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Dr.Hiro
Dr.Hiro
TARDIS
TARDIS
Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 312
Age : 33
Location : I'm in the TARDIS Travleing through Space and Time.

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Zane Akechi Empty Re: Zane Akechi

Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:08 am
TheGuvnah wrote:

Age: 36000 years old, looks twenty-six or so.

Background:
Zane Akechi was born in the year 1987, in the middle of nowhere Arkansas. After three or four years, he moved to Japan, made friends, that sort of normal thing. After a while, normal stopped being the average, and started to become exceptional. As exceptional took hold, his parents disappeared. That was the year 2003. He was sixteen, and orphaned.


The only problem I see is the age How can be be 36,000 years old when he was born in 1987? Explain or just change his age cause other then this i see no problem what so ever.

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Akemi★
Akemi★
Seasoned Member
Joined : 2010-06-07
Posts : 1138
Age : 34
Location : ~Anywhere~

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Zane Akechi Empty Re: Zane Akechi

Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:55 pm
No just No. I look at this App and basically facepalm really hard.

~NO, You can't be that old, this doesn't have enough detail for him to be that old~ Please change it now


~No Time Travel Police, welcome to Bleach. Only Creature who has every time power will be Orihime. Because it is a bit godmod if you think about it. If you were time police, you could easily earse Aizen from history or someone else. SO No.

~There is a difference between Powers and Nature Abilities~ Your power is everywhere. Go into one power and only one. Traveling Police already pushed out to door so no to that. If you want elements please detail your powers in what you can do in only few selected elements. Separate Your Natural Abilities from your powers.

~Your history makes no sense what so ever....

~Plus I hate to break this, he is gary-sue. He can't be perfect in all four of those Natural abilities when you're app would only rank a 4-3 due to lack of detail. Your entire Appearance and personality scream it as well.

DENIED~


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Tsubine
Tsubine
Ye Olde Guarde
Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 3940
Age : 30
Location : Gracemeria

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Zane Akechi Empty Re: Zane Akechi

Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:16 pm
Agreeing with earlier statements....



LOLDENIED.


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Ravana
Ravana
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Joined : 2010-06-05
Posts : 613
Age : 32

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Zane Akechi Empty Re: Zane Akechi

Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:21 pm
And to add insult to injuries, even Ravana disapproves of this app; meaning that you truly fail.

LOLRAVANADENIED


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Ravana Ichiro~Ex-Captain Vizard/Vizard Corps Co-leader~0-3+
Toshizo Hijikata~The Demon Commander~0-3+
Diablo Cortar~The Cutting Devil/Segunda Espada~0-3-
Albert Wesker~Biohazard~0-4++
Dracula Vlad Tepes~The Dark Lord~0-4
Okita Souji~Sexy and I know it~0-5+
Alfonso Gunter Reinhold~Evil Bastard~W.I.P.
Hanako Ikezawa~Malignant Tragedy~5-5*
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Ræn
Pimp Cloak
Joined : 2010-08-29
Posts : 1420
Location : A place

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Zane Akechi Empty Re: Zane Akechi

Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:52 pm
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