musashi-keoto

musashikeoto wrote:Name:Musashi Keoto

Age:15

Appearence:Musashi wears A black hood most of the time with Very dark Blue jeans. He is very pale and has black hair that is most of the time unseen threw his hood.The most unusual features on his body is what appears Claws on his fingertips.He also has sharper teeth then most human beings almost wolf like. He also as neon red eyes that seem to glow as he moves around in the night time leaving an after blur as he moves his head. Also He has a Burnt mark on the left side of his face Due to his escape from ''societly''.

Here is a picture of what his usual look is: https://2img.net/h/i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn35/akatsukilord555/Hunter_Left_4_Dead_by_jAmXrAccoon.png
(I apoligize if the link dosent show)

Background: All of his life He was abused and tortured by his parents Being hid in the basement being unknown to society most of his life.He had claws on his fingerstips scratching the floors of the basement and scratching the cage they put him in. At the age of 13 He had enough breaking out of his cage killing his parents ,Being burnt by his dads lighter lighter fluid used with his gun. but the damage was minimal to him but it left a scar that is there to this day. As he went into the sewers he wore his favorite hoodie and jeans and hid in the sewers for a year. 1 year afterwards local authorities found him and put him in a high security prison.

The male somehow broke free from the prison and ran all the way to karakura town and hid there. It was there he discovered the hollows and became friends with the hollows in which protected him.He Always devoured the humans and there souls somehow as he did so he got stronger and faster then he already was. He has an extreme hatred for shinigami due to one killing his best hollow friend nick named ''lone wolf'' whom was killed by a shinigami. He swore revenge against all of the shinigami for killing his friends.

So, let me get this straight, one day he just miraculously escapes from prison, runs all the way to a populated town and hides there, and then he becomes FRIENDS WITH HOLLOWS? WHAT? No, thats ridiculous. First off, hes a human. Humans aren't friends to hollows; they're tasty little snacks. Hollows would have eaten you. Especially hollows. Their thirst governs everything about them. And you don't get to just be able to devour souls. You're a living human, not a hollow, and you have made no mention of being able to consume human souls. Thats unacceptable.

Personality: He has a split personality disorder at day time he is a kind man but very few words spoken from him but still has his rage for shinigami. He usually dosent like to be ordered around or any authority figures near him. He Likes Animals and nature esspecially the ones at night time.He is a very Hot headed type of person always complaining. Though he dosent mind human females he trys to prevent eating them half the time unless he really has to when it's 'feeding time'' He is a cannibalisitic type person this causes him to go into a berserker like state when he scences or sees blood. In other words he is a half cold hearted and warm hearted at the same time. He also hates to be called a ''human'' and ends up attacking anyone who dose that. He also dose quick assasination jobs for the yakuza Every now and then for some cash and ''food''

Likes: Hollows arrancar hollows nature and women.

Dislikes: shinigami ,and male humans.

Fears: He covers his fear with anger he actually is Scared of cages or barriers that seal him in and crys as he screams and growls trying to escape them.

Powers: He is extremely strong able to lift two trucks with almost no effort .He can also jump at extreme lengths jumping miles at a time and landing with ease. He also is able to use is claws as a weapon in order to fight shinigami on par in there sealed state. His blood is also able to cause explosions even though it ends up damaging himself.Also he is able to pin his opponent to the ground unless they are extremely strong or bigger then his size its almost impossible to escape otherwise. He is also able to use regeneration equivalent to a hollows regenerative abilities Though it is slightly differnt when he regenerates Red electricity searches threw the outside of his skin.Also if he grabs metal or any type of material that electricity can go threw such as cotton it can search threw and electrcute the person at the other end. He can also be able to hide within the shadows unseen and hide his reiatsu Even captain level shinigami cannot sence him while he is in the shadows until he attacks.Also he is able to command lower level adjuhas level hollows or bellow to deal with larger groups of humans or shinigami.

Way too overpowered.... lifting up trucks effortlessly? This little boy who could NOT have been buddies with hollows, and cannot devour souls? Nah. No way. Re do this. Captains WILL be able to sense you because they're definitely going to be stronger than you. Weaken all these powers. And you cannot command other hollows, especially not Adjuchas or even gillian. You're not a menos.

Stengths: He is a Quick and stealthy also good for assasinations of human or any shinigami less then the rank of captain or lieutenants who have bankai. He is a very tactical person examining as he fights but it seems he fights like a berserker only to throw off his opponents. also his acidic blood give shim the advantage if an opponent is weak to fire or explosions. his regeneration abilities seem to be very quick giving him a defensive capability. Also he is able to pin seated or some lieutenant shinigami and violently beat them and claw them till they die.

Remove all this. Re do it.

weakness: Anyone who is bigger in size give him a slight disadvantage in battle such as gillian who he seems to try to avoid when he summons them by sitting on there head. Any shinigami or human who know barrier kido or spells gives them a slight advantage Unless the barrier is weak at heart such as if a regular shinigami with immense strength can break it he can as well but his phobia of barriers and cages give the opponent an advange. also his berserker like fighting style give anyone who knows kido or a relaxed fighting style an advantage in melee or ranged. Most of the time he seems to damage himself when using his explosive blood.

RP sample: The male seemed calm His hands were in his pocket as he walked down a dark alley nothing but the white of his face and a little bit of his dark blue jeans showed as he walked down the alley. He saw a two humans as a thugish human male was chasing a attractive human female down the alley towards him the male seemed to dissapear from sight as he jumped up onto the roof of one of the buildings he seemed to smirk widely '' That foolish human male his going to die'' he said quietly noone hearing a word as he snapped his fingers a garganta opened on his right side as a spider like hollow came out and looked at him. ''Theres your lunch...leave the human girl alive...or ill make sure you dont hurt a single human again in your friggin life'' the male growled lowly at the hollow as it did as it commanded crawling onto the wall on the side of the alley shooting what appears to be a web towards the man as it dragged him towards her the woman screaming running off as the spider wrapped the male in a cocoon seeming to slurp the cocoon into its mouth as it opened a garganta into the wall the male smirked seeming to get on all fours as if i was a dog ready to pounce as he jumped quickly into the air shooting high up into the air passing several buildings 27 in counting to be exsact landing on the 28th building he jumped again landing on 27 more with each jump as he landed at his destination at a sewer plate as he opened it he jumped in closing it with his claws crawling onto the ceiling as he fell down he landed in the sewer water as he walked on all fours growling lowly ''...shinigami....humans...they are so much alike it ...it pisses me off'' the male growled lowly at the thought as he closed his fist punching the wall besides him making a large crater as he growled again screaming loudly it was heard threw the sewers but not on the outside world as he started running on two legs extremely fast and angirley he was so full of rage as he ran he saw a shinigami as his neon red eyes flashed at him he charged at the shinigami grabbing its zanpakuto and grabbing it by its head slamming it onto the ground as he snapped the shinigamis zanpakuto he pinned him to the ground clawing at his face scratch marks making him bleed as he clawed at his eyes ripping them out ripping its head off the male was laughing insanely screaming a loud warcry as he slowly devoured the shinigami flesh to flesh....

Seeing as how your powers are not acceptable and you won't have the powers you described nor the ability to devour souls as a human, you will probably need to change this sample for it to make sense.The Rp sample doesn't have to be changed, but it might look better.