Anarchy: Ozone Temperatures Are a MUST [APPROVED, 1-3+, Nature]

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• Nature's Natural Traits:

Nature's Flow and Inspiration :
For Anarchy Natures Flow means the enhanced regulation and ability to be in tune with her own nature energy type. Quite regularly this is sensibly also the same thing as saying she has a fast vicious and untamed inner working of her natural body. So Its quite sensible to cause it "Flow" Because when her nature energy is actually being used, it can be used in fluid movements that have really grace beauty and at the same time deadly accuracy in the first place. So while this might be any old random burst of nature energy, for another for her well its actually like a dance fluid motion light airy acrobatics. She uses this from her skin allowing her to cause controlled bursts of water- oriented nature energy in a range of small hair follicle thin radius's or the actual size of the skin itself. This though, is at a limit, both in density and quantity, because its like a hose, if you run to much into it, the flow is bigger but the force is weaker. So that's why the balance between strength and size, is constantly ebbing and flowing.

For Many reasons it is a small skill of hers, but it can greatly convey the control and well oiled precision that she can use her nature energy to. So, While it is Of the same name as a burst commonly known to nature iramasha , it is not of the same principle. As one is a burst of energy in a sudden interval of time, while this one however, is the control and liquid movement of the nature energy's path much like the gentle fist style from naruto (pardon the comparison) Minus of course the ability to dam the flow of someone else's nature energy. So Nature's Flow, is quite liberal as it is useful, because of its versatility which is prized above all in the skill itself. Its Fluidity makes it also inspiring to see in action, because its not the most deadly thing out there- However though it is full of variety and possibilities. In short it's strength lies in the amount of possibilities that can be executed with this.

Now, another way you could think of it, would be taking the control over your spiritual energy/chaos/nature/Death/ What ever form of energy you posses, and naturally resonating or becoming fluid in ones mastery over it. So its natural perk is that it can be used for a base for many branching aspects, in combat and non combat alike. However, every time its used, it does steadily drain on the energy reserves, making it so that, even though it may however be useful, it can become tiring if used in a long term situation in a whole.

Nature Merge/ Walk : This is normal in most nature iramasha As well but she takes it slightly further as she can slip in her element, and use it as a means of movement. So say she is in a snow storm? Well quite simply she could easily slide within the frozen or crystalized water, and follow the path forward and exit it, think of it as moving from point a to point b. Which would be a easy way to think about it . So this is a means of travel which means that she has pretty much access to any naturally occurring water/ ice/ h2o variant as a means of transportation. Now When in the water, she can walk within her environment visibly dissipating within the water itself, how ever she cannot do this when low on energy reserves because the way she does this is a give and take exchange working in unison with her element to give the results of slipping in and out of her element soundlessly.

Bodily Manipulation: Because of course anarchy is a water nature iramasha just like her element she tends to have a pretty good grasp of being able to manipulate her own body, examples of this being like turning her hand into a lance or needle, or even taking her arm and turning it into a pinprick full of needles though every manipulation costs a slight amount of energy making it so that when she actually is in a fight , and runs low on energy, it tends to cause her to not be able to do this, although this makes her body quite malleable and change-able and pretty useful in a fight. of course because of that, she has pretty bad "defense'.

Her Tail The Ice-berg Bay
Anarchy's tail is kind of odd to say the very least, while it looks like a normal one, its pretty much a accumulative combination of water and ice, it can extend and warp at will, though it stays the same that this water is under high velocity and pressure at any given time, changes in that pressure is what gives the tail both its movements and the forces behind it, so pretty much this tail itself, is like a living current of water which is part of her body, so the water itself is extremely flexible but also because of the ice, can block and cause serious damage, the water pressure itself is able to ebb and flow pretty much the same way as her nature energy control allows it too. More then this though ,the water in the tail, is at a negative 10 degree temperature, and when it wraps around something it can cause pretty much for a water lock to form, by extending the tail it can encase the person in a prism of water, the tail too can change shape at the will of anarchy herself, making it versatile.

More then that though the tail itself, can also cause damage through the iced shards that reside within it being able to move as I said at will, they make for a pretty useful means of combat.


Her Claws
Anarchy's claws are quite something too, being made of extreme water pressure and ice shard bases, they are kind of like a water knife, or those tools that use water to saw through things, basically the pressure of water leaving them are in high pressured tendril blasts which have enough force, to well rip through a tanks armor, at a distance. Meaning its not only on impact the instant wound area that's worried about, more prudent it is also afterwards the general distance of around anywhere from 2meters to 200meters that has to be worried about from the knock of residue of spray which is coming out at high velocity as I said. So more honestly her claws are something that do more then what you would think they would actually be doing in the first place . Making them kind of dangerous and at the same time they are considered to be actually quite annoying to deal with.

Her Hair
Anarchy's hair too can be used as a weapon being made of water and ice particles the hair itself is quite useful in combat, being able to be controlled and manipulated it basically becomes a weapon as well, making it useful and at the same time something that you might need to watch for in the long run. The hair itself for this reason is pretty tricky to deal with, as all of it can extend to long lengths but the longer it is the harder it becomes to control., because it is water and ice, it can also be used with the same high velocity which is known for in the claws, simply being able to cause rending damage and being able to catch and ensnare opponents as well, which makes it quite useful you could say in the grand scheme of things , how ever you look at it.

Water Art
The Art of Water, its application and manipulation, this section will be devoted to the techniques abilities and or items which are not part of her body, which can be used thanks to the water, that are also not of natural ni capabilities and or functionalities.


Water art - The Finger Gun
The finger gun is very simple really one makes a finger gun motion, but more then this, from there the finger tip warps to form a tiny hole, in which high velocity rounds of water can be fired at not only a staggering rate, of speed. But also in a varying range of temperature, these bullets come in a varying shot, thought it is fast and at the same time quick, they are like miniature energy bursts which have strength not that much different than a bala. The only real difference is that with these, they link with a ice equivalent move which is kind of like the mirror image of it, because of her nature you could say that means that what is done with water, can be well reasonably also done with the perimeters of her ice capabilities as well. Another thing you might want to know is, that these while not having a lot of power, have devastating penetrative potential, being on impact they do not explode forcing backwards, they do the inverse, and will implode pulling the impacted zone further into the bullet of water itself, in this way it is great for actually ripping through armor, and other things as well.

Though for energy conservation sake , it does not use a lot of power the strength of it lies in its compaction not so much perchance its actually sum of energy which is used.

Water Arsenal: The High Pressured Velocity
Now, another water technique would be the actual manipulation of water, being able to turn it into weapons, such as blades, knives and swords, really because it is water this can be done through the users will and the pull of what is wanted for the weapon to become, this of course has limits to the weapons that are in two main types, melee and then a bow.

Melee: The type of weapons are pretty simple, being ones which involve no ammo or weapons , these are simple swords, scythes daggers and so fourth extending into the category of a glaive, pole arm, pole-axe, flails , hammers and the likes. So you can get a pretty good idea of what is being actually specified by "Melee" also these weapons can be well replicated and changed rather fluidly having the lower end of the drain aspect being applied to them, although weapons can be switched out maybe 3 times a turn and then need to stick with a weapon for 2 turns till switching can occur again, so its not technically something that can be easily "Spammed" All weapons however have something in common, which is high velocity and pressure, making them easily despite appearances to be able to do tasks like shearing through dense objects like steel, and so on so forth. So that would be the classification of what is considered to be the "Melee" Aspect of this "Water Arsenal"



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General Skills

• Durability:Adept
  
• General Speed:Advanced
  
• Strength:Adept
  
• Weapon Skill: Advanced
  

Will Skills

• Willpower/Determination: Adept
  
• Mental Deduction: Advanced
  
• Pain Endurance: Advanced
  
• Focus: Adept
  

Racial Skills-Not present as she hasn't awakened to her chaos energy yet-

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  Nature Control: Advanced
  Nature Spells:Adept
  Nature Energy: Adept
  Element Control: Advanced
  

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Remove the part about the seishin buki in your first post... looks sloppy as f#ck

Sigil Ring Around Anarchy is a Ring of markings which glimmer in the light, these markings though are highly strong and at the same time each hold the ability of being able to defend against attack.

How is sigil ring related to ice? Does it even use Nature energy?

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Frozen Amplification

This Seishin works much like a tuning rod, increasing the power of her ice based attacks. By doing so it works quite well with her power set, boosting its capabilities, by a pretty good degree. It does so by taking in energy that is present and then dispersing it as needed, working as a mega phone does with your voice. It instead is doing so with energy, and doing so quite effectively, in many ways shapes or forms. So while dangerous what it is best for is increasing the strength of the individual's capabilities and enhancing the key components that they actually have come to posses. In by doing so generally you see a increase in power of on par at least 40% making it so that the attacks themselves hit hard and at the same time hit with precision.

Forty percent is a bit... much. Could you go 20?

Nature's Heavy Hitter This goes without saying to increase the key abilities within her nature spells, it works like a tuning fork again to amplify what is already present. It increases the punch that they pack by a margin of honestly around 30% making it so that the attacks she does have, make up for the lacking that she does actually posses in certain fields. For that reason it becomes pretty useful , in a means that it bolsters what is present and useful to her, while making a means that she can keep attacks up to a stronger par without expending more energy then previously was being dished out.

Your seishin already gives you one boost... could you lower this to 10%?

-10 degree's when used of course it takes out a half mile radius at the bare minimum.

From Water Blast... that's a freaking ton of range. I'd reccomend changing to about 1000 feet.

Nature's Flow: With Anarchy her natures flow is kind of different, as it forms a small bullet like beam which is while highly destructive in power, really deceptive as despite how big it may look in appearance, it is actually one of the few moves she has with over a 3 turn cool down, because of how powerful it is. So when fired it starts off small but will slowly grow in size, before decimating a good distance, turning it into a pincushion of hundreds of thousands of spikes of frigid cold which after awhile may end up dying down of course but, other then that it would probably not change much. While this is a stronger move it needs a 4 consecutive turn cool down.

How large do the bullets get... and maybe change "hundreds of thousands" to "hundreds" cuz overkill in my opinion.

Freezing Nature Energy: Anarchy Possesses a level of Nature energy that is purely insane. It affects the metaphysical nature of the general area surrounding him at a radius of a good 500yards in a base form state at the very least. This is the Energy's Outer Field which is quite dense and realistically always compact at a rate of 100x the amount of energy actually present. Now you may wonder what happens at the level of compaction present? Well what it does is literally causes ice to form in the air and over objects and general stationary inanimate things. Like in 500 yards of his form, it is a blizzard in any given meaning of the word. This "Spelled in origination" Ice Crystalizing affect generates also above par in terms of density and toughness ice. The ice Actually could be used as a sub glass of carbon fiber, or even put a dent in weakened or soft steels, and hard irons. This is because of how dense the outer Energy field is and the magnitude of its influence over the physical or tangible evidence of change directly from the nature and level of presence it has.

Now, Also this level of power is Extremely Potent, while it does not bring people to their knee's it causes frostbite , late onset hypothermia and even man-icicles for the normal average jo. This is because to stand in the region he is or you could say Biosphere that's generated from this powerhouse, is to stand in a mock Ozone environment. The Temperatures are well below zero, getting into the negative teens in a base state, or even negative twenties on rare occasion in the base state. This is because the nature energy is Ice in origin, and affects an environment through aspects of ice, altering them through the key principles of hardness, chill factor, and the crystallization process in itself. Causing everything you can visibly see is happening at an accelerated rate to objects that are inanimate and not being controlled and or owned by any player controlled person.

If you want to get down into the thick of it though, it takes a onset period of at the LEAST a turn or so for things to fully reach the full approximate distance of 500yards in ice for the first time, every time after? It takes 2 turns for ice to reform, one of his turns not counting the turn its posted its broken, and one of the foe's posting turns. So If you think about it, the Ice itself is not LOL instant regenerating, though if not broken it will begin to build up in both depth density and over all quality/ Quantity. So for every turn its not broken the whole of it, not just what is closest to him but all of it, will gain a depth or 5 foot (half a story) sheet of ice on top of the preexisting ice that is currently present. If patches are present and the ice wasn't completely eradicated well if that's the case the newly formed ice? Well it fills in those sections and creates irregularities.

Now in power equivalencies if you where to keep him blasting full power in energy expulsion he could last days or even weeks, at a pretty high level of power. This is because the density means that while people expend there power fast? His naturally builds up like the ice nature he is, so even in a small area his energy is very dense in that area, therefor it can be used for a extremely long duration. As being this is said, it stands to reason that while he uses energy at a snails pace due to the density of it and how compact it is, even though it spans a radius of 500yards. The energy creation aspect is going on at a slightly higher then average pace, or 1.15% for every 1%. For this reason energy builds up generally faster then its expelled because it just takes so LONG to actually use up a small block of his energy as explained many times over due to the just stupendous compacted and dense nature of it.

James, the longest living nature iramasha and the water user, doesn't have this much ridiculous amounts of nature energy. I'd recommend removing the first paragraph or toning it down at the least, and cutting in half at the very least the effectivity of everything else. From what I was able to understand, it makes a large snowstorm... overall, it just needs CLEARER effect of what it does, not just more confusing fluff.

Now in power equivalencies if you where to keep him blasting full power in energy expulsion he could last days or even weeks, at a pretty high level of power. This is because the density means that while people expend there power fast? His naturally builds up like the ice nature he is, so even in a small area his energy is very dense in that area, therefor it can be used for a extremely long duration. As being this is said, it stands to reason that while he uses energy at a snails pace due to the density of it and how compact it is, even though it spans a radius of 500yards. The energy creation aspect is going on at a slightly higher then average pace, or 1.15% for every 1%. For this reason energy builds up generally faster then its expelled because it just takes so LONG to actually use up a small block of his energy as explained many times over due to the just stupendous compacted and dense nature of it.

Also... since when was Anarchy a guy? Or did you just get this power from somewhere else. -narrows eyes suspiciously-

...wait. She has... an outer nature --

Yeah, just remove the ability above Inner Nature Energy completely. Nature Iramasha don't have 'inner' and 'outer' energy, ONLY inner. Otherwise they would not be able to keep their physical forms.

nner Nature Energy

Now Anarchy has some serious inner nature energy as well. Due to how densely compact it is, it goes without saying the stuff is extremely potent. Having a constant state change it in essence forms frigid energy, It is many times more potent then the Exterior Field of Nature energy, which is the diluted or "Controlled" State of this amazing vastness of Nature Energy. Taking in ice's freezing temperatures it is similar to the ozone in its Range dipping well into the -40's within the central area of the body. It is said to reach temperatures downward of -50 degree's in the base state in itself. For the main reason that its so cold, is because the main perspective and effect of the containment in the body is a hyper cooling and state of "Super Freeze" Simply put making the body itself is the greatest state in energy.

From This comes a main point or a vast array of physical skills which become presently usable even within a base state . In itself it allows for bodily manipulation, creation and substitution through ice. Such creation goes into question as creating blades or even a massive dome throughout the body in itself. It is extremely useful for many reasons but the most reasonable thing is that it allows for a decent control of the body in general, in ways you could call amazing or even breathtaking. As in many ways his body because of the inner nature energy Field is almost like a super cooler or even a ice-age. In short it is As explained before many times extremely cold and at the same time a controlled environment due to how well its contained.

First, like I said, remove the reference to an energy source outside of her body. Secondly, if her body was like this her own bodily make up would crack from the cold, the chaos energy shattering and being flung away. Within the body, Nature Energy is only stored. It is not on passive effect. For example, Moonie's "natural flight" and his making himself heavier is when he triggers his nature energy off around himself to make himself lighter or heavier, not internally.

The manipulation of the body is possible thanks to the body essentially being "Spelled Energy" in origin. It also that for the most part his body is the ideal melting pot. Not only being ice cold it is able to put up with a decent mount of the restraints that are associated with the ways that his body can contort for the most part. This extends to defensive and offensive manners in the most part also being a pretty good means of tactics and even a means of regenerating from attacks which normally would cause a good deal of damage like say being cut in two sections, in essence for example of the general concept of the ability? He could manipulate the structure of his now compromised body in order to " glue" the two sides back together in a quick manner of around a turn or two.

This also comes from the way his body is centrally connected by the sheer intensity of the energy that was explained as his "Inner energy field" So in these regards the energy present is so strong and dense that in manipulation it responds well wIth the cues and work of manipulating the ice Compounds of the body, this extends to a variety of ways but in the grand way things work its best with the simplistic things, such as body change turning a shoulder into a ice spike. Or the shoulder blades into wings themselves.

.....Again, since when was Anarchy a DUDE.

Second, Shizou, did you even read the nature iramasha information? I know you must have, but still. First, the hell is "Spelled Energy" supposed to be. Second, a nature iramasha's body NATURALLY RESTORES ITSELF at the cost of their energy in the form of spilled blood. Third, if they were to 'manipulate their physical form' that would be chaos energy manipulation, not nature, as chaos energy is what forms their physical structures.

hese wings also have razor feathers which can be used to form what is known as ice lancets , these can extend up to 50feet around him by altering the dimensions of the feather turning it into a lancet. Those are the wings

.......First off, just remove that part of the wings. Second off again, what dude. Shizou, read what you put in the app.

he body is manipulated to form spikes which can be in any direct dimension.

Any... direct... dimension... what is that supposed to mean.

Extension: The body is able to extend within the ratio of 20 feet . Meaning he can cause the spikes or even the wings his arms, and so fourth to actually increase by a metaphysical restructuring of the "Energy" that the body is so normally made up of. In this way it allows adversity and even a knack of allowing for unpredictability in the general scheme of things to be perfectly honest. This is the third basic way he can manipulate his iced body.

No. And again. Dude?

ICE BREATH

This body is capable of many wonders. Many of them are things that are beautiful and deadly at the same time. As this is , his body even in a base state can be used to create a wave of frigid ice, which can be considered to be able to cause extreme cases like freezing up to 6 City blocks even without doing anything in itself. This is why he cannot usually speak because his breath causes super cooling, literally being seen as a glacial mist around his mouth this "Mist" Is another special "Spelled Ice Energy" allowing for flash freezing, on objects and even other people. Meaning that by breathing on another it can be considered to cause a inch solid super hard layer of ice on the object at the very least. Though with its limitations it causes pretty much not a ice burn, but more so a paralyzed state at the very least. Being able to freeze things like say if hes 1-1 and they are 1-3? Well they would be frozen completely through and take half a turn to thaw. For this reason he has a strict limit on how much he talks since if he talked too much it would cause some serious problems.

1. The entire first sentence in and of itself is nothing but fluff and just degrades the quality of your work.

2. What in the ACTUAL F#CK IS SPELLED ICE ENERGY (in other words, remove the reference to that)

3. Six city blocks is freaking ridiculous.

4. Your really want to limit how much she can speak? I'm going to have you downpower this either way, probably by at least 3/4 of what it can currently do, but speech is kinda necessary for your charries... especially someone like her...

5. Again, she's a dude?

Breath techniques are things which are exuded from his mouth they travel at a variety of speeds and pack a good deal of power from them, It goes without saying that they can cause some serious freezing damage in the general scheme of things. You could say that in the hindsight it becomes dangerous due to the way it is Actually Executed.

Again, she's a dude?

Dorō: is primarily used to disable. The practitioner raises his/her palm up to the target and closes his/her hand into a fist. The move calls forth a yellow energy in the form of very thick rope to ensnare an opponent., this spell binds the upper body of a target, physical strength alone should not be enough to break out of Dorō.

Hiiruuindo: A defense move, that can block a single attack at a time. It forms a barrier in front of them, that is as tall and 45 feet wipe in front of the user. If someone fires a energy attack of any power, it shall reflect that energy attack back at the opponent, if a physical attack hits the barrier, the opponent shall get a wave of energy with the power behind the physical strike towards them, with a strong cutting force. Afterwords the barrier shall fall apart and cant be used for another 4 post. While the barrier can appear instantly it varys on the user

Byakko: An attack created from compressing reishi onto the user fingers and causing it to spiral rapidly until it becomes a warped color. Once fully formed they fire it as a double helix shaped beam of energy. That possess a compact form with devastating results when launched. When it makes contact with the target, it expands it's size as it engulfs the opponent in a massive explosion of reiatsu that implodes inwards once it expands, causing even greater damage than a regular reiryoku-based attack, such as Cero, this attack is classed as the user version of a gran rey.

Sōryū: This technique allows for the user to speed up the reishi around a target, causing them to become volatile and explode. This action requires physical contact and only effects the area where contact occurs. Its secondary effect is to freeze the reishi around the target in place and can be used to halt the target's movements of that area for half a post. This technique requires physical contact with the target to halt or to speed up the movement of reishi. The damage done can never reach fatal levels, but can make a zanpakutō snap, but on others, it is like being hit by a powerful force that sends them flying backwards.

Shizou... what the actual hell am I reading... remove all of these, none of these are related in the slightest to nature energy or Nature Iramasha... and you don't need this many anyway, this is overkill...

Waters Frozen Frenzy: This attack is rather different, as it forms jets of ice and water which blast outwards in a kind of shrapnel manner each little whip like blast? Well is super sharp and moving at high velocity being able to make mincemeat out of steel, and carbon fiber like its wet noodles. Of course this is because of how just strong the skill itself is, and due to its execution it provides a excellent defense at the same time. Making it so that rather she is able to get breathing room through casting a attack, which I may add is destructive for defenses of foes on level of physical , spiritual, and metaphysical. Due to high velocity the frenzied attack is highly able to slice through weaker defenses and if not on the first strike, due to both the overwhelming number that is taken in consideration and the kinetic potential of each individual shred of the attack, it will beat down defenses until they break normally because it is a relentless frenzied attack which is pretty strong itself. Of course after use it does take a 3 consecutive turn cool down not counting the turn its casted.

First, how the hell does it affect them spiritually/METAPHYSICALLY? Second, why do you have a question mark in the first line. Third, I'd raise the posts it takes to cool down to 4. Fourth, if it's just a shrapnel whip attack why does it keep beating on the opponents. Fifth, how can it be stopped?

Rising Ice Spout:

This technique causes when used for the ground around her to begin to rumble, ice and water at high pressure and velocity will begin shooting up from a amount of 6 spots. These have enough force to cut through steel like its goo. And the speed they move make it quite tricky if your hit by it. More then this though when used there is razor sharp ice bergs within the mass of water which is also extremely cold, like arctic cold. For this reason the attack is while strong, not one that takes a insane amount of power, but rather it uses other means such as the speed velocity and pressure it is cast at. So these spouts also are unmovable and for the turn they will expand , each spout converging on the next, until in a 100foot radius? The water and ice converges on her, making it an AOE type attack, which means that actually contrary to most attacks, the strongest speed is actually right around her. For this reason it is actually quite dangerous to enter this blast. As when used? Well it has the ability to be highly affective against metaphysical defense, energy or physical defense. By the raw speed and pressure its blasting at, it becomes a kinetic powerhouse which is able to turn something harmless like water into a cutting force which can go through rock steel, and a majority of other objects when you want to be realistic about it. Of course from the use of it there is a cool down time. Which would be rather 2 consecutive turns not counting the one it is used. After the cool down phase of course it can though be used again as long as cool down is met of course.

Either heavily downpower this attack to the point it's a lower level NI spell or just remove it. THAT INCLUDES ITS DESTRUCTIVE POTENTIAL THE THING ABOUT CUTTING STEEL.

Frozen Scream: Frozen scream is how it sounds, a ring forms on Anarchy's lips. After that a huge ring forms in the sky over her in the range of her ice. In that phase a huge torrent of frigid cold blasting and dense pressurized snow is expanded, each flake of the snow is razor sharp and when the expand they blanket the area of the ice shelf, turning it to a massive frozen tundra Though more then this the power of it is strong enough to destroy up to 5 city blocks extremely quickly. And in that regard it is actually quite dangerous, while not being a precisely strong attack ,it works through overwhelming the ability to cope as when its fired it is fast and intense. And hits hard, though after use it takes a turn to recharge.

Better describe what the attack looks like, and second, remove the range to 1 city block IF THAT. City blocks aren't the best unit of measurement. If it is snow coming down, make it slower snow and say what happens if someone tries to stop the snow by deflecting it away. Third, you may want to downpower how much destructive power it has as it's starting to sound OP.

Glacial Blast: Glacial blast is a bone chilling blast of ice, it is razor sharp and used mainly to freeze things over in temperatures that are extremely detrimental. The blast is devastating in the sense anything caught within it? even the area around a kind of barrier or anything of that sort? Well it is pretty much iced over turning the area the blast is directed into a 250 foot tall, and pretty decent radius of a quarter mile of ice that is pretty much as hard as steel. For this reason the breath attack causes what is known as extreme freeze, or slowing of the bodily functions by lowering body temperature when caught within the confines of the blast. Making it dangerous and even a problem for fire types, being a way to amplify lightning, it can be used to increase a electricity attack by a great amount within the storm. when I say great I mean amplifying it up to 150% percent. For a blast like this there is a debate on what it does, best. What it does best of course is freezing things solid through overwhelming.

Just no.

Christ shizou... twenty k on this check and I'm not even doing forms yet. You really need to start giving your characters some breathing room against their destructive power, as the way you write them originally makes them sound like they're coming out the gate at 0-2. If anything, I'd say I'm going to put Anarchy around 1-2 or 1-1, considering how James already exists, and what her abilities do need to reflect that.

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Changes asked for - Making hair so that it had less control the longer it became.
Tier: 1-3+