approved of as a pre-character position. THREE, personality is lacking a few sentences, remember that it has to be at least 10 sentences long to qualify for appropriate length. Ummmmm, Four, please please please please fix your template. The template itself seems to have been edited and has screwed up every picture and piece of coding in it that is visible as of me writing this, so fix that. Five, your entire app needs description in every area, more so in History though. Fifteen sentences or three paragraphs are needed, and you only have a single paragraph. Six and my final request I believe, remove the skills from the applications. The sheets are supposed to be there, but you don't fill them in until you are approved since skills are based on tier! Oh, wait, one more. RP sample needs at LEAST one more sentence ha. Sorry.
Tier: Undecided
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Re: Alex Hunter Character sheet
Sun Apr 14, 2013 1:38 pm
Aivee Moving Services!
Due to this application being in Pending for over 10 days, I've moved this application to WIP! You have two weeks from this date before it goes into old WIP and if you finish? Just post in This topic.
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Re: Alex Hunter Character sheet
Mon Apr 29, 2013 1:19 am
Aivee Moving Services!
Due to this application being in WIP for over 2 Weeks, I've moved this application to Old WIP! You can still edit and work on it in that section and if you finish? Just post in This topic.
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Re: Alex Hunter Character sheet
Thu Nov 07, 2013 1:45 pm
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