Odaue Numataki [APPROVED 4-5]

- Name: Odaue Numataki
- Titles: No
- Gender: Female
- Appearance Age: 14
- Age: 514
- Affiliation/Rank: 4th seat of 10th Division

- Appearance Description: Odaue is a short girl coming up to a wimping 4-foot-9. With white blond hair and pale skin, she has a touch of color with her eyes resembling lilacs. She is a petite girl with what some people call a slightly abnormally bigger head.
She wears the normal Shinigami uniform with slight changes. Instead of the normal white ribbon at the waist, Odaue wears a slightly thicker sky blue ribbon. Her right sleeve is at the normal length while the left sleeve is a tad bit shorter than the right side. In her hair is a neatly placed gray headband that separates her bangs from the rest of her hair.


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- Personality: She's always been a bit childish all throughout her life. Though, when she began her training to become a Shinigami, her attitude altered just a little. She has still kept her somewhat childish happiness but has also learned to be serious when need be. Odaue has always loved a good fight and won't hesitate for a second to volunteer for battle. She works hard to gain the attention of her Captain. Therefore, she is always training to be as strong as she can be. She spends a lot of her free time in her Inner World. She stays there for hours either sparring with her Zanpakutō, conversing with it, or doing some kind of training excersize.
Her loyalty to her captain and vice captain is tremendous and she would go as far as to putting her life on the line for them, as any other worthy shinigami would do. She gained a slight crush on her beloved Captain when they first met. Therefore, her loyalty for him goes above and beyond any other's.


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- History: She grew up in West Rukongai, living with her childhood friend, Rikamari and Rikamari's little brother. They lived in a very small shack and Rikamari worked as a merchant selling watermelons. While Rikamari would be off at work, Odaue was forced to watch the 2 year old child and self-teach herself how to cook. It was difficult but somehow, Odaue managed to keep her spirits up. She figured it was the only thing she could do. She couldn't just left herself get weighed down by pressures she had to bare.

Rikamari was a great help when she was home. She was slightly older than Odaue and the two would look out for eachother and the child as well. Sometimes Odaue would go out into town when Rikamari broke away from the stall and buy some ingredients for a few simple meals.

One day, while Odaue was out shopping, it took her a particularly long time for her to choose between apples or peaches. When she got home, the shack was empty. A few things were out of place and there was no sign of Yuki or her brother. It was almost as if the two didn't exsist. Her first thought was that maybe the two had runaway. But why? Why would they have any reason to leave? Days went on and Odaue couldn't live on her own, she wanted to find Rikamari. She searched and searched but her friend was never found.

Odaue was out on a shopping trip when she came across an old lady. Odaue began to walk right past her but the woman grabbed Odaue's basket. She offered an apple but the woman refused, instead she pointed off into the distance. "The answers you seek, lie within the pink" Odaue followed the womans finger which led her eyes straight to the Seretei. Odaue turned back around to ask the woman what she meant, but she vanished. That very evening, Odaue dedicated her life to becoming a Shinigami.

Life at the Academy was far different from what she was used to. She didn't have to live life wondering how she would survive. She enjoyed being at the Academy. She studied hard on her Kidō, which seemed to pay off, she trained all night on her swordsmanship and that training didn't seem to pay off very well.

When it came to sword combat, her teachers wasted little effort in trying to help her and all her classmates picked her when it came time to spar. She was a top of her class when it came to Kidō. She would get all sorts of praise from her teachers but the students acted towards her with disgust.

She had once been sent to The World of the Living with a few of her classmates to extinguish a hollow. That was when she first met Hitsugaya Taicho.

The battle went well, at first. More and more hollow began to strangely appear. The Gotei 13 was contacted but Odaue was unaware of that information. All her friends had been knocked unconcious, so it was up to her. She fought against one of the hollow with all her might using every Kidō move she knew over and over again. Her riatsu was nearly drained completely. She was getting slower and slower and the hollow kept attacking her every chance it got.

Then he showed up, with his heroic silvery hair, extra long Zanpakutō, and the bankai of an ice dragon. He fought away all the hollows and ordered his squad to gather Odaue's classmates. He noticed Odaue was still awake and struggling to stay alive. She began to fall from the sky but Histugaya came to her rescue. He commended her for her oustanding spirit to not give up and carried her, personally, all the way to the Squad 4 barracks.

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- Reiatsu Color: lilac

- Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Tsukimari

- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Same height as Odaue, Tsukimari has snow white hair. She wears a plain white kimono and has ocean blue eyes. When she speaks in the inner world her words echo slightly.

- Inner World: White fluff lines the floor that Odaue walks on. A pale blue covers the rest of her surroundings. There is not much to her inner world on a normal basis but when Odaue’s mind is in an unstable condition, the floor turns gray and flashes of lightening display below and occasionally shake the inhabitants.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : Her Zanpakutō looks like a normal katana with a snowflake etched into the base of one side of the sword and a lightning bolt on the other side.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: N/A

- Release: Sing, Tsukimari

- Shikai Description: Odaue's katana transforms from a normal katana into a small dagger like sword. The hilt has a cherry blossom design along with a rather dull tip to the blade.

- Shikai Abilities: 'Taicho no Kyoku'/First Song:
An electric current surrounds the blade. Whenever Odaue swings her dagger toward her target, the lightning is released in a ball shape hurtling towards the target cause emmence pain. Whenever she releases her fist song, lightning will flash and it will thunder.

'Nibanme no kyoku'/Second Song:
This 'song' is quite similar to the first. The dagger appears to be filled with water and at the swing of her blade, the water is released towards the target. Once it hits it's target, it will engulf the target in ice. A normal hollow would be killed by this, but anything with a C rank riatsu level or higher would be able to escape. When she releases her second song, it rains harder for approximately 20 seconds.


Sanban no Kyoku/Third Song:
After calling the name of this attack, she points her dagger at her opponent and runs her hand over her dagger. A gust of wind then shoots out and swirls into a tornado. It then sucks up the opponents attack. One of two things happen after this; Either both the attacks dissappear if her opponent is at her riatus level or lower, or the tornado will consume half of the attack power for anyone with higher raitsu levels than her own. This move is only usable once per Shikai release.


- Bankai Description: (You may fill out your Bankai Description, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)

- Bankai Abilities: (You may fill out your Bankai Powers, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)




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- Roleplay Sample: There were more hollows showing up with each passing hour. They seemed to be appearing periodically. This brought Odaue back to the time she first met her Taicho. She was unfocused for just a moment when she shouldn't have been. The patrol squad she was with had been attacked. Due to being caught off gaurd, she wasn't prepared for an attack. A scorpian-like hollow jumped down in front of her and whipped her with its tail.

Her head slammed straight into a rock, her sight was nearly blinded and her thoughts were unobtainable. The hollow began to charge straight after her. She didn't even process the threat until it was almost too late. "Hadō Number One: Sho! " She held her hand up and the hollow was thrust backwards but only but a few mesely feet. That was just to buy her some time for her next attack.

She stood up as quick as she could, but it wasn't without a stumble. She held her hands out in front of her, one holding the other up. "Hadō Number Four: Byakurai" She called and a bolt of lightning shot out from her index finger.

The hollow smacked the attack with its tail and the Hadō was instantly broken. "Foolish Shinigami! Your weak attacks won't do any damage to me!" He called and released a mucus like substance from its tail. "Now prepare to die, Shinigami!"

Odaue scowled. She just barely jumped out of the way of the mucus. "If you want to give me an order, atleast call me by my name, Hollow" Odaue began to unsheath her katana when her patrol squad leader came from behind and cut the hollow's mask. "Thank you. " Odaue said and bowed.

The leader informed her that this was no time for formalities and that there were more hollows to be dealt with. The two Shinigami ran off to fight the remaining hollows along with the others. The patrol leader seemed to handle the hollow rather well, expectant from a seated member. Odaue took out a few of her share of hollows rather easily and managed to help out a few of her teammates that were in need. As the hollows began to attack the Shinigami more and more as a team, Odaue began to find herself in a pinch. Four hollows had surrounded her and were attacking from all angles.

"Where's Hitsugaya Taicho when you need him?" she grunted as she dodged the hollows attacks. She swung her blade around at the hollows but they worked together to prevent her from cutting them. She dodged and ducked. She dipped and jumped. It was almost like a dance. Odaue knew she had to break this routine if she wanted to get rid of these troublesome hollows.

"Sing, Tsukimari" She said as her blade began to shrink. "'Nibanme no kyoku" She swung her dagger in the direction of the two hollow to her right. Both of them froze, then broke away along with the ice that trapped them. She turned to face the remaining hollow. "Taicho no Kyoku" her blade burst with electricity and as soon as she swung her dagger, the hollow where hit with a large ball of lightning and they dissapeared to the Soul Society immidiately.

The Shinigami had begun to highfive each other but the patrol squad leader seemed distant minded. "What's with him? " She wondered. Off in the distance was a low grumbling sound, and an arrancar began to walk up to the group of Shinigami. The distant leader unsheathed his sword and warned the arrancar to leave but it did no such thing. The arrancar lifted his hand and released a cero like it was nothing, nocking out the leader of the group.

"No! " Odaue shouted and foolishly ran out in front of the arrancar. He began to release an other cero but a fellow Shinigami appeared behind the arrancar and swung their sword at the arrancar but missed. Next thing she knew, he was standing right front of her. As quickly as she could she raised her hand out to reach for the arrancar. "Hadō Num-" The arrancar grabbed her hand and flung her over his shoulder making her crash into the other Shinigami.

They both hit their heads pretty hard but nothing was fatal. The arrancar bagan to make his way towards the two and the other Shinigami began to panic. Odaue kept her cool, though. She had to, she knew she had to lead this team to safety. As quickly as she could, she held her hand up once more and shouted "Hadō #33: Soukatsui"!

Fortunately, the arrancar didn't see it coming and was thrust backwards. Odaue finally got a chance to unsheathe her Zanpakutō while he was recovering from the attack. "Sing, Tsukimari!" she cried and her long katana began to shrink until it became a dagger. Dark clouds began to form in the sky and it began to rain. The arrancar dissapeared and reappeared behind her, cutting her with the sword she didn't see him pull out.

It took her a few short moments to recover, but when she did, she called her first attack. "Nibanme no kyoku!" She called and the dagger slowly filled itself with water and the skies began to rain harder. She then swung her sword in the direction of the arrancar and the water was released in the same direction. Just as it hit the arrancar, the water turned to ice, trapping the arrancar.

She knew this wasn't going to kill him, so she prepared her next attack for when he escaped the ice. "Taicho no Kyoku" The clouds were filled with light and roared at this command. She spared a hinting glance at a different member of the patrol squad. Her dagger was engolfed in electricity just in time for the arrancar to break free from the ice. She swung her dagger and large ball of yellow sparks went flying towards the arrancar.

"Now!" She shouted and the other Shinigami released the Bakudou #9: Geki and trapped the arrancar. "Oh ruler, mask of flesh and blood," She began. The look in the Arrancar eyes began to grow fearful. "all creations of the universe, fluttering of the wings, ye who bears the name of man!"

"No! I'll kill you when I break free, Shinigami!" The arrancar quirmed. The Shinigami performing the Bakudou was having difficulty restraining the arrancar.

"Truth and temperance, strike but lightly your claw upon this wall which feigns ignorance of sin!" Odaue held her right hand up and used her left hand as leverage. "Hadō #33: Soukatsui" She anunciated every syllable and as the last one slipped away from her lips, a blue blast of spiritual pressure was released from the palm of her hand. She pulled out her sword and called for, hopingly, one last attack.
"Taicho no Kyoku" As she thurst her dagger towards the arrancar another ball of sparks was sent flying towards him.

"Is that it?" Odaue asked after the arrancar seemed to grow limp. She was almost gasping for air at this point. "I have a feeling not all the arrancar are as easy as that one." She walked over the the fallen leader and once she caught her breath, she picked him up and placed him over her shoulder. "Boy he's heavy! Is everyone alright?" Once Odaue got the approval from the others, they all made their way back to the Seiretei.

Before this can be checked ya need 6 more well thought out sentences like you did on your first four please! It'd be nice if you did that Then I can go though and approve stuff. Oh if you want you can make your Zanpakutō, doesn't mean you're guaranteed it, but you can have it done and straight up work for it! Anyway I'll do the template later once you're done with it.

I'm sorry but six more sentences where?

In he Personality Section you need ten and you have four Sorry for the delay! It looks nice so far.

and if you don't want to do likes and Dislikes you can take them out.

Fixed

Okok.. I already had the template. I just erased the skills part. Anything else to this process? Please tell me all at once so I can flipping roleplay already???!!

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